"It had been three years since she'd last crossed this threshold—not since the night she'd packed her bags and bolted back to Cardiff, chasing the ghost of stability after Evan had finally shattered what little she'd built in London."
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"Now, at twenty-five, with a fresh scar on her wrist itching under the rain's chill—a reminder of childhood falls and harder lessons—she was back."
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"His hazel eyes flicked up from polishing a glass, and for a moment, the world narrowed to that recognition—the slight widening of his gaze, the pause in his hands."
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"She ordered a gin and tonic, simple, no frills—the same as always."
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"A barrister and a spy—worlds apart, but they'd shared drinks once, stories that skirted the edges of truth."
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"Rory felt the pull of memory, the weight of what they'd shared in fragments over those summers—late nights at this very bar, Eva giggling in the background as Silas sketched half-truths about his MI6 days."
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"He'd retired fully after that botched op, or so the rumors went, turning The Raven's Nest into more than a bar—a haven for whispers and second chances."
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"One caught her eye—a grainy shot of a younger Silas, clean-shaven, standing in a cobblestone square with a woman whose smile promised futures unclaimed."
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"Rory watched from her stool, the weight of time pressing down—the girl she'd been, the friend he'd been, the strangers they'd become."
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"Time hadn't erased the bond; it had only deepened the grooves, carving paths for regrets that words could never fully mend."
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"And she'd return—not as the girl who'd fled, but as the woman piecing herself together, one reluctant step at a time."
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"He'd failed enough in Prague; perhaps this time, he could offer more than warnings—a steady hand in the shadows."
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"The air carried the scent of aged whiskey and polished oak, undercut by the faint tang of cigarette smoke that lingered despite the bans."
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"The silver signet ring on his right hand glinted as he set the glass down, a constant, like the quiet authority that had always clung to him."
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"As he mixed it, she watched him, the fluid motions belying the injury that had ended his old life."
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"A barrister and a spy—worlds apart, but they'd shared drinks once, stories that skirted the edges of truth."
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"She chuckled, a low sound that didn't ease the knot in her chest."
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"The girl who'd laughed at his spy stories, wide-eyed and unscarred, had fractured under Evan's fists, under the grind of Pre-Law lectures that felt like chains."
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"Silas's laugh was rueful, a rumble that didn't reach his eyes."
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"As she walked, the rain washing away the bar's warmth, Rory touched her wrist, tracing the crescent scar."
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"And she'd return—not as the girl who'd fled, but as the woman piecing herself together, one reluctant step at a time."