Run: 2026-02-20-01KHYABBBXRJFKS2RNBG4675DQ

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36.7s
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$0.001556
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xAI

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System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The rain-slicked streets of Soho gleamed under the sodium lamps as Aurora pushed open the door to The Raven's Nest. The familiar chime of the bell above her head cut through the low hum of conversation and clinking glasses, but it felt distant, like an echo from another life. She shook the droplets from her black coat, her straight shoulder-length hair clinging damply to her neck. It had been three years since she'd last crossed this threshold—not since the night she'd packed her bags and bolted back to Cardiff, chasing the ghost of stability after Evan had finally shattered what little she'd built in London. Eva had urged her to return, but Rory had stayed away, burying herself in case files and her parents' quiet expectations. Now, at twenty-five, with a fresh scar on her wrist itching under the rain's chill—a reminder of childhood falls and harder lessons—she was back. Not for the flat above, which she'd sublet sight unseen, but because the city had a way of pulling you under, whether you wanted it or not. The bar hadn't changed. Dim amber light pooled over scarred wooden tables, casting shadows on walls papered with faded maps of forgotten empires and black-and-white photographs of stern-faced men in trench coats. The air carried the scent of aged whiskey and polished oak, undercut by the faint tang of cigarette smoke that lingered despite the bans. A handful of patrons hunched over their drinks: a couple murmuring in the corner, an old man nursing a pint at the far end of the bar. Rory's bright blue eyes scanned the room, landing on the figure behind the counter. Her breath caught, a sharp intake that tasted of regret. Silas Blackwood. He moved with the same deliberate grace she remembered, but time had etched deeper lines into his face, greying the auburn streaks in his hair and beard. His hazel eyes flicked up from polishing a glass, and for a moment, the world narrowed to that recognition—the slight widening of his gaze, the pause in his hands. He was taller in memory, unscarred by the years, but the limp in his left leg was more pronounced now, a subtle hitch as he shifted his weight. The silver signet ring on his right hand glinted as he set the glass down, a constant, like the quiet authority that had always clung to him. "Rory?" His voice was gravelly, unchanged, carrying over the murmur of the jukebox playing some forgotten Sinatra tune. She nodded, forcing a smile that didn't reach her eyes. "Silas. It's been... God, how long?" "Three years, give or take." He straightened, gesturing to a stool at the end of the bar. "Sit. What'll it be? On the house." Rory slid onto the worn leather, her fingers tracing the crescent scar on her left wrist absentmindedly. The bar top was cool under her palms, sticky in places from spilled drinks. She ordered a gin and tonic, simple, no frills—the same as always. As he mixed it, she watched him, the fluid motions belying the injury that had ended his old life. She'd been eighteen the first time they'd met, a wide-eyed girl dragged to London by Eva for a weekend escape from Cardiff's suffocating routine. Silas had been her father's acquaintance then, Brendan Carter's old contact from some legal tangle involving international cases. A barrister and a spy—worlds apart, but they'd shared drinks once, stories that skirted the edges of truth. Rory had idolized him that summer, the way he commanded a room without raising his voice, his tales of Prague and Berlin spun like yarns from a novel. He slid the drink across to her, ice clinking softly. "Heard you went back home. Eva mentioned it in passing." "Yeah." She took a sip, the juniper bite sharp on her tongue. "Needed to. Family stuff." Silas leaned on the bar, his beard catching the light. Up close, the changes were stark: the faint web of scars around his eyes, the way his shoulders carried a new stoop, not from age alone but from the weight of decisions deferred. He'd been forty-something then, vital and unbowed. Now, at fifty-eight, he looked like a man who'd traded shadows for solitude. "And now you're back. Flat upstairs still standing?" She chuckled, a low sound that didn't ease the knot in her chest. "Subletting it to some artist type. Figured I'd crash with Eva first, get my bearings. Delivery gig starts tomorrow—Golden Empress, you know Yu-Fei?" He nodded, a ghost of a smile tugging at his lips. "Good man. Keeps the neighborhood fed." There was a pause, the kind that stretched like fog rolling in off the Thames. Silas's eyes searched hers, probing without accusation. "You look different, Rory. Sharper. Like you've seen the world and it didn't blink." The words landed heavier than intended, stirring the silt of unspoken years. Rory swirled her drink, watching the lime slice bob. Sharper? Maybe. The girl who'd laughed at his spy stories, wide-eyed and unscarred, had fractured under Evan's fists, under the grind of Pre-Law lectures that felt like chains. She'd fled him, yes, but also the version of herself that had believed in easy escapes. "Time does that," she said finally. "You, too. The limp—it's worse." Silas's hand went to his knee instinctively, a reflex. "Prague finally caught up. Rain like tonight's doesn't help." He poured himself a finger of scotch, neat, and raised it in a mock toast. "To old ghosts." They clinked glasses, the sound brittle. Rory felt the pull of memory, the weight of what they'd shared in fragments over those summers—late nights at this very bar, Eva giggling in the background as Silas sketched half-truths about his MI6 days. He'd been her window to a larger world, one where intellect trumped brute force. But she'd left without a word, burying herself in Cardiff, in her parents' orbit. Brendan with his endless briefs, Jennifer with her patient lessons. And Silas? He'd retired fully after that botched op, or so the rumors went, turning The Raven's Nest into more than a bar—a haven for whispers and second chances. "So," Silas said, breaking the silence, "what brings you back to this pit? London chews people up." Rory's gaze drifted to the photographs on the wall, faces frozen in time. One caught her eye—a grainy shot of a younger Silas, clean-shaven, standing in a cobblestone square with a woman whose smile promised futures unclaimed. "Needed a change. Cardiff was... safe, but small. Law school's done, but I couldn't stay. Too many echoes." "Evan?" The name slipped out soft, but it sliced clean. She stiffened, her blue eyes flashing. "Yeah. That mess. But it's over. Been over." Lies, partial ones. The bruises had faded, but the doubt lingered, a shadow that made her quick thinking feel like survival instinct sharpened to a blade. She leaned forward, elbows on the bar. "What about you? Still playing spymaster from behind the taps?" Silas's laugh was rueful, a rumble that didn't reach his eyes. "Retired, remember? This is it—pouring drinks, listening to sob stories." He glanced at the hidden bookshelf in the back, the one that swung open to his secret room, now gathering dust more than secrets. "The Nest keeps me honest. Or as honest as I get." The tension coiled between them, unspoken regrets threading the air like smoke. Rory remembered the Silas of her youth: the man who'd pulled her aside one night, after too many drinks, and warned her about the world's sharper edges. "Intelligence isn't just books, Rory," he'd said. "It's knowing when to walk away." She'd nodded then, eighteen and invincible. Now, she saw the cost in his limp, in the way his signet ring twisted as he gripped his glass. He'd walked away from the life that maimed him, but not unscathed. And her? She'd run from Evan, from the bar, from the potential Silas had glimpsed in her, only to circle back, changed into someone harder, more guarded. "You ever regret it?" she asked, voice low. "The service. Leaving it all." Silas's hazel eyes met hers, steady. "Every damn day. That op in Prague—botched it, lost good people. Knee's the least of it." He tapped the bar, the sound muffled. "But regret's a luxury. You learn to live with the limp, literal or not. What about you? That quick mind of yours—wasted on deliveries?" The jab stung, laced with the affection of old friendship. Rory's scar itched again, a phantom pull. "Maybe. But it's mine. No more running from what I want." Lies again. She wanted the bar's warmth, Silas's quiet wisdom, the life she'd glimpsed here before fear drove her away. But admitting it meant confronting the years lost, the apologies unsaid. He nodded, as if reading her. "The flat's yours if you want it back. No strings." She finished her drink, the ice melting into bitterness. "I'll think about it." The door chimed again, a group of laughing patrons spilling in from the rain, shattering the bubble. Silas moved to serve them, his limp more evident in the shuffle, but his posture held that unyielding poise. Rory watched from her stool, the weight of time pressing down—the girl she'd been, the friend he'd been, the strangers they'd become. Regret hung unspoken, heavy as the neon sign outside flickering green against the night. She tossed a few coins on the bar, more than the drink cost, and slipped out into the downpour, the door closing softly behind her. The city swallowed her steps, but the echo of his voice lingered, a reminder that some changes couldn't be outrun. As she walked, the rain washing away the bar's warmth, Rory touched her wrist, tracing the crescent scar. Three years gone, and yet here she was, circling back to the Nest, to Silas, to the unfinished stories between them. Time hadn't erased the bond; it had only deepened the grooves, carving paths for regrets that words could never fully mend. But maybe, just maybe, that was enough