| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 5 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 8 | | tagDensity | 0.625 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 82.21% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1124 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "sharply" | | 1 | "slowly" | | 2 | "lazily" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1124 | | totalAiIsms | 23 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "echoed" | | 1 | "glistening" | | 2 | "pulse" | | 3 | "throb" | | 4 | "silence" | | 5 | "flicker" | | 6 | "stomach" | | 7 | "warmth" | | 8 | "wavering" | | 9 | "scanning" | | 10 | "whisper" | | 11 | "familiar" | | 12 | "roaring" | | 13 | "raced" | | 14 | "trembled" | | 15 | "could feel" | | 16 | "shattered" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 159 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 159 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 162 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 30 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 87.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 32 | | markdownWords | 63 | | totalWords | 1115 | | ratio | 0.057 | | matches | | 0 | "Find the grove. Before they do." | | 1 | "They’re coming for me. They’re coming for all of us." | | 2 | "should" | | 3 | "To her left." | | 4 | "intentional" | | 5 | "laugh" | | 6 | "moving" | | 7 | "On the wind." | | 8 | "“You shouldn’t have come.”" | | 9 | "wrong" | | 10 | "should" | | 11 | "thing" | | 12 | "rippled" | | 13 | "“You’re late,”" | | 14 | "“They’ve been waiting.”" | | 15 | "wrongness" | | 16 | "moving" | | 17 | "unfolding" | | 18 | "spreading" | | 19 | "sliding" | | 20 | "“You don’t belong here,”" | | 21 | "“But you will.”" | | 22 | "bones" | | 23 | "Hers." | | 24 | "scar" | | 25 | "exploded" | | 26 | "Changed." | | 27 | "pattern" | | 28 | "Her own." | | 29 | "“I’m here,”" | | 30 | "moved." | | 31 | "laughed." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 8 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 90.59% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 19 | | wordCount | 1094 | | uniqueNames | 6 | | maxNameDensity | 1.19 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Carter | 1 | | Rory | 13 | | Eva | 2 | | London | 1 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 0.906 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 77.54% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 69 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "as if listening" | | 1 | "smelled like iron" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1115 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 162 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 76 | | mean | 14.67 | | std | 17.24 | | cv | 1.175 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 81 | | 1 | 4 | | 2 | 12 | | 3 | 20 | | 4 | 54 | | 5 | 11 | | 6 | 52 | | 7 | 5 | | 8 | 6 | | 9 | 28 | | 10 | 47 | | 11 | 5 | | 12 | 3 | | 13 | 7 | | 14 | 3 | | 15 | 37 | | 16 | 7 | | 17 | 8 | | 18 | 42 | | 19 | 2 | | 20 | 46 | | 21 | 2 | | 22 | 2 | | 23 | 6 | | 24 | 2 | | 25 | 41 | | 26 | 7 | | 27 | 30 | | 28 | 1 | | 29 | 2 | | 30 | 8 | | 31 | 3 | | 32 | 4 | | 33 | 23 | | 34 | 34 | | 35 | 5 | | 36 | 2 | | 37 | 50 | | 38 | 11 | | 39 | 5 | | 40 | 29 | | 41 | 15 | | 42 | 20 | | 43 | 6 | | 44 | 6 | | 45 | 2 | | 46 | 21 | | 47 | 5 | | 48 | 3 | | 49 | 49 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 159 | | matches | | 0 | "were elongated" | | 1 | "was gone" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 180 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 18 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 13 | | totalSentences | 162 | | ratio | 0.08 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora Carter—Rory to her friends, though she hadn’t had one in years—pushed through the gnarled branches of the ancient oaks, her breath fogging in the unnaturally crisp night." | | 1 | "But now, as she stepped past the last of the standing stones—those twisted oaks with their bark blackened as if scorched by something older than fire—she knew better." | | 2 | "A flicker of movement at the edge of her vision—just for a second, a blur of dark against dark." | | 3 | "And then—" | | 4 | "Then—" | | 5 | "She *should*—" | | 6 | "She had to—" | | 7 | "And then—" | | 8 | "She gasped, jerking back, but the figure was already moving—no, *sliding*—toward her, its form shifting, its edges blurring." | | 9 | "And then—" | | 10 | "Her wrist—her *scar*—burned." | | 11 | "The pendant—now whole again—hung from her neck, its glow steady, pulsing in time with something inside her." | | 12 | "And then—" |
