Run: 2026-02-20-01KHYAF1YBY9ZF8SBRR4ZDDC8S

Run Details

Duration:
14.7s
Cost:
$0.000509
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The air in Richmond Park was thick with the scent of damp earth and something older, something that clung to the trees like a whisper. Aurora Carter adjusted the strap of her backpack, her fingers brushing the cold silver of the Heartstone pendant around her neck. The pulse of warmth beneath her skin was faint, barely perceptible, but it was there—just as it had been since she’d left London hours ago. She’d come to The Fae Grove for a reason, but the moment she stepped through the standing stones, the weight of it settled in her bones. The grove was supposed to be a place of transition, a threshold between worlds. But now, as she walked the narrow path between the ancient oaks, the air felt wrong. Not just the usual quiet of the night, but something deeper, something that pressed against her like a living thing. The wildflowers swayed in the breeze, their petals trembling as if in slow motion, though the wind itself seemed to have stopped. Aurora’s breath came shallow. She’d expected the grove to be eerie, but not like this. Not like this *hungry*. The trees loomed taller than she remembered, their branches twisting unnaturally, as if reaching for something unseen. The standing stones at the edge of the clearing loomed larger, their carvings worn but unmistakable—figures that seemed to watch her from the dark. She stopped, her pulse hammering in her ears. The Heartstone pulsed again, a faint, rhythmic warmth against her skin. *This is where it’s supposed to be*, she thought, though the certainty didn’t ease the creeping dread. The grove was supposed to be a place of passage, but now it felt like a cage. A sound. Aurora froze. There was nothing. No wind, no rustling leaves, no distant animal. But then—just for a second—she thought she heard it: a whisper, a voice that wasn’t quite human, slithering through the branches. She turned slowly, her heart pounding, but the trees were empty. The air grew colder. The flowers around her withered, their petals curling inward. Aurora’s fingers tightened around the pendant, her breath coming in ragged gasps. She’d come here for a reason, but now she wasn’t sure what that reason was anymore. Then she saw it. A shape, just beyond the edge of her vision, moving too fast to be real. A figure standing among the roots of the oldest oak, its form shifting, dissolving, then reforming—something that wasn’t quite human, not quite animal, but something else entirely. Aurora’s stomach twisted. She’d never seen anything like it before. She took a step forward, her boots sinking into the damp earth. The pendant burned against her skin, its warmth intensifying, as if it sensed the danger. The figure turned, its gaze locking onto hers. Aurora’s breath hitched. It wasn’t looking at her—it was *seeing* her, as if she were something precious, something rare. Then the whisper came again, louder this time, closer. Aurora’s blood turned to ice. The voice was familiar, but she couldn’t place it. It was like a memory she couldn’t quite recall, a voice that had once belonged to someone she knew, but now belonged to something else entirely. Aurora’s hands shook. She reached for the pendant, her fingers brushing the cold metal. The warmth pulsed, a warning, a promise. She had to move. She had to get out of here. But the figure was already there, standing between her and the path back to the standing stones. Its form was unsteady, shifting like smoke, but it was there, blocking her way. Aurora’s mind raced. She’d come here for a reason, but now she wasn’t sure what that reason was anymore. She wasn’t sure what she was supposed to do. The pendant pulsed again, its warmth seeping into her skin. Aurora closed her eyes, her breath coming in short, sharp gasps. She had to think. She had to find a way out. Then the figure spoke. Its voice was like the rustling of leaves, but it was clear, precise, and *wrong*. Aurora’s stomach lurched. It was asking her a question, but she couldn’t understand the words. She only knew that she had to answer. Aurora opened her eyes, her gaze locked onto the figure. She had to get out of here. She had to find a way back to the standing stones, to the world beyond the grove. But the figure was still there, its form shifting, its voice a whisper in the dark. She took a deep breath. She had to think. She had to find a way to escape. The pendant pulsed again, its warmth intensifying. Aurora reached for it, her fingers brushing the cold metal. She had to act. She had to do something. Then the figure moved, its form dissolving into the darkness. Aurora’s breath caught in her throat. She had to run. She had to get out of here. She turned and ran, her boots pounding against the damp earth. The standing stones loomed ahead, but the figure was still there, its