Run: 2026-02-20-01KHYA0ZZF11HQ8S1QTRXP5WM7

Run Details

Duration:
14.4s
Cost:
$0.000139
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The rain hadn’t stopped. It wasn’t a deluge, not exactly, but a persistent, clinging wetness that seemed to seep into her bones. Rory pulled her threadbare jacket tighter, the damp wool doing little to combat the chill that radiated from the ground itself. Richmond Park, usually a riot of green and gold, was reduced to a monochrome smudge under the bruised purple of the twilight sky. The ancient oak standing stones, ringed with a ghostly luminescence, marked the entrance to the Grove with an unsettling formality. She’d been walking for what felt like hours, the path beneath her boots soft and yielding, like walking on moss-covered velvet. The Heartstone Pendant, cool against her chest, pulsed faintly—a subtle throb of warmth that was increasingly unsettling in this place. It always reacted to a Hel portal, a beacon of sorts, and there had been a nexus of energy here, a thrumming that she'd felt in her teeth just stepping over the stones. Now, it was just…quiet. Ominously so. She hadn’t told Eva she was coming. Eva, with her practical boots and no-nonsense approach to everything, would have insisted on backup. Rory hadn’t bothered to ask for it. This was something she needed to do alone. The note, slipped beneath her apartment door – a simple, elegant script on thick parchment – had been cryptic, promising a lead, a key. It hadn’t specified *what* key. Just that it was time. The air thickened as she moved deeper into the Grove. The wildflowers, stubbornly blooming even in this gloom, smelled overwhelmingly sweet, almost cloying. Not the delicate fragrance of summer blooms, but a saccharine intensity that prickled at the back of her throat. She adjusted the strap of her messenger bag, the weight of the delivery slips inside feeling suddenly significant, like a burden of mundane normalcy in this increasingly alien space. It started subtly. A rustle in the undergrowth that wasn’t quite the wind. A shadow flickering at the edge of her peripheral vision – gone before she could properly register it. She dismissed them as tricks of the light, the product of exhaustion and the unsettling atmosphere. But the feeling of being watched intensified, a cold, insidious pressure against her skin. She checked the pendant again. The pulse was stronger now, as if reacting to something unseen. It pulled her forward, deeper into the heart of the Grove’s gloom. The oak stones loomed larger, their faces weathered and strangely familiar, like the faces of forgotten ancestors. Then she heard it. A melody. Not a mournful lament, not a joyous tune, but something…wrong. A child’s song, played on a flute, but slightly off-key, stretched out and thin, like a spiderweb vibrating with unease. It seemed to emanate from everywhere and nowhere at once. Rory stopped, her breath catching in her throat. She scanned the trees, the thick undergrowth, searching for the source. There was nothing. Only the rain, the strange flowers, and the insistent, unsettling music. “Hello?” she called out, her voice sounding unnaturally loud in the suffocating silence that followed the song. No answer. She tightened her grip on the messenger bag, a purely instinctive action. It wasn’t a weapon, not really, but holding something solid grounded her, gave her a tiny sliver of control in a place where control seemed utterly absent. As she turned to leave, a single wildflower, a deep crimson poppy, shifted on the ground. It wasn't a gust of wind that moved it. It simply…moved. She stared at it, her breath hitching. Then another poppy, and another. A slow, deliberate arrangement, forming a spiral, pointing directly at the tallest oak stone. A twig snapped behind her. Rory whirled around, her hand instinctively reaching for the small pocketknife she carried. The rain intensified, plastering her hair to her face, blurring her vision. She couldn’t see anything. “Show yourself,” she said, her voice a strained whisper. The air grew colder. The scent of the flowers became overwhelming, almost nauseating. The melody returned, louder now, more insistent, accompanied by a faint, rhythmic tapping—like fingers drumming against wood. She took a step forward, then another. The spiral of poppies led her towards a darker patch of the Grove, where the light struggled to penetrate. As she entered the shadow, she realized the tapping wasn't coming from behind her. It was coming from within the oak itself. A section of the bark, seamlessly blended into the ancient tree, swung inward, revealing a small, dark cavity. Inside, a single, flickering candle cast long, distorted shadows. And sitting on a small wooden stool, its back to