Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY9RH70F4JM9F3WVN7HCXNC

Run Details

Duration:
29.9s
Cost:
$0.001697
Provider:
xAI

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
Rory pushed through the heavy oak door of The Raven's Nest, the green neon sign above buzzing faintly like a trapped hornet against the Soho drizzle. The air inside hit her like a sigh—stale smoke laced with whiskey and the faint metallic tang of old coins. Dim bulbs dangled from exposed wires, casting pools of amber over scarred wooden tables and walls papered in faded maps of forgotten empires, black-and-white photographs curling at the edges: grainy shots of men in trench coats, women with victory rolls, a world that had crumbled into this. She shook rain from her black hair, shoulder-length strands clinging damply to her neck, and scanned the near-empty room. A couple hunched in the corner, murmuring over gin; a lone pianist plinked melancholy keys in the back. Rory needed this—a stool, a pint, something to blunt the ache from eight hours dodging London traffic on her battered scooter, ferrying dim sum from Yu-Fei's Golden Empress. The flat upstairs waited, but so did the ghosts: Evan's last bruise fading on her ribs, the law books she'd burned in a Cardiff skip. Twenty-five felt like forty tonight. She slid onto a stool at the bar, fingers tracing the crescent scar on her left wrist, a silvery reminder of tumbling from a swing at seven. "Pint of bitter, please," she said to the bartender's back, voice steady despite the tremor in her hands. The man turned, and time fractured. Silas Blackwood poured from the tap with deliberate slowness, foam cresting the glass like sea on a cliff. His hazel eyes, sharp beneath grey-streaked auburn brows, flicked up and locked on her bright blue ones. Six-foot-one, he loomed behind the counter, neatly trimmed beard framing a jaw that had hardened over decades. The silver signet ring on his right hand glinted as he set the pint down. A slight hitch in his left leg as he shifted—Prague's ghost, the knee that ended field work. "Rory Carter," he said, voice low gravel, not a question. "Christ. Little Rory from Cardiff." Her breath caught, pint halfway to her lips. The face sharpened in memory: younger, clean-shaven, kneeling by her father's desk fifteen years ago, maps spread like battle plans. Brendan Carter, barrister by day, occasional informant by night—Silas had been the shadow in their parlor, trading whispers about IRA fringes while she eavesdropped from the stairs. He'd slipped her a sweet once, called her "sharp as a tack," promised to teach her locks when she was older. Then he'd vanished into MI6 murk, and her father had died in a car wreck two years later, unspoken debts buried with him. "Silas." The name tasted like rust. She hadn't known this was his place when Eva shoved the flat key into her hand last month. "The Spymaster himself, pouring pints. World really has gone topsy-turvy." He chuckled, a rumble that didn't reach his eyes, and leaned on the bar, favoring the right leg. "Retired. Mostly." His gaze traced her—shoulder-length black hair instead of the wild ponytail, the cool poise masking something frayed. The girl who'd debated him on ethics at twelve was gone; this woman carried ghosts in her posture. "What brings you to my nest? Last I heard, you were set for courts and gavels." Rory sipped, bitter foam grounding her. The scar itched under his stare. "Long story. Short version: law school's for masochists. I'm delivering takeaways now. Yu-Fei's. Keeps the lights on." She forced a grin, but it cracked. Changed significantly? She was a husk of the A-student who'd fled Evan’s fists three months back, Pre-Law dreams shattered like the mirror he'd punched. Silas polished a glass he didn't need to, ring catching light. Fifteen years carved him too: auburn hair threaded silver, beard masking jowls, limp turning swagger to measured prowl. The man who'd dismantled locks for fun now owned this dim relic, a front for strings he still pulled. "Delivery girl. You." He shook his head, hazel eyes narrowing. "Brendan'd have a fit. He bragged about you—future PM, he said." "Brendan bragged about everyone." Pain lanced, quick as her father's crash—whiskey on ice, black ice on the M4. She traced the bar's gouges, voices from the couple drifting like smoke. "What