Run: 2026-02-20-01KHYAKZ02246Z6HG8M05TDW0H

Run Details

Duration:
17.8s
Cost:
$0.000151
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The rain smelled like iron and something else, something ancient, rising from the ground. Rory pulled her threadbare coat tighter, the damp chill seeping through the wool. Richmond Park, even in daylight, felt… wrong. Tonight, it was a bruised purple under a sky choked with clouds. The air hung thick and still, a suffocating blanket woven with the scent of wet earth and that metallic tang. She’d followed the instructions – three oaks, aligned like crooked fingers, a stream whispering a forgotten name – and arrived at the Grove. It wasn't a dramatic entrance. No shimmering veil, no sudden flash of light. Just a subtle shift in the air, a slight darkening of the sky, and then, the trees. The standing stones, moss-slicked and gnarled, marked the boundary with an almost aggressive stillness. Rory felt a prickle on the back of her neck, the instinctive warning of someone who’d spent too long navigating dangerous shadows. She checked the Heartstone Pendant nestled against her chest, a tiny, pulsing warmth against the clammy fabric of her shirt. It was a ridiculous thing to rely on, a small piece of crimson stone whispering of some unknown benefactor, yet it was the only tether she had to this unsettling place. It pulsed a little faster now, a faint, insistent throb. The rain intensified, drumming a hypnotic rhythm on the leaves. The wildflowers, stubbornly blooming in a riot of color despite the gloom, seemed to watch her with unnervingly bright eyes. They shouldn't be flowering this late, not in this weather. Rory shivered, not entirely from the cold. She’d come to the Grove seeking answers, a desperate attempt to understand the escalating nightmares – images of a twisting, shadowed forest, a voice that didn’t belong to anyone she knew, and the persistent, chilling awareness of being hunted. The benefactor, a man named Silas who ran a grimy bar just off Holloway, had offered a cryptic lead: “Find the Grove. The stone will guide you.” He’d given her the pendant with a disconcerting, almost pitying look in his eyes. Now, surrounded by the silent, watchful trees, Rory wasn’t finding answers. She was finding a deepening sense of dread. A twig snapped. Not a natural sound, not the brittle crack of a dry branch. It was too deliberate, too close. She froze, her hand instinctively reaching for the small, worn knife she carried in her pocket. The rain plastered her hair to her face, blurring her vision, and the scent of the forest intensified, becoming almost overwhelming. "Hello?" Her voice sounded thin and reedy, swallowed by the rain and the silence. Only the drumming of the rain answered. She moved slowly, cautiously, scanning the shadows beneath the trees. The standing stones seemed to lean inward, pressing against her, as if trying to contain her. The Heartstone pulsed again, quicker this time, and she felt a strange pressure behind her eyes, a faint, unsettling distortion of her perception. Another sound. A rustle in the undergrowth, followed by the soft pad of something moving just beyond the periphery of her vision. She strained to see through the rain, but the darkness was absolute. It wasn't an animal. Too deliberate, too… weighted. She started to walk, sticking to the path, a narrow ribbon of muddy earth winding through the trees. It felt like a terrible choice, a surrender to whatever was out there, but the alternative – stopping, turning back – was unthinkable. The air grew colder, the scent of iron stronger. The wildflowers seemed to shift, their faces turning, tracking her with an unsettling intelligence. A low hum began to resonate through the ground, vibrating through her boots and up her legs. The Heartstone burned against her chest, its warmth almost painful. She thought she saw something move in the shadows again, a fleeting glimpse of grey, impossibly tall, moving with a fluid, unnatural grace. She squeezed her eyes shut, willing it to be a trick of the light, a figment of her exhausted mind. When she opened them, it was closer. Not close enough to see clearly, but close enough to feel the weight of its presence, a suffocating blanket of cold and stillness. It smelled like wet stone and decay, like something that had been buried for centuries and was now slowly, patiently, returning. The humming intensified, coalescing into a whisper, a voice just on the edge of hearing. It wasn’t speaking words she understood, but it resonated deep within her bones, a primal, unsettling chord that vibrated with an ancient malice. Rory backed away slowly, her hand tightening around the knife. She needed to get out. Now. But something held her back, a strange, compelling inertia. It was as if the Grove itself didn’t want her to leave. She turned and ran, blindly crashing through the undergrowth, branches tearing at her coat and skin. The rain plastered her clothes to her body, blinding her with its relentless onslaught. The whispering followed her, growing louder, closer, laced with a subtle, mocking amusement. Behind her, she heard a footstep. Not the measured tread of a man, but something heavier, something that moved with a deliberate, predatory grace. It was gaining on her. She risked a glance over her shoulder. Nothing. Just the rain, the trees, the oppressive darkness. But the feeling of being watched, of being hunted, was absolute. The Heartstone flared with an urgent, crimson light, pulling her forward, deeper into the Grove. She realized with a sickening certainty that it wasn’t guiding her *out* of the Grove. It was leading her *into* it. Another footstep. Closer now. She could feel the presence behind her, cold and impossibly vast. Then, a voice – clear, sharp, and utterly devoid of emotion – spoke directly into her mind. *“You shouldn’t have come looking.”* She didn’t turn. She couldn’t. She knew, with a terrifying clarity, that whatever was pursuing her wasn't interested in a chase. It was interested in something else, something hidden within her, something buried deep beneath the carefully constructed facade of cool intelligence she presented to the world. The Heartstone pulsed violently, and Rory felt a sharp, searing pain in her wrist. She looked down and saw a thin, silver line blooming across her skin, tracing the outline of the scar she’d carried since childhood. It wasn’t a scar from an accident. It was a mark. A gateway. The last thing she saw, before the darkness consumed her, was a figure emerging from the trees – tall, impossibly thin, wreathed in shadow and rain. It didn’t move towards her. It simply *looked* at her, and in that gaze, Rory saw not malice, but a profound, ancient sadness. And the chilling realization that she hadn't escaped the Grove. She'd merely become part of it.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags2
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences3
tagDensity0.667
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
73.19% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1119
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count3
1
adverb"cautiously"
count1
2
adverb"utterly"
count1
3
adverb"carefully"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"cautiously"
2"utterly"
3"carefully"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1119
totalAiIsms29
found
0
word"chill"
count1
1
word"aligned"
count1
2
word"navigating"
count1
3
word"warmth"
count2
4
word"pulsed"
count3
5
word"throb"
count1
6
word"gloom"
count1
7
word"chilling"
count2
8
word"sense of"
count1
9
word"silence"
count1
10
word"scanning"
count1
11
word"fleeting"
count1
12
word"weight"
count1
13
word"whisper"
count1
14
word"resonated"
count1
15
word"vibrated"
count1
16
word"measured"
count1
17
word"oppressive"
count1
18
word"could feel"
count1
19
word"constructed"
count1
20
word"facade"
count1
21
word"searing"
count1
22
word"tracing"
count1
23
word"the last thing"
count1
24
word"profound"
count1
highlights
0"chill"
1"aligned"
2"navigating"
3"warmth"
4"pulsed"
5"throb"
6"gloom"
7"chilling"
8"sense of"
9"silence"
10"scanning"
11"fleeting"
12"weight"
13"whisper"
14"resonated"
15"vibrated"
16"measured"
17"oppressive"
18"could feel"
19"constructed"
20"facade"
21"searing"
22"tracing"
23"the last thing"
24"profound"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences88
matches
0"felt a prickle"
61.69% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount5
narrationSentences88
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"started to"
2"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences89
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen41
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans4
markdownWords8
totalWords1126
ratio0.007
matches
0"out"
1"into"
2"“You shouldn’t have come looking.”"
3"looked"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions1
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions22
wordCount1112
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity0.63
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Grove"
discoveredNames
Park1
Grove6
Heartstone5
Pendant1
Silas1
Holloway1
Rory7
persons
0"Heartstone"
1"Pendant"
2"Silas"
3"Holloway"
4"Rory"
places
0"Park"
1"Grove"
globalScore1
windowScore1
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences70
glossingSentenceCount5
matches
0"smelled like iron and something else, some"
1"as if trying to contain her"
2"felt like a terrible choice, a surrende"
3"smelled like wet stone and decay, like som"
4"It was as if the Grove itself didn’t want her to leave"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches3
per1kWords2.664
wordCount1126
matches
0"Not close enough to see clearly, but close enough to feel the weight of its presence, a suffocati"
1"Not the measured tread of a man, but something heavier, something"
2"not malice, but a profound, ancient sadness"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences89
matches(empty)
82.31% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs26
mean43.31
std18.97
cv0.438
sampleLengths
089
166
261
347
480
519
658
721
849
942
1041
1150
1243
137
1444
1538
1637
1743
1829
1927
2036
2115
2222
2347
2450
2565
89.31% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences88
matches
0"being hunted"
1"been buried"
2"being hunted"
3"was interested"
0.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount7
totalVerbs171
matches
0"wasn’t finding"
1"was finding"
2"wasn’t speaking"
3"was gaining"
4"wasn’t guiding"
5"was leading"
6"was pursuing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount8
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences89
ratio0.056
matches
0"She’d followed the instructions – three oaks, aligned like crooked fingers, a stream whispering a forgotten name – and arrived at the Grove."