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| 89.78% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1103 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 57 | | adverbRatio | 0.051677243880326386 | | lyAdverbCount | 6 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.005439709882139619 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 162 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 162 | | mean | 6.88 | | std | 5.72 | | cv | 0.831 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 19 | | 1 | 28 | | 2 | 24 | | 3 | 3 | | 4 | 7 | | 5 | 4 | | 6 | 9 | | 7 | 3 | | 8 | 10 | | 9 | 4 | | 10 | 6 | | 11 | 26 | | 12 | 28 | | 13 | 11 | | 14 | 17 | | 15 | 12 | | 16 | 6 | | 17 | 4 | | 18 | 2 | | 19 | 11 | | 20 | 5 | | 21 | 6 | | 22 | 2 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 14 | | 25 | 1 | | 26 | 1 | | 27 | 7 | | 28 | 7 | | 29 | 12 | | 30 | 14 | | 31 | 10 | | 32 | 2 | | 33 | 2 | | 34 | 5 | | 35 | 3 | | 36 | 4 | | 37 | 3 | | 38 | 3 | | 39 | 2 | | 40 | 6 | | 41 | 2 | | 42 | 6 | | 43 | 4 | | 44 | 17 | | 45 | 7 | | 46 | 8 | | 47 | 19 | | 48 | 3 | | 49 | 7 |
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| 35.80% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 23 | | diversityRatio | 0.2345679012345679 | | totalSentences | 162 | | uniqueOpeners | 38 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 125 | | matches | | 0 | "Too warm for this time" | | 1 | "Only the pendant, pulsing now," | | 2 | "Too many fingers." | | 3 | "Too many joints." |
| | ratio | 0.032 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 36 | | totalSentences | 125 | | matches | | 0 | "It was warm." | | 1 | "She shouldn’t have come." | | 2 | "*They’re coming for me." | | 3 | "They’re coming for all of" | | 4 | "She should turn back." | | 5 | "She took a step forward." | | 6 | "Her fingers twitched toward the" | | 7 | "She turned slowly, her breath" | | 8 | "She told herself it was" | | 9 | "She swallowed hard, forcing her" | | 10 | "Her own words sounded wrong" | | 11 | "She reached up, fingers brushing" | | 12 | "She whirled, scanning the grove," | | 13 | "she demanded, her voice cracking" | | 14 | "She could almost see it" | | 15 | "It slithered into her bones," | | 16 | "She turned in a slow" | | 17 | "Its limbs were elongated, its" | | 18 | "Its skin was the color" | | 19 | "It stood at the edge" |
| | ratio | 0.288 | |
| 100.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 86 | | totalSentences | 125 | | matches | | 0 | "The air in Richmond Park" | | 1 | "Aurora Carter—Rory to her friends," | | 2 | "The pendant at her throat," | | 3 | "It was warm." | | 4 | "She shouldn’t have come." | | 5 | "Eva’s voice, frantic and slurred," | | 6 | "*They’re coming for me." | | 7 | "They’re coming for all of" | | 8 | "Rory had laughed then, because" | | 9 | "The grove opened before her" | | 10 | "Wildflowers bloomed in defiance of" | | 11 | "The air smelled of damp" | | 12 | "Rory’s pulse hammered in her" | | 13 | "She should turn back." | | 14 | "She took a step forward." | | 15 | "The first wrongness was the" | | 16 | "The kind that made your" | | 17 | "Rory exhaled sharply, forcing herself" | | 18 | "The path narrowed, the oaks" | | 19 | "Her fingers twitched toward the" |
| | ratio | 0.688 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 125 | | matches | | 0 | "Before they do.*" | | 1 | "If she pulled it out" | | 2 | "*To her left.*" |
| | ratio | 0.024 | |
| 38.33% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 41 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "But now, as she stepped past the last of the standing stones—those twisted oaks with their bark blackened as if scorched by something older than fire—she knew b…" | | 1 | "The flowers swayed in the nonexistent wind, their stems bending as if touched by an unseen hand." | | 2 | "Only the pendant, pulsing now, its warmth seeping into her skin." | | 3 | "Its limbs were elongated, its joints bending in ways that made her stomach clench." | | 4 | "She gasped, jerking back, but the figure was already moving—no, *sliding*—toward her, its form shifting, its edges blurring." | | 5 | "The gemstone shattered against the earth, and the glow *exploded*, a burst of crimson light that seared her vision." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 5 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "she demanded, her voice cracking" | | 1 | "it said, its voice a chorus of whispers and hisses" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 4 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she demanded (demand)" | | 1 | "it murmured (murmur)" | | 2 | "she whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 8 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.75 | | effectiveRatio | 0.75 | |