"The grey-streaked auburn hair, the neatly trimmed beard—he looked older, yes, but it was the limp that caught her off guard, the way he favored his left leg as he shifted to reach for a bottle."
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"It had been—what, twelve years?"
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"\"Aurora Carter,\" he said, his voice low and steady, laced with that faint trace of a limp in his words—no, that was his gait, but his tone carried the same measured cadence she remembered."
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"Up close, the changes were starker: lines etched deeper around his eyes, the auburn hair more grey than not, and that limp—she could see it now in how he braced himself, an old injury screaming silently."
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"She wrapped her fingers around the glass, feeling the small crescent scar on her left wrist pull taut under her sleeve—a childhood memento from climbing fences she shouldn't have."
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"Brendan Carter, the barrister with his Irish lilt and unyielding sense of justice, had introduced Silas as \"an old friend from the shadows.\" Silas had entertained her with stories—encrypted messages, midnight chases through European alleys—while the adults talked in hushed tones."
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"Unspoken regret hung between them like smoke—hers for the paths not taken, the warnings she'd ignored; his, perhaps, for the life that had shattered in Prague."
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"\"Life's full of unexpected turns, Rory. I thought I'd be chasing shadows forever. Instead, I'm here, listening to drunks spill their secrets. But it's a front, in a way. Old habits.\" He glanced toward the bookshelf at the back, where a hidden room lay concealed— she didn't know that, but she sensed the layers, the way he always had."
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"Seeing him now, diminished but enduring, stirred something raw in her—a regret for time lost, for the innocence she'd shed."
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"\"They do.\" He reached across the bar, hesitating before patting her hand—a brief, avuncular touch."
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"She'd changed—hardened by betrayal, quick-thinking now born of necessity rather than whimsy."
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"The green neon reflected in his eyes, illuminating the man he'd become—and the one he mourned."
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"Weeks later, she'd find herself back, drawn by that pull, eventually renting the flat above— a new chapter born from this chance encounter."
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"The grey-streaked auburn hair, the neatly trimmed beard—he looked older, yes, but it was the limp that caught her off guard, the way he favored his left leg as …"
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"She watched him, seeing echoes of the man who'd inspired her."
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"Rory stepped into the storm, carrying the weight of what might have been, while Silas returned to his polishing, the bar's shadows closing in once more."