Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY9EC0RMGJF0RWB3TVQJK37

Run Details

Model:
Grok 4
Duration:
1m 44s
Cost:
$0.047388
Provider:
xAI

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
Rory pushed open the door to The Raven's Nest, the green neon sign flickering like a hesitant heartbeat above her head. Rain slicked the streets of Soho, and she'd ducked in on a whim, seeking shelter from the downpour and the gnawing ache in her chest. The bar smelled of aged wood and spilled whiskey, a dim refuge crammed with shadows and the low hum of murmured conversations. Old maps clung to the walls like forgotten promises, their edges yellowed, and black-and-white photographs stared out with the solemnity of ghosts. She shook the water from her straight black hair, shoulder-length strands clinging to her damp coat, and scanned the room for an empty stool. That's when she saw him. Behind the bar, polishing a glass with deliberate, unhurried motions, stood Silas Blackwood. Or what was left of him. The grey-streaked auburn hair, the neatly trimmed beard—he looked older, yes, but it was the limp that caught her off guard, the way he favored his left leg as he shifted to reach for a bottle. The silver signet ring on his right hand glinted under the low lights, unchanged, a relic from the man she'd known. Her breath hitched. It had been—what, twelve years? Since that summer in Cardiff when her father had dragged her to one of those interminable dinners with his "associates." Silas had been there, sharp-eyed and enigmatic, spinning tales of far-off places that made her teenage heart race. He'd called her Laila back then, a teasing nickname from some old spy novel he'd lent her. But that was before everything unraveled. She froze in the doorway, water dripping from her sleeves onto the worn floorboards. He hadn't noticed her yet, his hazel eyes focused on the task at hand, carrying that quiet authority she'd always envied. Rory considered slipping out, vanishing back into the rain. What would she even say? But the pull was too strong, the weight of unspoken things pressing her forward. She crossed the room, her boots thudding softly, and slid onto a stool at the far end of the bar. Silas looked up, his expression neutral at first, the professional mask of a barman. Then recognition flickered, subtle as a shadow shifting. His hand paused on the glass, and for a moment, the air between them thickened. "Aurora Carter," he said, his voice low and steady, laced with that faint trace of a limp in his words—no, that was his gait, but his tone carried the same measured cadence she remembered. "Or is it still Rory these days?" She met his gaze, her bright blue eyes steady despite the storm inside. "Silas. It's been... a while." He set the glass down with care, leaning on the bar as if testing its solidity. Up close, the changes were starker: lines etched deeper around his eyes, the auburn hair more grey than not, and that limp—she could see it now in how he braced himself, an old injury screaming silently. The man who'd once moved like a predator, all fluid grace and hidden edges, now carried the weight of permanence. He poured her a whiskey without asking, neat, the way she'd liked it back when she'd sneaked sips from her father's cabinet during those long evenings. "On the house," he said, sliding it toward her. "For old times." She wrapped her fingers around the glass, feeling the small crescent scar on her left wrist pull taut under her sleeve—a childhood memento from climbing fences she shouldn't have. The whiskey burned going down, grounding her. "Old times," she echoed, the words tasting bitter. "You look... different." He chuckled, a dry sound that didn't reach his eyes. "Retirement agrees with some. Not me." He tapped his left knee lightly, as if acknowledging an old enemy. "Prague. Botched op. Left me with this souvenir. Opened this place to keep from going mad. The Raven's Nest—fitting, don't you think? Birds of ill omen gathering." Rory nodded, her mind flashing back to that summer. She'd been thirteen, all gangly limbs and fierce curiosity, tagging along to her father's meetings. Brendan Carter, the barrister with his Irish lilt and unyielding sense of justice, had introduced Silas as "an old friend from the shadows." Silas had entertained her with stories—encrypted messages, midnight chases through European alleys—while the adults talked in hushed tones. She'd idolized him, this enigmatic figure who seemed untouchable. He'd even given her that nickname, Laila, after a character in a book about spies and lost loves. "You're sharper than most, Laila," he'd said. "Don't let the world dull you." But the world had. She'd grown up, pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University because her father insisted, because it was safe, expected. Then Evan had come along, all charm and control, until the bruises started showing. She'd fled to London at Eva's urging, her childhood friend practically shoving her onto the train. Now here she was, twenty-five and adrift, delivering takeout for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress by day, scraping by. And Silas? The Spymaster, reduced to pouring drinks. "You haven't changed much," he said, breaking the silence. His eyes lingered on her, assessing. "Still got that fire in your eyes. What brings you to Soho? Last I heard from your father, you were set for the bar exam." She took another sip, the liquid warming her core. "Plans change. I... left Cardiff. Needed a fresh start." She didn't mention Evan, the way his hands had left marks deeper than any scar. Unspoken regret hung between them like smoke—hers for the paths not taken, the warnings she'd ignored; his, perhaps, for the life that had shattered in Prague. Silas nodded, not pressing. He wiped the bar with a cloth, his movements economical, betraying the operative he still was at heart. "Your father's well, I hope? Brendan always was a stubborn one." "He's fine. Still fighting the good fight." She hesitated, tracing the rim of her glass. "I didn't expect to find you here. Running a bar? It's... not what I pictured." He leaned in closer, his voice dropping. "Life's full of unexpected turns, Rory. I thought I'd be chasing shadows forever. Instead, I'm here, listening to drunks spill their secrets. But it's a front, in a way. Old habits." He glanced toward the bookshelf at the back, where a hidden room lay concealed— she didn't know that, but she sensed the layers, the way he always had. The bar around them buzzed faintly: a couple in the corner laughing too loudly, a lone patron nursing a pint while staring at a map on the wall, as if plotting an escape. Rain pattered against the windows, blurring the neon glow outside. Rory felt the years compress, the girl she'd been colliding with the woman she'd become. Silas had been a constant in those memories, a figure of mystery and strength. Seeing him now, diminished but enduring, stirred something raw in her—a regret for time lost, for the innocence she'd shed. "Why London?" he asked, his hazel eyes piercing. "You could have gone anywhere. Brendan has connections everywhere." She shrugged, but her voice cracked just a fraction. "Eva convinced me. Childhood friend—remember her? Said London would swallow me up, let me disappear." Disappear from Evan, from the life that had caged her. But saying it aloud felt like exposing a wound. "What about you? Do you ever regret it? Walking away from... all that?" Silas straightened, his limp more pronounced as he moved to pour himself a drink. Whiskey, same as hers. He took a slow sip, his beard catching a drop. "Regret? Every damn day. Prague was my fault—rushed intel, a contact turned. Lost good people. This knee? It's nothing compared to that." His voice was even, but the weight was there, unspoken: the lives he'd traded, the secrets that had eroded him. "But you adapt. Or you break." She watched him, seeing echoes of the man who'd inspired her. "I broke," she admitted quietly. "Evan—he wasn't who I thought. Abusive. I stayed too long, thinking I could fix it. Like Dad always says, fight for what's right." A bitter laugh escaped her. "Turns out, sometimes you just run." Silas set his glass down, his signet ring clinking softly. For the first time, his expression softened, the quiet authority giving way to something paternal, almost tender. "Running isn't breaking, Laila. It's surviving. Your father taught you better than to stay in a fight you can't win." He paused, glancing at her wrist where the scar hid beneath her cuff. "Remember that summer? You climbed that fence, cut yourself bad. Didn't cry once. Tough kid." She smiled faintly, the memory warming her despite the chill. "You bandaged it. Told me scars tell stories." "They do." He reached across the bar, hesitating before patting her hand—a brief, avuncular touch. "Yours is just beginning." The tension eased slightly, but the regret lingered, a undercurrent pulling at them both. She'd changed—hardened by betrayal, quick-thinking now born of necessity rather than whimsy. He, the once-indomitable spy, now anchored to this dim bar with its hidden rooms and whispered deals. Time had carved them anew, leaving gaps where old bonds frayed. As the rain intensified outside, Rory finished her drink. "I should go. But... it's good to see you, Silas. Really." He nodded, his limp carrying him to the end of the bar as he watched her stand. "Door's always open. For old friends." She turned to leave, but paused at the threshold, glancing back. The green neon reflected in his eyes, illuminating the man he'd become—and the one he mourned. Unspoken, the regret settled like dust: for paths diverged, for years swallowed by silence. Rory stepped into the storm, carrying the weight of what might have been, while Silas returned to his polishing, the bar's shadows closing in once more. But fate, it seemed, had other plans. Weeks later, she'd find herself back, drawn by that pull, eventually renting the flat above— a new chapter born from this chance encounter. For now, though, the rain washed away the moment, leaving only echoes. (Word count: 1247)
