Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY9F93B55P557NK6BQX6YQN

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Duration:
10.6s
Cost:
$0.000405
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The neon green sign of *The Raven’s Nest* flickered weakly against the London drizzle, its glow bleeding into the pavement like a bruise. Inside, the air smelled of aged whiskey and something faintly metallic—old blood, maybe, or the faintest trace of gunpowder, though no one had fired a shot in this place in years. The walls were lined with yellowed maps, their edges curled from decades of handling, and the photographs pinned above the bar were all men—some in uniform, some in suits, their faces stern, their expressions unreadable. The kind of men who didn’t smile for the camera. Aurora Carter—Rory, to her friends—leaned against the bar, nursing a glass of something amber and bitter. She hadn’t been back here since she left London, not since she’d walked out of her life like it was a room she’d outgrown. The flat above the bar had been cheap, the job at Golden Empress had been steady, and the streets had been quiet enough that she could pretend she wasn’t still running. But tonight, the rain had been heavier than usual, the kind that made the city feel like it was breathing in slow, wet gasps, and she’d found herself here anyway. She wasn’t supposed to be here. The door chimed softly behind her, and the air shifted. A man stepped inside, his presence filling the space before he even moved. He had that way about him—like he owned the room just by standing in it. His auburn hair was streaked with silver, his beard neatly trimmed, his posture just slightly off, as if he’d been carrying something heavy for too long. His hazel eyes scanned the bar, lingering for a beat before they landed on her. Rory didn’t turn. She didn’t have to. “Well,” she said, her voice steady despite the way her pulse had jumped at the sight of him. “If it isn’t Silas Blackwood. Still running things, I see.” He exhaled through his nose, a sound that was almost a laugh. “Still avoiding me, I take it.” His voice was rough, like gravel underfoot. He slid onto the stool beside her, the wood groaning under his weight. “You look the same.” She shot him a look over her shoulder. “I don’t.” “You do.” He gestured vaguely at her—her black hair, her sharp jaw, the way she held herself like she was bracing for impact. “Still the same stubborn little devil.” Rory turned fully, crossing her arms. “You’re the one who looks like he’s been through a war.” Silas didn’t flinch. “I have.” The bartender—a young man with a name tag that read *JASON*—appeared with two fresh glasses, sliding one toward Rory without a word. She took it, the ice clinking against the glass. “You still own this place?” “Still running it.” He swirled his drink, the amber liquid catching the dim light. “Retired, but not gone.” “Retired from what?” “MI6.” He said it like it was a fact, not a confession. “Field work. Knee gave out in Prague.” Rory’s fingers tightened around her glass. “I didn’t know.” “Why would you?” He took a sip, then set the glass down. “You left.” The words hung between them, sharp as broken glass. She hadn’t meant to leave. Not really. But Evan had been there, his hands on her wrist, his voice a growl in her ear, and she’d known—knew—she couldn’t stay. Eva had been the one to tell her about Silas’s place, about the flat above the bar, about the job at the restaurant. *Just get out, Rory. Before he breaks you.* She hadn’t looked back. Silas studied her, his gaze unreadable. “You still working for Golden Empress?” “Delivery driver.” She took a sip of her drink, the whiskey burning the back of her throat. “Part-time.” “Still running from something?” The question was so direct it made her flinch. She set her glass down harder than she meant to. “I’m not running.” “No?” He leaned forward slightly, his voice dropping. “Then why haven’t you been back?” Because I’m afraid of what I’ll find. Because I’m afraid of who I’ve become. Because I left without saying goodbye. She opened her mouth, then closed it. The words stuck in her throat. Silas sighed, rubbing his left knee—just once, like he was reminding himself it was still there. “You always were good at walking away.” “And you were always good at not letting go,” she shot back. He smirked, just a little. “Fair.” A beat of silence. The hum of the bar, the distant chatter of other patrons, the occasional clink of glass. Rory picked at the label on her glass, her nails catching on the paper. “What are you doing here, Silas?” He exhaled, long and slow. “Same as you, I suppose. Looking for something.” “What?” “Answers.” He gestured around the bar, at the maps, the photographs, the way the place felt like a time capsule. “This was never just a bar. It was a front.” “I know.” “You do?” She nodded. “Eva told me.” His name dropped like a stone between them. *Eva.