| 0.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 29 | | adverbTagCount | 6 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "He gestured around [around]" | | 1 | "He paused then [then]" | | 2 | "he said finally [finally]" | | 3 | "he said quietly [quietly]" | | 4 | "she said defensively [defensively]" | | 5 | "He paused then [then]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 40 | | tagDensity | 0.725 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.207 | | effectiveRatio | 0.207 | |
| 78.09% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1141 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 5 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | adverb | "deliberately" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "slightly" | | 1 | "softly" | | 2 | "really" | | 3 | "carefully" | | 4 | "deliberately" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 7.98% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1141 | | totalAiIsms | 21 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "weight" | | 1 | "etched" | | 2 | "comforting" | | 3 | "scanned" | | 4 | "silence" | | 5 | "unspoken" | | 6 | "echoes" | | 7 | "traced" | | 8 | "throbbed" | | 9 | "eyebrow" | | 10 | "flicker" | | 11 | "unreadable" | | 12 | "remarkable" | | 13 | "whisper" | | 14 | "clandestine" | | 15 | "sanctuary" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 67 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 67 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 79 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 39 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 1 | | markdownWords | 1 | | totalWords | 1139 | | ratio | 0.001 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 21 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 13 | | wordCount | 841 | | uniqueNames | 7 | | maxNameDensity | 0.59 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Silas" | | discoveredNames | | Soho | 1 | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 | | Cardiff | 1 | | Silas | 3 | | Rory | 5 | | Evan | 1 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Soho" | | 1 | "Golden" | | 2 | "Cardiff" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 22.88% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 59 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "knowledge that seemed to fold in on themselves" | | 1 | "quite place—regret, perhaps" | | 2 | "something akin to shame" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1139 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 82.28% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 79 | | matches | | 0 | "known that much" | | 1 | "realized that she" |
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| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 31 | | mean | 36.74 | | std | 24.97 | | cv | 0.68 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 94 | | 1 | 1 | | 2 | 114 | | 3 | 18 | | 4 | 32 | | 5 | 51 | | 6 | 43 | | 7 | 26 | | 8 | 26 | | 9 | 52 | | 10 | 11 | | 11 | 11 | | 12 | 29 | | 13 | 34 | | 14 | 23 | | 15 | 18 | | 16 | 15 | | 17 | 65 | | 18 | 22 | | 19 | 37 | | 20 | 58 | | 21 | 37 | | 22 | 16 | | 23 | 29 | | 24 | 42 | | 25 | 29 | | 26 | 48 | | 27 | 46 | | 28 | 9 | | 29 | 21 | | 30 | 82 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 135 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 3 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 4 | | totalSentences | 79 | | ratio | 0.051 | | matches | | 0 | "“Rory?” His voice was gravel, roughened by years of smoke and something else she couldn’t quite place—regret, perhaps." | | 1 | "It had been so long since she’d articulated anything beyond a simple need – food, shelter, a way to pay the bills." | | 2 | "The lines around his eyes were deeper, yes, but there was something else there too – a weary acceptance, a quiet understanding of the choices we make and the roads we don’t take." | | 3 | "As she watched him, Rory realized that she hadn’t just stumbled back into Silas’ bar; she’d stumbled back into a part of herself she’d carefully, deliberately locked away." |
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| 81.79% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 789 | | adjectiveStacks | 2 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "slow, insistent current pulling" | | 1 | "small crescent-shaped scar" |