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags17
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"she admitted quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences36
tagDensity0.472
leniency0.944
rawRatio0.059
effectiveRatio0.056
85.32% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1703
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"softly"
count2
1
adverb"lightly"
count1
2
adverb"slightly"
count1
3
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
1"lightly"
2"slightly"
3"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
14.86% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1703
totalAiIsms29
found
0
word"scanned"
count1
1
word"enigmatic"
count2
2
word"race"
count1
3
word"weight"
count3
4
word"unspoken"
count4
5
word"flickered"
count1
6
word"measured"
count1
7
word"etched"
count1
8
word"predator"
count1
9
word"carried the weight"
count1
10
word"echoed"
count1
11
word"lilt"
count1
12
word"sense of"
count1
13
word"charm"
count1
14
word"silence"
count2
15
word"shattered"
count1
16
word"tracing"
count1
17
word"echoes"
count2
18
word"chill"
count1
19
word"tension"
count1
20
word"encounter"
count1
highlights
0"scanned"
1"enigmatic"
2"race"
3"weight"
4"unspoken"
5"flickered"
6"measured"
7"etched"
8"predator"
9"carried the weight"
10"echoed"
11"lilt"
12"sense of"
13"charm"
14"silence"
15"shattered"
16"tracing"
17"echoes"
18"chill"
19"tension"
20"encounter"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences94
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences94
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences112
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen59
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1677
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions15
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions43
wordCount1335
uniqueNames23
maxNameDensity0.82
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Soho1
Silas11
Blackwood1
Cardiff2
Laila2
Rory6
Carter1
Irish1
European1
Pre-Law1
University1
Evan3
London1
Eva1
Yu-Fei1
Cheung1
Golden1
Empress1
Spymaster1
Unspoken2
Prague1
persons
0"Silas"
1"Blackwood"
2"Laila"
3"Rory"
4"Carter"
5"Evan"
6"Eva"
7"Yu-Fei"
8"Cheung"
9"Spymaster"
places
0"Raven"
1"Soho"
2"Cardiff"
3"European"
4"London"
5"Prague"
globalScore1
windowScore1
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences81
glossingSentenceCount5
matches
0"as if testing its solidity"
1"as if acknowledging an old enemy"
2"seemed untouchable"
3"as if plotting an escape"
4"felt like exposing a wound"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1677
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences112
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs31
mean54.1
std33.59
cv0.621
sampleLengths
0114
1150
283
337
441
518
698
712
847
955
10105
1177
1240
1359
1433
1530
1666
1792
1817
1956
2076
2150
2275
2318
2419
2554
2620
2723
2867
2942
303
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences94
matches
0"been thirteen"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs246
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount14
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences13
totalSentences112
ratio0.116
matches
0"The grey-streaked auburn hair, the neatly trimmed beard—he looked older, yes, but it was the limp that caught her off guard, the way he favored his left leg as he shifted to reach for a bottle."
1"It had been—what, twelve years?"
2"\"Aurora Carter,\" he said, his voice low and steady, laced with that faint trace of a limp in his words—no, that was his gait, but his tone carried the same measured cadence she remembered."
3"Up close, the changes were starker: lines etched deeper around his eyes, the auburn hair more grey than not, and that limp—she could see it now in how he braced himself, an old injury screaming silently."
4"She wrapped her fingers around the glass, feeling the small crescent scar on her left wrist pull taut under her sleeve—a childhood memento from climbing fences she shouldn't have."
