"She should have turned back at the first sign of mist—thick, unseasonal, coiling around the trunks of the oaks like old sheets—but the Heartstone pendant had pulsed under her shirt, warm as a living thing, and Eva’s voice in her head—*“It leads you”*—had been too insistent to ignore."
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"Aurora pressed a hand to the nearest bark; it was cold, damp, as if the stone had drunk the night."
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"*Hel portal*, a whisper in her memory—though she’d never been to Hel, not really."
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"Not the fog lifting, but something deeper—a thickening of the air, a weight on her chest that made breathing a labor."
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"Wildflowers—crimson poppies, purple lupine, white daisies—bloomed in a riot around her, their petals dewy as if the night had just begun."
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"Somewhere, a bird sang—*a lark*, clear and true—but Aurora’s phone, in her pocket, had no signal, and there were no larks in London at night."
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"The Grove—Rory, you dumbass, you read the story.* Her backstory, when she’d been bored during a delivery break, had included a half-memorized tale of a Fae healer, Isolde, who’d hidden a grove in the park, a place between worlds where time frayed."
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"A sound—*a rustle*—came from the trees."
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"She’d been trained to ignore such things—Evan’s taunts, the way he’d make her jump at shadows—but this was different."
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"Its edges blurred, rippling like water, and for a second she saw teeth—sharp, yellow, too many—before it shifted, and her brain registered only *wrong*."
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"The shadow moved beside her, a step for every step she took, and now she could hear it—a low, wet *sizzle*, like a match struck in honey, coming from its direction."
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"Its form was a void, but the area around it rippled, and in the gaps, she saw faces—Evan’s, twisted cruelly; her father, dead at 42, a look of confusion on his face; Eva, younger, before the fire, screaming, *“You left me to burn!”*"
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"The standing stones loomed, their oak bark cracking, revealing something beneath—pale, tendril-like roots, pulsing with a sickly green light."
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"The first stars winked out, and she saw the park again—familiar, gray, unforgiving."
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"She pressed her hand to her wrist, the scar throbbing, and saw the blood—fresh, red, soaking through her fingers."
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"Not bright—just a flicker, like a candle in the wind—but enough that she saw it."
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"Her arm seized, the scar stretching, splitting, and out of the wound grew a tendril of light—pale, warm, *alive*."
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"But when she looked in the mirror, her eyes—bright blue, as striking as ever—now had a hint of silver, at the corners."
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"And in the silence, she heard it—a low, wet *sizzle*, like a match struck in honey—coming from the dark."
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"Aurora pressed a hand to the nearest bark; it was cold, damp, as if the stone had drunk the night."
1
"Not the fog lifting, but something deeper—a thickening of the air, a weight on her chest that made breathing a labor."
2
"Wildflowers—crimson poppies, purple lupine, white daisies—bloomed in a riot around her, their petals dewy as if the night had just begun."
3
"The grass beneath her boots was soft, almost *spongy*, as if the earth itself were breathing."
4
"She dropped to her knees, ignoring the thorns that snagged her jeans."
5
"The Grove—Rory, you dumbass, you read the story.* Her backstory, when she’d been bored during a delivery break, had included a half-memorized tale of a Fae heal…"
6
"It was behind the nearest oak, a shape no taller than a man, but wider, as if stretched over a frame that didn’t fit."
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"The shadow shrieked, a sound that pierced her eardrums, and when Aurora opened her eyes, it was gone."