"She'd come because of the pendant—the Heartstone, that thumbnail-sized crimson gem on its silver chain, given to her by some faceless stranger months ago."
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"Wildflowers dotted the ground—violets, daisies, bursts of color defiant against the night."
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"She shook it off—nerves, probably, from too many late-night deliveries through sketchy alleys for Yu-Fei's restaurant."
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"Time moved differently here, she'd read in some obscure forum post—the only hint she'd found about this place."
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"Richmond Park teemed with wildlife—deer, rabbits, the occasional badger."
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"Eva would laugh if she could see this—her childhood friend who'd dragged her to London, insisting on fresh starts."
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"Not stone at all—petrified wood, ancient as the oaks around it."
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"Not a rustle this time—more like fabric brushing against grass, or breath exhaled too close."
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"Not a fox—too deliberate, too straight a line leading toward the standing stones at the edge."
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"She scanned the oaks, their trunks twisting into shapes that mimicked faces in the dim light—knotted eyes, gaping mouths."
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"Near a portal, it was supposed to do that—whatever \"Hel\" meant in the cryptic notes she'd found with it."
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"Another sound layered beneath it—a low murmur, like voices overlapping in a language she couldn't parse."
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"She'd fled an abusive ex, navigated London's underbelly on a delivery bike— this was just a trick of the light, the isolation playing on her nerves."
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"Not wind, not imagination—distinct syllables now, weaving through the air like smoke."
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"One resolved into a shape at the periphery—humanoid, elongated limbs, features blurred as if viewed through water."
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"A hand— or what felt like one—brushed her shoulder, cold and insubstantial."
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"And as the pendant cooled against her chest, Rory knew she'd be back—drawn, compelled, despite the terror coiling in her gut."
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"The wrongness hadn't ended with her escape; it had followed her out."
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"The air shifted as she crossed the boundary, thickening with the scent of wildflowers that shouldn't have bloomed in the chill of a London autumn night."
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"Even the distant hum of city traffic from beyond the park had vanished, as if the grove existed in its own sealed bubble."
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"She moved deeper into the grove, the wildflowers brushing her jeans with a softness that felt almost deliberate, like fingers grazing her legs."
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"The moon filtered through the canopy in silver shafts, casting elongated shadows that stretched across the grass like dark veins."
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"The beam sliced through the dark, illuminating petals that gleamed unnaturally bright, their colors vivid even in the artificial light."
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"Eva would laugh if she could see this—her childhood friend who'd dragged her to London, insisting on fresh starts."
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"But the wildflowers to her right lay flattened in a narrow path, as if something low to the ground had slithered through."
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"She scanned the oaks, their trunks twisting into shapes that mimicked faces in the dim light—knotted eyes, gaping mouths."
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"The pendant seared her skin, its pulse syncing with her racing heart."
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"But the scar on her wrist throbbed as if hours had passed, and the whispers lingered in her ears, faint but persistent, promising return."