"The air inside hit her like a sigh—stale smoke laced with whiskey and the faint metallic tang of old coins."
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"A couple hunched in the corner, murmuring over gin; a lone pianist plinked melancholy keys in the back."
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"Rory needed this—a stool, a pint, something to blunt the ache from eight hours dodging London traffic on her battered scooter, ferrying dim sum from Yu-Fei's Golden Empress."
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"A slight hitch in his left leg as he shifted—Prague's ghost, the knee that ended field work."
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"Brendan Carter, barrister by day, occasional informant by night—Silas had been the shadow in their parlor, trading whispers about IRA fringes while she eavesdropped from the stairs."
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"\"Retired. Mostly.\" His gaze traced her—shoulder-length black hair instead of the wild ponytail, the cool poise masking something frayed."
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"The girl who'd debated him on ethics at twelve was gone; this woman carried ghosts in her posture."
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"\"Brendan bragged about everyone.\" Pain lanced, quick as her father's crash—whiskey on ice, black ice on the M4."
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"They clinked—her pint, his tumbler—and drank."
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"He'd been her father's friend, maybe more—whispers of ops, her da patching legal holes for Silas's web."
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"\"Life. Evan happened. University boyfriend turned Prince Charming into Punch. Eva dragged me here.\" Words tumbled, unbidden—fled Cardiff, dumped Pre-Law, flat above his bar like fate's cruel joke."
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"But regret coiled deeper—Brendan's file, the op that soured, pulling civilians close then ghosting."
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"He glanced at the bookshelf in the corner—false front to the hidden room, meetings with ghosts of MI6 past."
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"Brendan's death unchecked—car crash too neat, whispers of retaliation he'd ignored."
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"\"Not strangers.\" His hand brushed hers—ring cool against her skin—then withdrew."
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"Their eyes met—hazel assessing, blue defiant."
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"Laughter cracked through—her mimicking Evan's posh rages, him recounting a Prague safehouse farce."
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"Hours bled; the couple left, pianist packed."
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"Weight of time pressed: fifteen years, regrets unspoken—his failure to protect, hers to rise."
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"They both had—him bent but unbroken, her cracked but mending."
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"Dim bulbs dangled from exposed wires, casting pools of amber over scarred wooden tables and walls papered in faded maps of forgotten empires, black-and-white ph…"
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"Six-foot-one, he loomed behind the counter, neatly trimmed beard framing a jaw that had hardened over decades."
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"A slight hitch in his left leg as he shifted—Prague's ghost, the knee that ended field work."
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"But regret coiled deeper—Brendan's file, the op that soured, pulling civilians close then ghosting."