| 0.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 4 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "And then pressed the pendant into her hand and vanished [then]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 5 | | tagDensity | 0.8 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.25 | | effectiveRatio | 0.25 | |
| 89.87% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 987 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 8.81% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 987 | | totalAiIsms | 18 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulsed" | | 1 | "warmth" | | 2 | "gloom" | | 3 | "stomach" | | 4 | "familiar" | | 5 | "reminder" | | 6 | "scanned" | | 7 | "oppressive" | | 8 | "silence" | | 9 | "weight" | | 10 | "resonated" | | 11 | "throbbed" | | 12 | "scanning" | | 13 | "flicker" | | 14 | "whisper" |
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| 66.67% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 2 | | maxInWindow | 2 | | found | | 0 | | label | "clenched jaw/fists" | | count | 1 |
| | 1 | | label | "wave of emotion" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "clenched her jaw" | | 1 | "a wave of nausea" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 101 | | matches | | |
| 86.28% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 4 | | narrationSentences | 101 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 103 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 46 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 1 | | markdownWords | 1 | | totalWords | 980 | | ratio | 0.001 | | matches | | |
| 25.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 5 | | unquotedAttributions | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "A pocket between worlds, they said." | | 1 | "A rabbit, she told herself." |
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| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 30 | | wordCount | 957 | | uniqueNames | 15 | | maxNameDensity | 0.94 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Grove | 3 | | London | 2 | | Park | 2 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Pendant | 1 | | Rory | 9 | | Camden | 2 | | High | 1 | | Street | 1 | | Fae | 1 | | Isolde | 1 | | Richmond | 2 | | Evan | 1 | | Pad | 1 | | Thai | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Pendant" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Isolde" | | 3 | "Evan" |
| | places | | 0 | "Grove" | | 1 | "London" | | 2 | "Park" | | 3 | "Camden" | | 4 | "High" | | 5 | "Street" | | 6 | "Fae" | | 7 | "Richmond" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 48.65% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 74 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like a prop in a badly written pla" | | 1 | "vibration that seemed to emanate from the ground itself" | | 2 | "appeared more intense almost too vibrant" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 2.041 | | wordCount | 980 | | matches | | 0 | "Not a visual presence, but a weight in the air, a feeling of being watched" | | 1 | "Not around her now, but directly behind her" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 103 | | matches | | 0 | "feeling that she’d" | | 1 | "learned that much" |
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| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 27 | | mean | 36.3 | | std | 19.04 | | cv | 0.525 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 65 | | 1 | 55 | | 2 | 64 | | 3 | 77 | | 4 | 55 | | 5 | 52 | | 6 | 58 | | 7 | 22 | | 8 | 53 | | 9 | 42 | | 10 | 44 | | 11 | 24 | | 12 | 35 | | 13 | 32 | | 14 | 15 | | 15 | 31 | | 16 | 27 | | 17 | 47 | | 18 | 25 | | 19 | 29 | | 20 | 12 | | 21 | 34 | | 22 | 17 | | 23 | 13 | | 24 | 42 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 7 |
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| 94.84% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 101 | | matches | | 0 | "been filtered" | | 1 | "was gone" | | 2 | "was accompanied" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 143 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 31.90% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 6 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 4 | | totalSentences | 103 | | ratio | 0.039 | | matches | | 0 | "As if the usual London hum—the distant sirens, the rumble of traffic—had been filtered out, leaving only a dense quiet pressing in on her ears." | | 1 | "The benefactor—a tall woman with eyes like polished slate and a voice like wind chimes—had been frustratingly vague." | | 2 | "Wildflowers, defiant and vibrant despite the hour, carpeted the ground—bluebells, primroses, and something she couldn’t name, their petals luminous in the gloom." | | 3 | "It was accompanied now by a new sound, a faint clicking—like insects, but larger, more deliberate." |
