Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY9DS25ZW2WZ3XM013XDYSM

Run Details

Duration:
3m 17s
Cost:
$0.016334
Provider:
Seed

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The green neon sign of The Raven's Nest flickered like a dying firefly as Rory dragged herself down the metal stairs from her flat above. Rain slicked the Soho pavement, beading on the cuffs of her Golden Empress delivery jacket—stained with soy sauce from a mid-shift spill when a tourist jostled her bike while she darted around a black taxi. The taxi driver’s curse had made her flinch, a flash of Evan’s booming voice in her Cardiff flat echoing through her head (he’d yelled the same when she forgot to take out the trash). Her helmet dug into her shoulder, and her straight black hair stuck to the back of her neck, damp with sweat and rain. She’d worked a double shift, darting between Soho’s narrow lanes and the West End’s crowded sidewalks, her legs burning with every pedal stroke, and her feet ached so badly she could barely feel her toes. She didn’t usually stop at the bar this late—Silas kept odd hours, and the Nest’s dim rooms felt too quiet when the last patrons stumbled out—but tonight, the thought of her empty flat (peeling cream paint, silent phone; her parents hadn’t called in three months) felt heavier than her canvas delivery bag slung over her shoulder. She pushed open the door, the brass handle cold under her palm, and the scent of stale beer, polished oak, and wood smoke wrapped around her like a well-worn coat. The walls lined with old maps—frayed edges, faded red ink tracing secret European routes—and black-and-white photographs: a trench-coated man leaning against a Prague streetlamp, a group laughing in her dad’s favorite Cardiff pub (The Shamrock), a close-up of a wooden raven puzzle. A grandfather clock in the back ticked slowly, its chime muted by rain tapping the frosted windows. Silas was behind the bar, wiping a cut-glass tumbler with a rag older than he was. His grey-streaked auburn hair was combed back, his neatly trimmed beard catching amber lamplight, and his slight left limp flared when he reached for a chamomile tea bottle (he’d stocked it after she mentioned her mom’s stress-soothing brews). The silver signet ring on his right hand glinted—she’d seen it a hundred times, but tonight its twisted engraving snagged her eye like a forgotten memory. “Tea?” he said, his low, rough voice carrying the quiet authority of a man used to being listened to (a habit he’d picked up in MI6, she’d later learn). He didn’t ask—he knew her aversion to alcohol, born when Evan shattered her wine glass against the wall mid-fight. Rory nodded, sliding onto a creaking wooden stool. She set her scuffed helmet on the bar, slung her delivery bag to the floor (crumpled takeout menus rustling inside), then rubbed her left wrist. The small crescent scar there throbbed—a childhood Cardiff accident: she’d fallen off her bike chasing a tabby into her dad’s office parking lot, slicing her wrist on a beer bottle shard. Her dad had sewn it up, his hands shaking so badly she’d held his wrist steady. A forgotten flash bubbled up: a pipe-tobacco-scented handkerchief dabbing her wound, a voice saying “This scar will remind you you’re stronger than the things that hurt you.” Silas paused, tumbler hovering. “That scar. Cardiff. 1995. You chased a tabby into a barrister’s parking lot.” Rory’s bright blue eyes widened. She’d never told him the scar’s origin. “How’d you know?” Silas set the tumbler down with a soft clink, twisting his signet ring—a new habit she’d missed. “I was there. Working a case with your dad—Brendan Carter. He passed messages for me from his office. I stepped outside for a smoke, heard you screaming, and found you on the asphalt.” The memory flooded her: auburn hair, calloused hands, a wooden raven puzzle he’d given her. She’d called him “Mister Puzzle” back then; he’d visited weekly, twisting that same silver ring while he taught her to solve it in 10 minutes flat. “Out-of-the-box thinking beats brute force every time”—a phrase she’d mumbled to herself while hiding from Evan, while her mom forced her into Pre-Law (“it’s the only safety you’ll ever have”), while pedaling through rain to make a delivery deadline. “You,” she whispered. “Mister Puzzle.” Silas’ limp worsened as he leaned against a tattered Prague map. “I went by Tom then—MI6 pseudonym. We tracked an arms dealer to Cardiff, and your dad’s office was our front. The dealer fled to Prague, and we followed. The operation botched—our contact betrayed us. I took a knee bullet, had to leave Cardiff the same day I taught you the puzzle. No time to say goodbye. No time to grab the extra raven head I’d carved to replace the piece you lost.” Regret thickened his voice, settling in her chest like a cold stone. She’d blamed herself for 18 years—for not asking his name, for not chasing him, for losing the only positive influence she’d had before her dad’s breakdown (a high-profile murder case loss sent him to rehab), before Evan’s first fist connected with her jaw. She’d felt invisible, and now the man who could have helped her was right here, running the bar above her flat. “I heard about your dad,” Silas said, grunting as he pushed off the bar—his left leg buckling, he grabbed the edge for support. “Hid out after Prague; MI6 thought I