1"She’d come to the Grove seeking answers, a desperate attempt to understand the escalating nightmares – images of a twisting, shadowed forest, a voice that didn’t belong to anyone she knew, and the persistent, chilling awareness of being hunted."
2"It felt like a terrible choice, a surrender to whatever was out there, but the alternative – stopping, turning back – was unthinkable."
3"Then, a voice – clear, sharp, and utterly devoid of emotion – spoke directly into her mind."
4"The last thing she saw, before the darkness consumed her, was a figure emerging from the trees – tall, impossibly thin, wreathed in shadow and rain."
93.94% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1105
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount51
adverbRatio0.046153846153846156
lyAdverbCount23
lyAdverbRatio0.02081447963800905
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences89
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences89
mean12.65
std8.22
cv0.65
sampleLengths
014
113
26
31
412
520
623
75
88
917
1014
1122
1220
1331
1410
1510
1620
1710
187
1939
2041
2111
228
233
2412
256
2616
2721
2814
297
3010
3116
3223
332
3420
3512
364
373
381
3918
4023
419
4214
4317
4410
4523
4620
477
4823
4921
38.76% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.29213483146067415
totalSentences89
uniqueOpeners26
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount5
totalSentences79
matches
0"Just a subtle shift in"
1"Only the drumming of the"
2"Too deliberate, too…"
3"Just the rain, the trees,"
4"Then, a voice – clear,"
ratio0.063
32.66% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount37
totalSentences79
matches
0"She’d followed the instructions –"
1"It wasn't a dramatic entrance."
2"She checked the Heartstone Pendant"
3"It was a ridiculous thing"
4"It pulsed a little faster"
5"They shouldn't be flowering this"
6"She’d come to the Grove"
7"She was finding a deepening"
8"It was too deliberate, too"
9"She froze, her hand instinctively"
10"Her voice sounded thin and"
11"She moved slowly, cautiously, scanning"
12"She strained to see through"
13"It wasn't an animal."
14"She started to walk, sticking"
15"It felt like a terrible"
16"She thought she saw something"
17"She squeezed her eyes shut,"
18"It smelled like wet stone"
19"It wasn’t speaking words she"
ratio0.468
54.94% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount64
totalSentences79
matches
0"The rain smelled like iron"
1"Rory pulled her threadbare coat"
2"Richmond Park, even in daylight,"
3"Tonight, it was a bruised"
4"The air hung thick and"
5"She’d followed the instructions –"
6"It wasn't a dramatic entrance."
7"The standing stones, moss-slicked and"
8"Rory felt a prickle on"
9"She checked the Heartstone Pendant"
10"It was a ridiculous thing"
11"It pulsed a little faster"
12"The rain intensified, drumming a"
13"The wildflowers, stubbornly blooming in"
14"They shouldn't be flowering this"
15"Rory shivered, not entirely from"
16"She’d come to the Grove"
17"The benefactor, a man named"
18"She was finding a deepening"
19"A twig snapped."
ratio0.81
63.29% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences79
matches
0"Now, surrounded by the silent,"
ratio0.013
21.56% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences53
technicalSentenceCount9
matches
0"Rory felt a prickle on the back of her neck, the instinctive warning of someone who’d spent too long navigating dangerous shadows."
1"She’d come to the Grove seeking answers, a desperate attempt to understand the escalating nightmares – images of a twisting, shadowed forest, a voice that didn’…"
2"The rain plastered her hair to her face, blurring her vision, and the scent of the forest intensified, becoming almost overwhelming."
3"The standing stones seemed to lean inward, pressing against her, as if trying to contain her."
4"The wildflowers seemed to shift, their faces turning, tracking her with an unsettling intelligence."
5"It smelled like wet stone and decay, like something that had been buried for centuries and was now slowly, patiently, returning."
6"It wasn’t speaking words she understood, but it resonated deep within her bones, a primal, unsettling chord that vibrated with an ancient malice."
7"Not the measured tread of a man, but something heavier, something that moved with a deliberate, predatory grace."
8"She looked down and saw a thin, silver line blooming across her skin, tracing the outline of the scar she’d carried since childhood."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags2
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
70.3886%