| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 1 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 0 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 94.69% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 942 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 942 | | totalAiIsms | 27 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulse" | | 1 | "warmth" | | 2 | "weight" | | 3 | "loomed" | | 4 | "whisper" | | 5 | "pulsed" | | 6 | "scanning" | | 7 | "roaring" | | 8 | "could feel" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 88 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 88 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 88 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 35 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 6 | | markdownWords | 9 | | totalWords | 934 | | ratio | 0.01 | | matches | | 0 | "Under" | | 1 | "watched" | | 2 | "presence" | | 3 | "voice" | | 4 | "You are not alone." | | 5 | "watched" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 3 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 85.55% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 32 | | wordCount | 931 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 1.29 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Carter | 1 | | Heartstone | 7 | | London | 1 | | Grove | 8 | | Eva | 1 | | Aurora | 12 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Heartstone" | | 2 | "Grove" | | 3 | "Aurora" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" | | 3 | "Eva" |
| | globalScore | 0.856 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 18.42% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 57 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "something like crushed petals and iron" | | 1 | "as if waiting for her to notice it first" | | 2 | "something like a reflection—staring back at" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 934 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 88 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 35 | | mean | 26.69 | | std | 22.32 | | cv | 0.836 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 99 | | 1 | 39 | | 2 | 2 | | 3 | 52 | | 4 | 57 | | 5 | 53 | | 6 | 3 | | 7 | 48 | | 8 | 4 | | 9 | 2 | | 10 | 37 | | 11 | 47 | | 12 | 39 | | 13 | 37 | | 14 | 4 | | 15 | 35 | | 16 | 4 | | 17 | 50 | | 18 | 4 | | 19 | 7 | | 20 | 35 | | 21 | 36 | | 22 | 4 | | 23 | 7 | | 24 | 41 | | 25 | 6 | | 26 | 10 | | 27 | 18 | | 28 | 37 | | 29 | 6 | | 30 | 7 | | 31 | 42 | | 32 | 35 | | 33 | 21 | | 34 | 6 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 88 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 151 | | matches | | 0 | "was coming" | | 1 | "was coming" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 8 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 7 | | totalSentences | 88 | | ratio | 0.08 | | matches | | 0 | "The pulse of warmth beneath her skin was faint, but steady—just as it had been since she’d slipped it on that morning, after leaving the flat above Silas’ bar behind." | | 1 | "Then—movement." | | 2 | "She’d heard stories about the Grove—Eva had warned her about the way time bent here, how the fae realm pressed close enough to feel like a breath against your skin." | | 3 | "The glow intensified, and for a heartbeat, she thought she saw something—something like a reflection—staring back at her from the stone." | | 4 | "She could feel it—the pull, the weight of something waiting." | | 5 | "The Heartstone burned, its warmth spreading up her neck, her throat, and she knew—she knew what was coming." | | 6 | "The Heartstone burned, its warmth spreading up her neck, her throat, and she knew—she knew what was coming." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 71 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 1 | | adverbRatio | 0.014084507042253521 | | lyAdverbCount | 0 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 88 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 88 | | mean | 10.61 | | std | 7.7 | | cv | 0.725 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 22 | | 1 | 21 | | 2 | 30 | | 3 | 6 | | 4 | 20 | | 5 | 15 | | 6 | 15 | | 7 | 9 | | 8 | 2 | | 9 | 12 | | 10 | 2 | | 11 | 15 | | 12 | 5 | | 13 | 18 | | 14 | 6 | | 15 | 17 | | 16 | 11 | | 17 | 1 | | 18 | 4 | | 19 | 2 | | 20 | 16 | | 21 | 3 | | 22 | 30 | | 23 | 4 | | 24 | 5 | | 25 | 11 | | 26 | 3 | | 27 | 5 | | 28 | 1 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 8 | | 31 | 19 | | 32 | 12 | | 33 | 4 | | 34 | 2 | | 35 | 3 | | 36 | 14 | | 37 | 5 | | 38 | 3 | | 39 | 12 | | 40 | 3 | | 41 | 12 | | 42 | 11 | | 43 | 21 | | 44 | 11 | | 45 | 3 | | 46 | 2 | | 47 | 23 | | 48 | 6 | | 49 | 10 |
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| 35.23% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 13 | | diversityRatio | 0.19318181818181818 | | totalSentences | 88 | | uniqueOpeners | 17 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 81 | | matches | | 0 | "Just the wind." | | 1 | "Then she saw it." | | 2 | "Too tall, too still, its" | | 3 | "Then the whisper changed." |
| | ratio | 0.049 | |
| 91.60% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 26 | | totalSentences | 81 | | matches | | 0 | "She’d come here for the" | | 1 | "She exhaled, stepping over the" | | 2 | "She turned slowly, scanning the" | | 3 | "She’d heard stories about the" | | 4 | "She’d come for the answers." | | 5 | "She stepped forward, her boots" | | 6 | "It didn’t move toward her." | | 7 | "It didn’t speak." | | 8 | "It just *watched*, as if" | | 9 | "She reached for it instinctively," | | 10 | "She turned, her pulse roaring" | | 11 | "She could feel it—the pull," | | 12 | "It wasn’t a voice anymore." | | 13 | "It was a *voice*, but" | | 14 | "It slithered into her mind," | | 15 | "*You are not alone.*" | | 16 | "She stumbled back, her boots" | | 17 | "It didn’t speak." | | 18 | "It just *watched*, and the" | | 19 | "She had to leave." |
| | ratio | 0.321 | |
| 71.11% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 63 | | totalSentences | 81 | | matches | | 0 | "The air in Richmond Park" | | 1 | "Aurora Carter adjusted the strap" | | 2 | "The pulse of warmth beneath" | | 3 | "She’d come here for the" | | 4 | "The standing stones loomed ahead," | | 5 | "She exhaled, stepping over the" | | 6 | "The moment she crossed the" | | 7 | "A whisper, just beyond hearing," | | 8 | "Aurora froze, her breath catching." | | 9 | "The Heartstone pulsed again, its" | | 10 | "She turned slowly, scanning the" | | 11 | "The trees loomed taller than" | | 12 | "The air hummed, a low" | | 13 | "Something slithered along the ground," | | 14 | "Aurora’s pulse spiked." | | 15 | "She’d heard stories about the" | | 16 | "She’d come for the answers." | | 17 | "A twig snapped." | | 18 | "Aurora spun, her heart hammering." | | 19 | "She stepped forward, her boots" |
| | ratio | 0.778 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 81 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 40.82% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 42 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "The trees loomed taller than she remembered, their branches weaving into a canopy that swallowed the stars." | | 1 | "The standing stones groaned, their roots twisting like serpents, and the trees around her seemed to lean in, their branches forming a cage." | | 2 | "The Heartstone burned, its warmth spreading up her neck, her throat, and she knew—she knew what was coming." | | 3 | "The standing stones pulsed, their ancient wood vibrating beneath her feet, and the Grove seemed to breathe around her, its weight pressing in, its whispers grow…" | | 4 | "The Heartstone burned, its warmth spreading up her neck, her throat, and she knew—she knew what was coming." | | 5 | "She reached for the pendant one last time, her fingers brushing the cold metal, and the whispers coiled tighter around her mind, pulling her toward the trees, t…" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 1 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |