| 0.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 2 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Her voice sounded too [too]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 3 | | tagDensity | 0.667 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.5 | |
| 82.62% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 863 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 1.51% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 863 | | totalAiIsms | 17 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "weight" | | 1 | "pulse" | | 2 | "warmth" | | 3 | "silence" | | 4 | "perfect" | | 5 | "loomed" | | 6 | "whisper" | | 7 | "wavered" | | 8 | "flickered" | | 9 | "roaring" | | 10 | "pulsed" | | 11 | "comforting" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 92 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 92 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 93 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 30 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 12 | | markdownWords | 12 | | totalWords | 856 | | ratio | 0.014 | | matches | | 0 | "clean" | | 1 | "wrong" | | 2 | "breathe" | | 3 | "were" | | 4 | "almost" | | 5 | "moving" | | 6 | "laugh" | | 7 | "twist" | | 8 | "reached" | | 9 | "intent" | | 10 | "shifted" | | 11 | "hungry" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 3 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 91.25% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 24 | | wordCount | 851 | | uniqueNames | 7 | | maxNameDensity | 1.18 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Rory | 10 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Grove | 6 | | Eva | 2 | | Fae | 2 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Grove" | | 2 | "Eva" | | 3 | "Fae" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.912 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 63.79% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 58 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "quite moss" | | 1 | "looked like hands" |
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| 83.18% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 1.168 | | wordCount | 856 | | matches | | 0 | "not with wind, but with *intent*" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 93 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 28 | | mean | 30.57 | | std | 26.08 | | cv | 0.853 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 98 | | 1 | 8 | | 2 | 93 | | 3 | 3 | | 4 | 54 | | 5 | 9 | | 6 | 14 | | 7 | 49 | | 8 | 51 | | 9 | 9 | | 10 | 41 | | 11 | 47 | | 12 | 6 | | 13 | 12 | | 14 | 43 | | 15 | 10 | | 16 | 49 | | 17 | 3 | | 18 | 13 | | 19 | 30 | | 20 | 35 | | 21 | 3 | | 22 | 66 | | 23 | 4 | | 24 | 33 | | 25 | 45 | | 26 | 12 | | 27 | 16 |
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| 86.19% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 92 | | matches | | 0 | "been told" | | 1 | "been scrubbed" | | 2 | "been painted" | | 3 | "were*, frozen" | | 4 | "were curled" |
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| 31.22% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 4 | | totalVerbs | 158 | | matches | | 0 | "was standing" | | 1 | "was imagining" | | 2 | "was playing" | | 3 | "was coming" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 9 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 6 | | totalSentences | 93 | | ratio | 0.065 | | matches | | 0 | "The air in Richmond Park was thick with the scent of damp earth and something older—something that clung to the back of Rory’s throat like a half-remembered dream." | | 1 | "She’d read about the Grove in Eva’s old journals—how time bent here, how the Fae left their mark in the dappled light." | | 2 | "But the pendant burned against her skin, and she knew—knew with a certainty that settled in her gut like a stone—that she couldn’t." | | 3 | "Just the trees, their branches twisting into shapes that almost—*almost*—looked like hands." | | 4 | "For a second, it caught on something—something *moving*—before it darted away, too fast to be an animal." | | 5 | "The path was there—she could see it, just ahead." |
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| 92.29% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 858 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "inside pressing against her" |
| | adverbCount | 36 | | adverbRatio | 0.04195804195804196 | | lyAdverbCount | 5 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.005827505827505828 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 93 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 93 | | mean | 9.2 | | std | 6.3 | | cv | 0.684 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 28 | | 1 | 18 | | 2 | 2 | | 3 | 10 | | 4 | 21 | | 5 | 19 | | 6 | 8 | | 7 | 16 | | 8 | 16 | | 9 | 11 | | 10 | 19 | | 11 | 22 | | 12 | 2 | | 13 | 3 | | 14 | 4 | | 15 | 3 | | 16 | 2 | | 17 | 17 | | 18 | 11 | | 19 | 18 | | 20 | 3 | | 21 | 3 | | 22 | 9 | | 23 | 2 | | 24 | 12 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 21 | | 27 | 23 | | 28 | 2 | | 29 | 14 | | 30 | 15 | | 31 | 7 | | 32 | 4 | | 33 | 3 | | 34 | 8 | | 35 | 9 | | 36 | 9 | | 37 | 12 | | 38 | 3 | | 39 | 4 | | 40 | 6 | | 41 | 7 | | 42 | 17 | | 43 | 10 | | 44 | 3 | | 45 | 17 | | 46 | 3 | | 47 | 3 | | 48 | 2 | | 49 | 5 |
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| 38.17% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 11 | | diversityRatio | 0.24731182795698925 | | totalSentences | 93 | | uniqueOpeners | 23 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 81 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, the silence was too" | | 1 | "Just the whisper of wind" | | 2 | "Just the trees, their branches" | | 3 | "Just the Grove, just the" | | 4 | "Only then did she dare" |
| | ratio | 0.062 | |
| 91.60% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 26 | | totalSentences | 81 | | matches | | 0 | "She adjusted the strap of" | | 1 | "It had led her here," | | 2 | "She’d expected wildflowers, maybe the" | | 3 | "She’d read about the Grove" | | 4 | "She turned slowly, her fingers" | | 5 | "Her voice sounded too loud" | | 6 | "She should leave." | | 7 | "She should turn and run" | | 8 | "She crouched, brushing her fingers" | | 9 | "They didn’t *breathe*." | | 10 | "They just *were*, frozen in" | | 11 | "She whirled, heart hammering, but" | | 12 | "She was imagining things." | | 13 | "It had to be the" | | 14 | "She reached into her backpack," | | 15 | "It came from the trees," | | 16 | "She spun, flashlight sweeping the" | | 17 | "She should have turned back" | | 18 | "She looked down." | | 19 | "She stumbled back, the flashlight" |
| | ratio | 0.321 | |
| 52.59% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 66 | | totalSentences | 81 | | matches | | 0 | "The air in Richmond Park" | | 1 | "She adjusted the strap of" | | 2 | "It had led her here," | | 3 | "A pulse of warmth against" | | 4 | "The Grove wasn’t supposed to" | | 5 | "She’d expected wildflowers, maybe the" | | 6 | "Rory exhaled slowly, her breath" | | 7 | "The standing stones loomed at" | | 8 | "She’d read about the Grove" | | 9 | "This wasn’t Fae." | | 10 | "This was something else." | | 11 | "A twig snapped." | | 12 | "The sound had come from" | | 13 | "She turned slowly, her fingers" | | 14 | "The Heartstone was warm now," | | 15 | "This was different." | | 16 | "This was *wrong*." | | 17 | "Her voice sounded too loud" | | 18 | "She should leave." | | 19 | "She should turn and run" |
| | ratio | 0.815 | |
| 61.73% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 81 | | matches | | 0 | "Now, standing beneath the skeletal" |
| | ratio | 0.012 | |
| 69.60% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 39 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "The air in Richmond Park was thick with the scent of damp earth and something older—something that clung to the back of Rory’s throat like a half-remembered dre…" | | 1 | "The moment it left her skin, the warmth vanished, replaced by a cold that seeped into her bones." | | 2 | "The beam flickered, casting long, skeletal shadows that stretched and *reached* for her." | | 3 | "She clutched it, pressing it to her chest as if it could shield her." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 2 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she breathed (breathe)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 3 | | tagDensity | 0.333 | | leniency | 0.667 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.667 | |