| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 1 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 10 | | tagDensity | 0.1 | | leniency | 0.2 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 86.38% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1101 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 9.17% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1101 | | totalAiIsms | 20 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | word | "carried the weight" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "chill" | | 1 | "loomed" | | 2 | "sentinels" | | 3 | "pulse" | | 4 | "rhythmic" | | 5 | "throb" | | 6 | "carried the weight" | | 7 | "trembled" | | 8 | "silence" | | 9 | "whisper" | | 10 | "beacon" | | 11 | "flickered" | | 12 | "wavered" | | 13 | "stomach" | | 14 | "searing" | | 15 | "perfect" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "hung in the air" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 127 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 127 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 134 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 31 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 16 | | markdownWords | 54 | | totalWords | 1091 | | ratio | 0.049 | | matches | | 0 | "leaned" | | 1 | "It’s just the Grove. Just a place where time moves differently." | | 2 | "behind" | | 3 | "Something." | | 4 | "Run." | | 5 | "thick" | | 6 | "“You shouldn’t have come, little thief.”" | | 7 | "“Who—?”" | | 8 | "“You took what wasn’t yours.”" | | 9 | "“I didn’t—”" | | 10 | "“Liar.”" | | 11 | "“You feel it, don’t you?”" | | 12 | "“The hunger. The *need" | | 13 | "smiling." | | 14 | "“You’re not supposed to be here,”" | | 15 | "“But you are. And now… you’ll stay.”" |
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| 83.33% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 6 | | unquotedAttributions | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "It brushed against her skin like cold fingers, and for a second, she swore she felt lips move against her ear, though no…" |
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| 93.02% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 23 | | wordCount | 1053 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 1.14 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | English | 1 | | Carter | 1 | | Grove | 5 | | Fae | 1 | | Eva | 1 | | Rory | 12 |
| | persons | | | places | | | globalScore | 0.93 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 80.56% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 72 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "quite a sound—a whisper, a breath, a voice that wasn’t a voice" | | 1 | "something like curiosity" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1091 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 134 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 59 | | mean | 18.49 | | std | 21.58 | | cv | 1.167 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 96 | | 1 | 4 | | 2 | 5 | | 3 | 76 | | 4 | 75 | | 5 | 9 | | 6 | 84 | | 7 | 53 | | 8 | 23 | | 9 | 3 | | 10 | 2 | | 11 | 16 | | 12 | 30 | | 13 | 10 | | 14 | 2 | | 15 | 16 | | 16 | 50 | | 17 | 44 | | 18 | 4 | | 19 | 3 | | 20 | 7 | | 21 | 6 | | 22 | 1 | | 23 | 8 | | 24 | 31 | | 25 | 15 | | 26 | 12 | | 27 | 7 | | 28 | 4 | | 29 | 38 | | 30 | 23 | | 31 | 21 | | 32 | 46 | | 33 | 7 | | 34 | 1 | | 35 | 6 | | 36 | 14 | | 37 | 7 | | 38 | 6 | | 39 | 27 | | 40 | 1 | | 41 | 7 | | 42 | 5 | | 43 | 22 | | 44 | 2 | | 45 | 1 | | 46 | 6 | | 47 | 29 | | 48 | 19 | | 49 | 20 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 127 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 6 | | totalVerbs | 175 | | matches | | 0 | "was being" | | 1 | "was moving" | | 2 | "was pushing" | | 3 | "was going" | | 4 | "wasn’t leaving" | | 5 | "was coming" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 10 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 9 | | totalSentences | 134 | | ratio | 0.067 | | matches | | 0 | "She’d pressed her fingers to it, half-expecting it to be warm to the touch, but no—it was just metal, just silver and crimson stone." | | 1 | "But the pendant had been a gift—no, not a gift, a warning." | | 2 | "The path beneath her feet changed—no longer gravel, but something softer, spongy, as if she walked on moss or crushed petals." | | 3 | "The trees around her didn’t just stand; they *leaned*, their branches twisting toward her like skeletal fingers." | | 4 | "But then the wind shifted, carrying with it a sound that wasn’t quite a sound—a whisper, a breath, a voice that wasn’t a voice." | | 5 | "And then—" | | 6 | "A sound cut through the night—a laugh." | | 7 | "A voice—soft, melodic, wrong—drifted through the branches." | | 8 | "Its eyes—black, endless—locked onto hers." |
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| 99.60% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1063 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 43 | | adverbRatio | 0.04045155221072436 | | lyAdverbCount | 6 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.005644402634054563 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 134 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 134 | | mean | 8.14 | | std | 6.82 | | cv | 0.838 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 30 | | 1 | 24 | | 2 | 20 | | 3 | 22 | | 4 | 4 | | 5 | 3 | | 6 | 2 | | 7 | 25 | | 8 | 24 | | 9 | 20 | | 10 | 3 | | 11 | 4 | | 12 | 31 | | 13 | 2 | | 14 | 11 | | 15 | 9 | | 16 | 12 | | 17 | 10 | | 18 | 9 | | 19 | 23 | | 20 | 21 | | 21 | 17 | | 22 | 6 | | 23 | 17 | | 24 | 8 | | 25 | 4 | | 26 | 13 | | 27 | 28 | | 28 | 13 | | 29 | 8 | | 30 | 2 | | 31 | 3 | | 32 | 2 | | 33 | 7 | | 34 | 6 | | 35 | 3 | | 36 | 6 | | 37 | 11 | | 38 | 1 | | 39 | 2 | | 40 | 10 | | 41 | 10 | | 42 | 2 | | 43 | 8 | | 44 | 2 | | 45 | 2 | | 46 | 4 | | 47 | 24 | | 48 | 26 | | 49 | 6 |
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| 33.58% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 22 | | diversityRatio | 0.23880597014925373 | | totalSentences | 134 | | uniqueOpeners | 32 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 106 | | matches | | 0 | "Just a place where time" | | 1 | "Just the way the Grove" | | 2 | "Just the trees." | | 3 | "Just the dark." |
| | ratio | 0.038 | |
| 80.38% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 37 | | totalSentences | 106 | | matches | | 0 | "She kept her eyes on" | | 1 | "She shouldn’t have come." | | 2 | "She’d pressed her fingers to" | | 3 | "She stepped past the stones," | | 4 | "*It’s just the Grove." | | 5 | "She adjusted the strap of" | | 6 | "It had come from the" | | 7 | "She turned slowly, her breath" | | 8 | "Her voice was too loud" | | 9 | "She told herself it was" | | 10 | "It brushed against her skin" | | 11 | "She backed up a step," | | 12 | "She stumbled, barely catching herself" | | 13 | "She didn’t look down." | | 14 | "She didn’t breathe." | | 15 | "Its limbs were too long," | | 16 | "It stood just beyond the" | | 17 | "She had come here for" | | 18 | "She had to remember why." | | 19 | "She turned and bolted." |
| | ratio | 0.349 | |
| 87.36% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 79 | | totalSentences | 106 | | matches | | 0 | "The air in Richmond Park" | | 1 | "Rory Carter pulled her jacket" | | 2 | "She kept her eyes on" | | 3 | "The standing stones loomed ahead," | | 4 | "She shouldn’t have come." | | 5 | "She’d pressed her fingers to" | | 6 | "The standing stones marked the" | | 7 | "A name that carried the" | | 8 | "Rory had never believed in" | | 9 | "She stepped past the stones," | | 10 | "The air grew heavier, thick" | | 11 | "The path beneath her feet" | | 12 | "The trees around her didn’t" | | 13 | "The sky above was wrong," | | 14 | "The stars were too bright," | | 15 | "Rory exhaled slowly, forcing her" | | 16 | "*It’s just the Grove." | | 17 | "That’s what Eva had told" | | 18 | "She adjusted the strap of" | | 19 | "The pulse was stronger here," |
| | ratio | 0.745 | |
| 94.34% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 106 | | matches | | 0 | "Because something was moving in" | | 1 | "Because the thing in front" |
| | ratio | 0.019 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 40 | | technicalSentenceCount | 9 | | matches | | 0 | "The air in Richmond Park was thick with the damp chill of an English autumn, the kind that seeped into bones and lingered long after the body had stopped shiver…" | | 1 | "Rory Carter pulled her jacket tighter around herself, the collar turned up against the wind that whispered through the skeletal branches of the oaks." | | 2 | "But the pendant had been insistent, its faint pulse warm against her throat, a steady, rhythmic throb that had woken her from a restless sleep." | | 3 | "A name that carried the weight of something forgotten, something dangerous." | | 4 | "The path beneath her feet changed—no longer gravel, but something softer, spongy, as if she walked on moss or crushed petals." | | 5 | "The stars were too bright, too many, crowded together in a way that made her head ache." | | 6 | "Its limbs were too long, its joints bending in ways that made her stomach clench." | | 7 | "The air behind her seemed to *thick*en, like something was pushing against her back, urging her forward, deeper into the Grove." | | 8 | "The air smelled of iron and something older, something that made her teeth ache." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 1 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 50.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | | dialogueSentences | 10 | | tagDensity | 0.1 | | leniency | 0.2 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.2 | |