| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 4 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 6 | | tagDensity | 0.667 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 69.60% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 987 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 6 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "suddenly" | | 1 | "slightly" | | 2 | "really" | | 3 | "utterly" | | 4 | "slowly" | | 5 | "very" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 987 | | totalAiIsms | 22 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "chill" | | 1 | "velvet" | | 2 | "pulsed" | | 3 | "throb" | | 4 | "warmth" | | 5 | "beacon" | | 6 | "gloom" | | 7 | "intensity" | | 8 | "weight" | | 9 | "normalcy" | | 10 | "pulse" | | 11 | "loomed" | | 12 | "familiar" | | 13 | "scanned" | | 14 | "silence" | | 15 | "whisper" | | 16 | "rhythmic" | | 17 | "yearning" | | 18 | "desire" | | 19 | "raced" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 82 | | matches | | |
| 90.59% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 82 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 84 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 33 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 2 | | markdownWords | 2 | | totalWords | 987 | | ratio | 0.002 | | matches | | |
| 93.75% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 8 | | unquotedAttributions | 1 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 18 | | wordCount | 967 | | uniqueNames | 7 | | maxNameDensity | 0.83 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Park | 1 | | Grove | 4 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Pendant | 1 | | Hel | 1 | | Eva | 2 | | Rory | 8 |
| | persons | | | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 61 | | glossingSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "wetness that seemed to seep into her bones" | | 1 | "felt like hours, the path beneath her b" | | 2 | "quite the wind" | | 3 | "as if reacting to something unseen" | | 4 | "seemed utterly absent" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 5 | | per1kWords | 5.066 | | wordCount | 987 | | matches | | 0 | "not exactly, but a persistent, clinging wetness" | | 1 | "Not the delicate fragrance of summer blooms, but a saccharine intensity" | | 2 | "Not a mournful lament, not a joyous tune, but something…wrong" | | 3 | "not a joyous tune, but something…wrong" | | 4 | "not really, but holding something solid grounded her, gave her a tiny sliver" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 84 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 24 | | mean | 41.13 | | std | 21.49 | | cv | 0.523 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 107 | | 1 | 59 | | 2 | 71 | | 3 | 71 | | 4 | 61 | | 5 | 45 | | 6 | 46 | | 7 | 33 | | 8 | 19 | | 9 | 39 | | 10 | 53 | | 11 | 34 | | 12 | 9 | | 13 | 30 | | 14 | 48 | | 15 | 41 | | 16 | 42 | | 17 | 32 | | 18 | 24 | | 19 | 35 | | 20 | 17 | | 21 | 37 | | 22 | 23 | | 23 | 11 |
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| 92.43% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 82 | | matches | | 0 | "was reduced" | | 1 | "were rooted" | | 2 | "was obscured" |
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| 67.55% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 151 | | matches | | 0 | "was coming" | | 1 | "wasn't coming" | | 2 | "was coming" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 6 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 5 | | totalSentences | 84 | | ratio | 0.06 | | matches | | 0 | "The Heartstone Pendant, cool against her chest, pulsed faintly—a subtle throb of warmth that was increasingly unsettling in this place." | | 1 | "The note, slipped beneath her apartment door – a simple, elegant script on thick parchment – had been cryptic, promising a lead, a key." | | 2 | "A shadow flickering at the edge of her peripheral vision – gone before she could properly register it." | | 3 | "The melody returned, louder now, more insistent, accompanied by a faint, rhythmic tapping—like fingers drumming against wood." | | 4 | "The child tilted its head, and for the first time, Rory saw its eyes – two dark, bottomless pits that reflected no light." |
