Run: 2026-02-20-01KHYAJ5B088PSYWTBS6D9PX8T

Run Details

Duration:
2m 10s
Cost:
$0.011028
Provider:
Seed

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
Rory’s delivery bag still reeked of Yu-Fei’s garlic fried rice when she cut off the Golden Empress’s electric scooter at the edge of Richmond Park. The January air bit through her black puffer jacket, and she rubbed the crescent scar on her left wrist—old habit, from the childhood fall that had split the skin on a slate step—while she fumbled in her pocket for the crumpled note. The paper was smudged with soy sauce, its ink faint: Heartstone’s pulse leads to Isolde’s Grove. Richmond Park’s oak stones mark the way. Beware the Hel portal’s hush. She’d found it tucked into her delivery bag three days prior, no return address, no name—only the same curling script that had accompanied the Heartstone Pendant when it arrived on her flat’s doormat above Silas’ bar two weeks before. At 5’6”, she had to crane her neck to scan the park’s treeline for any sign of the ancient oaks the note mentioned. Her straight shoulder-length black hair caught on a bramble as she hiked off the paved path, and she tucked a strand behind her ear, bright blue eyes narrowing at the frost-crusted grass. Winter in Cardiff had never felt this sharp, but London’s nights were a different breed—empty, hungry, like the city was holding its breath. She’d hesitated before coming; Evan’s ghost still lingered in the edges of her decisions, his sharp words echoing when she dared to take risks. But the pendant’s faint inner glow had been taunting her, its silver chain digging into her chest whenever she forgot it was there, and her cool-headed, quick-thinking nature couldn’t let the mystery lie. She pulled the pendant from beneath her shirt when the first pulse hit—warm, faint, like a bird’s heartbeat against her palm. The deep crimson gemstone, roughly the size of her thumbnail, glowed just barely enough to catch the moonlight filtering through the oaks. She’d researched Dymas, the pendant’s origin realm, at Cardiff University’s old library before fleeing to London, but the books had held nothing—only faded sketches of similar artifacts, no explanations. The unknown benefactor was her only lead. The first sign of the grove came not from the oaks, but from the wildflowers. She stepped over a frost heap and froze. Beneath a gnarled oak, a carpet of daisies, poppies, and bluebells bloomed so brightly they looked painted. Poppies in January? Bluebells that usually faded by May? Her out-of-the-box thinking kicked in—she knelt, brushing a daisy’s petal with her scarred wrist, and felt no frost on its stem. The flower bent away from her touch, slow as a sigh, and she jerked her hand back. That was when she saw them: the standing stones, three ancient oaks petrified into gray, moss-covered monoliths, marking a circular boundary around the flower-carpeted clearing. The note’s words thrummed in her head: oak stones mark the way. She stood, her boots crunching on frost that vanished the moment she stepped within a foot of the stones. The air shifted when she crossed the boundary—thicker, sweeter, like honey mixed with rot. She pulled out her phone to check the time: 9:17 PM. She blinked, and the screen flickered to 9:03 PM. Blinked again, and it was 9:22 PM. Her stomach twisted. The grove’s time warping had been a vague hint in the note, but now it was real—an hour inside could be minutes or days outside. She stuffed the phone back in her pocket, the pendant’s pulse growing warmer, faster, as she stepped deeper into the clearing. The Fae Grove was a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm, she’d deduced from the note’s vague hints, but standing in it felt like being trapped in a dream someone had forgotten to finish. No wind stirred the oaks, but their leaves rustled anyway—soft, insistent, like a crowd whispering secrets she couldn’t hear. She walked toward the clearing’s center, the wildflowers leaning away from her path as if she carried a plague. A sound pricked her ears: a child’s laugh, high and bright, but twisted at the edges, like it had been stretched too thin. She spun, but there was nothing—only the petrified oaks, the blooming flowers, the faint glow of the pendant. Another sound: a bird call, sharp and metallic, nothing like the sparrows or crows she’d known in Cardiff. It came from the edge of her vision, and when she glanced that way, she saw a flash of pale skin—a hand, too long, too