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| 71.51% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 118 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 7 | | adverbRatio | 0.059322033898305086 | | lyAdverbCount | 4 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.03389830508474576 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 103 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 103 | | mean | 9.51 | | std | 6.64 | | cv | 0.697 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 17 | | 1 | 8 | | 2 | 2 | | 3 | 25 | | 4 | 13 | | 5 | 13 | | 6 | 28 | | 7 | 5 | | 8 | 7 | | 9 | 2 | | 10 | 18 | | 11 | 46 | | 12 | 15 | | 13 | 16 | | 14 | 7 | | 15 | 6 | | 16 | 23 | | 17 | 6 | | 18 | 4 | | 19 | 8 | | 20 | 22 | | 21 | 14 | | 22 | 5 | | 23 | 6 | | 24 | 4 | | 25 | 4 | | 26 | 1 | | 27 | 7 | | 28 | 8 | | 29 | 15 | | 30 | 7 | | 31 | 6 | | 32 | 6 | | 33 | 5 | | 34 | 3 | | 35 | 5 | | 36 | 13 | | 37 | 13 | | 38 | 13 | | 39 | 14 | | 40 | 2 | | 41 | 6 | | 42 | 22 | | 43 | 13 | | 44 | 3 | | 45 | 3 | | 46 | 6 | | 47 | 6 | | 48 | 13 | | 49 | 1 |
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| 47.90% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 9 | | diversityRatio | 0.33980582524271846 | | totalSentences | 103 | | uniqueOpeners | 35 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 95 | | matches | | 0 | "Just a rabbit." | | 1 | "Just the continuing rustle, closer" | | 2 | "Definitely closer now." | | 3 | "Just the trees, the stones," | | 4 | "At least, not entirely." |
| | ratio | 0.053 | |
| 85.26% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 32 | | totalSentences | 95 | | matches | | 0 | "She checked the Heartstone Pendant" | | 1 | "It meant she was close." | | 2 | "She’d read about it, of" | | 3 | "It was beautiful, undeniably so," | | 4 | "She’d learned that much from" | | 5 | "It clung to the back" | | 6 | "She ran a hand over" | | 7 | "It circled her, a slow," | | 8 | "She scanned the periphery of" | | 9 | "she called out, her voice" | | 10 | "She tightened her grip on" | | 11 | "Her gaze fixed on a" | | 12 | "She blinked, and it was" | | 13 | "She needed logic." | | 14 | "She was tired, stressed, and" | | 15 | "It was a hum." | | 16 | "It resonated in her teeth," | | 17 | "It throbbed against her skin," | | 18 | "She turned slowly, scanning the" | | 19 | "Their colors appeared more intense," |
| | ratio | 0.337 | |
| 70.53% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 74 | | totalSentences | 95 | | matches | | 0 | "The gate creaked closed behind" | | 1 | "Rory shivered, though the air" | | 2 | "Richmond Park at night, even" | | 3 | "She checked the Heartstone Pendant" | | 4 | "The crimson gem, no bigger" | | 5 | "It meant she was close." | | 6 | "The benefactor—a tall woman with" | | 7 | "The standing stones were unmistakable," | | 8 | "This was the Fae Grove," | | 9 | "She’d read about it, of" | | 10 | "Every urban legend in London" | | 11 | "A pocket between worlds, they" | | 12 | "Time flowed differently here." | | 13 | "Rory took a tentative step" | | 14 | "Wildflowers, defiant and vibrant despite" | | 15 | "It was beautiful, undeniably so," | | 16 | "She’d learned that much from" | | 17 | "The air smelled wrong." | | 18 | "It clung to the back" | | 19 | "She ran a hand over" |
| | ratio | 0.779 | |
| 52.63% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 95 | | matches | | 0 | "As if the usual London" |
| | ratio | 0.011 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 37 | | technicalSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "As if the usual London hum—the distant sirens, the rumble of traffic—had been filtered out, leaving only a dense quiet pressing in on her ears." | | 1 | "It throbbed against her skin, a frantic beat that mirrored her own heartbeat." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 4 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "she called out, her voice sounding thin and reedy in the oppressive silence" | | 1 | "she muttered, her voice barely a whisper this time" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 3 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "And then pressed the pendant into her hand and vanished (press vanish)" | | 1 | "she called out (call out)" | | 2 | "she muttered (mutter)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 5 | | tagDensity | 0.6 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 1 | |