"It was 2:17 a.m., according to the crumpled receipt in her pocket—a timestamp from the last note her benefactor had slipped under her door, scrawled in shaky ink: *\"Roots. Three oaks. Stop before four. The stone breathes.\"* She’d recognized \"Roots\" as the old oak clearing in the northern section of the park, a place she’d only ever visited briefly, once, with Eva when they were teens, hunting for fairies in the dusk."
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"That was odd—she’d left the city with a full moon, but the clearing loomed in semi-darkness, the air thick with a scent like wet earth and something sweeter, cloying, like overripe berries."
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"Not a flash—faint, a soft glow that seeped into the gem, making the crimson color bleed like blood."
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"The time behavior—the Grove."
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"There—something."
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"The grass here was green, too green, and wildflowers bloomed everywhere—purple, yellow, white, petals glistening with dew even though the night was freezing."
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"The sky had lightened, though not by much; it was a strange, sickly gray, like a storm cloud smothering the stars."
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"That was it—the reason she’d come."
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"A sound—something wet, dragging through the grass."
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"But the flowers around her were moving, not in the wind—*against* it, their petals flipping upward as if watching her, revealing undersides that were gray, like rotting flesh."
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"She reached for the knife, her hand slipping—*why is the ground wet?*—and looked down."
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"A woman with her blue eyes, her black hair, standing in a room with the Heartstone, a man with a beard and a crown behind her, whispering, \"It keeps the door open. Keep it safe. Keep *her* safe.\" Then, pain—sharp, searing—behind her eyes, and a face: Evan, her ex, his mouth stretched in a grin, his eyes black, \"You can’t run from it, Rory. It *knows* you.\""
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"The gem was on the ground, glowing so brightly she could see through it, into a realm beyond—pale, flickering figures, shapes that could have been human or not, reaching toward her, their voices a chorus of \"Rory,\" \"Laila,\" \"Aurora.\""
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"The trees were moving, their trunks bending toward her, branches snapping and reforming into limbs, fingers, faces—Evan’s, her mother’s, a stranger’s, all with the same black eyes."
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"A sound—distant, but growing—like hooves, like wind through bones."
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"The stone behind her pulsed, and Aurora heard a voice—her own, clear and strong—whispering, *\"Remember.\"*"
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"But the scar on her wrist burned, and the memory of a name—*Malphora*—lingered at the edge of her mind."
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"Now, Eva was in Dublin, and the note was the first she’d heard from the unknown person who’d given her the Heartstone pendant six months prior, a crimson gem se…"
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"The trees seemed closer than she remembered, their branches stretching outward, almost as if to block her path."
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"The grass beneath her feet was unexpectedly warm, as if the earth itself was alive."
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"A flicker of movement in the corner of her vision, a shadow that wasn’t cast by the moon."
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"delivery.* But the pendant’s pulse had quickened, a faint *thump-thump-thump* that matched the rhythm of her heart."
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"But the flowers around her were moving, not in the wind—*against* it, their petals flipping upward as if watching her, revealing undersides that were gray, like…"
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"The grass was oozing, a thick, black substance that smelled of iron and something sweet, cloying."
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"It was spreading, crawling up her boots, as if alive."
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"The pendant’s thump-thump-thump was now a roar, a sound that filled her skull."
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"The flowers were closing in, their stems coiling like ropes, thorns emerging from their centers."
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"The hum was deafening now, and the sky had turned a sickly purple, as if the world was bleeding."
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"The trees were moving, their trunks bending toward her, branches snapping and reforming into limbs, fingers, faces—Evan’s, her mother’s, a stranger’s, all with …"
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"The flowers had become a tide, rolling toward her, thorns sharpening, petals falling away to reveal hollow, empty centers."
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"The ash swirled upward, forming a shape: a woman, tall, with silver hair and skin like marble, her eyes glowing like embers."
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"She wore a dress that rippled like water, and in her hand, she held a sword, its blade a combination of fire and ice."
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"The water boiled, hissing, and the figures screamed, their forms dissolving."