her, was a child. It wasn’t a normal child. Its skin was the color of ash, its limbs unnaturally long and slender. It wore a simple, grey tunic, and its hands, resting on the stool, moved with a slow, deliberate rhythm, striking a small wooden flute. The melody was clearer now, laced with a subtle undercurrent of sorrow. Rory felt a strange pull, a yearning she couldn't understand, a desperate desire to approach the child, to comfort it. She wanted to scream, to flee, but her feet were rooted to the ground. The pendant pulsed violently against her chest, a frantic warning. As the child finished the song, it slowly turned its head. Its face was obscured by shadow, but Rory could sense its gaze fixed on her, cold and devoid of emotion. And then, it spoke. “You brought the heartstone,” it said, its voice a dry rustle of leaves. “You brought the key.” Rory’s mind raced, trying to decipher the meaning of its words. The note...the lead…the heartstone. It all seemed to coalesce into a single, terrifying realization. She hadn't come here for a lead. She’d come here to *pay*. The child tilted its head, and for the first time, Rory saw its eyes – two dark, bottomless pits that reflected no light. “It’s been a long time,” it whispered. “A very long time.”
created_at"2026-02-20T19:56:59.257Z" 2/20/2026, 7:56:59 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags4
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences6
tagDensity0.667
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
69.60% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount987
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
2
adverb"really"
count1
3
adverb"utterly"
count1
4
adverb"slowly"
count1
5
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
1"slightly"
2"really"
3"utterly"
4"slowly"
5"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount987
totalAiIsms22
found
0
word"chill"
count1
1
word"velvet"
count1
2
word"pulsed"
count2
3
word"throb"
count1
4
word"warmth"
count1
5
word"beacon"
count1
6
word"gloom"
count2
7
word"intensity"
count1
8
word"weight"
count1
9
word"normalcy"
count1
10
word"pulse"
count1
11
word"loomed"
count1
12
word"familiar"
count1
13
word"scanned"
count1
14
word"silence"
count1
15
word"whisper"
count1
16
word"rhythmic"
count1
17
word"yearning"
count1
18
word"desire"
count1
19
word"raced"
count1
highlights
0"chill"
1"velvet"
2"pulsed"
3"throb"
4"warmth"
5"beacon"
6"gloom"
7"intensity"
8"weight"
9"normalcy"
10"pulse"
11"loomed"
12"familiar"
13"scanned"
14"silence"
15"whisper"
16"rhythmic"
17"yearning"
18"desire"
19"raced"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences82
matches
0"g with unease"
90.59% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences82
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences84
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen33
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords2
totalWords987
ratio0.002
matches
0"what"
1"pay"
93.75% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"And then, it spoke."
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions18
wordCount967
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity0.83
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Park1
Grove4
Heartstone1
Pendant1
Hel1
Eva2
Rory8
persons
0"Eva"
1"Rory"
places
0"Park"
1"Grove"
2"Hel"
globalScore1
windowScore1
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences61
glossingSentenceCount5
matches
0"wetness that seemed to seep into her bones"
1"felt like hours, the path beneath her b"
2"quite the wind"
3"as if reacting to something unseen"
4"seemed utterly absent"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches5
per1kWords5.066
wordCount987
matches
0"not exactly, but a persistent, clinging wetness"
1"Not the delicate fragrance of summer blooms, but a saccharine intensity"
2"Not a mournful lament, not a joyous tune, but something…wrong"
3"not a joyous tune, but something…wrong"
4"not really, but holding something solid grounded her, gave her a tiny sliver"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences84
matches
0"thrumming that she'd"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs24
mean41.13
std21.49
cv0.523
sampleLengths
0107
159
271
371
461
545
646
733
819
939
1053
1134
129
1330
1448
1541
1642
1732
1824
1935
2017
2137
2223
2311
92.43% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences82
matches
0"was reduced"
1"were rooted"
2"was obscured"
67.55% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs151
matches
0"was coming"
1"wasn't coming"
2"was coming"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences84
ratio0.06
matches
0"The Heartstone Pendant, cool against her chest, pulsed faintly—a subtle throb of warmth that was increasingly unsettling in this place."
