| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 2 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 3 | | tagDensity | 0.667 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 73.19% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1119 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 6 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slowly" | | 1 | "cautiously" | | 2 | "utterly" | | 3 | "carefully" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1119 | | totalAiIsms | 29 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | | | 22 | | | 23 | | word | "the last thing" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "chill" | | 1 | "aligned" | | 2 | "navigating" | | 3 | "warmth" | | 4 | "pulsed" | | 5 | "throb" | | 6 | "gloom" | | 7 | "chilling" | | 8 | "sense of" | | 9 | "silence" | | 10 | "scanning" | | 11 | "fleeting" | | 12 | "weight" | | 13 | "whisper" | | 14 | "resonated" | | 15 | "vibrated" | | 16 | "measured" | | 17 | "oppressive" | | 18 | "could feel" | | 19 | "constructed" | | 20 | "facade" | | 21 | "searing" | | 22 | "tracing" | | 23 | "the last thing" | | 24 | "profound" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 88 | | matches | | |
| 61.69% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 5 | | narrationSentences | 88 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "seemed to" | | 1 | "started to" | | 2 | "began to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 89 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 41 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 4 | | markdownWords | 8 | | totalWords | 1126 | | ratio | 0.007 | | matches | | 0 | "out" | | 1 | "into" | | 2 | "“You shouldn’t have come looking.”" | | 3 | "looked" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 1 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 22 | | wordCount | 1112 | | uniqueNames | 7 | | maxNameDensity | 0.63 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Grove" | | discoveredNames | | Park | 1 | | Grove | 6 | | Heartstone | 5 | | Pendant | 1 | | Silas | 1 | | Holloway | 1 | | Rory | 7 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Heartstone" | | 1 | "Pendant" | | 2 | "Silas" | | 3 | "Holloway" | | 4 | "Rory" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 70 | | glossingSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "smelled like iron and something else, some" | | 1 | "as if trying to contain her" | | 2 | "felt like a terrible choice, a surrende" | | 3 | "smelled like wet stone and decay, like som" | | 4 | "It was as if the Grove itself didn’t want her to leave" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 3 | | per1kWords | 2.664 | | wordCount | 1126 | | matches | | 0 | "Not close enough to see clearly, but close enough to feel the weight of its presence, a suffocati" | | 1 | "Not the measured tread of a man, but something heavier, something" | | 2 | "not malice, but a profound, ancient sadness" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 89 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 82.31% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 26 | | mean | 43.31 | | std | 18.97 | | cv | 0.438 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 89 | | 1 | 66 | | 2 | 61 | | 3 | 47 | | 4 | 80 | | 5 | 19 | | 6 | 58 | | 7 | 21 | | 8 | 49 | | 9 | 42 | | 10 | 41 | | 11 | 50 | | 12 | 43 | | 13 | 7 | | 14 | 44 | | 15 | 38 | | 16 | 37 | | 17 | 43 | | 18 | 29 | | 19 | 27 | | 20 | 36 | | 21 | 15 | | 22 | 22 | | 23 | 47 | | 24 | 50 | | 25 | 65 |
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| 89.31% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 88 | | matches | | 0 | "being hunted" | | 1 | "been buried" | | 2 | "being hunted" | | 3 | "was interested" |
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| 0.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 7 | | totalVerbs | 171 | | matches | | 0 | "wasn’t finding" | | 1 | "was finding" | | 2 | "wasn’t speaking" | | 3 | "was gaining" | | 4 | "wasn’t guiding" | | 5 | "was leading" | | 6 | "was pursuing" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 8 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 5 | | totalSentences | 89 | | ratio | 0.056 | | matches | | 0 | "She’d followed the instructions – three oaks, aligned like crooked fingers, a stream whispering a forgotten name – and arrived at the Grove." | | 1 | "She’d come to the Grove seeking answers, a desperate attempt to understand the escalating nightmares – images of a twisting, shadowed forest, a voice that didn’t belong to anyone she knew, and the persistent, chilling awareness of being hunted." | | 2 | "It felt like a terrible choice, a surrender to whatever was out there, but the alternative – stopping, turning back – was unthinkable." | | 3 | "Then, a voice – clear, sharp, and utterly devoid of emotion – spoke directly into her mind." | | 4 | "The last thing she saw, before the darkness consumed her, was a figure emerging from the trees – tall, impossibly thin, wreathed in shadow and rain." |
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| 93.94% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1105 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 51 | | adverbRatio | 0.046153846153846156 | | lyAdverbCount | 23 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.02081447963800905 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 89 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 89 | | mean | 12.65 | | std | 8.22 | | cv | 0.65 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 14 | | 1 | 13 | | 2 | 6 | | 3 | 1 | | 4 | 12 | | 5 | 20 | | 6 | 23 | | 7 | 5 | | 8 | 8 | | 9 | 17 | | 10 | 14 | | 11 | 22 | | 12 | 20 | | 13 | 31 | | 14 | 10 | | 15 | 10 | | 16 | 20 | | 17 | 10 | | 18 | 7 | | 19 | 39 | | 20 | 41 | | 21 | 11 | | 22 | 8 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 12 | | 25 | 6 | | 26 | 16 | | 27 | 21 | | 28 | 14 | | 29 | 7 | | 30 | 10 | | 31 | 16 | | 32 | 23 | | 33 | 2 | | 34 | 20 | | 35 | 12 | | 36 | 4 | | 37 | 3 | | 38 | 1 | | 39 | 18 | | 40 | 23 | | 41 | 9 | | 42 | 14 | | 43 | 17 | | 44 | 10 | | 45 | 23 | | 46 | 20 | | 47 | 7 | | 48 | 23 | | 49 | 21 |
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| 38.76% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 10 | | diversityRatio | 0.29213483146067415 | | totalSentences | 89 | | uniqueOpeners | 26 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 79 | | matches | | 0 | "Just a subtle shift in" | | 1 | "Only the drumming of the" | | 2 | "Too deliberate, too…" | | 3 | "Just the rain, the trees," | | 4 | "Then, a voice – clear," |
| | ratio | 0.063 | |
| 32.66% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 37 | | totalSentences | 79 | | matches | | 0 | "She’d followed the instructions –" | | 1 | "It wasn't a dramatic entrance." | | 2 | "She checked the Heartstone Pendant" | | 3 | "It was a ridiculous thing" | | 4 | "It pulsed a little faster" | | 5 | "They shouldn't be flowering this" | | 6 | "She’d come to the Grove" | | 7 | "She was finding a deepening" | | 8 | "It was too deliberate, too" | | 9 | "She froze, her hand instinctively" | | 10 | "Her voice sounded thin and" | | 11 | "She moved slowly, cautiously, scanning" | | 12 | "She strained to see through" | | 13 | "It wasn't an animal." | | 14 | "She started to walk, sticking" | | 15 | "It felt like a terrible" | | 16 | "She thought she saw something" | | 17 | "She squeezed her eyes shut," | | 18 | "It smelled like wet stone" | | 19 | "It wasn’t speaking words she" |
| | ratio | 0.468 | |
| 54.94% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 64 | | totalSentences | 79 | | matches | | 0 | "The rain smelled like iron" | | 1 | "Rory pulled her threadbare coat" | | 2 | "Richmond Park, even in daylight," | | 3 | "Tonight, it was a bruised" | | 4 | "The air hung thick and" | | 5 | "She’d followed the instructions –" | | 6 | "It wasn't a dramatic entrance." | | 7 | "The standing stones, moss-slicked and" | | 8 | "Rory felt a prickle on" | | 9 | "She checked the Heartstone Pendant" | | 10 | "It was a ridiculous thing" | | 11 | "It pulsed a little faster" | | 12 | "The rain intensified, drumming a" | | 13 | "The wildflowers, stubbornly blooming in" | | 14 | "They shouldn't be flowering this" | | 15 | "Rory shivered, not entirely from" | | 16 | "She’d come to the Grove" | | 17 | "The benefactor, a man named" | | 18 | "She was finding a deepening" | | 19 | "A twig snapped." |
| | ratio | 0.81 | |
| 63.29% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 79 | | matches | | 0 | "Now, surrounded by the silent," |
| | ratio | 0.013 | |
| 21.56% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 53 | | technicalSentenceCount | 9 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory felt a prickle on the back of her neck, the instinctive warning of someone who’d spent too long navigating dangerous shadows." | | 1 | "She’d come to the Grove seeking answers, a desperate attempt to understand the escalating nightmares – images of a twisting, shadowed forest, a voice that didn’…" | | 2 | "The rain plastered her hair to her face, blurring her vision, and the scent of the forest intensified, becoming almost overwhelming." | | 3 | "The standing stones seemed to lean inward, pressing against her, as if trying to contain her." | | 4 | "The wildflowers seemed to shift, their faces turning, tracking her with an unsettling intelligence." | | 5 | "It smelled like wet stone and decay, like something that had been buried for centuries and was now slowly, patiently, returning." | | 6 | "It wasn’t speaking words she understood, but it resonated deep within her bones, a primal, unsettling chord that vibrated with an ancient malice." | | 7 | "Not the measured tread of a man, but something heavier, something that moved with a deliberate, predatory grace." | | 8 | "She looked down and saw a thin, silver line blooming across her skin, tracing the outline of the scar she’d carried since childhood." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 2 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |