Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY9SYFY2NE8KKXJEBFWCWFZ

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Duration:
32.6s
Cost:
$0.001297
Provider:
Seed

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The bell over the door jingles as Aurora pushes through, the smell of damp rain clinging to her jacket like a second skin. It’s a Thursday evening, late enough that the bar’s hum has settled into something softer—jazz filtered through a dusty speaker, the clink of a glass, the distant murmur of two regulars arguing over the football results. She pauses, one hand still on the door, because for a second, the green neon sign—the *Raven’s Nest* sign, flickering like a dying moth—fools her. It’s not that she’s never been here before; she’s lived above it for three months now, the creaky stairs to her flat a familiar shuffle at the end of her delivery routes. But tonight, with the rain pattering on the windows and the air thick with the tang of lager and pipe smoke, something about the place unspools the thread of her usual calm. She sets down the delivery bag at her feet. The takeaway from Yu-Fei’s is still warm, though the owner, Yu-Fei, had given her a sideways look when Aurora had asked for extra ginger in the curry. “You look like you need it,” the woman had said, winking, and Aurora had mumbled something about running in the rain. The ginger’s a habit now—every meal, since the night Evan had thrown a whiskey glass at the wall, shards flying over her shoulder. She’d flinched, but not from the noise. From the way the light caught the glass, the way he’d risen, red-faced, and said, *Don’t you dare flinch at me*, and she’d fled, into the night, with only a coat and a phone full of Eva’s texts. *Come to London. I’ll fix it.* The bar’s dim, the walls a mosaic of black-and-white photos—some weathered, some sharp—and maps that curl at the edges, pins marking places like *Prague* and *Dublin* and *Cardiff, South Wales*. Aurora’s eyes land on one of the photos half a second before she hears the cloth hit the bar. “Rory?” Her blood goes cold. The name is a bullet, but not the kind Evan used. It’s the kind Eva used, the kind she used to say like it was a secret code, like the *real* her was locked away under the alias. She turns. Silas is standing behind the bar, his auburn hair streaked with grey, a rag in his hand. His beard is neatly trimmed, as always, but his shoulders are hunched, and when he moves, his left leg drags slightly, the limp more pronounced tonight. He’s wearing a black button-down, the sleeves rolled up to his elbows, and his signet ring glints on his right hand. They’ve crossed paths before—twice, maybe three times—since she moved in. He’d nod at her when she came up from deliveries, she’d nod back, and that was it. But now, he’s looking at her like he’s seen a ghost. “Silas,” she says, and her voice is higher than she intends. She crosses her arms, the scar on her left wrist—a thin, white crescent from when she was six, chasing a butterfly into a bramble bush—prickling under her sleeve. “Didn’t think I’d see you behind the bar.” He blinks, the ghostliness lifting a little, and sets the rag down. “Thought I’d see *you* delivering, not standing in the doorway like you’ve seen a poltergeist. You usually take the stairs from the kitchen, right? The one with the rickety step.” She forces a smile. “Got stuck in traffic. Yu-Fei’s curry can wait, but… rain.” He nods, like he understands. Maybe he does. The bar’s a front for more than drinks—Aurora knows that. Half the time, she hears voices in the secret room behind the bookcase, low and urgent, maps spread out on a table that looks like it’s seen two wars. Silas is a spymaster in a barman’s apron, and she’s a delivery girl in a world of ghosts. “Want a drink?” he asks, and before she can decline, he adds, “On the house. It’s been… a while.” She hesitates. The last time she’d been in the bar, before moving in, she’d been sixteen, or seventeen, maybe eighteen, and she’d stolen a bottle of gin from him. *“Thought you’d grown out of this,”* he’d said, not angry, just tired. *“Thought you'd gone to Cardiff, to be a barrister’s daughter, not a thief.”* She’d run then, too—from Evan, from her father’s lectures, from the way the world felt like a pressure cooker. Eva had found her in a hostel, crying into a hotel towel, and had said, *Let’s go to London. Let’s start over.* And here she is, three years later, starting over in a city that smells like rain and regret. “Okay,” she says, and sits on a stool at the end of the bar. The wood is polished, cool against her jeans. “One drink. Make it something strong.” He nods, turns to the tap. The sound of beer being poured fills the silence, and Aurora studies him—the lines around his eyes, the way his hands move, steady and sure, like he’s used to holding a gun more than a bottle opener. *Retired spymaster*, the rumor goes. *Botched operation in Prague. Left a limp, left MI6.* She’d never asked him about it. He never talks about the bar, or his past. “Eva says you’re good at numbers,” he says, sliding the glass over. It’s a tumbler of whiskey, neat, with a lemon twist on the rim. “Says you could out-calculate a banker. Says you’re the reason she got into accounting, ‘cause you made it look easy.” Aurora’s throat tightens. Eva. She hasn’t heard that name in two years. Not since the day she’d left, with only a backpack and a phone that died halfway to London. She’d sent a single text: *Sorry. Can’t come back.* And then she’d deleted the thread, deleted the contact, deleted any trace of herself from Cardiff. Evan had found her texts, had said, *You’re running from everything, aren’t you? Just like your father.* “She hasn’t changed,” she says, taking a sip of the whiskey. It burns, but not in the way Evan’s anger did. It’s a good pain, sharp and clear. “Still thinks I have all the answers.” Silas chuckles, a low sound. “She was always the question. You were the answer.” He pauses, wiping the bar again, slower this time. “I used to think you’d be a barrister. All sharp edges and quick tongue, arguing cases in front of judges. Brendan would brag about you, you know. Said you were the only one in the family with sense. ‘Aurora’s going to fix this country,’ he’d say. Like the country needed fixing. Like *you* could fix it.” Aurora’s fingers tighten around the glass. “He stopped bragging after I flunked out of Cardiff. Said I’d ‘embarrassed the family.’” Silas sets the rag down. “You didn’t flunk out. You *walked away*. Left before finals, right? Packed a bag, called Eva and said, ‘Let’s go.’” She meets his eyes. “You knew about that?” “Word travels. In these circles.” He gestures vaguely at the bar, the maps, the shadowy back room. “I didn’t know why, though. Thought you were just… young. Stupid. Thought you’d come back, once you realized London wasn’t a fairy tale.” “It’s not.” He nods. “Evan, then. That’s what you get for dating footballers. Arrogant, entitled, think they can break you and fix you with a wink.” She flinches, and he sees it. His face softens, just a little. “You didn’t deserve that. Any of it.” Aurora laughs, bitter and wet. “Who does, though? Eva could’ve told you I’m a mess. She *did* tell you, once. At that party, the one in Cardiff, after Evan called me a drunk. She said, ‘Rory’s been running since she was six. The brambles, the ghost in the woods, Evan… she just doesn’t stop.’” She takes another sip of whiskey. “Turns out she was right. I can’t even stop running from myself.” Silas is quiet for a long time. The jazz record ends, and he flicks the switch on the speaker, putting on a new one—something softer, piano and strings. “You know, I once told you something,” he says, and his voice is low, like he’s remembering. “I said, ‘Rory, you can’t outrun your past. It’s not a mountain. It’s a shadow. It follows you, but you can turn around and face it. Or you can run, and it’ll be there when you get tired.’” She stares at him. “You said that. When I was sixteen. When I stole the gin.” He nods. “You were so angry, Rory. At your father, at the world, at yourself. I thought… maybe you’d use that anger. Instead of running from it.” “I tried,” she says, and the words come out raw, like she’s never said them before. “I went to therapy. For a month. Evan found the bills, said I was ‘wasting money on shrinks.’ Said I was ‘broken’ and he’d ‘fixed me.’ And then he broke me again, and again, ‘cause he knew I’d come back.” Silas’ hand hovers over the bar, like he wants to touch her, but he doesn’t. “You should’ve come to me. I would’ve… done something.” “You’re a barman, Silas. A *retired* one. You can’t fix everything.” “I fixed *something* in Prague, once,” he says, and for the first time, his voice cracks. “Or I tried. But it didn’t matter. I still got shot. I still got a limp. I still got… this.” He taps his temple. “The ghosts never really leave, Rory. You just learn to see them differently.” Aurora thinks of Evan’s face, red and twisted, of the way the beer had spilled over the bar when he’d thrown the glass. She thinks of her father’s voice, cold and disappointed: *You’ll never amount to anything*. She thinks of the brambles, the way they’d scratched her wrist, the way she’d laughed, covered in blood, because it had hurt so good. “I’m not running anymore,” she says, and her voice is so quiet, she’s not sure he hears her. But he does. He