1"The note, slipped beneath her apartment door – a simple, elegant script on thick parchment – had been cryptic, promising a lead, a key."
2"A shadow flickering at the edge of her peripheral vision – gone before she could properly register it."
3"The melody returned, louder now, more insistent, accompanied by a faint, rhythmic tapping—like fingers drumming against wood."
4"The child tilted its head, and for the first time, Rory saw its eyes – two dark, bottomless pits that reflected no light."
89.40% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount967
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount45
adverbRatio0.04653567735263702
lyAdverbCount25
lyAdverbRatio0.025853154084798345
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences84
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences84
mean11.75
std6.95
cv0.591
sampleLengths
04
118
221
323
420
521
620
733
84
92
107
1115
127
138
1424
155
165
1710
1813
1919
2029
213
2210
2318
2416
2514
265
2711
2812
2917
304
312
3210
3320
3410
358
3611
373
3811
3917
402
4112
4227
4316
449
452
467
475
4814
495
40.48% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.2857142857142857
totalSentences84
uniqueOpeners24
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences77
matches
0"Just that it was time."
1"Then she heard it."
2"Only the rain, the strange"
3"Then another poppy, and another."
ratio0.052
64.16% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount30
totalSentences77
matches
0"It wasn’t a deluge, not"
1"She’d been walking for what"
2"It always reacted to a"
3"She hadn’t told Eva she"
4"It hadn’t specified *what* key."
5"She adjusted the strap of"
6"It started subtly."
7"She dismissed them as tricks"
8"She checked the pendant again."
9"It pulled her forward, deeper"
10"It seemed to emanate from"
11"She scanned the trees, the"
12"she called out, her voice"
13"She tightened her grip on"
14"It wasn’t a weapon, not"
15"It wasn't a gust of"
16"She stared at it, her"
17"She couldn’t see anything."
18"she said, her voice a"
19"She took a step forward,"
ratio0.39
57.40% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount62
totalSentences77
matches
0"The rain hadn’t stopped."
1"It wasn’t a deluge, not"
2"Rory pulled her threadbare jacket"
3"Richmond Park, usually a riot"
4"The ancient oak standing stones,"
5"She’d been walking for what"
6"The Heartstone Pendant, cool against"
7"It always reacted to a"
8"She hadn’t told Eva she"
9"Eva, with her practical boots"
10"Rory hadn’t bothered to ask"
11"This was something she needed"
12"The note, slipped beneath her"
13"It hadn’t specified *what* key."
14"The air thickened as she"
15"The wildflowers, stubbornly blooming even"
16"She adjusted the strap of"
17"It started subtly."
18"A rustle in the undergrowth"
19"A shadow flickering at the"
ratio0.805
64.94% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences77
matches
0"Now, it was just…quiet."
ratio0.013
51.67% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences47
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"Rory pulled her threadbare jacket tighter, the damp wool doing little to combat the chill that radiated from the ground itself."
1"The Heartstone Pendant, cool against her chest, pulsed faintly—a subtle throb of warmth that was increasingly unsettling in this place."
2"Not the delicate fragrance of summer blooms, but a saccharine intensity that prickled at the back of her throat."
3"The pulse was stronger now, as if reacting to something unseen."
4"The rain intensified, plastering her hair to her face, blurring her vision."
5"It wore a simple, grey tunic, and its hands, resting on the stool, moved with a slow, deliberate rhythm, striking a small wooden flute."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags4
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"she said, her voice a strained whisper"
1"it said, its voice a dry rustle of leaves"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"she called out (call out)"
1"it whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences6
tagDensity0.667
leniency1
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.5
69.3989%