| | adverbCount | 36 | | adverbRatio | 0.045627376425855515 | | lyAdverbCount | 17 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.021546261089987327 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 79 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 79 | | mean | 14.42 | | std | 8.37 | | cv | 0.58 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 19 | | 1 | 11 | | 2 | 14 | | 3 | 14 | | 4 | 32 | | 5 | 4 | | 6 | 1 | | 7 | 7 | | 8 | 17 | | 9 | 27 | | 10 | 17 | | 11 | 32 | | 12 | 14 | | 13 | 18 | | 14 | 14 | | 15 | 13 | | 16 | 5 | | 17 | 6 | | 18 | 21 | | 19 | 13 | | 20 | 11 | | 21 | 8 | | 22 | 15 | | 23 | 20 | | 24 | 10 | | 25 | 16 | | 26 | 9 | | 27 | 17 | | 28 | 14 | | 29 | 10 | | 30 | 20 | | 31 | 8 | | 32 | 7 | | 33 | 4 | | 34 | 7 | | 35 | 4 | | 36 | 14 | | 37 | 15 | | 38 | 5 | | 39 | 17 | | 40 | 12 | | 41 | 7 | | 42 | 16 | | 43 | 12 | | 44 | 6 | | 45 | 15 | | 46 | 2 | | 47 | 22 | | 48 | 14 | | 49 | 27 |
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| 52.74% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 5 | | diversityRatio | 0.35443037974683544 | | totalSentences | 79 | | uniqueOpeners | 28 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 65 | | matches | | 0 | "Then he walked in." | | 1 | "More like a slow, insistent" |
| | ratio | 0.031 | |
| 0.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 42 | | totalSentences | 65 | | matches | | 0 | "She’d been nursing a half-empty" | | 1 | "It wasn’t a sudden recognition," | | 2 | "He hadn’t changed much in" | | 3 | "He moved with a slight" | | 4 | "He scanned the room, a" | | 5 | "His voice was gravel, roughened" | | 6 | "She straightened, instinctively placing a" | | 7 | "she replied, the single word" | | 8 | "He nodded, a curt, economical" | | 9 | "He slid onto the stool" | | 10 | "She took a long swallow" | | 11 | "He gestured around the dark," | | 12 | "he said, his voice dropping" | | 13 | "He paused, then added, almost" | | 14 | "she said, the observation more" | | 15 | "She’d known that much, implicitly," | | 16 | "She hadn't shown Silas that" | | 17 | "he said finally, his voice" | | 18 | "He raised an eyebrow, a" | | 19 | "She didn’t look at him." |
| | ratio | 0.646 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 60 | | totalSentences | 65 | | matches | | 0 | "The rain in Soho was" | | 1 | "Rory shifted her weight, pulling" | | 2 | "Another late shift at Golden" | | 3 | "The scent of soy sauce" | | 4 | "She’d been nursing a half-empty" | | 5 | "It wasn’t a sudden recognition," | | 6 | "He hadn’t changed much in" | | 7 | "The grey streaks in his" | | 8 | "He moved with a slight" | | 9 | "He scanned the room, a" | | 10 | "His voice was gravel, roughened" | | 11 | "She straightened, instinctively placing a" | | 12 | "she replied, the single word" | | 13 | "He nodded, a curt, economical" | | 14 | "He slid onto the stool" | | 15 | "The silver signet ring on" | | 16 | "A small, almost involuntary smile" | | 17 | "She took a long swallow" | | 18 | "He gestured around the dark," | | 19 | "he said, his voice dropping" |
| | ratio | 0.923 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 65 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 89.95% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 27 | | technicalSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "He moved with a slight limp, a ghost of the injury that had ended his career, and carried himself with that quiet, unsettling authority she’d always found both …" | | 1 | "But the possibility, the sliver of regret that hung unspoken between them, was more potent than any condemnation." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 29 | | uselessAdditionCount | 11 | | matches | | 0 | "He slid, the worn leather groaning beneath his weight" | | 1 | "he said, his voice dropping an octave" | | 2 | "she said, the observation more statement than question" | | 3 | "he said finally, his voice low" | | 4 | "He raised, a flicker of something unreadable in his eyes" | | 5 | "She took, the amber liquid burning a slow path down her throat" | | 6 | "she countered, her voice sharper than she intended" | | 7 | "He leaned, his hazel eyes boring into hers" | | 8 | "Silas said, his gaze drifting to the darkened windows" | | 9 | "He took, the ice clinking softly against the glass" | | 10 | "He continued, his voice barely a whisper," |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 13 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she admitted (admit)" | | 1 | "He continued (continue)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 40 | | tagDensity | 0.325 | | leniency | 0.65 | | rawRatio | 0.154 | | effectiveRatio | 0.1 | |