"Rory plucked the Heartstone Pendant from beneath her shirt, its silver chain digging faintly into her collarbone, and pressed the thumbnail-sized crimson gem to her left wrist—where the crescent scar from her childhood tree fall still caught the neon sign’s flicker."
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"For three nights, she’d tracked its thrumming to the edge of Richmond Park; tonight, she’d stop guessing."
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"She pulled her straight shoulder-length black hair into a loose ponytail, bright blue eyes scanning the empty London street for any sign of Evan—though he’d been gone since she fled Cardiff, the ghost of his hand on her arm still made her jolt at sudden shadows."
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"The walk to Richmond Park took 22 minutes, or so her phone said; by the time she ducked through the iron gate, the wind had picked up, whipping snowflakes into her eyes and muffling the distant hum of traffic."
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"She’d read old forum posts about a hidden clearing in the park, marked by oak standing stones, where wildflowers bloomed out of season—posts that had made her snort until the pendant’s pulse had led her here."
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"She ran a hand over it, her fingers catching on a splinter and a faint carving she’d missed at first—twisted runes that looked like the ones her Welsh mother had drawn in the margins of her poetry books."
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"That’s impossible, she thought, her intelligent mind racing to find a logical explanation—artificial flowers, a prank, a mistake in her perception."
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"This is the Fae Grove, she realized, the name from a half-remembered story her mother had told her as a child—Isolde’s grove, a pocket between worlds."
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"She pulled out her phone to check the time—11:23 PM—then blinked, and when she checked again, it was 11:17 PM."
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"She spun, bright blue eyes scanning the trees, but saw nothing—only a flicker of pale movement at the edge of her vision, too fast to be a rabbit, too thin to be a deer."
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"She’d forgotten Evan had been there until the laugh curled into a whisper—Aurora."
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"The figure didn’t move, but the rustle of its clothes was too loud, too deliberate—nothing like the wind."
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"The figure’s head twitched, and a single bright blue eye peeked out from behind its hair—just like hers."
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"She’d been here for 20 minutes, she guessed, but when she glanced at the park gate through the stones, the snow had stopped falling—outside, the sky was starting to lighten, like dawn was breaking."
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"She threw herself through it—snow hitting her face, the wind returning, the distant hum of traffic filling her ears."
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"The pendant’s pulse was faint now, a distant thrum, but she could still hear the whisper—*Aurora*—floating on the wind."
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"It was gone, but she knew it was still watching; she could feel its gaze on the back of her neck, cold as Evan’s hand when he’d grabbed her by the scar after she’d tried to leave him."
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"“Just a long walk,” she said, but when she touched the Heartstone Pendant beneath her shirt, it pulsed once—faint, warm, a reminder that the Grove wasn’t done with her."
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"She’d read old forum posts about a hidden clearing in the park, marked by oak standing stones, where wildflowers bloomed out of season—posts that had made her s…"
1
"She ran a hand over it, her fingers catching on a splinter and a faint carving she’d missed at first—twisted runes that looked like the ones her Welsh mother ha…"
2
"But when she plucked one, the sap oozed onto her finger, thick and sweet, and the wildflower’s scent mixed with a faint, rotting smell that made her gag."
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"Not the bright, bubbly sound of the kids who’d run through her mother’s classroom, but a thin, metallic thing, echoing off the oak stones like a bell that had r…"
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"The memory of the tree fall hit her: 7 years old, climbing the oak in her Cardiff backyard, Evan (then her neighbor’s son) yelling at her to jump, her hand slip…"
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"Rory was the name Eva had given her, the name she’d claimed when she started at the Golden Empress, the name that didn’t tie her to Evan’s fists or her father’s…"
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"The whisper came again, closer this time, *Aurora*, and she saw it: a pale figure standing between two oak stones, its form too tall, too slender, its face hidd…"
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"She turned back to the clearing, the wildflowers now seeming to lean toward her, their petals glowing faintly in the dark."
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"The pendant’s glow reflected in the snow, making the ground look like a field of blood, and she ran, the gem’s pulse dimming as she neared the crack."
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"She turned and walked back toward London, her boots crunching on the snow, the memory of the figure’s blue eye burning in her mind."
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"The rotting scent still clung to her clothes, mixing with the soy sauce stain on her cuff, and she found herself rubbing the crescent scar again, the childhood …"
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"And somewhere, the unknown benefactor who’d given her the pendant was watching, too."