Run: 2026-02-20-01KHYA0CGR5W77FC0J5HWYPV8Y

Run Details

Duration:
9.6s
Cost:
$0.000410
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The air in Richmond Park was thick with the scent of damp earth and something older—something that clung to the back of Rory’s throat like a held breath. She adjusted the strap of her crossbody bag, the Heartstone pendant pressing cool against her collarbone, its faint pulse barely noticeable beneath her fingers. The standing stones loomed ahead, their gnarled oaks twisting like skeletal fingers against the bruised twilight sky. She’d been here before, but never like this. Never at night. The Grove wasn’t supposed to be like this. Rory stepped past the boundary, her boots sinking slightly into the soft earth. The moment her toes crossed the threshold, the world seemed to exhale. The air grew warmer, thick with the sweet, cloying perfume of wildflowers that bloomed in impossible profusion—petals the color of spilled wine and silver, their edges glistening with dew that hadn’t fallen from any sky she recognized. The standing stones hummed, a low vibration that resonated in her bones, like the plucked string of some instrument buried deep in the earth. She told herself it was just the pendant. The Heartstone had been acting strange all evening, its warmth flickering like a dying ember. That was why she’d come. To test it. To see if it would react to the Grove the way it did near the Hel portals back in London—the way it had that one night when she’d nearly walked into something she wasn’t meant to see. Rory pulled out her phone, the screen casting a sickly green glow over her face. The time read 10:47 PM. She pocketed it. Time didn’t work the same here. An hour could stretch into days, or a minute could bleed into forever. She’d learned that the hard way. She moved deeper into the clearing, her breath steady, her pulse too fast. The Grove was quiet. Too quiet. No crickets. No rustling leaves. No distant laughter from park-goers or the occasional bark of a fox. Just the whisper of wind through branches that shouldn’t have been there, branches that twisted in ways that made her skin prickle. Rory stopped. Something had shifted. She turned slowly, her fingers tightening around the pendant. The Heartstone was warm now, almost hot, its glow pulsing faintly beneath her palm. She shouldn’t have felt it so strongly here. The Grove wasn’t a Hel portal. It wasn’t even supposed to be *connected* to the Hel realm, not like that. Then she saw it. A figure stood between the trees, just at the edge of her vision. Tall. Too tall. Its limbs were long, its movements fluid, unnatural. Rory’s breath hitched. She told herself it was a trick of the light, a shadow playing games with her eyes. But when she blinked, the figure didn’t vanish. It tilted its head, and for a heartbeat, she swore she saw eyes—black, endless, like pools of oil. Rory backed up, her heel catching on a root. She stumbled, nearly falling, and the pendant burned against her skin. The figure didn’t move. Didn’t speak. It just *watched*. She swallowed hard. “Hello?” Her voice sounded too loud in the sudden silence. No answer. Rory’s pulse roared in her ears. She should leave. Now. Before whatever this was decided she was worth its attention. She turned, her boots crunching over fallen leaves that hadn’t been there a second ago, and broke into a run. The Grove twisted around her. Paths she’d just traversed now stretched impossibly long, the trees bending to form corridors that shouldn’t have existed. The air thickened, pressing against her skin like wet silk. She could feel it behind her, just out of sight, its breath hot against the nape of her neck. The Heartstone pulsed in time with something she couldn’t name, its heat searing through the fabric of her shirt. Rory skidded to a halt, pressing her back against the rough bark of an oak. Her fingers dug into the pendant, willing it to give her answers. *What is this place?* A sound. Not from the trees. Not from behind her. From *above*. She looked up. The branches of the oak stretched higher than they should have, their leaves blackened at the edges, curling like burned paper. Something moved in the canopy—a shape, a shift in the dark. Then another. And another. Dozens of them, watching. Waiting. Rory’s breath came in shallow gasps. She could run. She could keep running until her legs gave out. But she knew, deep in her gut, that the Grove wouldn’t let her leave. Not like this. She reached into her bag, her fingers closing around the small silver flask she kept there. Not whiskey. Not gin. Something else. Something Eva had given her before Rory had left Cardiff, before everything had gone wrong. A vial of salted water, blessed by a woman who’d once dabbled in things Rory didn’t want to understand. Rory uncorked the flask and hurled it at the base of the nearest tree. The moment the liquid hit the earth, the Grove *screamed*. The sound wasn’t in her ears. It was in her bones, a vibration that shook her teeth, that made her vision swim. The trees shuddered. The flowers wilted in an instant, their petals crumbling to dust. The figure between the trees—if it had ever been real—vanished, as if it had never existed at all. Rory didn’t wait to see if it came back. She ran. The boundary stones loomed ahead, their edges sharp in the fading light. She didn’t slow down until her boots hit the pavement of Richmond Park, until the air around her lost its unnatural warmth, until the scent of damp earth replaced the cloying sweetness of the Grove. She didn’t stop until she was gasping on the sidewalk, her hands braced on her knees, the Heartstone cold against her skin. Something had been in the Grove with her. And it had been waiting.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
0.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Her voice sounded too [too]"
dialogueSentences1
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio1
89.90% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount990
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
24.24% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount990
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"pulse"
count3
1
word"loomed"
count2
2
word"glistening"
count1
3
word"resonated"
count1
4
word"warmth"
count2
5
word"whisper"
count1
6
word"silence"
count1
7
word"silk"
count1
8
word"could feel"
count1
9
word"pulsed"
count1
10
word"searing"
count1
highlights
0"pulse"
1"loomed"
2"glistening"
3"resonated"
4"warmth"
5"whisper"
6"silence"
7"silk"
8"could feel"
9"pulsed"
10"searing"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences101
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences101
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences101
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen38
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans5
markdownWords8
totalWords982
ratio0.008
matches
0"connected"
1"watched"
2"What is this place?"
