"The boundary stones loomed ahead, gnarled oaks twisted into rough-hewn pillars, their bark etched with patterns that caught the moonlight wrong—too deliberate, like veins under skin."
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"The park's distant rumble—cars on the A307, a dog's bark—faded as if muffled by cotton wool."
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"Isolde's grove—Eva's wild tales called it that—matched the direction, a Fae-touched pocket hidden in plain sight."
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"Rory froze, left wrist itching where the crescent scar pulled tight—a phantom ache from that childhood tumble off her da's garden wall."
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"Thirty feet across, maybe—oaks ringing it like silent sentinels, flowers carpeting the center in a bed that seemed to breathe, stems swaying without breeze."
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"Battery at half, clock reading 12:17 a.m.—same as when she'd entered."
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"The oaks felt alive under her touch—pulsing faintly, sap sticky."
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"Halfway around, movement flickered at vision's edge—a pale shape darting between stones, too tall for deer, too fluid for human."
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"But the rustle returned, multiplied—soft footfalls circling, just beyond the oaks."
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"Rory pivoted toward the boundary, but the stones had shifted—or had they?"
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"No, shaped—her name?"
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"She broke into a jog, pendant swinging, glow pulsing erratic—warm, hot, scalding."
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"She stumbled, righting on a stone that wasn't stone—mossy, pulsing."
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"Eyes watched from the dark—many, unblinking, silver-pinprick pupils in voids where faces should be."
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"Panic clawed, but Rory shoved it down—think, out-of-box."
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"Shapes flitted now, bolder—elongated limbs brushing her hair, breath hot and sugared on her neck."
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"Her palm blistered red, chain dangling empty—the pendant gone, swallowed."
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"It had been pulsing faintly all evening, that deep crimson gem warming like a live ember against her skin, drawing her here like a compass needle to true north."
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"The boundary stones loomed ahead, gnarled oaks twisted into rough-hewn pillars, their bark etched with patterns that caught the moonlight wrong—too deliberate, …"
2
"The park's distant rumble—cars on the A307, a dog's bark—faded as if muffled by cotton wool."
3
"Isolde's grove—Eva's wild tales called it that—matched the direction, a Fae-touched pocket hidden in plain sight."
4
"Thirty feet across, maybe—oaks ringing it like silent sentinels, flowers carpeting the center in a bed that seemed to breathe, stems swaying without breeze."
5
"The crimson gem glowed brighter, casting ruby shadows that danced across petals, making them writhe like worms."
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"She pushed forward, shoulders brushing bark that yielded, warm and spongy."
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"Her scar itched fiercer, skin crawling as if ants marched beneath."
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"The grove shrank, oaks crowding, flowers rising to her knees, tugging at her jeans with thorns that weren't there seconds ago."
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"She burst through the narrowest gap, bark raking her arms, emerging into Richmond Park's proper dark."