Run: 2026-02-20-01KHYAYK45Z6P3NJB84F9N38WH

Run Details

Duration:
4.4s
Cost:
$0.000207
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The Raven’s Nest hummed with the kind of quiet energy that only comes from a place where secrets linger in the air like smoke. The neon sign above the door—green, jagged, and unmistakable—flashed once, then settled into a steady pulse, casting a sickly glow over the dimly lit room. The walls were lined with maps and photographs, their edges yellowed with age, and the scent of aged whiskey and damp wood clung to the air like a ghost. Aurora Carter—Rory, to those who knew her—stood at the bar, her fingers brushing the rim of a glass before she set it down with a sharp *clink*. She was wearing a dark green sweater that hugged her shoulders, the sleeves rolled up just enough to show the faint outline of her wrist, where a small crescent scar still marked the place where her childhood accident had left its mark. Her black hair was pulled back into a loose braid, the ends escaping in loose waves, and her bright blue eyes scanned the room with the kind of sharp focus that had always been hers. She didn’t recognize the man at first. He was taller than she remembered, his frame broader, his posture rigid with something like tension. His hair was streaked with gray, his beard neatly trimmed, and his hazel eyes held a quiet intensity that made her pause. Then she saw the signet ring on his right hand, silver and worn smooth by years of use, and the way his left leg carried itself slightly off-kilter—a limp she hadn’t noticed before. Silas Blackwood turned, his voice low and deliberate as he set down a glass of amber liquid. "Rory." She didn’t move. "Silas." The word hung between them, heavy with unspoken years. He stepped closer, the bar stool creaking beneath him, and she watched the way his fingers flexed around the glass, the way his beard shadowed his jaw. "You look different." She exhaled through her nose, the breath sharp. "And you look the same." He didn’t flinch. "Same in the ways that matter." She turned away, her fingers tightening around the edge of the bar. The photographs on the wall—old maps of foreign cities, snapshots of men in suits and women in evening gowns—seemed to watch her, their faces frozen in time. "I’m not sure I’m ready for this." Silas didn’t answer right away. He poured himself another drink, the liquid sloshing over the rim, and set it down with deliberate care. "You left London without a word." She didn’t look at him. "I had reasons." "Reasons that didn’t include me." The words hit her like a punch. She turned back to face him, her chest tight. "You’re not the only one who’s changed." He studied her for a long moment, his gaze lingering on the scar on her wrist, the way her hair fell just so. "You’re still Rory." She swallowed. "I’m still trying to figure out who I am now." Silas leaned back, his shoulders relaxing just a little. "You were always good at that." She scoffed, though her voice was quiet. "I was good at running. At pretending I didn’t care." He reached across the bar, his fingers brushing hers for just a second before pulling back. "You cared. You always did." She pulled her hand away, the contact jarring. "I cared about the wrong things." Silas didn’t argue. He simply said, "Eva told me you were in London." Aurora’s stomach twisted. "She did." "She said you were working at the restaurant." She nodded, her throat tight. "Yu-Fei’s place." Silas took a slow sip of his drink, his expression unreadable. "You’re still delivering food." She exhaled, the breath coming out in a rush. "I’m not sure I can do this anymore." Silas set his glass down with a quiet *clink*. "What do you mean?" She turned away from him, her fingers digging into the bar’s polished surface. "I’m not good at this life anymore. Not the kind of life that lets you forget." Silas didn’t say anything for a long time. The bar was quiet, save for the occasional clink of glasses and the murmur of voices in the background. Then, slowly, he turned back to her. "You were always better at forgetting." She looked at him, her eyes burning. "I’m not sure I can forget anymore." Silas reached across the bar again, this time his hand closing around hers. His fingers were warm, his grip steady. "Then we’ll figure it out together." She pulled away, her breath coming faster. "You don’t understand." He didn’t let go. "I understand more than you think." She looked down at their hands, the way his fingers curled around hers like a promise. "I don’t know if I can trust you." Silas’s expression darkened just a little. "You never did." The words hung between them, heavy with the weight of years. Rory looked up at him, her eyes searching his face. "I’m sorry." Silas exhaled, his breath warm against her cheek. "For what?" She didn’t answer. Instead, she stepped back, her fingers brushing against his wrist before she pulled away. "I need to go." Silas didn’t stop her. He simply watched her as she walked toward the door, his voice low and quiet behind her. "You’re not alone in this." She didn’t look back. The door swung open, the night outside London pressing in around her, cold and indifferent. She didn’t know what she was running from anymore. Or who she was running to. But for the first time in years, she felt the weight of it all pressing down on her shoulders, and she didn’t know if she could carry it alone.