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| 89.40% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 967 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 45 | | adverbRatio | 0.04653567735263702 | | lyAdverbCount | 25 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.025853154084798345 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 84 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 84 | | mean | 11.75 | | std | 6.95 | | cv | 0.591 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 4 | | 1 | 18 | | 2 | 21 | | 3 | 23 | | 4 | 20 | | 5 | 21 | | 6 | 20 | | 7 | 33 | | 8 | 4 | | 9 | 2 | | 10 | 7 | | 11 | 15 | | 12 | 7 | | 13 | 8 | | 14 | 24 | | 15 | 5 | | 16 | 5 | | 17 | 10 | | 18 | 13 | | 19 | 19 | | 20 | 29 | | 21 | 3 | | 22 | 10 | | 23 | 18 | | 24 | 16 | | 25 | 14 | | 26 | 5 | | 27 | 11 | | 28 | 12 | | 29 | 17 | | 30 | 4 | | 31 | 2 | | 32 | 10 | | 33 | 20 | | 34 | 10 | | 35 | 8 | | 36 | 11 | | 37 | 3 | | 38 | 11 | | 39 | 17 | | 40 | 2 | | 41 | 12 | | 42 | 27 | | 43 | 16 | | 44 | 9 | | 45 | 2 | | 46 | 7 | | 47 | 5 | | 48 | 14 | | 49 | 5 |
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| 40.48% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 8 | | diversityRatio | 0.2857142857142857 | | totalSentences | 84 | | uniqueOpeners | 24 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | | 0 | "Just that it was time." | | 1 | "Then she heard it." | | 2 | "Only the rain, the strange" | | 3 | "Then another poppy, and another." |
| | ratio | 0.052 | |
| 64.16% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 30 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | | 0 | "It wasn’t a deluge, not" | | 1 | "She’d been walking for what" | | 2 | "It always reacted to a" | | 3 | "She hadn’t told Eva she" | | 4 | "It hadn’t specified *what* key." | | 5 | "She adjusted the strap of" | | 6 | "It started subtly." | | 7 | "She dismissed them as tricks" | | 8 | "She checked the pendant again." | | 9 | "It pulled her forward, deeper" | | 10 | "It seemed to emanate from" | | 11 | "She scanned the trees, the" | | 12 | "she called out, her voice" | | 13 | "She tightened her grip on" | | 14 | "It wasn’t a weapon, not" | | 15 | "It wasn't a gust of" | | 16 | "She stared at it, her" | | 17 | "She couldn’t see anything." | | 18 | "she said, her voice a" | | 19 | "She took a step forward," |
| | ratio | 0.39 | |
| 57.40% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 62 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | | 0 | "The rain hadn’t stopped." | | 1 | "It wasn’t a deluge, not" | | 2 | "Rory pulled her threadbare jacket" | | 3 | "Richmond Park, usually a riot" | | 4 | "The ancient oak standing stones," | | 5 | "She’d been walking for what" | | 6 | "The Heartstone Pendant, cool against" | | 7 | "It always reacted to a" | | 8 | "She hadn’t told Eva she" | | 9 | "Eva, with her practical boots" | | 10 | "Rory hadn’t bothered to ask" | | 11 | "This was something she needed" | | 12 | "The note, slipped beneath her" | | 13 | "It hadn’t specified *what* key." | | 14 | "The air thickened as she" | | 15 | "The wildflowers, stubbornly blooming even" | | 16 | "She adjusted the strap of" | | 17 | "It started subtly." | | 18 | "A rustle in the undergrowth" | | 19 | "A shadow flickering at the" |
| | ratio | 0.805 | |
| 64.94% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | | 0 | "Now, it was just…quiet." |
| | ratio | 0.013 | |
| 51.67% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 47 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory pulled her threadbare jacket tighter, the damp wool doing little to combat the chill that radiated from the ground itself." | | 1 | "The Heartstone Pendant, cool against her chest, pulsed faintly—a subtle throb of warmth that was increasingly unsettling in this place." | | 2 | "Not the delicate fragrance of summer blooms, but a saccharine intensity that prickled at the back of her throat." | | 3 | "The pulse was stronger now, as if reacting to something unseen." | | 4 | "The rain intensified, plastering her hair to her face, blurring her vision." | | 5 | "It wore a simple, grey tunic, and its hands, resting on the stool, moved with a slow, deliberate rhythm, striking a small wooden flute." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 4 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "she said, her voice a strained whisper" | | 1 | "it said, its voice a dry rustle of leaves" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 4 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she called out (call out)" | | 1 | "it whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 6 | | tagDensity | 0.667 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.5 | |