* The one person who had known her before she became Rory Carter, the delivery driver with a scar on her wrist and a past she didn’t talk about. The one person who had seen her fall apart and still believed in her. Silas’s jaw tightened. “She’s still in Cardiff?” “Last I heard.” Rory’s throat tightened. “She’s good.” “She always was.” Another silence. This one heavier. Rory stared at her glass, at the way the light caught the whiskey, at the way her fingers were trembling just a little. She hadn’t thought about Eva in months. Hadn’t thought about any of it. Silas reached into his jacket, pulling out a small, worn photograph. He slid it across the bar toward her. It was her. Younger. Smiling. Her hair was longer, her eyes brighter, her skin unmarked. She was standing in front of a building she didn’t recognize, her arm around a man who wasn’t Evan, who wasn’t anyone she’d ever met before that night. The man in the photo was Silas. Rory’s breath caught. “Prague,” he said quietly. “Before the knee. Before I retired.” She looked up at him. “You were there.” “Yes.” “And I wasn’t.” “No.” She swallowed hard. “Why didn’t you tell me?” “Because you weren’t supposed to know.” His voice was low, urgent. “Because it wasn’t your fight.” “But it was.” “No.” He shook his head. “It wasn’t.” She wanted to argue. She wanted to scream that she had been there, in the background, in the shadows, that she had seen things she couldn’t unsee. But the words died in her throat. Silas studied her, his eyes searching hers like he was looking for something he wasn’t sure he’d find. “You left, Rory. You walked away.” “I had to.” “Did you?” The question hung between them, heavy and unanswerable. She thought of Evan, of the way his hands had felt, of the way she had woken up some mornings with bruises she couldn’t explain. She thought of Eva, of the way her friend had looked at her like she was already broken, like she was already gone. She thought of the scar on her wrist, the one she never let anyone see. She thought of the life she had left behind. Silas reached out, his fingers brushing against hers. Just for a second. Just enough to remind her that he was still there, that he had always been there. “You don’t have to be afraid anymore,” he said softly. She looked at him, really looked at him. At the lines on his face, at the way his eyes crinkled at the corners, at the way he carried himself like he had been through hell and back and still wasn’t sure he deserved to be here. She thought of the girl in the photograph, of the life she had almost had, of the life she had almost lost. She thought of the future. And she knew. She wasn’t afraid anymore. She was just tired. Rory took a deep breath, then another. She picked up the photograph, her fingers wrapping around the edges like they were holding onto something fragile. “What now, Silas?” He smiled, just a little. “Now we drink. And we talk. And we figure out what comes next.” She nodded. Because that was what they did. They figured it out.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
62.07% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags13
adverbTagCount4
adverbTags
0"He gestured vaguely [vaguely]"
1"He gestured around [around]"
2"he said quietly [quietly]"
3"he said softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences58
tagDensity0.224
leniency0.448
rawRatio0.308
effectiveRatio0.138
78.62% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1403
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"softly"
count2
1
adverb"slightly"
count2
2
adverb"really"
count2
highlights
0"softly"
1"slightly"
2"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
71.49% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1403
totalAiIsms8
found
0
word"flickered"
count1
1
word"unreadable"
count2
2
word"scanned"
count1
3
word"pulse"
count1
4
word"weight"
count1
5
word"silence"
count2
highlights
0"flickered"
1"unreadable"
2"scanned"
3"pulse"
4"weight"
5"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences107
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences107
filterMatches
0"feel"
1"see"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences150
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen38
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans4
markdownWords13
totalWords1394
ratio0.009
matches
0"The Raven’s Nest"
1"JASON"
2"Just get out, Rory. Before he breaks you."
3"Eva."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
98.41% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions35
wordCount1163
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity1.03
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Raven1
London2
Carter2
Rory12
Golden1
Empress1
Evan3
Silas9
Eva4
persons
0"Raven"
1"Carter"
2"Rory"
3"Empress"
4"Evan"
5"Silas"
6"Eva"
places
0"London"
1"Golden"
globalScore0.984
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences71
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"felt like a time capsule"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1394
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences150
matches
0"had that way"
1"scream that she"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs74
mean18.84
std21.32
cv1.132
sampleLengths
099
1101
26
379
47
528
642
710
829
917
105
1136
1218
133
1419
159
1614
1769
184
1912
2018
214
2222
2314
2420
2513
2623
2712
286
2940
3013
311
3230
332
342
355
3651
377
388
393
4041
4119
4250
433
4410
458
461
473
481
498
98.70% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences107
matches
0"were lined"
1"was streaked"
0.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount7
totalVerbs203
matches
0"was breathing"
1"was bracing"
2"was reminding"
3"were trembling"
4"was standing"
5"was looking"
6"were holding"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount11
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences150
ratio0.053
matches
0"Inside, the air smelled of aged whiskey and something faintly metallic—old blood, maybe, or the faintest trace of gunpowder, though no one had fired a shot in this place in years."
