| 0.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 2 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Her voice sounded too [too]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 2 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.5 | |
| 65.16% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1148 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 8 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "really" | | 1 | "sharply" | | 2 | "slowly" | | 3 | "carefully" | | 4 | "quickly" | | 5 | "perfectly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 25.96% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1148 | | totalAiIsms | 17 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "chill" | | 1 | "loomed" | | 2 | "perfect" | | 3 | "pulsed" | | 4 | "whisper" | | 5 | "pulse" | | 6 | "stomach" | | 7 | "silence" | | 8 | "searing" | | 9 | "trembled" | | 10 | "weight" | | 11 | "lurched" | | 12 | "flickered" | | 13 | "warmth" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 115 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 115 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 115 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 31 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 17 | | markdownWords | 20 | | totalWords | 1133 | | ratio | 0.018 | | matches | | 0 | "pulled" | | 1 | "thrived" | | 2 | "You’re not alone." | | 3 | "Without who?" | | 4 | "placed" | | 5 | "behind" | | 6 | "run" | | 7 | "answered" | | 8 | "touched" | | 9 | "soft" | | 10 | "stretching" | | 11 | "couldn’t" | | 12 | "floated" | | 13 | "moved" | | 14 | "emerged" | | 15 | "Claws" | | 16 | "promise" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 3 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 88.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 23 | | wordCount | 1129 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 1.24 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Carter | 1 | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 1 | | Eva | 2 | | Thames | 1 | | Silence | 1 | | Rory | 14 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Fae" | | 3 | "Grove" | | 4 | "Thames" |
| | globalScore | 0.88 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 42.86% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 70 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "something like iron and crushed petals" | | 1 | "not quite a whisper—more like the memory of a voice, something half-remembered" | | 2 | "quite fit" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1133 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 115 | | matches | | 0 | "knew that sound" | | 1 | "was that she" |
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| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 44 | | mean | 25.75 | | std | 26.66 | | cv | 1.035 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 108 | | 1 | 9 | | 2 | 86 | | 3 | 9 | | 4 | 7 | | 5 | 63 | | 6 | 3 | | 7 | 53 | | 8 | 9 | | 9 | 37 | | 10 | 12 | | 11 | 64 | | 12 | 3 | | 13 | 5 | | 14 | 3 | | 15 | 48 | | 16 | 10 | | 17 | 10 | | 18 | 36 | | 19 | 41 | | 20 | 52 | | 21 | 9 | | 22 | 38 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 46 | | 26 | 5 | | 27 | 2 | | 28 | 47 | | 29 | 5 | | 30 | 8 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 81 | | 33 | 17 | | 34 | 61 | | 35 | 38 | | 36 | 37 | | 37 | 5 | | 38 | 3 | | 39 | 7 | | 40 | 5 | | 41 | 2 | | 42 | 9 | | 43 | 30 |
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| 86.96% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 6 | | totalSentences | 115 | | matches | | 0 | "been painted" | | 1 | "was blackened" | | 2 | "been *placed" | | 3 | "were rooted" | | 4 | "was hidden" | | 5 | "been terrified" |
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| 27.29% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 5 | | totalVerbs | 193 | | matches | | 0 | "were breathing" | | 1 | "were trying" | | 2 | "was burning" | | 3 | "was coming" | | 4 | "was calling" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 14 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 14 | | totalSentences | 115 | | ratio | 0.122 | | matches | | 0 | "But the pendant had led her here—had *pulled* her, really, its crimson glow faint but insistent against her collarbone." | | 1 | "She remembered the stories—whispers from Eva about hidden glades where time bent and the veil between worlds was thin." | | 2 | "The wildflowers here didn’t just bloom; they *thrived*, their petals too bright, too perfect, as if they’d been painted on by a hand that didn’t understand decay." | | 3 | "The thought slithered into her mind, not her own voice, not quite a whisper—more like the memory of a voice, something half-remembered." | | 4 | "Only the faintest shift in the shadows at the edge of her vision—a movement, quick and deliberate, like a breath held too long." | | 5 | "Not without—" | | 6 | "She turned slowly, her boots crunching on dead leaves that hadn’t fallen—had been *placed* there, carefully, like offerings." | | 7 | "Then—a rustle." | | 8 | "She pressed her palm to it, and the pain was sudden, sharp—a brand, a mark." | | 9 | "But she felt it—the weight of eyes on her skin, the press of unseen breath against her neck." | | 10 | "She saw it first as a distortion in the air—a ripple, like heat off pavement, but wrong." | | 11 | "The thing tilted its head—if it had a head—and the hair parted just enough for her to see the hollows where eyes should have been." | | 12 | "Rory’s gaze snapped to its hands—no, not hands." | | 13 | "Rory’s last thought, as the grove swallowed her whole, was that she should have listened to the part of her that had always known—some doors weren’t meant to be opened." |
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| 97.52% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1144 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 49 | | adverbRatio | 0.04283216783216783 | | lyAdverbCount | 10 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.008741258741258742 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 115 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 115 | | mean | 9.85 | | std | 7.16 | | cv | 0.726 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 22 | | 1 | 15 | | 2 | 4 | | 3 | 2 | | 4 | 21 | | 5 | 19 | | 6 | 25 | | 7 | 9 | | 8 | 19 | | 9 | 2 | | 10 | 3 | | 11 | 27 | | 12 | 14 | | 13 | 21 | | 14 | 9 | | 15 | 7 | | 16 | 19 | | 17 | 14 | | 18 | 15 | | 19 | 15 | | 20 | 3 | | 21 | 22 | | 22 | 3 | | 23 | 12 | | 24 | 16 | | 25 | 9 | | 26 | 2 | | 27 | 23 | | 28 | 3 | | 29 | 4 | | 30 | 3 | | 31 | 2 | | 32 | 6 | | 33 | 3 | | 34 | 3 | | 35 | 11 | | 36 | 8 | | 37 | 26 | | 38 | 6 | | 39 | 13 | | 40 | 3 | | 41 | 5 | | 42 | 3 | | 43 | 2 | | 44 | 10 | | 45 | 18 | | 46 | 18 | | 47 | 10 | | 48 | 1 | | 49 | 2 |
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| 38.70% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 13 | | diversityRatio | 0.2608695652173913 | | totalSentences | 115 | | uniqueOpeners | 30 | |
| 64.10% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 104 | | matches | | 0 | "Only the faintest shift in" | | 1 | "Then, slowly, something *emerged* from" |
| | ratio | 0.019 | |
| 77.69% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 37 | | totalSentences | 104 | | matches | | 0 | "She shouldn’t have come." | | 1 | "She’d felt it the moment" | | 2 | "She remembered the stories—whispers from" | | 3 | "She should have turned back" | | 4 | "Their bark was blackened in" | | 5 | "She flexed her fingers, knuckles" | | 6 | "*You’re not alone.*" | | 7 | "She spun, half-expecting to see" | | 8 | "Her voice sounded too loud" | | 9 | "She shouldn’t have come." | | 10 | "She didn’t know." | | 11 | "She never did." | | 12 | "She should have left it" | | 13 | "She turned slowly, her boots" | | 14 | "Her voice was steadier than" | | 15 | "Her breath came fast, shallow." | | 16 | "She should run." | | 17 | "She should *run*." | | 18 | "She pressed her palm to" | | 19 | "Their petals unfurled too quickly," |
| | ratio | 0.356 | |
| 85.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 78 | | totalSentences | 104 | | matches | | 0 | "The air in Richmond Park" | | 1 | "Rory Carter pulled her jacket" | | 2 | "She shouldn’t have come." | | 3 | "She’d felt it the moment" | | 4 | "The Fae Grove wasn’t supposed" | | 5 | "She remembered the stories—whispers from" | | 6 | "This was wrong." | | 7 | "The wildflowers here didn’t just" | | 8 | "The trees stood too still," | | 9 | "Rory’s breath fogged in front" | | 10 | "She should have turned back" | | 11 | "Their bark was blackened in" | | 12 | "The crescent scar on her" | | 13 | "She flexed her fingers, knuckles" | | 14 | "*You’re not alone.*" | | 15 | "The thought slithered into her" | | 16 | "Rory’s pulse jumped." | | 17 | "She spun, half-expecting to see" | | 18 | "The trees stretched upward, their" | | 19 | "Her voice sounded too loud" |
| | ratio | 0.75 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 104 | | matches | | 0 | "Now, she stood at the" | | 1 | "Because something was coming." | | 2 | "Because the pendant was calling" |
| | ratio | 0.029 | |
| 36.47% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 47 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "She’d felt it the moment she stepped through the oak archway, the way it had warmed against her skin, almost as if it were breathing." | | 1 | "The wildflowers here didn’t just bloom; they *thrived*, their petals too bright, too perfect, as if they’d been painted on by a hand that didn’t understand deca…" | | 2 | "The silver chain was cool against her palm, but the stone itself radiated heat, as if it were trying to burn its way through her skin." | | 3 | "She turned slowly, her boots crunching on dead leaves that hadn’t fallen—had been *placed* there, carefully, like offerings." | | 4 | "But the pendant was burning now, its heat searing through the thin fabric of her shirt." | | 5 | "Its skin was the color of old parchment, stretched too tight over bones that didn’t quite fit." | | 6 | "Rory’s last thought, as the grove swallowed her whole, was that she should have listened to the part of her that had always known—some doors weren’t meant to be…" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 2 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |