Run: 2026-02-20-01KHYAD6MRBDZJD42Z1BHHM2ZK

Run Details

Duration:
18.7s
Cost:
$0.000165
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The rain in Soho was a greasy film on the pavement, reflecting the sickly yellow glow of the streetlights. Rory shifted her weight, pulling her thin jacket tighter around her. Another late shift at Golden Empress, another lukewarm spring rolls and mumbled thank yous. The scent of soy sauce and desperation clung to her like a second skin. She’d been nursing a half-empty glass of something amber and vaguely unsettling for nearly an hour, watching the regulars shuffle in and out, each a tiny, contained world she wasn't privy to. Then he walked in. Silas. It wasn’t a sudden recognition, not exactly. More like a slow, insistent current pulling her attention, a vibration deep in the bones of memory. He hadn’t changed much in the face, though the lines around his hazel eyes were deeper, etched with a knowledge that seemed to fold in on themselves. The grey streaks in his auburn hair were more pronounced, thicker, like the paths of ancient rivers. He moved with a slight limp, a ghost of the injury that had ended his career, and carried himself with that quiet, unsettling authority she’d always found both intimidating and faintly comforting. He scanned the room, a slow, deliberate sweep, before his gaze locked onto her. “Rory?” His voice was gravel, roughened by years of smoke and something else she couldn’t quite place—regret, perhaps. She straightened, instinctively placing a barrier between herself and the rest of the bar. “Silas,” she replied, the single word a little rusty, like a forgotten hinge. “God, it’s…it’s been a while.” He nodded, a curt, economical movement. “Fifteen years, give or take. You look…good.” He slid onto the stool beside her, the worn leather groaning beneath his weight. The silver signet ring on his right hand glinted in the dim light. “Golden Empress, I presume? Delivering greasy noodles until your fingers bleed?” A small, almost involuntary smile touched her lips. “Something like that. It pays the rent.” She took a long swallow of her drink. “You own this place?” He gestured around the dark, cluttered bar, the walls lined with faded maps and unsettling photographs. “The Raven’s Nest,” he said, his voice dropping an octave. “I’ve had it for…a while.” He paused, then added, almost as an afterthought, “It’s a front.” “Always,” she said, the observation more statement than question. She’d known that much, implicitly, even when they’d been kids sharing stolen cigarettes behind the Cardiff docks. The silence stretched between them, thick with the unspoken echoes of their shared past. Rory traced the rim of her glass, avoiding his gaze. The small crescent-shaped scar on her wrist, a memento of a childhood accident she’d long tried to bury, throbbed faintly. She hadn't shown Silas that scar in years. “Evan,” he said finally, his voice low. “I heard he’d…moved on.” Rory flinched, a tiny, almost imperceptible movement. “He’s gone. It’s over.” “Is it?” He raised an eyebrow, a flicker of something unreadable in his eyes. "You always did have a remarkable talent for compartmentalization, Rory. Shielding yourself from the mess." She didn’t look at him. “Someone had to.” She took another drink, the amber liquid burning a slow path down her throat. "It wasn't exactly a picnic, Silas. You don't need to rehash it." “I’m not rehashing it,” he said quietly. “I’m observing. You built a life, Rory. A…practical one. Delivery girl. Small flat above Silas’. It's…safe.” "Safe isn’t always good," she countered, her voice sharper than she intended. “It’s just…stable. I don’t want stable.” “And what do you want?” He leaned forward slightly, his hazel eyes boring into hers. She hesitated. It had been so long since she’d articulated anything beyond a simple need – food, shelter, a way to pay the bills. “I… I don’t know,” she admitted, the words tasting like ash in her mouth. "I used to think I wanted…more. Something…bigger. But then you leave, and…" She trailed off, unable to articulate the hollowness that had settled in after he vanished. “You think running away solved everything?” He asked, his voice laced with a bitterness she hadn’t heard before. “It just…shifted the battlefield.” “It bought me time,” she said defensively. “Time to breathe. Time to get away from him.” The memory of Evan, the possessive, volatile darkness that had consumed them both, still clung to her like a phantom limb. “Time doesn’t heal, Rory,” Silas said, his gaze drifting to the darkened windows. “It just layers on the regret. I saw his face on the news once. A mugging. Some street kid. You don't forget things like that." He took a sip of his whiskey, the ice clinking softly against the glass. "Especially not when they haunt you.” Rory felt a prickle of something akin to shame. She hadn't thought of him, of *any* of them, in this way in years. The constant need to be pragmatic, to survive, had eroded her capacity for introspection. “I don’t regret leaving,” she said, the words flat