5"Brendan Carter, the barrister with his Irish lilt and unyielding sense of justice, had introduced Silas as \"an old friend from the shadows.\" Silas had entertained her with stories—encrypted messages, midnight chases through European alleys—while the adults talked in hushed tones."
6"Unspoken regret hung between them like smoke—hers for the paths not taken, the warnings she'd ignored; his, perhaps, for the life that had shattered in Prague."
7"\"Life's full of unexpected turns, Rory. I thought I'd be chasing shadows forever. Instead, I'm here, listening to drunks spill their secrets. But it's a front, in a way. Old habits.\" He glanced toward the bookshelf at the back, where a hidden room lay concealed— she didn't know that, but she sensed the layers, the way he always had."
8"Seeing him now, diminished but enduring, stirred something raw in her—a regret for time lost, for the innocence she'd shed."
9"\"They do.\" He reached across the bar, hesitating before patting her hand—a brief, avuncular touch."
10"She'd changed—hardened by betrayal, quick-thinking now born of necessity rather than whimsy."
11"The green neon reflected in his eyes, illuminating the man he'd become—and the one he mourned."
12"Weeks later, she'd find herself back, drawn by that pull, eventually renting the flat above— a new chapter born from this chance encounter."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1358
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount44
adverbRatio0.03240058910162003
lyAdverbCount14
lyAdverbRatio0.010309278350515464
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences112
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences112
mean14.97
std9.91
cv0.662
sampleLengths
021
125
222
322
424
55
613
76
836
921
103
115
1238
1317
146
1514
1621
179
185
1914
2020
2114
228
2315
2434
257
2613
275
2816
2936
3020
3126
329
333
3429
357
368
373
3810
3918
4027
419
4215
4341
449
4518
467
476
484
4917
73.51% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.44642857142857145
totalSentences112
uniqueOpeners50
72.46% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences92
matches
0"Then recognition flickered, subtle as"
1"Then Evan had come along,"
ratio0.022
33.04% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount43
totalSentences92
matches
0"She shook the water from"
1"Her breath hitched."
2"It had been—what, twelve years?"
3"He'd called her Laila back"
4"She froze in the doorway,"
5"He hadn't noticed her yet,"
6"She crossed the room, her"
7"His hand paused on the"
8"he said, his voice low"
9"She met his gaze, her"
10"He set the glass down"
11"He poured her a whiskey"
12"he said, sliding it toward"
13"She wrapped her fingers around"
14"she echoed, the words tasting"
15"He chuckled, a dry sound"
16"He tapped his left knee"
17"She'd been thirteen, all gangly"
18"She'd idolized him, this enigmatic"
19"He'd even given her that"
ratio0.467
74.13% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount71
totalSentences92
matches
0"Rory pushed open the door"
1"Rain slicked the streets of"
2"The bar smelled of aged"
3"She shook the water from"
4"That's when she saw him."
5"The grey-streaked auburn hair, the"
6"The silver signet ring on"
7"Her breath hitched."
8"It had been—what, twelve years?"
9"He'd called her Laila back"
10"She froze in the doorway,"
11"He hadn't noticed her yet,"
12"Rory considered slipping out, vanishing"
13"She crossed the room, her"
14"Silas looked up, his expression"
15"His hand paused on the"
16"he said, his voice low"
17"She met his gaze, her"
18"He set the glass down"
19"The man who'd once moved"
ratio0.772
54.35% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences92
matches
0"Now here she was, twenty-five"
ratio0.011
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences52
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"The grey-streaked auburn hair, the neatly trimmed beard—he looked older, yes, but it was the limp that caught her off guard, the way he favored his left leg as …"
1"She watched him, seeing echoes of the man who'd inspired her."
2"Rory stepped into the storm, carrying the weight of what might have been, while Silas returned to his polishing, the bar's shadows closing in once more."
66.18% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags17
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"she echoed, the words tasting bitter"
1"He tapped, as if acknowledging an old enemy"
94.44% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"She didn't (do)"
1"she admitted quietly (admit)"
dialogueSentences36
tagDensity0.167
leniency0.333
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.111
82.2765%