Run: 2026-02-20-01KHYAH19MGB9B1TJ77C3Q8Y3Q

Run Details

Duration:
37.5s
Cost:
$0.000205
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The gate creaked closed behind her, the sound swallowed almost instantly by the stillness of the Grove. Rory shivered, though the air wasn't particularly cold. It was…muted. As if the usual London hum—the distant sirens, the rumble of traffic—had been filtered out, leaving only a dense quiet pressing in on her ears. Richmond Park at night, even this secluded corner, shouldn’t have felt this stifling. She checked the Heartstone Pendant tucked beneath the collar of her delivery jacket. The crimson gem, no bigger than her thumbnail, pulsed weakly against her skin, a subtle warmth that hadn’t been there when she’d left her flat above Silas’ bar. It meant she was close. Close to what, she wasn't entirely sure. Just close. The benefactor—a tall woman with eyes like polished slate and a voice like wind chimes—had been frustratingly vague. “It calls to you, doesn’t it? The legacy. The… imbalance.” And then pressed the pendant into her hand and vanished, leaving Rory standing alone on a drizzly Camden High Street with a cryptic warning and a feeling that she’d stumbled into something far larger than herself. The standing stones were unmistakable, even in the dim moonlight filtering through the dense canopy. Ancient oaks, their gnarled branches interwoven, formed a circle, and the lichen-covered stones stood guard within. This was the Fae Grove, Isolde’s Grove. She’d read about it, of course. Every urban legend in London had a connection to some forgotten corner of Richmond Park, and this was the queen of them all. A pocket between worlds, they said. Time flowed differently here. Rory took a tentative step into the clearing. Wildflowers, defiant and vibrant despite the hour, carpeted the ground—bluebells, primroses, and something she couldn’t name, their petals luminous in the gloom. It was beautiful, undeniably so, but a tremor of unease coiled in her stomach. Beautiful things could be dangerous. She’d learned that much from Evan. The air smelled wrong. Not rotten, not exactly. Just…off. Like too much sweetness, cloying and unsettling. It clung to the back of her throat. She ran a hand over the crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist, a familiar comfort. A clumsy childhood fall from a tree. A reminder of a simpler time. A rustling sound made her jump. A rabbit, she told herself. Just a rabbit. But the rustling didn't stop. It circled her, a slow, deliberate movement beyond what a rabbit would do. She scanned the periphery of the clearing, her heart hammering against her ribs. The moonlight cast long, distorted shadows, making it difficult to discern anything clearly. "Hello?" she called out, her voice sounding thin and reedy in the oppressive silence. No reply. Just the continuing rustle, closer now. She tightened her grip on the delivery bag slung over her shoulder, the weight of the unsold Pad Thai a meager comfort. Her gaze fixed on a patch of shadow beneath one of the oaks. Something was there. Something shifting, indistinct. A trick of the light, probably. She blinked, and it was gone. Rory took a deep breath, trying to control the fluttering in her chest. Logic. She needed logic. She was tired, stressed, and possibly imagining things. The woman in Camden had seemed…unreal. The pendant felt like a prop in a badly written play. Another sound. This time, it wasn’t a rustle. It was a hum. A low, resonant vibration that seemed to emanate from the ground itself. It resonated in her teeth, in the bones of her skull. Rory clenched her jaw, trying to block it out. The Heartstone pulsed again, this time noticeably warmer. It throbbed against her skin, a frantic beat that mirrored her own heartbeat. Definitely closer now. She turned slowly, scanning the clearing. The wildflowers seemed to be swaying, though there was no wind. Their colors appeared more intense, almost too vibrant. Their scent intensified as well, triggering a wave of nausea. Something moved at the edge of her vision, a flicker of white amongst the shadows. She spun around, but there was nothing there. Just the trees, the stones, the unnervingly bright flowers. “This is ridiculous,” she muttered, her voice barely a whisper this time. “I’m being paranoid.” But the humming intensified. It was accompanied now by a new sound, a faint clicking—like insects, but larger, more deliberate. It seemed to be coming from within the standing stones themselves. She felt a presence. Not a visual presence, but a weight in the air, a feeling of being watched. Hundreds of eyes on her, cold and assessing. The temperature in the clearing dropped suddenly, and Rory pulled her jacket tighter around her. A fine mist began to swirl, clinging to the wildflowers and obscuring the stones. The moon, which had been shining brightly just moments ago, was now hidden behind a veil of clouds. Rory's breath hitched in her throat. The rustling started again, closer than ever. Not around her now, but directly behind her. She didn't dare turn. One of the wildflowers, a deep violet bloom, swayed directly in front of her face. As she watched, its petals unfolded further, revealing a cluster of tiny, chitinous legs. Rory choked back a scream. They weren’t wildflowers. At least, not entirely. The pendant flared, burning against her skin. It pulsed with an almost unbearable heat. The humming escalated to a deafening drone. The clicking intensified, resonating from the stones, from the ground, from *within* her. A voice, impossibly old and laced with glacial indifference, whispered in her ear. “You shouldn’t have come.” Rory finally turned, and what she saw stole the air from her lungs. Standing just beyond the circle of stones, partially obscured by the swirling mist, were figures. Tall and slender, their forms shifting and indistinct. They weren’t human. Their limbs were too long, their faces too smooth, their eyes glowing with an unnatural luminescence. They were smiling. And they were all looking at her.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
0.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags4
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"And then pressed the pendant into her hand and vanished [then]"
dialogueSentences5
tagDensity0.8
leniency1
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.25
89.87% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount987
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
8.81% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount987
totalAiIsms18
found
0
word"pulsed"
count3
1
word"warmth"
count1
2
word"gloom"
count1
3
word"stomach"
count1
4
word"familiar"
count1
5
word"reminder"
count1
6
word"scanned"
count1
7
word"oppressive"
count1
8
word"silence"
count1
9
word"weight"
count2
10
word"resonated"
count1
11
word"throbbed"
count1
12
word"scanning"
count1
13
word"flicker"
count1
14
word"whisper"
count1
highlights
0"pulsed"
1"warmth"
2"gloom"
3"stomach"
4"familiar"
5"reminder"
6"scanned"
7"oppressive"
8"silence"
9"weight"
10"resonated"
11"throbbed"
12"scanning"
13"flicker"
14"whisper"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"clenched jaw/fists"
count1
1
label"wave of emotion"
count1
highlights
0"clenched her jaw"
1"a wave of nausea"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences101
matches
0"a tremor of unease"
86.28% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences101
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences103
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen46
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords1
totalWords980
ratio0.001
matches
0"within"
25.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions2
matches
0"A pocket between worlds, they said."
1"A rabbit, she told herself."
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions30
wordCount957
uniqueNames15
maxNameDensity0.94
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Grove3
London2
Park2
Heartstone2
Pendant1
Rory9
Camden2
High1
Street1
Fae1
Isolde1
Richmond2
Evan1
Pad1
Thai1
persons
0"Pendant"
1"Rory"
2"Isolde"
3"Evan"
places
0"Grove"
1"London"
2"Park"
3"Camden"
4"High"
5"Street"
6"Fae"
7"Richmond"
globalScore1
windowScore1
48.65% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences74
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"felt like a prop in a badly written pla"
1"vibration that seemed to emanate from the ground itself"
2"appeared more intense almost too vibrant"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords2.041
wordCount980
matches
0"Not a visual presence, but a weight in the air, a feeling of being watched"
1"Not around her now, but directly behind her"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences103
matches
0"feeling that she’d"
1"learned that much"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs27
mean36.3
std19.04
cv0.525
sampleLengths
065
155
264
377
455
552
658
722
853
942
1044
1124
1235
1332
1415
1531
1627
1747
1825
1929
2012
2134
2217
2313
2442
253
267
94.84% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences101
matches
0"been filtered"
1"was gone"
2"was accompanied"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs143
matches(empty)
31.90% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences103
ratio0.039
matches
0"As if the usual London hum—the distant sirens, the rumble of traffic—had been filtered out, leaving only a dense quiet pressing in on her ears."
1"The benefactor—a tall woman with eyes like polished slate and a voice like wind chimes—had been frustratingly vague."
2"Wildflowers, defiant and vibrant despite the hour, carpeted the ground—bluebells, primroses, and something she couldn’t name, their petals luminous in the gloom."
3"It was accompanied now by a new sound, a faint clicking—like insects, but larger, more deliberate."
71.51% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount118
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount7
adverbRatio0.059322033898305086
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.03389830508474576
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences103
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences103
mean9.51
std6.64
cv0.697
sampleLengths
017
18
22
325
413
513
628
75
87
92
1018
1146
1215
1316
147
156
1623
176
184
198
2022
2114
225
236
244
254
261
277
288
2915
307
316
326
335
343
355
3613
3713
3813
3914
402
416
4222
4313
443
453
466
476
4813
491
47.90% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.33980582524271846
totalSentences103
uniqueOpeners35
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount5
totalSentences95
matches
0"Just a rabbit."
1"Just the continuing rustle, closer"
2"Definitely closer now."
3"Just the trees, the stones,"
4"At least, not entirely."
ratio0.053
85.26% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount32
totalSentences95
matches
0"She checked the Heartstone Pendant"
1"It meant she was close."
2"She’d read about it, of"
3"It was beautiful, undeniably so,"
4"She’d learned that much from"
5"It clung to the back"
6"She ran a hand over"
7"It circled her, a slow,"
8"She scanned the periphery of"
9"she called out, her voice"
10"She tightened her grip on"
11"Her gaze fixed on a"
12"She blinked, and it was"
13"She needed logic."
14"She was tired, stressed, and"
15"It was a hum."
16"It resonated in her teeth,"
17"It throbbed against her skin,"
18"She turned slowly, scanning the"
19"Their colors appeared more intense,"
ratio0.337
70.53% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount74
totalSentences95
matches
0"The gate creaked closed behind"
1"Rory shivered, though the air"
2"Richmond Park at night, even"
3"She checked the Heartstone Pendant"
4"The crimson gem, no bigger"
5"It meant she was close."
6"The benefactor—a tall woman with"
7"The standing stones were unmistakable,"
8"This was the Fae Grove,"
9"She’d read about it, of"
10"Every urban legend in London"
11"A pocket between worlds, they"
12"Time flowed differently here."
13"Rory took a tentative step"
14"Wildflowers, defiant and vibrant despite"
15"It was beautiful, undeniably so,"
16"She’d learned that much from"
17"The air smelled wrong."
18"It clung to the back"
19"She ran a hand over"
ratio0.779
52.63% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences95
matches
0"As if the usual London"
ratio0.011
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences37
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"As if the usual London hum—the distant sirens, the rumble of traffic—had been filtered out, leaving only a dense quiet pressing in on her ears."
1"It throbbed against her skin, a frantic beat that mirrored her own heartbeat."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags4
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"she called out, her voice sounding thin and reedy in the oppressive silence"
1"she muttered, her voice barely a whisper this time"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"And then pressed the pendant into her hand and vanished (press vanish)"
1"she called out (call out)"
2"she muttered (mutter)"
dialogueSentences5
tagDensity0.6
leniency1
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio1
69.3283%