to start again. The streets blurred, Soho's pulse quickening around her. Delivery bike waiting at Eva's, a new shift at Golden Empress, the flat above waiting like a half-remembered dream. Silas would be there tomorrow, pouring drinks, guarding secrets. And she'd return—not as the girl who'd fled, but as the woman piecing herself together, one reluctant step at a time. In the bar, Silas watched her silhouette fade through the rain-streaked window, his hand absently rubbing his knee. The scotch burned going down, a familiar fire. Rory Carter, sharp as ever, but carrying ghosts he recognized all too well. He'd failed enough in Prague; perhaps this time, he could offer more than warnings—a steady hand in the shadows. The jukebox clicked to a new tune, mournful and low, and he turned back to the patrons, the limp carrying him forward into the night. (Word count: 1247)
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags15
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"she said finally [finally]"
dialogueSentences31
tagDensity0.484
leniency0.968
rawRatio0.067
effectiveRatio0.065
91.89% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1849
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"softly"
count2
1
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
1"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
18.88% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1849
totalAiIsms30
found
0
word"familiar"
count2
1
word"echo"
count2
2
word"shattered"
count1
3
word"chill"
count1
4
word"reminder"
count2
5
word"scanned"
count1
6
word"etched"
count1
7
word"flicked"
count1
8
word"weight"
count4
9
word"tracing"
count2
10
word"stark"
count1
11
word"unspoken"
count3
12
word"fractured"
count1
13
word"silence"
count1
14
word"echoes"
count1
15
word"tension"
count1
16
word"potential"
count1
17
word"affection"
count1
18
word"warmth"
count2
19
word"pulse"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"echo"
2"shattered"
3"chill"
4"reminder"
5"scanned"
6"etched"
7"flicked"
8"weight"
9"tracing"
10"stark"
11"unspoken"
12"fractured"
13"silence"
14"echoes"
15"tension"
16"potential"
17"affection"
18"warmth"
19"pulse"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences103
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences103
filterMatches
0"feel"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences119
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen40
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1817
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions64
wordCount1552
uniqueNames21
maxNameDensity1.16
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Soho2
Aurora1
Raven2
Nest3
Cardiff3
Evan3
London2
Rory12
Blackwood1
Sinatra1
Eva4
Brendan2
Carter2
Prague2
Berlin1
Silas18
Thames1
Pre-Law1
Jennifer1
Golden1
Empress1
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Raven"
2"Evan"
3"Rory"
4"Blackwood"
5"Sinatra"
6"Eva"
7"Brendan"
8"Carter"
9"Silas"
10"Jennifer"
places
0"Soho"
1"Nest"
2"Cardiff"
3"London"
4"Prague"
5"Berlin"
6"Thames"
7"Golden"
globalScore0.92
windowScore0.833
66.67% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences90
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"looked like a man who'd traded shadows fo"
1"felt like chains"
2"as if reading her"
34.89% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches3
per1kWords1.651
wordCount1817
matches
0"Not for the flat above, which she'd sublet sight unseen, but because the city had a way of pulling you under, whether you"
1"not from age alone but from the weight of decisions deferred"
2"not as the girl who'd fled, but as the woman piecing herself together, one reluctant step at"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences119
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs31
mean58.61
std44.12
cv0.753
sampleLengths
0177
1107
2113
318
416
524
6150
720
816
971
1036
1153
1276
1336
14108
1517
1655
1710
1857
1956
20117
2113
2253
2359
2416
2513
26117
2770
2857
2983
303
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences103
matches
0"been eighteen"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs252
matches
0"was, circling"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount12
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences12
totalSentences119
ratio0.101
matches
0"It had been three years since she'd last crossed this threshold—not since the night she'd packed her bags and bolted back to Cardiff, chasing the ghost of stability after Evan had finally shattered what little she'd built in London."
1"Now, at twenty-five, with a fresh scar on her wrist itching under the rain's chill—a reminder of childhood falls and harder lessons—she was back."
2"His hazel eyes flicked up from polishing a glass, and for a moment, the world narrowed to that recognition—the slight widening of his gaze, the pause in his hands."
3"She ordered a gin and tonic, simple, no frills—the same as always."
4"A barrister and a spy—worlds apart, but they'd shared drinks once, stories that skirted the edges of truth."
