"The air inside wrapped around her like an old coat—smoky, laced with the tang of spilled whiskey and the faint, earthy bite of aged wood."
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"But the bar was fuller than usual, and as she sidled up to the polished oak counter, a voice cut through the din—deep, gravelly, laced with a familiarity that made her pause."
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"The silver signet ring on his right hand caught the light as he polished a glass, and she noticed the slight hitch in his step as he shifted weight off his left leg—the limp she'd heard whispers about but never asked after."
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"She hesitated, tracing the small crescent scar on her left wrist with her thumb—a remnant of a childhood tumble from her father's garden wall, the kind of mark that itched when old memories surfaced."
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"Her father, Brendan, the Irish barrister with his endless cases, had hosted Silas back then, a distant cousin or colleague—something vague like that."
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"Now, at twenty-five, she was a ghost of that—cool-headed still, intelligent enough to dodge questions, but the out-of-the-box thinking felt rusted, bent by the weight of fleeing Cardiff, of Evan's fists and lies."
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"He leaned on the bar, the limp making him favor his right side, and she caught the flicker of something—regret?"
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"Recognition?—in his hazel depths."
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"Evan, for starters—the charming law student who'd turned possessive, his temper a slow poison that left bruises she hid under long sleeves."
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"He'd been the one to warn her, back in Cardiff, about the shadows of the world—how intelligence work chewed you up, spat you out changed."
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"And he saw hers—the scar on her wrist a small thing compared to the invisible ones Evan had carved."
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"The tension coiled between them—who they'd been, vibrant and connected, versus this: two survivors nursing regrets like bad habits."
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"\"From Evan. He... wasn't what he seemed.\" The words tumbled out, concrete details she'd buried: the first slap dismissed as stress, the crescent bruise on her wrist from when he'd grabbed her during an argument—not the childhood scar, but one that faded slower."
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"But the weight pressed down—the flat above his bar a coincidence or fate, her deliveries a detour from the path they'd both imagined."
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"They talked then, the conversation unfurling like a map on the wall—slow at first, then winding through Cardiff memories, her mother's Welsh lullabies, his Prague ghosts."
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"She stepped into the drizzle, the neon buzz fading behind her, but the warmth stayed—a crack in the armor, regret's weight lightened, if only for a night."
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"At five-foot-six, she wove through the patrons with the practiced ease of someone who'd learned to navigate tight spaces, her bright blue eyes scanning for an e…"
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"But the bar was fuller than usual, and as she sidled up to the polished oak counter, a voice cut through the din—deep, gravelly, laced with a familiarity that m…"
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"He stood behind the bar, taller than she remembered at six-foot-one, his grey-streaked auburn hair swept back, beard neatly trimmed to frame a face etched with …"
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"She hesitated, tracing the small crescent scar on her left wrist with her thumb—a remnant of a childhood tumble from her father's garden wall, the kind of mark …"
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"Evan, for starters—the charming law student who'd turned possessive, his temper a slow poison that left bruises she hid under long sleeves."
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"It had stolen her certainty, left her delivering dim sum in the rain, glancing over her shoulder for shadows that weren't there."
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"He saw the girl who'd argued circles around him, potential untarnished."