betrayed them. Couldn’t reach out when he checked into rehab. Couldn’t risk your family getting caught in my mess.” Rory’s throat tightened. She’d fled Cardiff in the middle of the night with Eva’s help, taking only a suitcase, delivery bag, and a tattered beach photo of her and her dad. She’d regretted it daily, too scared to face her mom’s disappointment (“you left when we needed you”) or her dad’s silence. “I used your phrase,” she said, picking at the soy sauce stain on her jacket. “When I planned to leave Evan. I hid my savings in a hollowed-out book on his shelf—something he’d never check—and snuck out while he was at work. It’s why I’m here.” Silas nodded, eyes glistening as he pulled a small wooden box from under the bar. He opened it to reveal a smooth, 18-year-old raven head carving. “I kept it. Carved it the night before I left. Wasn’t sure I’d ever give it to you.” She pressed the wood to her scar, the throbbing softening. Silas gestured to a bookshelf lined with spy novels and her dad’s old legal briefs. “Secret room behind there—for my MI6 contacts. I could’ve used your out-of-the-box thinking in Prague. You’d have spotted the betrayal.” Rory stared at the creaking shelf, a draft from the hidden room stirring the maps. For six months, she’d seen the Nest as just a bar, just a place to sleep. Now it felt like a second chance. “I regret leaving Cardiff,” she said, her voice steady as the clock’s tick. “Regret not standing up to my mom about Pre-Law, not talking to my dad before I left, not chasing you. I thought I was running from problems, but I was running from myself.” Silas twisted his signet ring again, nodding toward the Cardiff pub photo. “I regret leaving you. Regret not being there when you needed me. My botched operation cost me watching you grow up—but you’re here now. We can start over.” The grandfather clock chimed midnight, and the green neon sign flickered back to life, casting a soft glow over the bar. Rain tapped on the windows, and the silence between them wasn’t empty—it was the hush of two old friends who’d finally found their way back, the weight of 18 years’ regret lightening just enough to let them breathe. Rory sipped her chamomile tea, the warm liquid calming her throbbing feet, and held the raven carving tight. For the first time in six months, she didn’t feel like a runner. She felt like someone who’d finally found her way home.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags10
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"safety you’ll ever [ever]"
dialogueSentences20
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0.1
effectiveRatio0.1
96.30% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1352
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
63.02% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1352
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"flickered"
count2
1
word"echoing"
count1
2
word"tracing"
count1
3
word"shattered"
count1
4
word"throbbed"
count1
5
word"silence"
count2
6
word"glistening"
count1
7
word"weight"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"echoing"
2"tracing"
3"shattered"
4"throbbed"
5"silence"
6"glistening"
7"weight"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes widened"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences49
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences49
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences61
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen74
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1318
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions17
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions37
wordCount949
uniqueNames16
maxNameDensity0.84
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest3
Rory6
Soho2
Golden1
Empress1
Evan3
Cardiff5
West1
End1
Silas8
European1
Prague1
Shamrock1
Regret1
Eva1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Rory"
3"Evan"
4"End"
5"Silas"
6"Regret"
7"Eva"
places
0"Soho"
1"Cardiff"
2"West"
3"Prague"
globalScore1
windowScore1
36.36% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences44
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"felt like a second chance"
1"felt like someone who’d finally found h"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1318
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences61
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs20
mean65.9
std48.56
cv0.737
sampleLengths
0208
1169
248
3107
417
515
650
780
85
983
1076
1149
1252
1346
1444
1545
1638
1746
1840
19100
90.94% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences49
matches
0"was combed"
1"being listened"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs159
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount12
semicolonCount3
flaggedSentences12
totalSentences61
ratio0.197
matches
0"Rain slicked the Soho pavement, beading on the cuffs of her Golden Empress delivery jacket—stained with soy sauce from a mid-shift spill when a tourist jostled her bike while she darted around a black taxi."
1"She didn’t usually stop at the bar this late—Silas kept odd hours, and the Nest’s dim rooms felt too quiet when the last patrons stumbled out—but tonight, the thought of her empty flat (peeling cream paint, silent phone; her parents hadn’t called in three months) felt heavier than her canvas delivery bag slung over her shoulder."
2"The walls lined with old maps—frayed edges, faded red ink tracing secret European routes—and black-and-white photographs: a trench-coated man leaning against a Prague streetlamp, a group laughing in her dad’s favorite Cardiff pub (The Shamrock), a close-up of a wooden raven puzzle."
3"The silver signet ring on his right hand glinted—she’d seen it a hundred times, but tonight its twisted engraving snagged her eye like a forgotten memory."
4"He didn’t ask—he knew her aversion to alcohol, born when Evan shattered her wine glass against the wall mid-fight."
5"The small crescent scar there throbbed—a childhood Cardiff accident: she’d fallen off her bike chasing a tabby into her dad’s office parking lot, slicing her wrist on a beer bottle shard."
6"Silas set the tumbler down with a soft clink, twisting his signet ring—a new habit she’d missed."
7"She’d called him “Mister Puzzle” back then; he’d visited weekly, twisting that same silver ring while he taught her to solve it in 10 minutes flat."
8"She’d blamed herself for 18 years—for not asking his name, for not chasing him, for losing the only positive influence she’d had before her dad’s breakdown (a high-profile murder case loss sent him to rehab), before Evan’s first fist connected with her jaw."
9"“I heard about your dad,” Silas said, grunting as he pushed off the bar—his left leg buckling, he grabbed the edge for support."
10"“Hid out after Prague; MI6 thought I betrayed them. Couldn’t reach out when he checked into rehab. Couldn’t risk your family getting caught in my mess.”"
11"Rain tapped on the windows, and the silence between them wasn’t empty—it was the hush of two old friends who’d finally found their way back, the weight of 18 years’ regret lightening just enough to let them breathe."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount848
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount24
adverbRatio0.02830188679245283
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.01179245283018868
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences61
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences61
mean21.61
std13.19
cv0.611
sampleLengths
025
135
234
323
435
556
630
742
817
916
1038
1126
1229
1319
148
1525
1631
1716
1827
194
2013
215
227
233
2417
2533
2615
2726
2839
293
302
3111
3272
3312
3443
3521
3623
3726
383
3928
4021
4115
4231
4315
4411
4518
4610
4715
4820
4915
53.55% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.36065573770491804
totalSentences61
uniqueOpeners22
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences48
matches(empty)
ratio0
53.33% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount20
totalSentences48
matches
0"Her helmet dug into her"
1"She’d worked a double shift,"
2"She didn’t usually stop at"
3"She pushed open the door,"
4"His grey-streaked auburn hair was"
5"he said, his low, rough"
6"He didn’t ask—he knew her"
7"She set her scuffed helmet"
8"Her dad had sewn it"
9"She’d never told him the"
10"She’d called him back then;"
11"She’d blamed herself for 18"
12"She’d felt invisible, and now"
13"She’d fled Cardiff in the"
14"She’d regretted it daily, too"
15"she said, picking at the"
16"He opened it to reveal"
17"She pressed the wood to"
18"she said, her voice steady"
19"She felt like someone who’d"
ratio0.417
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount45
totalSentences48
matches
0"The green neon sign of"
1"Rain slicked the Soho pavement,"
2"The taxi driver’s curse had"
3"Her helmet dug into her"
4"She’d worked a double shift,"
5"She didn’t usually stop at"
6"She pushed open the door,"
7"The walls lined with old"
8"A grandfather clock in the"
9"Silas was behind the bar,"
10"His grey-streaked auburn hair was"
11"The silver signet ring on"
12"he said, his low, rough"
13"He didn’t ask—he knew her"
14"Rory nodded, sliding onto a"
15"She set her scuffed helmet"
16"The small crescent scar there"
17"Her dad had sewn it"
18"A forgotten flash bubbled up:"
19"Silas paused, tumbler hovering."
ratio0.938
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences48
matches
0"Now it felt like a"
ratio0.021
56.28% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences33
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"She’d worked a double shift, darting between Soho’s narrow lanes and the West End’s crowded sidewalks, her legs burning with every pedal stroke, and her feet ac…"
1"The small crescent scar there throbbed—a childhood Cardiff accident: she’d fallen off her bike chasing a tabby into her dad’s office parking lot, slicing her wr…"
2"She’d felt invisible, and now the man who could have helped her was right here, running the bar above her flat."
3"She felt like someone who’d finally found her way home."
75.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags10
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"she said, her voice steady as the clock’s tick"
50.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"She’d (would)"
1"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences20
tagDensity0.3
leniency0.6
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.2
79.1596%