1"The walls were lined with yellowed maps, their edges curled from decades of handling, and the photographs pinned above the bar were all men—some in uniform, some in suits, their faces stern, their expressions unreadable."
2"Aurora Carter—Rory, to her friends—leaned against the bar, nursing a glass of something amber and bitter."
3"He had that way about him—like he owned the room just by standing in it."
4"“You do.” He gestured vaguely at her—her black hair, her sharp jaw, the way she held herself like she was bracing for impact."
5"The bartender—a young man with a name tag that read *JASON*—appeared with two fresh glasses, sliding one toward Rory without a word."
6"But Evan had been there, his hands on her wrist, his voice a growl in her ear, and she’d known—knew—she couldn’t stay."
7"Silas sighed, rubbing his left knee—just once, like he was reminding himself it was still there."
96.92% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1172
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount51
adverbRatio0.043515358361774746
lyAdverbCount12
lyAdverbRatio0.010238907849829351
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences150
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences150
mean9.29
std7.94
cv0.854
sampleLengths
023
131
235
310
416
524
631
730
86
910
1013
1115
1226
1315
143
154
1618
1710
1812
1913
2013
214
228
232
2423
256
266
2711
283
292
3022
319
325
3314
344
353
3612
377
386
393
4012
412
429
435
442
4522
4623
474
484
494
42.89% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats14
diversityRatio0.31333333333333335
totalSentences150
uniqueOpeners47
99.01% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences101
matches
0"*Just get out, Rory."
1"Just for a second."
2"Just enough to remind her"
ratio0.03
14.06% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount52
totalSentences101
matches
0"She hadn’t been back here"
1"She wasn’t supposed to be"
2"He had that way about"
3"His auburn hair was streaked"
4"His hazel eyes scanned the"
5"She didn’t have to."
6"she said, her voice steady"
7"He exhaled through his nose,"
8"His voice was rough, like"
9"He slid onto the stool"
10"She shot him a look"
11"He gestured vaguely at her—her"
12"She took it, the ice"
13"He swirled his drink, the"
14"He said it like it"
15"He took a sip, then"
16"She hadn’t meant to leave."
17"She hadn’t looked back."
18"She took a sip of"
19"She set her glass down"
ratio0.515
34.26% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount86
totalSentences101
matches
0"The neon green sign of"
1"The walls were lined with"
2"The kind of men who"
3"Aurora Carter—Rory, to her friends—leaned"
4"She hadn’t been back here"
5"The flat above the bar"
6"She wasn’t supposed to be"
7"The door chimed softly behind"
8"A man stepped inside, his"
9"He had that way about"
10"His auburn hair was streaked"
11"His hazel eyes scanned the"
12"Rory didn’t turn."
13"She didn’t have to."
14"she said, her voice steady"
15"He exhaled through his nose,"
16"His voice was rough, like"
17"He slid onto the stool"
18"She shot him a look"
19"He gestured vaguely at her—her"
ratio0.851
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount5
totalSentences101
matches
0"Before he breaks you.*"
1"Because I’m afraid of what"
2"Because I’m afraid of who"
3"Because I left without saying"
4"Because that was what they"
ratio0.05
27.03% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences37
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"But tonight, the rain had been heavier than usual, the kind that made the city feel like it was breathing in slow, wet gasps, and she’d found herself here anywa…"
1"His auburn hair was streaked with silver, his beard neatly trimmed, his posture just slightly off, as if he’d been carrying something heavy for too long."
2"The bartender—a young man with a name tag that read *JASON*—appeared with two fresh glasses, sliding one toward Rory without a word."
3"*Eva.* The one person who had known her before she became Rory Carter, the delivery driver with a scar on her wrist and a past she didn’t talk about."
4"She was standing in front of a building she didn’t recognize, her arm around a man who wasn’t Evan, who wasn’t anyone she’d ever met before that night."
5"Silas studied her, his eyes searching hers like he was looking for something he wasn’t sure he’d find."
9.62% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags13
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"He swirled, the amber liquid catching the dim light"
1"She took, the whiskey burning the back of her throat"
2"He leaned, his voice dropping"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences58
tagDensity0.069
leniency0.138
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
77.7691%