slender, gripping a petrified oak’s trunk. It vanished before she could focus, and she rubbed her scar again, her breath coming in short bursts. She was not alone. The certainty settled over her like a blanket of ice, and she reached for the pendant, now so warm it burned her palm. She reached the clearing’s center and froze. Beneath a petrified oak’s bough, a dark spot lingered on the flower carpet—no light, no sound, just a void that seemed to suck the moonlight out of the air. The pendant’s pulse roared in her chest, hot and fast, and she realized this was the Hel portal the note had warned about. She’d read about Hel portals in a fae lore book she’d borrowed from Silas’ bar—gateways between realms, dangerous when left unguarded. Her out-of-the-box thinking raced: if the pendant pulsed near them, maybe it could seal them? Or warn others? The rustling grew louder. She glanced to her left and saw it: a figure, pale as bone, standing between two oaks. It was too tall, its limbs too long, its head tilted at an angle that should have broken its neck. It didn’t move, but its eyes—if they were eyes—seemed to bore into her. She glanced to her right, and there was another, then a third, all pale, all too tall, their figures flickering at the edge of her vision like candle flames. They didn’t approach, but they didn’t leave, either—watching, waiting. Time shifted again. She felt like she’d been standing in the center of the grove for an hour, her legs aching, her scar throbbing, but when she fumbled for her phone, the screen flickered on for a split second: 9:18 PM. She’d been inside for a minute? An hour? She couldn’t tell. The wildflowers began to wilt and bloom in cycles—daisies turning brown, then red, then white, poppies folding into themselves and unfurling again—each cycle faster than the last. The metallic bird call grew louder, merging with the child’s twisted laugh until it was a single, piercing whine in her ears. She gripped the pendant so tight her scarred wrist ached. Her cool-headedness fought through the terror—she needed to leave. The standing stones were her only way out, but she’d lost track of them in the flickering figures and cycling flowers. She closed her eyes, focusing on the pendant’s pulse: when she turned left, it grew weaker; right, stronger. Wait—no, she realized, out-of-the-box thinking kicking in—if the portal was the source of the pulse, then moving away from the center would weaken it. She turned in the direction where the pulse slowed, and began walking, her eyes closed, counting her steps. One. Two. Three. The rustling faded a little. Four. Five. The child’s laugh died down. Six. Seven. She opened her eyes and saw the petrified oak stones ahead, their moss-covered surfaces glinting in the moonlight. The wildflowers stopped cycling when she stepped toward them, bending toward her now, as if begging her to stay. She ran, her boots crunching on frost that returned the moment she crossed the stones’ boundary. She collapsed on the frost-crusted grass, gasping for air, and checked the pendant. Its pulse had faded back to a faint warmth, its glow dimming. She pulled out her phone—10:45 PM. Two hours had passed outside, but she’d felt like she’d been in the grove for a lifetime. She looked back at the clearing, but the wildflowers were gone, the petrified oaks hidden by the treeline. No figures, no rustling, no twisted laugh. She stood, brushing frost off her jacket, and tucked the pendant back beneath her shirt. The mystery was far from solved—her quick-thinking nature already had her planning to return to Silas’ bar, borrow his fae lore books again, and research the Hel portals more thoroughly. But for now, she needed to get back to her flat, to the safety of the bar below, to Yu-Fei’s garlic fried rice leftovers in her bag. As she hiked back to the park’s entrance, she rubbed her crescent scar and glanced over her shoulder. Somewhere behind her, in the hidden clearing between Earth and the Fae realm, a metallic bird call echoed once more. She quickened her pace, knowing she’d be back. The unknown benefactor had given her a purpose, and she wasn’t going to let Evan’s ghost or the fae figures stop her. She’d seen the portal’s void, felt the pendant’s burn, and she knew—whatever was coming, she’d need her cool head and quick wits to face it. The grove hadn’t broken her; it had only given her a reason to keep digging, to unlock the pendant’s secrets, to find out why she’d been chosen. And she was never one to walk away from a puzzle.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags4
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences1
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1563
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
39.22% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1563
totalAiIsms19
found
0
word"electric"
count1
1
word"pulse"
count8
2
word"echoing"
count1
3
word"flickered"
count2
4
word"stomach"
count1
5
word"raced"
count1
6
word"pulsed"
count1
7
word"glinting"
count1
8
word"warmth"
count1
9
word"echoed"
count1
10
word"quickened"
count1
highlights
0"electric"
1"pulse"
2"echoing"
3"flickered"
4"stomach"
5"raced"
6"pulsed"
7"glinting"
8"warmth"
9"echoed"
10"quickened"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences22
matches(empty)
0.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences22
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences22
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen140
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1526
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions6
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions30
wordCount1317
uniqueNames19
maxNameDensity0.23
worstName"Hel"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Richmond"
discoveredNames
Yu-Fei1
Golden1
Empress1
Richmond2
Park2
January2
Heartstone2
Isolde1
Grove2
Hel3
Pendant1
Dymas1
Cardiff2
University1
London1
May1
Fae3
Earth2
Evan1
persons
0"Yu-Fei"
1"Empress"
2"Heartstone"
3"University"
4"Evan"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"January"
3"Isolde"
4"Grove"
5"Cardiff"
6"London"
7"Fae"
globalScore1
windowScore1
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences19
glossingSentenceCount5
matches
0"felt like being trapped in a dream some"
1"void that seemed to suck the moonlight out of the air"
2"felt like she’d been standing in the ce"
3"as if begging her to stay"
4"felt like she’d been in the grove for a"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.655
wordCount1526
matches
0"not from the oaks, but from the wildflowers"
15.15% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences22
matches
0"glanced that way"
70.07% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs17
mean89.76
std35.48
cv0.395
sampleLengths
0134
1135
279
315
4109
5109
6114
794
898
94
1088
11101
12100
1370
1473
1572
16131
41.47% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences22
matches
0"was smudged"
1"being trapped"
2"been stretched"
3"were gone"
4"been chosen"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs231
matches
0"was coming"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount23
semicolonCount3
flaggedSentences15
totalSentences22
ratio0.682
matches
0"The January air bit through her black puffer jacket, and she rubbed the crescent scar on her left wrist—old habit, from the childhood fall that had split the skin on a slate step—while she fumbled in her pocket for the crumpled note."
1"She’d found it tucked into her delivery bag three days prior, no return address, no name—only the same curling script that had accompanied the Heartstone Pendant when it arrived on her flat’s doormat above Silas’ bar two weeks before."
2"At 5’6”, she had to crane her neck to scan the park’s treeline for any sign of the ancient oaks the note mentioned. Her straight shoulder-length black hair caught on a bramble as she hiked off the paved path, and she tucked a strand behind her ear, bright blue eyes narrowing at the frost-crusted grass. Winter in Cardiff had never felt this sharp, but London’s nights were a different breed—empty, hungry, like the city was holding its breath. She’d hesitated before coming; Evan’s ghost still lingered in the edges of her decisions, his sharp words echoing when she dared to take risks. But the pendant’s faint inner glow had been taunting her, its silver chain digging into her chest whenever she forgot it was there, and her cool-headed, quick-thinking nature couldn’t let the mystery lie."
3"She pulled the pendant from beneath her shirt when the first pulse hit—warm, faint, like a bird’s heartbeat against her palm. The deep crimson gemstone, roughly the size of her thumbnail, glowed just barely enough to catch the moonlight filtering through the oaks. She’d researched Dymas, the pendant’s origin realm, at Cardiff University’s old library before fleeing to London, but the books had held nothing—only faded sketches of similar artifacts, no explanations. The unknown benefactor was her only lead."
4"She stepped over a frost heap and froze. Beneath a gnarled oak, a carpet of daisies, poppies, and bluebells bloomed so brightly they looked painted. Poppies in January? Bluebells that usually faded by May? Her out-of-the-box thinking kicked in—she knelt, brushing a daisy’s petal with her scarred wrist, and felt no frost on its stem. The flower bent away from her touch, slow as a sigh, and she jerked her hand back. That was when she saw them: the standing stones, three ancient oaks petrified into gray, moss-covered monoliths, marking a circular boundary around the flower-carpeted clearing. The note’s words thrummed in her head: oak stones mark the way."
5"She stood, her boots crunching on frost that vanished the moment she stepped within a foot of the stones. The air shifted when she crossed the boundary—thicker, sweeter, like honey mixed with rot. She pulled out her phone to check the time: 9:17 PM. She blinked, and the screen flickered to 9:03 PM. Blinked again, and it was 9:22 PM. Her stomach twisted. The grove’s time warping had been a vague hint in the note, but now it was real—an hour inside could be minutes or days outside. She stuffed the phone back in her pocket, the pendant’s pulse growing warmer, faster, as she stepped deeper into the clearing."
6"The Fae Grove was a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm, she’d deduced from the note’s vague hints, but standing in it felt like being trapped in a dream someone had forgotten to finish. No wind stirred the oaks, but their leaves rustled anyway—soft, insistent, like a crowd whispering secrets she couldn’t hear. She walked toward the clearing’s center, the wildflowers leaning away from her path as if she carried a plague. A sound pricked her ears: a child’s laugh, high and bright, but twisted at the edges, like it had been stretched too thin. She spun, but there was nothing—only the petrified oaks, the blooming flowers, the faint glow of the pendant."
7"Another sound: a bird call, sharp and metallic, nothing like the sparrows or crows she’d known in Cardiff. It came from the edge of her vision, and when she glanced that way, she saw a flash of pale skin—a hand, too long, too slender, gripping a petrified oak’s trunk. It vanished before she could focus, and she rubbed her scar again, her breath coming in short bursts. She was not alone. The certainty settled over her like a blanket of ice, and she reached for the pendant, now so warm it burned her palm."
8"She reached the clearing’s center and froze. Beneath a petrified oak’s bough, a dark spot lingered on the flower carpet—no light, no sound, just a void that seemed to suck the moonlight out of the air. The pendant’s pulse roared in her chest, hot and fast, and she realized this was the Hel portal the note had warned about. She’d read about Hel portals in a fae lore book she’d borrowed from Silas’ bar—gateways between realms, dangerous when left unguarded. Her out-of-the-box thinking raced: if the pendant pulsed near them, maybe it could seal them? Or warn others?"
9"She glanced to her left and saw it: a figure, pale as bone, standing between two oaks. It was too tall, its limbs too long, its head tilted at an angle that should have broken its neck. It didn’t move, but its eyes—if they were eyes—seemed to bore into her. She glanced to her right, and there was another, then a third, all pale, all too tall, their figures flickering at the edge of her vision like candle flames. They didn’t approach, but they didn’t leave, either—watching, waiting."
10"Time shifted again. She felt like she’d been standing in the center of the grove for an hour, her legs aching, her scar throbbing, but when she fumbled for her phone, the screen flickered on for a split second: 9:18 PM. She’d been inside for a minute? An hour? She couldn’t tell. The wildflowers began to wilt and bloom in cycles—daisies turning brown, then red, then white, poppies folding into themselves and unfurling again—each cycle faster than the last. The metallic bird call grew louder, merging with the child’s twisted laugh until it was a single, piercing whine in her ears."
11"She gripped the pendant so tight her scarred wrist ached. Her cool-headedness fought through the terror—she needed to leave. The standing stones were her only way out, but she’d lost track of them in the flickering figures and cycling flowers. She closed her eyes, focusing on the pendant’s pulse: when she turned left, it grew weaker; right, stronger. Wait—no, she realized, out-of-the-box thinking kicking in—if the portal was the source of the pulse, then moving away from the center would weaken it. She turned in the direction where the pulse slowed, and began walking, her eyes closed, counting her steps."