created_at"2026-02-20T20:13:09.152Z" 2/20/2026, 8:13:09 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"He simply said [simply]"
dialogueSentences35
tagDensity0.029
leniency0.057
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.057
89.48% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount951
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
52.68% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount951
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"pulse"
count1
1
word"scanned"
count1
2
word"tension"
count1
3
word"intensity"
count1
4
word"unspoken"
count1
5
word"stomach"
count1
6
word"unreadable"
count1
7
word"weight"
count2
highlights
0"pulse"
1"scanned"
2"tension"
3"intensity"
4"unspoken"
5"stomach"
6"unreadable"
7"weight"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences59
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences59
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences93
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen42
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords2
totalWords942
ratio0.002
matches
0"clink"
1"clink"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
33.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions20
wordCount755
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity1.46
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Carter1
Rory2
Blackwood1
Aurora2
London1
Silas11
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Carter"
3"Rory"
4"Blackwood"
5"Aurora"
6"Silas"
places
0"London"
globalScore0.772
windowScore0.333
95.65% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences46
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"something like tension"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount942
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences93
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs39
mean24.15
std21.93
cv0.908
sampleLengths
078
1104
278
318
44
539
613
79
846
929
108
115
1223
1326
1412
1515
1617
1721
1814
1913
205
218
227
2315
2417
2513
2629
2740
2814
2926
3010
3110
3224
339
3423
3510
3621
3726
3863
87.42% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences59
matches
0"were lined"
1"was pulled"
2"was streaked"
34.71% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs121
matches
0"was wearing"
1"was running"
2"was running"
50.69% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences93
ratio0.032
matches
0"The neon sign above the door—green, jagged, and unmistakable—flashed once, then settled into a steady pulse, casting a sickly glow over the dimly lit room."
1"Aurora Carter—Rory, to those who knew her—stood at the bar, her fingers brushing the rim of a glass before she set it down with a sharp *clink*."
2"The photographs on the wall—old maps of foreign cities, snapshots of men in suits and women in evening gowns—seemed to watch her, their faces frozen in time."
84.54% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount763
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount44
adverbRatio0.057667103538663174
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.010484927916120577
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences93
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences93
mean10.13
std8.41
cv0.831
sampleLengths
024
125
229
327
442
535
67
716
822
933
1017
111
123
131
149
1527
163
178
185
193
206
2112
2227
237
245
2518
266
275
283
295
307
319
327
3323
343
352
3610
379
386
397
4010
4116
425
438
446
453
4610
473
482
498
45.70% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.21505376344086022
totalSentences93
uniqueOpeners20
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences58
matches
0"Then she saw the signet"
1"Then, slowly, he turned back"
2"Instead, she stepped back, her"
ratio0.052
13.10% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount30
totalSentences58
matches
0"She was wearing a dark"
1"Her black hair was pulled"
2"She didn’t recognize the man"
3"He was taller than she"
4"His hair was streaked with"
5"She didn’t move."
6"He stepped closer, the bar"
7"She exhaled through her nose,"
8"He didn’t flinch."
9"She turned away, her fingers"
10"He poured himself another drink,"
11"She didn’t look at him."
12"She turned back to face"
13"He studied her for a"
14"She scoffed, though her voice"
15"He reached across the bar,"
16"She pulled her hand away,"
17"He simply said,"
18"She nodded, her throat tight."
19"She exhaled, the breath coming"
ratio0.517
3.10% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount53
totalSentences58
matches
0"The Raven’s Nest hummed with"
1"The neon sign above the"
2"The walls were lined with"
3"Aurora Carter—Rory, to those who"
4"She was wearing a dark"
5"Her black hair was pulled"
6"She didn’t recognize the man"
7"He was taller than she"
8"His hair was streaked with"
9"Silas Blackwood turned, his voice"
10"She didn’t move."
11"The word hung between them,"
12"He stepped closer, the bar"
13"She exhaled through her nose,"
14"He didn’t flinch."
15"She turned away, her fingers"
16"The photographs on the wall—old"
17"Silas didn’t answer right away."
18"He poured himself another drink,"
19"She didn’t look at him."
ratio0.914
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences58
matches(empty)
ratio0
37.04% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences27
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"She was wearing a dark green sweater that hugged her shoulders, the sleeves rolled up just enough to show the faint outline of her wrist, where a small crescent…"
1"Her black hair was pulled back into a loose braid, the ends escaping in loose waves, and her bright blue eyes scanned the room with the kind of sharp focus that…"
2"His hair was streaked with gray, his beard neatly trimmed, and his hazel eyes held a quiet intensity that made her pause."
3"He reached across the bar, his fingers brushing hers for just a second before pulling back."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences35
tagDensity0.029
leniency0.057
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
77.5820%