form shifting, its voice a whisper in the dark. Aurora didn’t stop. She didn’t look back. She ran, her heart pounding in her ears, her breath coming in ragged gasps. The standing stones were closer now, but the figure was still there, its form shifting, its voice a whisper in the dark. Aurora’s mind raced. She had to get out of here. She had to find a way back to the world beyond the grove. Then she saw it—a path, a way out. The standing stones were the only thing that made sense. She had to get through them. She had to get out of here. Aurora took a deep breath. She had to do it. She had to make it through. The standing stones loomed ahead, their carvings worn but unmistakable. She took a step forward, her boots sinking into the damp earth. The pendant pulsed again, its warmth intensifying. She had to make it through. She had to get out of here. Then the figure was there, its form shifting, its voice a whisper in the dark. Aurora’s breath hitched. She had to run. She had to get out of here. She turned and ran, her boots pounding against the damp earth. The standing stones were closer now, but the figure was still there, its form shifting, its voice a whisper in the dark. Aurora didn’t stop. She didn’t look back. She ran, her heart pounding in her ears, her breath coming in ragged gasps. The standing stones were ahead, but the figure was still there, its form shifting, its voice a whisper in the dark. Aurora’s mind raced. She had to get out of here. She had to find a way back to the world beyond the grove. Then she saw it—a light, a way out. The standing stones were the only thing that made sense. She had to make it through. She had to get out of here. Aurora took a deep breath. She had to do it. She had to make it through. The standing stones loomed ahead, their carvings worn but unmistakable. She took a step forward, her boots sinking into the damp earth. The pendant pulsed again, its warmth intensifying. She had to make it through. She had to get out of here. Then the figure was there, its form shifting, its voice a whisper in the dark. Aurora’s breath caught in her throat. She had to run. She had to get out of here. She turned and ran, her boots pounding against the damp earth. The standing stones were closer now, but the figure was still there, its form shifting, its voice a whisper in the dark. Aurora didn’t stop. She didn’t look back. She ran, her heart pounding in her ears, her breath coming in ragged gasps. The standing stones were ahead, but the figure was still there, its form shifting, its voice a whisper in the dark. Aurora’s fingers tightened around the pendant, her breath coming in sharp, desperate gasps. She had to make it through. She had to get out of here. Then the light appeared, a faint glow at the edge of the stones. She took one last look back, her heart pounding in her chest. The figure was still there, but it was fading, dissolving into the darkness. Aurora took a deep breath and ran, her boots pounding against the damp earth. The standing stones were ahead, and she made it through, her breath coming in ragged gasps. She stepped into the world beyond the grove, her heart pounding in her chest. She was safe. She was out of here. But as she turned to look back, she saw it—the figure was still there, its form shifting, its voice a whisper in the dark. Aurora’s breath hitched. She had to get out of here. She had to find a way back to the world beyond the grove. She turned and ran, her boots pounding against the damp earth. The standing stones were ahead, but the figure was still there, its form shifting, its voice a whisper in the dark. Aurora didn’t stop. She didn’t look back. She ran, her heart pounding in her ears, her breath coming in ragged gasps. The standing stones were ahead, but the figure was still there, its form shifting, its voice a whisper in the dark. Aurora’s fingers tightened around the pendant, her breath coming in sharp, desperate gasps. She had to make it through. She had not yet escaped. She took a step forward, the cold stone biting into her palms. The air here was different, heavier, as if the grove’s influence lingered even beyond the stones. The Heartstone pulsed against her skin, its warmth a faint, steady glow. She had to keep moving. Then she heard it—a sound like dry leaves skittering across stone. She turned, her pulse roaring in her ears, and saw the figure again, standing just beyond the edge of the clearing. It was smaller now, more defined, its form shifting like smoke caught in a draft. Its gaze locked onto her, and Aurora’s stomach twisted. She had to get out of here. She had to find a way back to the world beyond the grove. The pendant pulsed again, its warmth intensifying. Aurora took a deep breath and stepped forward, her boots sinking slightly into the damp earth. The standing stones were ahead, but the figure was still there, its form shifting, its voice a whisper in the dark. Aurora didn’t stop. She didn’t look back. She ran, her heart pounding in her ears, her breath coming in ragged gasps. The standing stones were closer now, but the figure was still there, its form shifting, its voice a whisper in the dark. Aurora’s fingers tightened around the pendant, her breath coming in sharp, desperate gasps. She had to make it through. She had to get out. She took one last look back, her vision blurring with tears. The figure was still there, its form shifting, its voice a whisper in the dark. Aurora turned and ran, her boots pounding against the damp earth. The standing stones were ahead, but the figure was still there, its form shifting, its voice a whisper in the dark. She didn’t stop. She didn’t look back. The standing stones loomed ahead, their ancient carvings etched into the stone like warnings. Aurora took a deep breath and ran, her heart pounding in her chest. The pendant burned against her skin, its warmth a steady, unyielding glow. She made it through the stones, her breath coming in sharp, desperate gasps. The world beyond was familiar, the air clean and sharp. She turned, her gaze sweeping the clearing, but the figure was gone. Aurora collapsed to her knees, her breath coming in ragged gasps. She had made it out. She had escaped. But as she sat there, the weight of what had happened settled over her like a shroud. The Heartstone pulsed against her skin, its warmth a faint, steady glow. She had come here for a reason, but now she wasn’t sure what that reason was anymore. She had to get out of here. She had to find a way back to the world beyond the grove. Aurora closed her eyes, her breath coming in shallow gasps. She had to think. She had to find a way to make sense of it all. Then she heard it—a sound like dry leaves skittering across stone. Aurora’s breath hitched. She opened her eyes, her gaze sweeping the clearing. The figure was there, standing just beyond the edge of the trees. It was smaller now, more defined, its form shifting like smoke caught in a draft. Its gaze locked onto her, and Aurora’s stomach twisted. She had to get out of here. She had to find a way back to the world beyond the grove. Aurora took a deep breath and stood, her boots sinking slightly into the damp earth. The Heartstone pulsed against her skin, its warmth intensifying. She had to make it through. She took a step forward, her gaze locked onto the figure. It was still there, its form shifting, its voice a whisper in the dark. Aurora didn’t stop. She didn’t look back. She ran, her heart pounding in her ears, her breath coming in ragged gasps. The standing stones were ahead, but the figure was still there, its form shifting, its voice a whisper in the dark. Aurora’s fingers tightened around the pendant, her breath coming in sharp, desperate gasps. She had to make it through. She had to get out. She turned and ran, her boots pounding against the damp earth. The standing stones were closer now, but the figure was still there, its form shifting, its voice a whisper in the dark. Aurora’s mind raced. She had to get out of here. She had to find a way back to the world beyond the grove. The pendant pulsed again, its warmth a steady, unyielding glow. Aurora took a deep breath and ran, her heart pounding in her chest. She made it through the stones, her breath coming in sharp, desperate gasps. The world beyond was clean and sharp, the air crisp and familiar. She turned, her gaze sweeping the clearing, but the figure was gone. Aurora collapsed to her knees, her breath coming in ragged gasps. She had made it out. She had escaped. But as she sat there, the weight of the grove pressed down on her like a physical force. The Heartstone pulsed against her skin, its warmth a faint, steady glow. She had come here for a reason, but now she wasn’t sure what that reason was anymore. She had to go. She had to leave before it was too late. Aurora stood, her boots sinking slightly into the damp earth. The standing stones were behind her, the grove fading into the distance. She took a deep breath and turned, her gaze locked onto the familiar path back to the city. But as she walked, she couldn’t shake the feeling that she wasn’t alone. The air was thick with something unseen, something that clung to her like a second skin. The Heartstone pulsed against her skin, its warmth a steady, unyielding glow. Aurora’s breath came in shallow gasps. She had to get out of here. She had to find a way to make sense of it all. She walked, her boots pounding against the damp earth, her gaze locked onto the path ahead. The grove was behind her, but the feeling of being watched lingered, a shadow that followed her like a ghost. Aurora stopped, her breath coming in sharp gasps. She had to think. She had to find a way to make sense of it all. The Heartstone pulsed against her skin, its warmth intensifying. She had to make it