"Richmond Park stretched dark and empty behind her, the city's distant hum swallowed by the night, but here, at the edge of the Fae Grove—or Isolde's Grove, as the whispered rumors called it—silence pressed in like a held breath."
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"But the pendant—given by some anonymous hand slipped into her bag at Silas' bar three nights ago—had proven too uncanny to ignore."
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"Wildflowers bloomed riotously around her—violets and foxgloves unfurling petals like defiant flags against the chill—year-round, unnatural even for this fae-touched place."
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"A sound—not a sound, really."
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"No breeze touched her hair—straight black strands lay still against her shoulders."
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"Rory's scar itched on her left wrist—a small crescent from a childhood tumble off her father's garden wall—and she rubbed it absently, grounding herself."
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"The pendant's pulse quickened, syncing with her own heart—a steady thrum-thrum that vibrated in her teeth."
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"Fatigue from the day's deliveries—Yu-Fei's endless orders through London's rain-slick streets."
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"Rory pivoted, hand slipping into her jacket pocket for the pocketknife she always carried—Evan's shadow had taught her that much."
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"Time's quirk, the rumors said—an hour inside minutes or days outside."
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"Too vibrant, their scents cloying—honeysuckle and night-blooming jasmine, heavy as perfume in a crypt."
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"But the air stirred, carrying a scent—earthy, like turned soil after rain, mingled with something sweeter, rotting fruit."
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"The pendant—focus on it."
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"Shapes darted between oaks—slim silhouettes, elongated limbs folding into bark."
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"She leaned her weight—nothing."
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"The wrongness swelled—not panic, but a viscous dread pooling in her gut."
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"But her own boot print in the dew—beside it, another."
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"Branches whispered overhead, leaves rustling in a chorus that mimicked laughter—high, tinkling, wrong."
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"Her Heartstone Pendant hung heavy against her collarbone, its deep crimson gem pulsing with a warmth that seeped through her jacket, insistent as a second heart…"
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"She pocketed it and stepped forward, boots crunching softly on dew-slick grass that shouldn't have been so lush in late autumn."
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"The standing stones loomed at the boundary, massive oaks shaped by hands long forgotten, their bark etched with runes that caught the moon's pale light and seem…"
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"Moonlight filtered through in silver shafts, illuminating motes of pollen that drifted without current."
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"The pendant's pulse quickened, syncing with her own heart—a steady thrum-thrum that vibrated in her teeth."
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"She clutched the gem, its glow intensifying, warmth flooding her palm."
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"The oaks loomed closer, their branches dipping lower, shadows merging into tendrils that quested across the grass."
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"Branches whispered overhead, leaves rustling in a chorus that mimicked laughter—high, tinkling, wrong."