nods. “Good. Because the world’s still broken. And youyou’re the only person I know who can break it back into something better.” The bell jingles again, and a group of tourists files in, talking loudly. Aurora stands up, grabbing her delivery bag. “I should go. Yu-Fei’s waiting.” Silas slides a business card across the bar. It’s black, with a raven printed on the front, no name, no number. “If you ever want to talk about it. Not the bar, not the spies. Just… you. And me. And the girl who stole my gin.” She takes the card, her fingers brushing his. His hand is warm, calloused, like he’s held a lot of guns. “I’ll call you.” He smiles. “I’ll be here.” She turns, the card tucked into her jacket, and walks toward the door. The bell jingles behind her, but for the first time in years, she doesn’t look back. The rain has stopped, and the street is lit by sodium lamps, casting long shadows. She takes a deep breath, and for the first time, it fills her lungs without burning. Somewhere behind her, the jazz record fades out, and the bar settles into silence. But Aurora doesn’t feel it. She’s already moved on—from the ghosts, from the past, from the girl who ran. She’s just Aurora now. And maybe, for the first time, she’s ready to stay.
created_at"2026-02-20T19:53:08.364Z" 2/20/2026, 7:53:08 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags15
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences44
tagDensity0.341
leniency0.682
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
94.79% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1921
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
86.99% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1921
totalAiIsms5
found
0
word"familiar"
count1
1
word"mosaic"
count1
2
word"silence"
count2
3
word"calculate"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"mosaic"
2"silence"
3"calculate"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences104
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences104
filterMatches
0"look"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences133
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen56
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans21
markdownWords83
totalWords1898
ratio0.044
matches
0"Raven’s Nest"
1"Don’t you dare flinch at me"
2"Come to London. I’ll fix it."
3"Prague"
4"Dublin"
5"Cardiff, South Wales"
6"real"
7"you"
8"“Thought you’d grown out of this,”"
9"“Thought you'd gone to Cardiff, to be a barrister’s daughter, not a thief.”"
10"Let’s go to London. Let’s start over."
11"Retired spymaster"
12"Botched operation in Prague. Left a limp, left MI6."
13"Sorry. Can’t come back."
14"You’re running from everything, aren’t you? Just like your father."
15"you"
16"walked away"
17"did"
18"retired"
19"something"
20"You’ll never amount to anything"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions26
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
99.49% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions40
wordCount1287
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity1.01
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Aurora13
Thursday1
Yu-Fei2
Evan6
Eva4
London3
South1
Prague2
Cardiff2
Silas6
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Yu-Fei"
2"Evan"
3"Eva"
4"Silas"
places
0"London"
1"South"
2"Prague"
3"Cardiff"
globalScore0.995
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences77
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"felt like a pressure cooker"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1898
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences133
matches
0"maps that curl"
1"heard that name"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs43
mean44.14
std32.69
cv0.741
sampleLengths
0148
1131
249
31
444
5102
647
742
814
965
1019
1195
1218
1328
1472
1545
1672
1735
1879
1920
2025
218
2240
232
2424
2519
2672
2783
2816
2927
3056
3124
3211
3353
3461
3521
3624
3725
3846
3923
405
4160
4247
88.39% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount5
totalSentences104
matches
0"was locked"
1"are hunched"
2"been sixteen"
3"being poured"
4"is lit"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs221
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount15
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences12
totalSentences133
ratio0.09
matches
0"It’s a Thursday evening, late enough that the bar’s hum has settled into something softer—jazz filtered through a dusty speaker, the clink of a glass, the distant murmur of two regulars arguing over the football results."
1"She pauses, one hand still on the door, because for a second, the green neon sign—the *Raven’s Nest* sign, flickering like a dying moth—fools her."
2"It’s not that she’s never been here before; she’s lived above it for three months now, the creaky stairs to her flat a familiar shuffle at the end of her delivery routes."
3"The ginger’s a habit now—every meal, since the night Evan had thrown a whiskey glass at the wall, shards flying over her shoulder."
4"The bar’s dim, the walls a mosaic of black-and-white photos—some weathered, some sharp—and maps that curl at the edges, pins marking places like *Prague* and *Dublin* and *Cardiff, South Wales*."
5"They’ve crossed paths before—twice, maybe three times—since she moved in."
6"She crosses her arms, the scar on her left wrist—a thin, white crescent from when she was six, chasing a butterfly into a bramble bush—prickling under her sleeve."
7"The bar’s a front for more than drinks—Aurora knows that."
8"*“Thought you'd gone to Cardiff, to be a barrister’s daughter, not a thief.”* She’d run then, too—from Evan, from her father’s lectures, from the way the world felt like a pressure cooker."
9"The sound of beer being poured fills the silence, and Aurora studies him—the lines around his eyes, the way his hands move, steady and sure, like he’s used to holding a gun more than a bottle opener."
10"The jazz record ends, and he flicks the switch on the speaker, putting on a new one—something softer, piano and strings."
11"She’s already moved on—from the ghosts, from the past, from the girl who ran."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1143
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"polished, cool against her"
adverbCount39
adverbRatio0.03412073490813648
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.00699912510936133
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences133
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences133
mean14.27
std10.65
cv0.746
sampleLengths
023
136
225
332
432
59
627
721
823
97
1038
113
123
1330
1419
151
164
1711
1827
192
2017
2126
2221
2310
2417
2511
2611
2728
288
2912
3030
314
3210
335
343
3510
3629
3718
3819
392
4027
4112
4232
4319
443
4518
4614
478
486
496
47.37% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.3157894736842105
totalSentences133
uniqueOpeners42
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences97
matches
0"Maybe he does."
1"Just like your father.*"
2"Somewhere behind her, the jazz"
ratio0.031
9.69% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount51
totalSentences97
matches
0"It’s a Thursday evening, late"
1"She pauses, one hand still"
2"It’s not that she’s never"
3"She sets down the delivery"
4"She’d flinched, but not from"
5"I’ll fix it.*"
6"Her blood goes cold."
7"It’s the kind Eva used,"
8"His beard is neatly trimmed,"
9"He’s wearing a black button-down,"
10"They’ve crossed paths before—twice, maybe"
11"He’d nod at her when"
12"she says, and her voice"
13"She crosses her arms, the"
14"He blinks, the ghostliness lifting"
15"She forces a smile."
16"He nods, like he understands."
17"he asks, and before she"
18"he’d said, not angry, just"
19"She’d run then, too—from Evan,"
ratio0.526
52.78% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount79
totalSentences97
matches
0"The bell over the door"
1"It’s a Thursday evening, late"
2"She pauses, one hand still"
3"It’s not that she’s never"
4"She sets down the delivery"
5"The takeaway from Yu-Fei’s is"
6"the woman had said, winking,"
7"The ginger’s a habit now—every"
8"She’d flinched, but not from"
9"I’ll fix it.*"
10"The bar’s dim, the walls"
11"Aurora’s eyes land on one"
12"Her blood goes cold."
13"The name is a bullet,"
14"It’s the kind Eva used,"
15"Silas is standing behind the"
16"His beard is neatly trimmed,"
17"He’s wearing a black button-down,"
18"They’ve crossed paths before—twice, maybe"
19"He’d nod at her when"
ratio0.814
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences97
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences47
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Half the time, she hears voices in the secret room behind the bookcase, low and urgent, maps spread out on a table that looks like it’s seen two wars."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags15
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"she says, and her voice is higher than she intends"
1"he’d, not angry, just tired"
2"he says, and his voice is low, like he’s remembering"
3"she says, and her voice is so quiet, she’s not sure he hears her"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags11
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"the woman had (have)"
1"he’d (would)"
dialogueSentences44
tagDensity0.25
leniency0.5
rawRatio0.182
effectiveRatio0.091
82.4504%