about you? Slumming it in Soho after saving the realm?" His smile faded, limp echoing as he stepped to fetch a bottle. "Prague, '09. Botched drop. Knee's the souvenir." He poured himself a finger of scotch, neat, and raised it. "To old ghosts." They clinked—her pint, his tumbler—and drank. Silence stretched, heavy as the maps overhead: Europe redrawn, borders bled. Rory watched his hand, steady despite the ring's weight. He'd been her father's friend, maybe more—whispers of ops, her da patching legal holes for Silas's web. She'd idolized them both, dreamed of joining that shadowed dance. Now? "You look different," Silas said finally, voice probing. "Harder. What happened, Rory?" She stiffened, blue eyes flashing. "Life. Evan happened. University boyfriend turned Prince Charming into Punch. Eva dragged me here." Words tumbled, unbidden—fled Cardiff, dumped Pre-Law, flat above his bar like fate's cruel joke. "Ran like hell. You know about running." Silas's jaw tightened, beard twitching. He knew running: aliases shed like skins, contacts burned. But regret coiled deeper—Brendan's file, the op that soured, pulling civilians close then ghosting. He'd promised the girl Rory once: "Stay sharp, kid. World needs thinkers like you." Now she delivered egg rolls, scarred inside and out. "Regret it?" he asked, casual as pouring. "The law? Or him?" "Both." Her voice cracked, pint sweating in her grip. "Thought I'd be someone. Now? I'm Laila on bad days, Aurora on forms. Rory nowhere." She laughed, bitter. "You? Still pulling strings from behind the bar?" He glanced at the bookshelf in the corner—false front to the hidden room, meetings with ghosts of MI6 past. "Some strings snap." Prague: partner down, knee shattered, retirement forced. Brendan's death unchecked—car crash too neat, whispers of retaliation he'd ignored. Unspoken regret burned: could've shielded the Carters better, pulled Rory into the fold instead of letting her drift. The pianist shifted to a slow jazz lament, notes curling like regret. Rory leaned in, voice low. "Remember that night? Da's study, you showing me the rabbit trick with the lockpick?" Her fingers mimed it, scar pale. Silas nodded, memory vivid: her bright blue eyes wide, Brendan's laugh booming. "You picked it faster than me. Said you'd be better." "Wasn't." She stared into her pint, foam gone flat. "Time wastes us, Si. You limp, I deliver. Friends become strangers." "Not strangers." His hand brushed hers—ring cool against her skin—then withdrew. Tension hummed, the bar's dimness amplifying it: who they'd been versus this. He regretted the silence after Brendan, the ops that isolated him. She regretted folding under Evan, torching ambitions. "Live upstairs now," she said abruptly. "Eva's doing. Didn't know it was yours till tonight." "Fate's a bastard." He poured her refill, free. "Stick around. Nest needs sharp eyes." Their eyes met—hazel assessing, blue defiant. Conversation flowed then, halting at first: her mother's Welsh lilt fading in Cardiff, his bar's underbelly of deals. Laughter cracked through—her mimicking Evan's posh rages, him recounting a Prague safehouse farce. But undercurrents pulled: her unspoken plea for purpose, his for redemption. Hours bled; the couple left, pianist packed. Rory's cheeks flushed, three pints deep. "Should go up. Rain stopped." Silas limped around the bar, held the door. "Rory—don't waste it. You're still sharp." She paused on the threshold, drizzle gleaming on cobblestones. "You too, Spymaster. Don't let the ghosts nest here." Door swung shut. Silas locked it, hazel eyes on the green neon's glow. Weight of time pressed: fifteen years, regrets unspoken—his failure to protect, hers to rise. Upstairs, her light flicked on. The bar sighed empty, maps whispering of roads not taken. But tomorrow, she'd descend. Strings might reweave. Rory climbed the narrow stairs, key rattling in the lock. Flat smelled of damp and instant noodles. She collapsed on the bed, wrist scar throbbing, Silas's face etched in mind. Changed? They both had—him bent but unbroken, her cracked but mending. Regret lingered, heavy as the pint's dregs, but for the first time in months, sleep came without Evan's shadow. Downstairs, Silas eased into the back room, bookshelf swinging silent. Files waited, but tonight, he poured another scotch. To Rory Carter. To second chances. The Raven's Nest slumbered, neon buzzing on. Time's weight eased, just a fraction, in the space between who they'd been and who they might yet be.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
