"Her first thought is *Evan*—not the name itself, but the way his voice used to twist that bell’s note into something predatory—but then she blinks, and the face that materializes in the doorway is too familiar, too *wrong*."
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"His auburn hair, once thick and sun-streaked, has silver threads that catch the neon green glow of the bar’s sign, and his beard, neatly trimmed as ever, frames a jawline that’s softened into something warmer, but the hazel eyes—those hazel eyes—are still sharp, like two wells of dark honey with a sharp stone at the bottom."
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"A signet ring glints on his right hand, silver with a family crest Rory can’t quite place—she was never good with heraldry."
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"Her hand flies to her left wrist, where the crescent scar rises pale against her skin—a reminder of the day she’d chased a stray tabby into the garden of her childhood home and crashed into a rusted garden rake."
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"When his gaze finds her, it lingers—assessing, the spymaster still in his bones."
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"Eva had called, once, after the first time Evan hit her—*“You can’t do this alone,”*—but Rory had hung up."
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"Delivering dim sum at 2 a.m., sleeping in a flat above a bar where the floors creak and the walls are thin, working so hard she forgets to eat—*busy* is what you call it when you don’t want to think about the woman you used to be, the one who’d worn leather jackets and stayed out late debating philosophy over chili dogs, who’d once told Silas, “The world’s not a puzzle to solve, it’s a song to sing.”"
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"He slides into the empty stool at the end of the bar, and the bartender—some kid with a tattoo of a raven on his neck—leans over the counter, already pouring a glass of amber liquid."
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"The kitchen is a warren of stainless steel and takeout containers, but Silas is right—Eva’s letter, the one she’s been avoiding, will still be there later."
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"The neon sign flickers, casting green shadows over the walls—old maps, faded black-and-white photos of faces she doesn’t recognize."
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"Her first thought is *Evan*—not the name itself, but the way his voice used to twist that bell’s note into something predatory—but then she blinks, and the face…"
1
"His auburn hair, once thick and sun-streaked, has silver threads that catch the neon green glow of the bar’s sign, and his beard, neatly trimmed as ever, frames…"
2
"He’s taller than she remembers, by an inch or two, and he walks with a slight limp, his left leg catching a fraction before the right, as if the knee injury fro…"
3
"As if the years have been kind to her, like she doesn’t carry the residue of more fights than she can count, like the fear in her chest doesn’t live there perma…"
4
"His face is lined, but in the way that comes from smiling, from feeling alive, not from surviving on adrenaline and regret."
5
"She sees the boy who’d broken his arm climbing a tree in his backyard, who’d cried when his dog died, who’d once shared his last slice of birthday cake with her…"