12"She collapsed on the frost-crusted grass, gasping for air, and checked the pendant. Its pulse had faded back to a faint warmth, its glow dimming. She pulled out her phone—10:45 PM. Two hours had passed outside, but she’d felt like she’d been in the grove for a lifetime. She looked back at the clearing, but the wildflowers were gone, the petrified oaks hidden by the treeline. No figures, no rustling, no twisted laugh."
13"She stood, brushing frost off her jacket, and tucked the pendant back beneath her shirt. The mystery was far from solved—her quick-thinking nature already had her planning to return to Silas’ bar, borrow his fae lore books again, and research the Hel portals more thoroughly. But for now, she needed to get back to her flat, to the safety of the bar below, to Yu-Fei’s garlic fried rice leftovers in her bag."
14"As she hiked back to the park’s entrance, she rubbed her crescent scar and glanced over her shoulder. Somewhere behind her, in the hidden clearing between Earth and the Fae realm, a metallic bird call echoed once more. She quickened her pace, knowing she’d be back. The unknown benefactor had given her a purpose, and she wasn’t going to let Evan’s ghost or the fae figures stop her. She’d seen the portal’s void, felt the pendant’s burn, and she knew—whatever was coming, she’d need her cool head and quick wits to face it. The grove hadn’t broken her; it had only given her a reason to keep digging, to unlock the pendant’s secrets, to find out why she’d been chosen. And she was never one to walk away from a puzzle."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount874
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"gray, moss-covered monoliths,"
adverbCount25
adverbRatio0.028604118993135013
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.009153318077803204
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences22
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences22
mean69.36
std42
cv0.606
sampleLengths
025
142
216
37
45
539
6135
779
815
9109
10109
11114
1294
1398
144
1588
16101
17100
1870
1973
2072
21131
62.12% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.45454545454545453
totalSentences22
uniqueOpeners10
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences21
matches(empty)
ratio0
48.57% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount9
totalSentences21
matches
0"She’d found it tucked into"
1"She pulled the pendant from"
2"She stepped over a frost"
3"She stood, her boots crunching"
4"She reached the clearing’s center"
5"She glanced to her left"
6"She gripped the pendant so"
7"She collapsed on the frost-crusted"
8"She stood, brushing frost off"
ratio0.429
31.43% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount18
totalSentences21
matches
0"Rory’s delivery bag still reeked"
1"The January air bit through"
2"The paper was smudged with"
3"Richmond Park’s oak stones mark"
4"She’d found it tucked into"
5"She pulled the pendant from"
6"The first sign of the"
7"She stepped over a frost"
8"She stood, her boots crunching"
9"The Fae Grove was a"
10"Another sound: a bird call,"
11"She reached the clearing’s center"
12"The rustling grew louder."
13"She glanced to her left"
14"Time shifted again. She felt"
15"She gripped the pendant so"
16"She collapsed on the frost-crusted"
17"She stood, brushing frost off"
ratio0.857
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences21
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences14
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"The January air bit through her black puffer jacket, and she rubbed the crescent scar on her left wrist—old habit, from the childhood fall that had split the sk…"
1"She stood, her boots crunching on frost that vanished the moment she stepped within a foot of the stones. The air shifted when she crossed the boundary—thicker,…"
2"The Fae Grove was a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm, she’d deduced from the note’s vague hints, but standing in it felt like being trapped in a dream som…"
3"She glanced to her left and saw it: a figure, pale as bone, standing between two oaks. It was too tall, its limbs too long, its head tilted at an angle that sho…"
4"Time shifted again. She felt like she’d been standing in the center of the grove for an hour, her legs aching, her scar throbbing, but when she fumbled for her …"
5"She gripped the pendant so tight her scarred wrist ached. Her cool-headedness fought through the terror—she needed to leave. The standing stones were her only w…"
6"She collapsed on the frost-crusted grass, gasping for air, and checked the pendant. Its pulse had faded back to a faint warmth, its glow dimming. She pulled out…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
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100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
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