5"Rory felt the pull of memory, the weight of what they'd shared in fragments over those summers—late nights at this very bar, Eva giggling in the background as Silas sketched half-truths about his MI6 days."
6"He'd retired fully after that botched op, or so the rumors went, turning The Raven's Nest into more than a bar—a haven for whispers and second chances."
7"One caught her eye—a grainy shot of a younger Silas, clean-shaven, standing in a cobblestone square with a woman whose smile promised futures unclaimed."
8"Rory watched from her stool, the weight of time pressing down—the girl she'd been, the friend he'd been, the strangers they'd become."
9"Time hadn't erased the bond; it had only deepened the grooves, carving paths for regrets that words could never fully mend."
10"And she'd return—not as the girl who'd fled, but as the woman piecing herself together, one reluctant step at a time."
11"He'd failed enough in Prague; perhaps this time, he could offer more than warnings—a steady hand in the shadows."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount332
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount9
adverbRatio0.02710843373493976
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.012048192771084338
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences119
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences119
mean15.27
std8.38
cv0.549
sampleLengths
020
129
217
339
421
524
627
74
828
924
1027
1114
1210
132
1427
1529
1628
1727
1818
1910
206
2117
227
2317
2414
2512
2619
2724
2818
2918
3028
3110
3210
3312
344
3510
3633
377
3813
398
4013
4123
4211
4321
447
4514
4612
479
481
491
59.94% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.3697478991596639
totalSentences119
uniqueOpeners44
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences96
matches(empty)
ratio0
74.17% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount35
totalSentences96
matches
0"She shook the droplets from"
1"It had been three years"
2"Her breath caught, a sharp"
3"He moved with the same"
4"His hazel eyes flicked up"
5"He was taller in memory,"
6"His voice was gravelly, unchanged,"
7"She nodded, forcing a smile"
8"He straightened, gesturing to a"
9"She ordered a gin and"
10"She'd been eighteen the first"
11"He slid the drink across"
12"She took a sip, the"
13"He'd been forty-something then, vital"
14"She chuckled, a low sound"
15"He nodded, a ghost of"
16"She'd fled him, yes, but"
17"she said finally"
18"He poured himself a finger"
19"They clinked glasses, the sound"
ratio0.365
48.54% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount79
totalSentences96
matches
0"The rain-slicked streets of Soho"
1"The familiar chime of the"
2"She shook the droplets from"
3"It had been three years"
4"Eva had urged her to"
5"The bar hadn't changed."
6"The air carried the scent"
7"A handful of patrons hunched"
8"Rory's bright blue eyes scanned"
9"Her breath caught, a sharp"
10"He moved with the same"
11"His hazel eyes flicked up"
12"He was taller in memory,"
13"The silver signet ring on"
14"His voice was gravelly, unchanged,"
15"She nodded, forcing a smile"
16"He straightened, gesturing to a"
17"Rory slid onto the worn"
18"The bar top was cool"
19"She ordered a gin and"
ratio0.823
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount3
totalSentences96
matches
0"Now, at twenty-five, with a"
1"Now, at fifty-eight, he looked"
2"Now, she saw the cost"
ratio0.031
43.96% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences65
technicalSentenceCount9
matches
0"The air carried the scent of aged whiskey and polished oak, undercut by the faint tang of cigarette smoke that lingered despite the bans."
1"The silver signet ring on his right hand glinted as he set the glass down, a constant, like the quiet authority that had always clung to him."
2"As he mixed it, she watched him, the fluid motions belying the injury that had ended his old life."
3"A barrister and a spy—worlds apart, but they'd shared drinks once, stories that skirted the edges of truth."
4"She chuckled, a low sound that didn't ease the knot in her chest."
5"The girl who'd laughed at his spy stories, wide-eyed and unscarred, had fractured under Evan's fists, under the grind of Pre-Law lectures that felt like chains."
6"Silas's laugh was rueful, a rumble that didn't reach his eyes."
7"As she walked, the rain washing away the bar's warmth, Rory touched her wrist, tracing the crescent scar."
8"And she'd return—not as the girl who'd fled, but as the woman piecing herself together, one reluctant step at a time."
58.33% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags15
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"She took, the juniper bite sharp on her tongue"
1"she asked, voice low"
85.48% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Eva had (have)"
1"Lies (lie)"
dialogueSentences31
tagDensity0.161
leniency0.323
rawRatio0.4
effectiveRatio0.129
78.8694%