through. She took a deep breath and turned, her gaze sweeping the clearing. The standing stones were ahead, but the feeling of being watched lingered, a shadow that followed her like a ghost. Aurora’s fingers tightened around the pendant. She had to get out. She had to leave before it was too late. She took a step forward, her boots sinking slightly into the damp earth. The air was different here, heavier, as if the grove’s influence lingered even beyond the stones. Aurora took another step, her breath coming in shallow gasps. The Heartstone pulsed against her skin, its warmth a steady glow. She had to make it through. Aurora turned, her gaze fixed on the path ahead. The standing stones were closer now, but the feeling of being watched persisted, a whisper in the dark. She took a deep breath and ran, her boots pounding against the earth. The pendant burned against her skin, its warmth a steady glow. She made it through the stones, her breath coming in sharp gasps. The world beyond was clean, the air crisp and familiar. Aurora stopped, her breath coming in ragged gasps. She had made it out. She had escaped. But as she stood there, the weight of the grove pressed down on her. The Heartstone pulsed faintly, its warmth a reminder of what she’d faced. She had to go. She had to leave before the influence of the grove took hold. Aurora turned, her gaze sweeping the familiar path back to the city. The standing stones were behind her, the grove fading into the distance. She took a deep breath and walked, her boots sinking slightly into the damp earth. The air was clean, but the feeling of being watched lingered, a shadow that followed her like a memory she couldn’t quite recall. Aurora’s fingers tightened around the pendant. She had to get out. She had to leave before it was too late. She walked, her breath coming in shallow gasps, the path ahead familiar but the air around her heavy with something unseen. The Heartstone pulsed against her skin, its warmth a faint, steady glow. She had to make it through. Aurora stopped, her gaze fixed on the distant glow of London. The standing stones were behind her, the grove’s influence fading, but the feeling of being watched remained. She took a deep breath and turned, her boots sinking into the earth. The path was clear, the air clean. But as she walked, the Heartstone pulsed again, its warmth intensifying. Aurora’s breath hitched. She had made it out, but something was still wrong. She had to leave. She had to go. Aurora walked faster, her boots pounding against the earth. The standing stones were behind her, the grove’s influence fading, but the feeling of being watched clung to her like a second skin. She reached the edge of the trees, her breath coming in sharp gasps. The city was ahead, the familiar glow of lights a beacon. Aurora stopped, her gaze sweeping the familiar streets. The Heartstone pulsed against her skin, its warmth a steady glow. She had made it out. She had escaped. But as she stood there, the weight of what she’d faced settled over her like a shroud. The feeling of being watched lingered, a shadow that followed her like a memory she couldn’t quite recall. Aurora took a deep breath and turned, her gaze fixed on the familiar path ahead. The city was close now, the lights twinkling like stars against the night sky. She had to leave. She had to go. Aurora walked, her boots sinking slightly into the damp earth. The air was clean, but the feeling of being watched persisted, a whisper in the dark. She reached the end of the path, her breath coming in shallow gasps. The Heartstone pulsed against her skin, its warmth a faint, steady glow. Aurora stopped, her gaze sweeping the familiar streets. The city was ahead, the lights twinkling like stars against the night sky. She had made it out. She had escaped. But as she stood there, the weight of the grove pressed down on her. The feeling of being watched lingered, a shadow that followed her like a ghost. Aurora took a deep breath and turned, her gaze fixed on the familiar path ahead. The city was close now, the lights waiting just beyond the horizon. She had to leave. She had to go. Aurora walked, her boots pounding against the earth, the Heartstone burning against her skin. The feeling of being watched was still there, but she was safe now. She was out of the grove. She had made it.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
89.79% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount3429
totalAiIsmAdverbs7
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count6
highlights
0"slowly"
1"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount3429
totalAiIsms134
found
0
word"whisper"
count24
1
word"pulse"
count3
2
word"warmth"
count24
3
word"weight"
count6
4
word"loomed"
count6
5
word"pulsed"
count20
6
word"rhythmic"
count1
7
word"pounding"
count22
8
word"stomach"
count4
9
word"familiar"
count12
10
word"raced"
count4
11
word"lurched"
count1
12
word"roaring"
count1
13
word"etched"
count1
14
word"sense of"
count3
15
word"reminder"
count1
16
word"beacon"
count1
highlights
0"whisper"
1"pulse"
2"warmth"
3"weight"
4"loomed"
5"pulsed"
6"rhythmic"
7"pounding"
8"stomach"
9"familiar"
10"raced"
11"lurched"
12"roaring"
13"etched"
14"sense of"
15"reminder"
16"beacon"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"air was thick with"
count1
highlights
0"The air was thick with"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences326
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences326
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences326
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen28
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans4
markdownWords10
totalWords3418
ratio0.003
matches
0"hungry"
1"This is where it’s supposed to be"
2"seeing"
3"wrong"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions1
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
59.30% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions84
wordCount3418
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity1.81
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
Carter1
Heartstone15
London2
Fae1
Grove1
Aurora62
persons
0"Carter"
1"Heartstone"
2"Aurora"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"London"
3"Fae"
4"Grove"
globalScore0.593
windowScore0.833
69.68% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences249
glossingSentenceCount8
matches
0"as if reaching for something unseen"
1"figures that seemed to watch her from the dark"
2"felt like a cage"
3"quite human, slithering through the branches"
4"quite human, not quite animal, but something else entirely"
5"quite recall, a voice that had once belonged to someone she knew, but now belonged to something else entirely"
6"quite recall"
7"quite recall"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords0.585
wordCount3418
matches
0"Not just the usual quiet of the night, but something deeper, something"
1"not quite animal, but something else entirely"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences326
matches
0"knew that she"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs117
mean29.21
std14.97
cv0.512
sampleLengths
097
172
260
353
42
545
641
74
852
954
1049
1132
1259
1332
144
1538
1650
1717
1826
1927
2053
2145
2231
2316
2442
2529
2654
2744
2831
2916
3042
3132
3233
3321
3421
3526
3652
3738
3824
3923
4032
4121
4221
4324
4445
4556
4620
4744
4821
4922
99.88% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount5
totalSentences326
matches
0"was supposed"
1"was supposed"
2"was supposed"
3"was gone"
4"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs584
matches
0"was *seeing"
1"was asking"
55.21% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount11
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences10
totalSentences326
ratio0.031
matches
0"The pulse of warmth beneath her skin was faint, barely perceptible, but it was there—just as it had been since she’d left London hours ago."
1"The standing stones at the edge of the clearing loomed larger, their carvings worn but unmistakable—figures that seemed to watch her from the dark."
2"But then—just for a second—she thought she heard it: a whisper, a voice that wasn’t quite human, slithering through the branches."
3"A figure standing among the roots of the oldest oak, its form shifting, dissolving, then reforming—something that wasn’t quite human, not quite animal, but something else entirely."
4"It wasn’t looking at her—it was *seeing* her, as if she were something precious, something rare."
5"Then she saw it—a path, a way out."
6"Then she saw it—a light, a way out."
7"But as she turned to look back, she saw it—the figure was still there, its form shifting, its voice a whisper in the dark."
8"Then she heard it—a sound like dry leaves skittering across stone."
9"Then she heard it—a sound like dry leaves skittering across stone."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount3429
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount74
adverbRatio0.0215806357538641
lyAdverbCount15
lyAdverbRatio0.004374453193350831
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences326
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences326
mean10.48
std5.59
cv0.534
sampleLengths
025
121
225
326
414
516
620
722
84
911
104
1117
1224
138
1411
1517
1617
172
182
193
208
2121
2211
234
249
2512
2616
274
2815
2927
303
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353
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379
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399
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27.30% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats74
diversityRatio0.03680981595092025
totalSentences326
uniqueOpeners12
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount11
totalSentences324
matches
0"Then she saw it."
