| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 3 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 3 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 84.60% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 974 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 974 | | totalAiIsms | 26 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | word | "the last thing" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "pulsed" | | 1 | "warmth" | | 2 | "silence" | | 3 | "loomed" | | 4 | "chill" | | 5 | "pulse" | | 6 | "scanning" | | 7 | "flicker" | | 8 | "silk" | | 9 | "stomach" | | 10 | "could feel" | | 11 | "weight" | | 12 | "whisper" | | 13 | "searing" | | 14 | "trembled" | | 15 | "the last thing" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 117 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 117 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 117 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 24 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 12 | | markdownWords | 15 | | totalWords | 966 | | ratio | 0.016 | | matches | | 0 | "aware" | | 1 | "come" | | 2 | "wings" | | 3 | "was" | | 4 | "wrong" | | 5 | "alive" | | 6 | "behind" | | 7 | "feel" | | 8 | "inside" | | 9 | "Aurora." | | 10 | "You don’t belong here." | | 11 | "breathing" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 5 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 21 | | wordCount | 959 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 0.94 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Grove | 5 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Eva | 1 | | Silas | 1 | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 | | Yu-Fei | 1 | | Silence | 1 | | Aurora | 9 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Eva" | | 1 | "Silas" | | 2 | "Yu-Fei" | | 3 | "Aurora" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 70.63% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 63 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "something like rotting honey" | | 1 | "seemed almost deliberate like petals arranged in a warning" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 2.07 | | wordCount | 966 | | matches | | 0 | "not feathers, not skin, but something in between, like stretched silk catching the moonl" | | 1 | "not skin, but something in between, like stretched silk catching the moonl" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 117 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 41 | | mean | 23.56 | | std | 22.42 | | cv | 0.951 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 74 | | 1 | 91 | | 2 | 45 | | 3 | 61 | | 4 | 6 | | 5 | 43 | | 6 | 57 | | 7 | 22 | | 8 | 26 | | 9 | 12 | | 10 | 17 | | 11 | 4 | | 12 | 36 | | 13 | 48 | | 14 | 11 | | 15 | 3 | | 16 | 2 | | 17 | 1 | | 18 | 34 | | 19 | 28 | | 20 | 7 | | 21 | 1 | | 22 | 10 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 1 | | 25 | 37 | | 26 | 43 | | 27 | 9 | | 28 | 11 | | 29 | 4 | | 30 | 18 | | 31 | 8 | | 32 | 3 | | 33 | 26 | | 34 | 2 | | 35 | 58 | | 36 | 37 | | 37 | 6 | | 38 | 40 | | 39 | 1 | | 40 | 20 |
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| 99.27% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 117 | | matches | | 0 | "was spoken" | | 1 | "was yanked" |
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| 12.73% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 5 | | totalVerbs | 178 | | matches | | 0 | "was going" | | 1 | "was asking" | | 2 | "was*, standing" | | 3 | "were breathing" | | 4 | "was *breathing" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 10 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 9 | | totalSentences | 117 | | ratio | 0.077 | | matches | | 0 | "The air in the Grove was too thick, too sweet with the scent of damp earth and something older—something like rotting honey." | | 1 | "The trees here were wrong—too tall, their branches twisting into shapes that made her skin prickle." | | 2 | "She had come alone because the pendant had whispered to her—*come*—and she had obeyed." | | 3 | "Then—movement." | | 4 | "It shifted, and for a heartbeat, she thought she saw *wings*—not feathers, not skin, but something in between, like stretched silk catching the moonlight." | | 5 | "Not the temperature—no, it was something deeper." | | 6 | "Then—a whisper." | | 7 | "She was—" | | 8 | "Then—darkness." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 967 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 37 | | adverbRatio | 0.038262668045501554 | | lyAdverbCount | 8 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.008273009307135471 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 117 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 117 | | mean | 8.26 | | std | 6.1 | | cv | 0.738 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 22 | | 1 | 19 | | 2 | 15 | | 3 | 12 | | 4 | 6 | | 5 | 10 | | 6 | 24 | | 7 | 12 | | 8 | 11 | | 9 | 16 | | 10 | 18 | | 11 | 10 | | 12 | 3 | | 13 | 2 | | 14 | 4 | | 15 | 4 | | 16 | 22 | | 17 | 9 | | 18 | 9 | | 19 | 13 | | 20 | 16 | | 21 | 14 | | 22 | 6 | | 23 | 4 | | 24 | 2 | | 25 | 12 | | 26 | 14 | | 27 | 5 | | 28 | 3 | | 29 | 2 | | 30 | 1 | | 31 | 1 | | 32 | 17 | | 33 | 9 | | 34 | 1 | | 35 | 2 | | 36 | 1 | | 37 | 2 | | 38 | 24 | | 39 | 6 | | 40 | 16 | | 41 | 9 | | 42 | 4 | | 43 | 2 | | 44 | 11 | | 45 | 12 | | 46 | 2 | | 47 | 15 | | 48 | 4 | | 49 | 4 |
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| 38.89% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 13 | | diversityRatio | 0.23931623931623933 | | totalSentences | 117 | | uniqueOpeners | 28 | |
| 70.92% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 94 | | matches | | 0 | "Just silence, heavy as a" | | 1 | "Just the press of something" |
| | ratio | 0.021 | |
| 75.32% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 34 | | totalSentences | 94 | | matches | | 0 | "She had come here because" | | 1 | "It had started the moment" | | 2 | "She wasn’t afraid." | | 3 | "She had told no one" | | 4 | "She had come alone because" | | 5 | "She should have heard something." | | 6 | "She followed it with her" | | 7 | "It shifted, and for a" | | 8 | "She stepped forward, her boots" | | 9 | "It just *was*, standing there" | | 10 | "Her voice was steady, but" | | 11 | "She took another step." | | 12 | "Her stomach twisted." | | 13 | "She swallowed hard, forcing herself" | | 14 | "Their surface was smooth, but" | | 15 | "She reached out, her fingers" | | 16 | "She could *feel* it, the" | | 17 | "She turned back to the" | | 18 | "she demanded, her voice raw" | | 19 | "She stumbled back, her heel" |
| | ratio | 0.362 | |
| 66.38% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 74 | | totalSentences | 94 | | matches | | 0 | "The air in the Grove" | | 1 | "Aurora adjusted the strap of" | | 2 | "The Heartstone pulsed faintly, a" | | 3 | "She had come here because" | | 4 | "It had started the moment" | | 5 | "The silver chain had tightened," | | 6 | "The trees here were wrong—too" | | 7 | "The wildflowers, vibrant and unnatural," | | 8 | "Aurora exhaled slowly, her breath" | | 9 | "She wasn’t afraid." | | 10 | "That was the difference." | | 11 | "The kind of awareness that" | | 12 | "She had told no one" | | 13 | "She had come alone because" | | 14 | "The first wrongness was the" | | 15 | "A rustle, too close." | | 16 | "Aurora froze, her muscles locking" | | 17 | "The Grove was vast, but" | | 18 | "She should have heard something." | | 19 | "A branch snapping." |
| | ratio | 0.787 | |
| 53.19% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 94 | | matches | | 0 | "Now, standing in the heart" |
| | ratio | 0.011 | |
| 45.45% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 44 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "The wildflowers, vibrant and unnatural, clustered in patterns that seemed almost deliberate, like petals arranged in a warning." | | 1 | "The kind of awareness that made her pulse quicken, that made her fingers twitch toward the small knife tucked into her boot." | | 2 | "Aurora froze, her muscles locking as she turned slowly, scanning the darkness." | | 3 | "The pendant’s glow pulsed, casting long shadows that stretched unnaturally, twisting into shapes that weren’t there." | | 4 | "She ran through the underbrush, her boots sinking into the damp earth, her lungs burning." | | 5 | "The Grove was behind her now, the standing stones shrinking into the distance, their glow fading like a dying ember." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 3 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "she demanded, her voice raw" | | 1 | "she snarled, her voice breaking" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she demanded (demand)" | | 1 | "she snarled (snarl)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 3 | | tagDensity | 0.667 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 1 | |