57.14% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags21
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"The name tasted like [like]"
1"Silas said finally [finally]"
2"she said abruptly [abruptly]"
dialogueSentences38
tagDensity0.553
leniency1
rawRatio0.143
effectiveRatio0.143
96.54% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1446
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
6.64% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1446
totalAiIsms27
found
0
word"scanned"
count1
1
word"tracing"
count1
2
word"reminder"
count1
3
word"fractured"
count1
4
word"flicked"
count2
5
word"loomed"
count1
6
word"unspoken"
count4
7
word"traced"
count2
8
word"shattered"
count2
9
word"measured"
count1
10
word"echoing"
count1
11
word"silence"
count2
12
word"weight"
count3
13
word"dance"
count1
14
word"tension"
count1
15
word"lilt"
count1
16
word"gleaming"
count1
17
word"etched"
count1
highlights
0"scanned"
1"tracing"
2"reminder"
3"fractured"
4"flicked"
5"loomed"
6"unspoken"
7"traced"
8"shattered"
9"measured"
10"echoing"
11"silence"
12"weight"
13"dance"
14"tension"
15"lilt"
16"gleaming"
17"etched"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences98
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences98
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences115
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen49
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1412
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions59
wordCount1164
uniqueNames23
maxNameDensity0.95
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Raven2
Nest2
Soho1
London1
Yu-Fei1
Golden1
Empress1
Evan5
Cardiff3
Blackwood1
Prague3
Carter2
Silas11
Eva1
Changed2
Pre-Law2
Pain1
Europe1
Brendan5
Rory10
Carters1
Tension1
Welsh1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Evan"
3"Blackwood"
4"Carter"
5"Silas"
6"Eva"
7"Pain"
8"Brendan"
9"Rory"
10"Tension"
places
0"Soho"
1"London"
2"Yu-Fei"
3"Cardiff"
4"Prague"
5"Europe"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences79
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1412
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences115
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs35
mean40.34
std25.81
cv0.64
sampleLengths
093
195
245
36
484
515
699
734
871
960
1069
1141
1233
1354
1412
1540
1651
1711
1835
1958
2037
2122
2220
2341
2415
2514
2648
2718
2814
2918
3042
317
3260
3324
3426
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences98
matches
0"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs229
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount20
semicolonCount3
flaggedSentences20
totalSentences115
ratio0.174
matches
0"The air inside hit her like a sigh—stale smoke laced with whiskey and the faint metallic tang of old coins."
1"A couple hunched in the corner, murmuring over gin; a lone pianist plinked melancholy keys in the back."
2"Rory needed this—a stool, a pint, something to blunt the ache from eight hours dodging London traffic on her battered scooter, ferrying dim sum from Yu-Fei's Golden Empress."
3"A slight hitch in his left leg as he shifted—Prague's ghost, the knee that ended field work."
4"Brendan Carter, barrister by day, occasional informant by night—Silas had been the shadow in their parlor, trading whispers about IRA fringes while she eavesdropped from the stairs."
5"\"Retired. Mostly.\" His gaze traced her—shoulder-length black hair instead of the wild ponytail, the cool poise masking something frayed."
6"The girl who'd debated him on ethics at twelve was gone; this woman carried ghosts in her posture."
7"\"Brendan bragged about everyone.\" Pain lanced, quick as her father's crash—whiskey on ice, black ice on the M4."
8"They clinked—her pint, his tumbler—and drank."
9"He'd been her father's friend, maybe more—whispers of ops, her da patching legal holes for Silas's web."
10"\"Life. Evan happened. University boyfriend turned Prince Charming into Punch. Eva dragged me here.\" Words tumbled, unbidden—fled Cardiff, dumped Pre-Law, flat above his bar like fate's cruel joke."
11"But regret coiled deeper—Brendan's file, the op that soured, pulling civilians close then ghosting."