and unconvincing even to her own ears. “Do you?” He didn't wait for an answer. He continued, his voice barely a whisper, “I should have stopped you. I should have…done something. But I didn’t. I was…busy.” The weight of his unspoken accusation settled heavily on her. He hadn’t been a knight in shining armor, not then, and certainly not now. But the possibility, the sliver of regret that hung unspoken between them, was more potent than any condemnation. “You were a spy,” she said, a small, brittle laugh escaping her lips. “Saving the world one clandestine operation at a time. That’s a pretty good excuse for inaction.” He ignored her deflection, his gaze fixed on the rain-streaked windows. “I traded action for comfort, Rory. A gilded cage of my own making. And now… I'm just a bartender, serving whiskey to ghosts.” He paused, then added, "And offering a little sanctuary to those who need it." She studied him, really studied him, for the first time since he'd arrived. The lines around his eyes were deeper, yes, but there was something else there too – a weary acceptance, a quiet understanding of the choices we make and the roads we don’t take. “You’re still running something,” she said, stating the obvious. He gave a ghost of a smile. “Always. Some things never change.” He signaled to a passing waiter. “Another drink, please.” As she watched him, Rory realized that she hadn’t just stumbled back into Silas’ bar; she’d stumbled back into a part of herself she’d carefully, deliberately locked away. And for the first time in a long time, the safety of her practical life felt desperately, suffocatingly small. The rain kept falling, washing the grime of the city clean, but it couldn't wash away the weight of the past, or the unsettling realization that perhaps, just perhaps, running wasn't the only option anymore.
created_at"2026-02-20T20:03:39.299Z" 2/20/2026, 8:03:39 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
0.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags29
adverbTagCount6
adverbTags
0"He gestured around [around]"
1"He paused then [then]"
2"he said finally [finally]"
3"he said quietly [quietly]"
4"she said defensively [defensively]"
5"He paused then [then]"
dialogueSentences40
tagDensity0.725
leniency1
rawRatio0.207
effectiveRatio0.207
78.09% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1141
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"softly"
count1
2
adverb"really"
count1
3
adverb"carefully"
count1
4
adverb"deliberately"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"softly"
2"really"
3"carefully"
4"deliberately"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
7.98% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1141
totalAiIsms21
found
0
word"weight"
count4
1
word"etched"
count1
2
word"comforting"
count1
3
word"scanned"
count1
4
word"silence"
count1
5
word"unspoken"
count3
6
word"echoes"
count1
7
word"traced"
count1
8
word"throbbed"
count1
9
word"eyebrow"
count1
10
word"flicker"
count1
11
word"unreadable"
count1
12
word"remarkable"
count1
13
word"whisper"
count1
14
word"clandestine"
count1
15
word"sanctuary"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"etched"
2"comforting"
3"scanned"
4"silence"
5"unspoken"
6"echoes"
7"traced"
8"throbbed"
9"eyebrow"
10"flicker"
11"unreadable"
12"remarkable"
13"whisper"
14"clandestine"
15"sanctuary"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences67
matches
0"felt a prickle"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences67
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences79
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen39
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords1
totalWords1139
ratio0.001
matches
0"any"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions21
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions13
wordCount841
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity0.59
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Soho1
Golden1
Empress1
Cardiff1
Silas3
Rory5
Evan1
persons
0"Silas"
1"Rory"
2"Evan"
places
0"Soho"
1"Golden"
2"Cardiff"
globalScore1
windowScore1
22.88% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences59
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"knowledge that seemed to fold in on themselves"
1"quite place—regret, perhaps"
2"something akin to shame"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1139
matches(empty)
82.28% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences79
matches
0"known that much"
1"realized that she"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs31
mean36.74
std24.97
cv0.68
sampleLengths
094
11
2114
318
432
551
643
726
826
952
1011
1111
1229
1334
1423
1518
1615
1765
1822
1937
2058
2137
2216
2329
2442
2529
2648
2746
289
2921
3082
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences67
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs135
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences79
ratio0.051
matches
0"“Rory?” His voice was gravel, roughened by years of smoke and something else she couldn’t quite place—regret, perhaps."