3"above"
4"screamed"
62.50% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"It tilted its head, and for a heartbeat, she swore she saw eyes—black, endless, like pools of oil."
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions37
wordCount981
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity1.33
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Richmond2
Park2
Rory13
Heartstone5
Grove9
Hel3
London1
Eva1
Cardiff1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Heartstone"
2"Grove"
3"Eva"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Hel"
3"London"
4"Cardiff"
globalScore0.837
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences60
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount982
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences101
matches
0"learned that the"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs34
mean28.88
std26.28
cv0.91
sampleLengths
080
18
286
368
448
558
62
73
851
94
1070
1129
1213
132
1440
155
1666
1731
182
198
202
213
2241
2335
2456
2514
2610
2754
289
292
3047
3122
328
335
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences101
matches
0"was decided"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs164
matches
0"was gasping"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences101
ratio0.059
matches
0"The air in Richmond Park was thick with the scent of damp earth and something older—something that clung to the back of Rory’s throat like a held breath."
1"The air grew warmer, thick with the sweet, cloying perfume of wildflowers that bloomed in impossible profusion—petals the color of spilled wine and silver, their edges glistening with dew that hadn’t fallen from any sky she recognized."
2"To see if it would react to the Grove the way it did near the Hel portals back in London—the way it had that one night when she’d nearly walked into something she wasn’t meant to see."
3"It tilted its head, and for a heartbeat, she swore she saw eyes—black, endless, like pools of oil."
4"Something moved in the canopy—a shape, a shift in the dark."
5"The figure between the trees—if it had ever been real—vanished, as if it had never existed at all."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount989
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"pressing cool against her"
adverbCount33
adverbRatio0.033367037411526794
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.00910010111223458
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences101
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences101
mean9.72
std7.95
cv0.817
sampleLengths
028
124
217
38
43
58
613
712
837
924
108
1115
125
133
1437
1515
165
173
186
1913
206
2113
224
232
242
253
2612
2722
282
293
309
3114
328
336
3414
354
3613
371
382
398
403
4117
428
4318
449
4511
464
472
483
493
36.14% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats14
diversityRatio0.297029702970297
totalSentences101
uniqueOpeners30
79.37% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences84
matches
0"Just the whisper of wind"
1"Then she saw it."
ratio0.024
91.43% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount27
totalSentences84
matches
0"She adjusted the strap of"
1"She’d been here before, but"
2"She told herself it was"
3"She pocketed it."
4"She’d learned that the hard"
5"She moved deeper into the"
6"She turned slowly, her fingers"
7"She shouldn’t have felt it"
8"It wasn’t even supposed to"
9"Its limbs were long, its"
10"She told herself it was"
11"It tilted its head, and"
12"She stumbled, nearly falling, and"
13"It just *watched*."
14"She swallowed hard."
15"Her voice sounded too loud"
16"She should leave."
17"She turned, her boots crunching"
18"She could feel it behind"
19"Her fingers dug into the"
ratio0.321
49.29% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount69
totalSentences84
matches
0"The air in Richmond Park"
1"She adjusted the strap of"
2"The standing stones loomed ahead,"
3"She’d been here before, but"
4"The Grove wasn’t supposed to"
5"Rory stepped past the boundary,"
6"The moment her toes crossed"
7"The air grew warmer, thick"
8"The standing stones hummed, a"
9"She told herself it was"
10"The Heartstone had been acting"
11"That was why she’d come."
12"Rory pulled out her phone,"
13"The time read 10:47 PM."
14"She pocketed it."
15"Time didn’t work the same"
16"An hour could stretch into"
17"She’d learned that the hard"
18"She moved deeper into the"
19"The Grove was quiet."
ratio0.821
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount3
totalSentences84
matches
0"To test it."
1"To see if it would"
2"Before whatever this was decided"
ratio0.036
40.82% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences42
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"The air in Richmond Park was thick with the scent of damp earth and something older—something that clung to the back of Rory’s throat like a held breath."
1"The air grew warmer, thick with the sweet, cloying perfume of wildflowers that bloomed in impossible profusion—petals the color of spilled wine and silver, thei…"
2"The standing stones hummed, a low vibration that resonated in her bones, like the plucked string of some instrument buried deep in the earth."
3"The Heartstone had been acting strange all evening, its warmth flickering like a dying ember."
4"Paths she’d just traversed now stretched impossibly long, the trees bending to form corridors that shouldn’t have existed."
5"It was in her bones, a vibration that shook her teeth, that made her vision swim."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
81.7003%