1"Then the whisper came again,"
2"Then the figure spoke."
3"Then the figure moved, its"
4"Then she saw it—a path,"
5"Then the figure was there,"
6"Then she saw it—a light,"
7"Then the figure was there,"
8"Then the light appeared, a"
9"Then she heard it—a sound"
10"Then she heard it—a sound"
ratio0.034
26.17% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount157
totalSentences324
matches
0"She’d come to The Fae"
1"She’d expected the grove to"
2"She stopped, her pulse hammering"
3"She turned slowly, her heart"
4"She’d come here for a"
5"She’d never seen anything like"
6"She took a step forward,"
7"It wasn’t looking at her—it"
8"It was like a memory"
9"She reached for the pendant,"
10"She had to move."
11"She had to get out"
12"Its form was unsteady, shifting"
13"She’d come here for a"
14"She wasn’t sure what she"
15"She had to think."
16"She had to find a"
17"Its voice was like the"
18"It was asking her a"
19"She only knew that she"
ratio0.485
1.67% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount297
totalSentences324
matches
0"The air in Richmond Park"
1"Aurora Carter adjusted the strap"
2"The pulse of warmth beneath"
3"She’d come to The Fae"
4"The grove was supposed to"
5"The wildflowers swayed in the"
6"Aurora’s breath came shallow."
7"She’d expected the grove to"
8"The trees loomed taller than"
9"The standing stones at the"
10"She stopped, her pulse hammering"
11"The Heartstone pulsed again, a"
12"*This is where it’s supposed"
13"The grove was supposed to"
14"She turned slowly, her heart"
15"The air grew colder."
16"The flowers around her withered,"
17"Aurora’s fingers tightened around the"
18"She’d come here for a"
19"A shape, just beyond the"
ratio0.917
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences324
matches(empty)
ratio0
58.59% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences178
technicalSentenceCount21
matches
0"The air in Richmond Park was thick with the scent of damp earth and something older, something that clung to the trees like a whisper."
1"The wildflowers swayed in the breeze, their petals trembling as if in slow motion, though the wind itself seemed to have stopped."
2"The trees loomed taller than she remembered, their branches twisting unnaturally, as if reaching for something unseen."
3"The standing stones at the edge of the clearing loomed larger, their carvings worn but unmistakable—figures that seemed to watch her from the dark."
4"A figure standing among the roots of the oldest oak, its form shifting, dissolving, then reforming—something that wasn’t quite human, not quite animal, but some…"
5"The pendant burned against her skin, its warmth intensifying, as if it sensed the danger."
6"It wasn’t looking at her—it was *seeing* her, as if she were something precious, something rare."
7"She ran, her heart pounding in her ears, her breath coming in ragged gasps."
8"She ran, her heart pounding in her ears, her breath coming in ragged gasps."
9"She ran, her heart pounding in her ears, her breath coming in ragged gasps."
10"She ran, her heart pounding in her ears, her breath coming in ragged gasps."
11"The air here was different, heavier, as if the grove’s influence lingered even beyond the stones."
12"She turned, her pulse roaring in her ears, and saw the figure again, standing just beyond the edge of the clearing."
13"She ran, her heart pounding in her ears, her breath coming in ragged gasps."
14"She ran, her heart pounding in her ears, her breath coming in ragged gasps."
15"The air was thick with something unseen, something that clung to her like a second skin."
16"The standing stones were ahead, but the feeling of being watched lingered, a shadow that followed her like a ghost."
17"The air was different here, heavier, as if the grove’s influence lingered even beyond the stones."
18"The standing stones were behind her, the grove’s influence fading, but the feeling of being watched remained."
19"The standing stones were behind her, the grove’s influence fading, but the feeling of being watched clung to her like a second skin."
20"Aurora walked, her boots pounding against the earth, the Heartstone burning against her skin."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
79.5866%