12"He glanced at the bookshelf in the corner—false front to the hidden room, meetings with ghosts of MI6 past."
13"Brendan's death unchecked—car crash too neat, whispers of retaliation he'd ignored."
14"\"Not strangers.\" His hand brushed hers—ring cool against her skin—then withdrew."
15"Their eyes met—hazel assessing, blue defiant."
16"Laughter cracked through—her mimicking Evan's posh rages, him recounting a Prague safehouse farce."
17"Hours bled; the couple left, pianist packed."
18"Weight of time pressed: fifteen years, regrets unspoken—his failure to protect, hers to rise."
19"They both had—him bent but unbroken, her cracked but mending."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1196
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"sharp beneath grey-streaked auburn"
adverbCount34
adverbRatio0.028428093645484948
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.006688963210702341
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences115
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences115
mean12.28
std7.32
cv0.596
sampleLengths
026
120
247
319
418
528
625
75
827
918
106
1118
1217
1317
1415
1517
1610
175
188
1920
2027
2121
2223
236
2418
2510
2618
2719
2818
2916
306
316
3224
332
3422
3511
3618
3719
3810
3911
4018
4112
4211
4312
4418
453
466
4711
489
4917
80.87% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.4956521739130435
totalSentences115
uniqueOpeners57
35.09% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences95
matches
0"Then he'd vanished into MI6"
ratio0.011
64.21% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount37
totalSentences95
matches
0"She shook rain from her"
1"She slid onto a stool"
2"she said to the bartender's"
3"His hazel eyes, sharp beneath"
4"he said, voice low gravel,"
5"Her breath caught, pint halfway"
6"He'd slipped her a sweet"
7"She hadn't known this was"
8"He chuckled, a rumble that"
9"His gaze traced her—shoulder—length black"
10"She forced a grin, but"
11"She was a husk of"
12"He shook his head, hazel"
13"She traced the bar's gouges,"
14"His smile faded, limp echoing"
15"He poured himself a finger"
16"They clinked—her pint, his tumbler—and"
17"He'd been her father's friend,"
18"She'd idolized them both, dreamed"
19"She stiffened, blue eyes flashing."
ratio0.389
33.68% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount81
totalSentences95
matches
0"Rory pushed through the heavy"
1"The air inside hit her"
2"She shook rain from her"
3"A couple hunched in the"
4"Rory needed this—a stool, a"
5"The flat upstairs waited, but"
6"She slid onto a stool"
7"she said to the bartender's"
8"The man turned, and time"
9"Silas Blackwood poured from the"
10"His hazel eyes, sharp beneath"
11"The silver signet ring on"
12"A slight hitch in his"
13"he said, voice low gravel,"
14"Her breath caught, pint halfway"
15"The face sharpened in memory:"
16"Brendan Carter, barrister by day,"
17"He'd slipped her a sweet"
18"The name tasted like rust"
19"She hadn't known this was"
ratio0.853
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences95
matches
0"To Rory Carter."
1"To second chances."
ratio0.021
83.33% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences48
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"Dim bulbs dangled from exposed wires, casting pools of amber over scarred wooden tables and walls papered in faded maps of forgotten empires, black-and-white ph…"
1"Six-foot-one, he loomed behind the counter, neatly trimmed beard framing a jaw that had hardened over decades."
2"A slight hitch in his left leg as he shifted—Prague's ghost, the knee that ended field work."
3"But regret coiled deeper—Brendan's file, the op that soured, pulling civilians close then ghosting."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags21
uselessAdditionCount7
matches
0"she said, voice steady despite the tremor in her hands"
1"he said, voice low gravel, not a question"
2"His gaze traced, the cool poise masking something frayed"
3"Silas said finally, voice probing"
4"Her voice cracked, pint sweating in her grip"
5"She laughed, bitter"
6"He poured, free"
97.37% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"He'd (would)"
1"She laughed (laugh)"
dialogueSentences38
tagDensity0.184
leniency0.368
rawRatio0.286
effectiveRatio0.105
81.6293%