Run: 2026-02-20-01KHYA31DNDYB0E8AQW2BE06X1

Run Details

Duration:
22.4s
Cost:
$0.000547
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The neon green sign of *The Raven’s Nest* flickered like a dying firefly as Rory Carter pushed through the heavy door, the scent of aged whiskey and something faintly metallic—polished brass, maybe—hitting her like a memory. The place was quieter than she expected for a Thursday night, the hum of conversation muted beneath the low thrum of an old jazz record playing from somewhere in the back. She’d only been inside once before, years ago, when Silas had still been running his intelligence network out of this very bar. Back then, the walls had been lined with maps of places she’d never heard of, and the air had carried the weight of secrets. Rory slid onto a stool at the far end of the counter, her fingers tracing the edge of a half-empty glass left by the last customer. The bartender—a wiry man with a salt-and-pepper beard—glanced up from polishing a glass and nodded at her without a word. She ordered a gin and tonic, the kind with extra lime, the way she used to drink them when she still had time to sit and think. She wasn’t supposed to be here. Not tonight. But after another shift at the Golden Empress, after another day of dodging Evan’s calls and pretending she didn’t hear the way her mother’s voice cracked when she asked if Rory was coming home for Christmas, the bar had felt like the only place that made sense. A place where no one knew her name, where the past was just another layer of dust on the shelves. Then she saw him. Silas Blackwood stood near the back, his broad shoulders hunched slightly as he spoke to a woman in a deep emerald dress. His auburn hair, streaked now with silver, was pulled back in a loose tie, and the faintest limp in his left leg—something she’d only noticed once before, years ago, when he’d carried her out of a pub after one too many whiskeys—gave him away even from a distance. He laughed at something the woman said, the sound low and rough, the kind of laugh that used to make Rory’s chest tighten when they were younger, when he’d been the only person who ever really *saw* her. She should’ve looked away. Should’ve pretended she didn’t recognize him. But she didn’t. Silas turned just as Rory’s drink arrived, and for a heartbeat, neither of them moved. Then his eyes—hazel, flecked with gold, the same ones that had once mapped the contours of her face like she was something precious—widened. A slow, deliberate smile spread across his face, and he pushed away from the table, his signet ring glinting under the dim light. “Rory Carter,” he said, his voice rough but warm, like whiskey poured over ice. “Well, I’ll be damned.” The woman beside him—tall, elegant, her dark hair swept into an intricate twist—turned, her eyebrows lifting in surprise. “Silas, who—?” “An old friend,” he said, cutting her off. His gaze never left Rory’s face. “Excuse me for a moment.” Rory’s fingers tightened around her glass. She should’ve known better than to come here. Should’ve known that some places, some people, had a way of finding you when you least expected it. Silas slid onto the stool beside her, close enough that she could smell the faint scent of his cologne—something woodsy, like old leather and rain. “You look like hell,” he said, and then, softer, “But not as bad as the last time I saw you.” Rory exhaled a laugh, sharp and unexpected. “That’s not exactly a compliment.” “No,” he agreed. “But it’s the truth.” His eyes flicked over her—her black T-shirt, the scuffed boots, the way her hair fell straight and unadorned around her shoulders. “You used to dress like you were going to a damn ball.” She shrugged, picking at the lime wedge on her glass. “Balls are overrated.” Silas studied her for a long moment, his expression unreadable. Then he reached into his pocket and pulled out a pack of cigarettes, tapping one out with practiced ease. “You still smoke?” “No,” she said quickly. “Not anymore.” He lit the cigarette anyway, the flame flickering in the dim light. “Liar.” Rory didn’t answer. She didn’t have to. He knew her too well. Silas took a drag, exhaling slowly. “You’re working at the Golden Empress, aren’t you?” She stiffened. “How do you—?” “London’s a small city when you know where to look.” He leaned back, his elbow resting on the counter. “You left Cardiff. No one’s seen you in years. And then suddenly, you’re delivering dumplings in Soho like you’re trying to disappear.” Rory’s throat went dry. “I’m not trying to disappear.” “No?” His voice was gentle, but there was an edge to it, something sharp. “Then what are you doing, Rory?” She should’ve walked away. Should’ve finished her drink and left before he could dig any deeper. But she didn’t. Because for all his questions, for all the way he looked at her like he could see straight through her, there was something in his eyes too—something raw, something she recognized. Regret. “You look different,” she said finally. Silas followed her gaze to his hand, the silver signet ring catching the light. “So do you.” She didn’t press. She didn’t ask about the woman in the emerald dress, or the bar, or the way his voice had gone quiet when he spoke to her. Some things were better left unsaid. Instead, she took a sip of her drink and said, “I heard you retired.” He nodded, the movement slow. “Something like that.” “Good for you.” “Is it?” He studied her over the rim of his glass, his expression unreadable. “You ever think about what you’d do if you weren’t running?” Rory’s fingers twitched around her glass. “I’m not running.” “Bullshit.” His voice was quiet, but it carried the weight of years. “You’re running from something, Rory. And it’s not just Evan.” She flinched. “You don’t know anything about it.” “I know enough.” His gaze was steady, unyielding. “I know you used to be brilliant. I know you had a plan. I know you left everything behind.” “Because I had to,” she snapped. Silas didn’t react. He just took another drag of his cigarette, the ember glowing bright in the dark. “You ever think about coming back?” The words hit her like a punch. “To Cardiff? To law school? To—” She cut herself off, her voice dropping to a whisper. “To *him*?” Silas’s expression softened. “Not to him. To *you*.” Rory looked away, her throat tight. The past was a ghost she’d tried to outrun, a version of herself she’d buried under delivery routes and late-night takeout orders. She’d told herself she didn’t miss it. That she didn’t miss *him*. But the truth was, she missed the way things used to be. She missed the weight of a future that had once felt certain. Silas reached out, his fingers brushing against hers where they rested on the counter. His touch was warm, grounding. “You don’t have to do this alone, Rory.” She wanted to believe him. God, she wanted to. But the years between them were a chasm she wasn’t sure she could cross. The woman in the emerald dress appeared beside them, her heels clicking softly against the floor. “Silas, darling, we really must—” He didn’t take his eyes off Rory. “Give us a minute, Clara.” Clara’s lips pressed into a thin line, but she nodded and moved away, her gaze lingering on Rory with something like recognition. Silas turned back to her, his voice low. “You should stay.” Rory’s breath hitched. “Stay where?” “Here.” He gestured to the bar, to the city beyond it, to the life she’d left behind. “With me.” She wanted to say no. Wanted to say she was fine, that she had everything under control. But the words died in her throat. Because for the first time in years, she wasn’t sure she believed them. Silas’s hand found hers again, his fingers threading through hers. “Think about it.” She nodded, her voice barely a whisper. “I will.” Outside, the neon sign flickered, casting long shadows across the pavement. Rory stayed where she was, her fingers still tangled with Silas’s, the weight of the past pressing down on her like a storm cloud. And for the first time in a long time, she let herself wonder what might have been.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
77.55% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags14
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"she said quickly [quickly]"
1"He leaned back [back]"
2"she said finally [finally]"
dialogueSentences49
tagDensity0.286
leniency0.571
rawRatio0.214
effectiveRatio0.122
71.79% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1418
totalAiIsmAdverbs8
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
2
adverb"really"
count2
3
adverb"quickly"
count1
4
adverb"slowly"
count1
5
adverb"suddenly"
count1
6
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"slightly"
2"really"
3"quickly"
4"slowly"
5"suddenly"
6"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
47.11% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1418
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"flickered"
count2
1
word"carried the weight"
count2
2
word"tracing"
count1
3
word"glinting"
count1
4
word"intricate"
count1
5
word"flicked"
count1
6
word"unreadable"
count2
7
word"practiced ease"
count1
8
word"whisper"
count2
9
word"weight"
count2
highlights
0"flickered"
1"carried the weight"
2"tracing"
3"glinting"
4"intricate"
5"flicked"
6"unreadable"
7"practiced ease"
8"whisper"
9"weight"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences95
matches
0"g in surprise"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences95
filterMatches
0"wonder"
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences128
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen50
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans5
markdownWords7
totalWords1401
ratio0.005
matches
0"The Raven’s Nest"
1"saw"
2"him"
3"you"
4"him"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions15
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
80.92% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions40
wordCount1158
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity1.38
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Rory16
Carter1
Thursday1
Silas13
Golden1
Empress1
Evan1
Christmas1
Blackwood1
Should3
persons
0"Raven"
1"Rory"
2"Carter"
3"Silas"
4"Evan"
5"Blackwood"
6"Should"
places
0"Golden"
globalScore0.809
windowScore0.833
34.62% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences65
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"felt like the only place that made sens"
1"appeared beside them, her heels clicking softly against the floor"
2"something like recognition"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1401
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences128
matches
0"known that some"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs58
mean24.16
std22.79
cv0.944
sampleLengths
0113
173
275
34
4108
513
661
718
820
919
1032
1145
1212
1340
1413
1532
166
1713
1812
1914
205
2141
229
2320
2450
251
266
2717
2835
2914
308
313
3225
339
3422
358
3627
376
3824
3925
408
4140
4224
4327
449
4514
4621
4712
4822
4911
97.88% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences95
matches
0"been lined"
1"was pulled"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs207
matches
0"was coming"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount13
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences128
ratio0.063
matches
0"The neon green sign of *The Raven’s Nest* flickered like a dying firefly as Rory Carter pushed through the heavy door, the scent of aged whiskey and something faintly metallic—polished brass, maybe—hitting her like a memory."
1"The bartender—a wiry man with a salt-and-pepper beard—glanced up from polishing a glass and nodded at her without a word."
2"His auburn hair, streaked now with silver, was pulled back in a loose tie, and the faintest limp in his left leg—something she’d only noticed once before, years ago, when he’d carried her out of a pub after one too many whiskeys—gave him away even from a distance."
3"Then his eyes—hazel, flecked with gold, the same ones that had once mapped the contours of her face like she was something precious—widened."
4"The woman beside him—tall, elegant, her dark hair swept into an intricate twist—turned, her eyebrows lifting in surprise."
5"Silas slid onto the stool beside her, close enough that she could smell the faint scent of his cologne—something woodsy, like old leather and rain."
6"“But it’s the truth.” His eyes flicked over her—her black T-shirt, the scuffed boots, the way her hair fell straight and unadorned around her shoulders."
7"Because for all his questions, for all the way he looked at her like he could see straight through her, there was something in his eyes too—something raw, something she recognized."
97.77% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1175
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount50
adverbRatio0.0425531914893617
lyAdverbCount13
lyAdverbRatio0.011063829787234043
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences128
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences128
mean10.95
std9.37
cv0.856
sampleLengths
036
131
222
324
426
520
627
76
82
947
1020
114
1222
1348
1438
154
166
173
1815
1923
2023
2114
224
2318
242
258
266
275
286
298
3018
3125
3220
337
345
353
3625
3712
3810
393
4010
4119
423
434
442
4512
461
473
484
495
52.08% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.3359375
totalSentences128
uniqueOpeners43
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences89
matches
0"Then she saw him."
1"Then his eyes—hazel, flecked with"
2"Then he reached into his"
3"Instead, she took a sip"
ratio0.045
53.71% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount37
totalSentences89
matches
0"She’d only been inside once"
1"She ordered a gin and"
2"She wasn’t supposed to be"
3"His auburn hair, streaked now"
4"He laughed at something the"
5"She should’ve looked away."
6"he said, his voice rough"
7"he said, cutting her off"
8"His gaze never left Rory’s"
9"She should’ve known better than"
10"he said, and then, softer"
11"His eyes flicked over her—her"
12"She shrugged, picking at the"
13"she said quickly"
14"He lit the cigarette anyway,"
15"She didn’t have to."
16"He knew her too well."
17"He leaned back, his elbow"
18"His voice was gentle, but"
19"She should’ve walked away."
ratio0.416
66.74% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount70
totalSentences89
matches
0"The neon green sign of"
1"The place was quieter than"
2"She’d only been inside once"
3"Rory slid onto a stool"
4"The bartender—a wiry man with"
5"She ordered a gin and"
6"She wasn’t supposed to be"
7"A place where no one"
8"Silas Blackwood stood near the"
9"His auburn hair, streaked now"
10"He laughed at something the"
11"She should’ve looked away."
12"Silas turned just as Rory’s"
13"A slow, deliberate smile spread"
14"he said, his voice rough"
15"The woman beside him—tall, elegant,"
16"he said, cutting her off"
17"His gaze never left Rory’s"
18"Rory’s fingers tightened around her"
19"She should’ve known better than"
ratio0.787
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences89
matches
0"Because for all his questions,"
1"Because for the first time"
ratio0.022
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences40
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"But after another shift at the Golden Empress, after another day of dodging Evan’s calls and pretending she didn’t hear the way her mother’s voice cracked when …"
1"He laughed at something the woman said, the sound low and rough, the kind of laugh that used to make Rory’s chest tighten when they were younger, when he’d been…"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags14
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"he said, his voice rough but warm, like whiskey poured over ice"
1"He leaned back, his elbow resting on the counter"
2"He studied, his expression unreadable"
3"She cut, her voice dropping to a whisper"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"he agreed (agree)"
1"she snapped (snap)"
dialogueSentences49
tagDensity0.143
leniency0.286
rawRatio0.286
effectiveRatio0.082
82.6719%