1"It had been so long since she’d articulated anything beyond a simple need – food, shelter, a way to pay the bills."
2"The lines around his eyes were deeper, yes, but there was something else there too – a weary acceptance, a quiet understanding of the choices we make and the roads we don’t take."
3"As she watched him, Rory realized that she hadn’t just stumbled back into Silas’ bar; she’d stumbled back into a part of herself she’d carefully, deliberately locked away."
81.79% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount789
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"slow, insistent current pulling"
1"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount36
adverbRatio0.045627376425855515
lyAdverbCount17
lyAdverbRatio0.021546261089987327
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences79
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences79
mean14.42
std8.37
cv0.58
sampleLengths
019
111
214
314
432
54
61
77
817
927
1017
1132
1214
1318
1414
1513
165
176
1821
1913
2011
218
2215
2320
2410
2516
269
2717
2814
2910
3020
318
327
334
347
354
3614
3715
385
3917
4012
417
4216
4312
446
4515
462
4722
4814
4927
52.74% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.35443037974683544
totalSentences79
uniqueOpeners28
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences65
matches
0"Then he walked in."
1"More like a slow, insistent"
ratio0.031
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount42
totalSentences65
matches
0"She’d been nursing a half-empty"
1"It wasn’t a sudden recognition,"
2"He hadn’t changed much in"
3"He moved with a slight"
4"He scanned the room, a"
5"His voice was gravel, roughened"
6"She straightened, instinctively placing a"
7"she replied, the single word"
8"He nodded, a curt, economical"
9"He slid onto the stool"
10"She took a long swallow"
11"He gestured around the dark,"
12"he said, his voice dropping"
13"He paused, then added, almost"
14"she said, the observation more"
15"She’d known that much, implicitly,"
16"She hadn't shown Silas that"
17"he said finally, his voice"
18"He raised an eyebrow, a"
19"She didn’t look at him."
ratio0.646
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount60
totalSentences65
matches
0"The rain in Soho was"
1"Rory shifted her weight, pulling"
2"Another late shift at Golden"
3"The scent of soy sauce"
4"She’d been nursing a half-empty"
5"It wasn’t a sudden recognition,"
6"He hadn’t changed much in"
7"The grey streaks in his"
8"He moved with a slight"
9"He scanned the room, a"
10"His voice was gravel, roughened"
11"She straightened, instinctively placing a"
12"she replied, the single word"
13"He nodded, a curt, economical"
14"He slid onto the stool"
15"The silver signet ring on"
16"A small, almost involuntary smile"
17"She took a long swallow"
18"He gestured around the dark,"
19"he said, his voice dropping"
ratio0.923
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences65
matches(empty)
ratio0
89.95% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences27
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"He moved with a slight limp, a ghost of the injury that had ended his career, and carried himself with that quiet, unsettling authority she’d always found both …"
1"But the possibility, the sliver of regret that hung unspoken between them, was more potent than any condemnation."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags29
uselessAdditionCount11
matches
0"He slid, the worn leather groaning beneath his weight"
1"he said, his voice dropping an octave"
2"she said, the observation more statement than question"
3"he said finally, his voice low"
4"He raised, a flicker of something unreadable in his eyes"
5"She took, the amber liquid burning a slow path down her throat"
6"she countered, her voice sharper than she intended"
7"He leaned, his hazel eyes boring into hers"
8"Silas said, his gaze drifting to the darkened windows"
9"He took, the ice clinking softly against the glass"
10"He continued, his voice barely a whisper,"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags13
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"she admitted (admit)"
1"He continued (continue)"
dialogueSentences40
tagDensity0.325
leniency0.65
rawRatio0.154
effectiveRatio0.1
70.5234%