Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences
98
glossingSentenceCount
4
matches
0
"felt like crossing into another life"
1
"as if sensing her gaze, Silas looked up, his hazel eyes sharpening across the dim expanse"
2
"seemed unbreakable"
3
"seemed invincible tall at six-one, striding through her father's study with tales of shadows and secrets, his limp just a whisper from some unnamed skirmish"
"Her delivery shift at Golden Empress had stretched into the evening—dodging London traffic on her battered scooter, hauling bags of dim sum through drizzling downpours—and all she craved now was a quiet stool at the end of the bar, a gin and tonic to chase away the ache in her shoulders."
1
"It had been that way for months since she'd moved in—polite distance, the kind that suited her."
2
"Rory slid onto her usual stool, the leather cracked and warm from previous sitters, and signaled to the bartender—a lanky kid named Tom who poured with efficient grace."
3
"Fifty-eight now, she calculated quickly—he'd been forty when they'd last really spoken, back in Cardiff, during one of those endless summers when her father dragged the family to visit his old MI6 contacts."
4
"He paused, rag suspended, and a slow recognition spread across his face—not the casual nod of a landlord to a tenant, but something deeper, like a door creaking open on a room long sealed."
5
"Up close, the lines around his eyes were deeper, etched like the maps on the walls, and his beard—neatly trimmed, matching the grey streaks—framed a jaw that had once seemed unbreakable."
6
"\"You could've hollered down the stairs. I keep a decent stock up there for emergencies.\" His gaze flicked to her wrist, where the small crescent scar peeked from under her sleeve—the one from that idiot childhood tumble off her bike, the one he'd bandaged himself after her father laughed it off."
7
"Not since she'd been a teenager, wide-eyed and trailing after her father to those secretive gatherings in Cardiff, where Brendan Carter—barrister by day, amateur spook by night—would introduce her to his old mates from the service."
8
"\"Mentor\" was too formal a word; he'd been more like an uncle she chose, a steady presence amid her parents' endless debates over law and literature."
9
"Evan had seen to that—the bruises fading but the fear lingering, a ghost in her reflections."
10
"The bar noise swelled around them—a laugh from the tourists, the clink of glasses—but it felt distant, muffled."
11
"Back then, Silas had seemed invincible—tall at six-one, striding through her father's study with tales of shadows and secrets, his limp just a whisper from some unnamed skirmish."
12
"Rory remembered the letters her father read aloud at the dinner table, Silas's updates from the field—coded, thrilling to her young ears."
13
"She could lie—say it was ambition, the city's pull—but his eyes wouldn't let her."
14
"The Nest wasn't just a bar; it was his anchor, a place to watch the world turn without touching it."
15
"Silas's eyes searched hers, seeing the girl from Cardiff—the quick thinker with bright blue eyes, outsmarting puzzles he'd set for her amusement."
16
"\"Both, lass. Always both.\" He reached across the bar, hesitating before clasping her hand briefly—warm, callused, the ring cool against her skin."
17
"Outside, London pulsed on, indifferent, but here, in the dim light of The Raven's Nest, two old friends began to mend what time had frayed—one halting conversation at a time."
18
"Laughter crept in eventually, tentative, over shared memories of Cardiff summers—her outwitting his riddles, him sneaking her sips of cider when her father wasn't looking."
19
"Rory felt the shift, subtle as his limp—a reclamation, perhaps, of the bond time had tried to steal."
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences
59
technicalSentenceCount
5
matches
0
"Silas kept the place running like clockwork, a haven for the shadowy types who drifted through Soho, but she rarely lingered."
1
"Rory slid onto her usual stool, the leather cracked and warm from previous sitters, and signaled to the bartender—a lanky kid named Tom who poured with efficien…"
2
"He moved with the same deliberate rhythm, but the slight hitch in his left leg was more pronounced tonight, a subtle drag that made her wince inwardly."
3
"But as if sensing her gaze, Silas looked up, his hazel eyes sharpening across the dim expanse."
4
"Up close, the lines around his eyes were deeper, etched like the maps on the walls, and his beard—neatly trimmed, matching the grey streaks—framed a jaw that ha…"