"she’d chalked it up to the van’s faulty wiring—until the Heartstone Pendant, tucked under her collar, had started to pulse."
1
"Until last week, when her latest delivery—an order of black sesame dumplings to a flat above a bar in Camden—had been signed by a man with a scar across his cheek."
2
"Dymas, the codex said—though not by name."
3
"She’d recognized them from the sketch—the Grove was hidden by their circle, a veil of mist that moved when she blinked."
4
"The mist clung to her coat, cold as a corpse’s hand, and the stones seemed to *shift*—their trunks leaning closer, their shadows stretching longer, as if waking."
5
"Wildflowers—pansies, lilies, a cluster of bluebells—pushed through the frost, their petals velvety, *alive*."
6
"She checked her phone again—2:41."
7
"For a second, she saw faces in the rock—faint, distorted, whispering her name."
8
"But the air shifted—thinner, colder, like the space between worlds."
9
"She’d felt this before—when Evan had followed her into the alley, when he’d grabbed her wrist and left that crescent scar."
10
"The sound came again—softer this time, a laugh, high and tinny, like a music box wound too tight."
11
"But the flowers were *moving*—slowly, tentatively, their petals unfurling as if drawn by the sound."
12
"But as she turned to leave, she heard it again—a soft, *familiar* rustle, behind her."
13
"The earth split, a jagged crack opening up between the stones, and from it poured a light—pale, blue, *wrong*."
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences
67
technicalSentenceCount
9
matches
0
"This was *thrumming*, a rapid beat against her sternum, as if the gemstone itself had a pulse."
1
"She parked the van at the trailhead, her boots crunching over frost that hadn’t melted since dawn."
2
"The mist clung to her coat, cold as a corpse’s hand, and the stones seemed to *shift*—their trunks leaning closer, their shadows stretching longer, as if waking…"
3
"The pendant’s pulse had slowed to a steady *thump*, as if the grove itself were breathing."
4
"The pendant burned her skin through her coat, a searing pain that made her drop to her knees."
5
"But the pendant was *screaming* now, its gem blazing so bright she had to shield her eyes."
6
"But the flowers were *moving*—slowly, tentatively, their petals unfurling as if drawn by the sound."
7
"The pendant’s glow was a white-hot beacon now, lighting up the mist, and she saw it then: a face in the fog, pale and featureless, with eyes that were just two …"
8
"The last thing she saw was the Heartstone, still in her hand, pulsing once, twice, three times, as if saying goodbye."