"The stones loomed like silent sentinels, their bark twisted into shapes that might have been faces if she stared too long—eyes hollowed by centuries, mouths gaping in perpetual warning."
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"This wasn't romance; it was a pull, a summons."
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"A place she'd only heard whispers of in Eva's old stories—Isolde's grove, a pocket between worlds where time bent like a reed in the wind."
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"The park gates had locked hours ago; she'd scaled the fence, heart pounding from the thrill of trespass more than fear."
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"The scar on her left wrist itched—a small crescent from a childhood fall off her bike in Cardiff, a reminder that accidents happened when you weren't paying attention."
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"She traced a hand over the tree's rough surface, feeling for carvings or clues—anything to explain why this trinket had chosen her."
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"Dialogue with herself—Evan had hated that habit, called it crazy."
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"Flowers reacted to stimuli; she'd read that in some botany elective back at uni."
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"Time moved differently here, the old tales said—an hour inside could stretch or shrink outside."
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"It came from the stones, or beyond them—impossible to pinpoint."
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"She strained to catch them, but they dissolved just as she focused, leaving her with the certainty that someone—something—had been speaking."
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"There—a flicker at the periphery, a shape darting between two standing stones."
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"Her mind flashed to Eva's stories—fae folk, tricksters who lured the unwary into their realms."
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"Movement again—at the edge of vision, a pale hand withdrawing behind a stone."
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"A whisper brushed her ear, close enough to feel breath—though there was no one."
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"They pulled at her, these sounds, drawing her attention to the shadows where shapes flitted—just out of sight, always just out of sight."
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"She backed away from the stones, toward the grove's exit—the ring she'd entered through."
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"Whatever lurked here had been waiting— for her, perhaps, drawn by the pendant's glow."
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"A hand—cold, insubstantial—brushed her wrist, right over the scar, sending ice through her veins."
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"Her watch read 11:52 PM—five minutes since she'd entered, though it felt like hours."
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"Aurora stepped through the ring of ancient oak standing stones, the night air thick with the scent of blooming wildflowers that had no business unfurling in the…"
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"The stones loomed like silent sentinels, their bark twisted into shapes that might have been faces if she stared too long—eyes hollowed by centuries, mouths gap…"
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"She paused just inside the boundary, her breath misting in the faint moonlight that filtered through the canopy overhead."
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"Richmond Park lay behind her, its vast expanse of deer-haunted grassland now distant, muffled, as if the world had drawn a veil across itself."
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"The Heartstone Pendant hung heavy against her chest, its deep crimson gem pulsing with a warmth that had grown insistent over the past week, like a heartbeat no…"
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"And tonight, after another shift dodging traffic on her delivery scooter, the pendant had led her here, its warmth flaring as she neared the park's hidden grove…"
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"The ground under her boots felt soft, unnaturally springy, carpeted with petals that glowed faintly underfoot."
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"It was beautiful, in a way that made her skin prickle."
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"The scar on her left wrist itched—a small crescent from a childhood fall off her bike in Cardiff, a reminder that accidents happened when you weren't paying att…"
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"She was paying attention now, every sense sharpened by the cool-headed focus that had gotten her through law lectures she hated and out of Evan's grip in one pi…"
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"The pendant warmed again, its glow seeping through her shirt, casting a faint crimson tint on the bark."
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"Her mind raced: the unknown benefactor, the way it pulsed near certain alleyways in London, as if sniffing out hidden doors."
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"Just the wildflowers, their petals stirring as if brushed by invisible hands."
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"The beam cut through the dark, illuminating clusters of blooms that seemed to lean toward the light, petals unfurling like they were waking."
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"Her mind flashed to Eva's stories—fae folk, tricksters who lured the unwary into their realms."
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"The air thickened, carrying scents that didn't belong: honeyed sweetness undercut by decay, like fruit rotting in summer heat."
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"Another flicker: a face peering from behind the central oak, eyes gleaming like polished stones, mouth curved in a smile that stretched too wide."