Run: 2026-02-20-01KHYAZ2MBSSKNX6SA21H8664Y

Run Details

Duration:
50.2s
Cost:
$0.000296
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The wrought iron gate groaned in protest, each screech echoing in the otherwise silent park. Rory hadn’t expected it to be unlocked. She’d visited the Fae Grove enough times with Eva to know the small, hidden entrance was usually secured with a heavy padlock. Now, it swung inward with a touch, invitingly, and that felt…wrong. She hesitated, one hand resting on the cold metal. Richmond Park was never truly quiet, even at night. The distant hum of traffic, the occasional shout. But inside the Grove, even near the perimeter, she usually felt a muffling. A shift in the air. Tonight, there was only silence. A holding of breath. Rory adjusted the strap of her messenger bag, the weight of the thermos and sketchbook familiar against her side. She’d told Yu-Fei she was sketching potential landscapes for menu art – a harmless enough lie. The truth was she needed to test the pendant. It had been pulsing with a nervous energy all day, a warmth that wasn't quite comfortable. Eva had warned her about ignoring it. *Hel portals don’t politely wait for you to be ready, Rory.* The standing stones loomed ahead, ancient oaks gnarled with age and draped with moss. They marked the boundary, Eva said, the veil between worlds thinning within the circle. The wildflowers, even in late November, bloomed in impossible hues. Lavender, crimson, gold, a defiant splash of color against the muted browns and grays of the park. She should have felt a sense of familiarity, of peace. Instead, a prickle of unease ran down her spine. She stepped between the stones. It wasn’t a dramatic shift, not like the first time Eva brought her here. No swirling colors, no disorienting rush. Just a subtle…softening. The air grew heavy, sweet with the scent of blossoms. The silence deepened, becoming a pressure in her ears. She walked further in, the soft earth cushioning her steps. She’d come hoping for a charging point for the pendant, a place where the proximity of a Hel portal would make the gemstone flare. She’d been chasing whispers of increased activity, strange disappearances reported in the local news – hikers lost in Epping Forest, cyclists vanishing on quiet country roads. Things Eva, with her deeply rooted knowledge of the Fae and the things that lurked beyond, had speculated were connected. Rory scanned the clearing. The usual landmarks were…slightly off. The twisted hawthorn tree usually stood sentinel near the center, its branches reaching like skeletal fingers. Now, it seemed to lean away from her, as if recoiling. A cluster of bluebells, ordinarily blooming with resolute cheer, drooped, their heads bowed. She pulled the Heartstone Pendant from beneath her sweater. The crimson gemstone pulsed, but not with its usual steady rhythm. It throbbed, erratic and frantic, like a trapped bird. The silver chain felt cold against her skin. Rory knelt, opening her sketchbook. She began to sketch the hawthorn tree, trying to focus on the details, to ground herself. The lines felt clumsy, wrong. Her hand trembled. She hadn’t felt this exposed, this…watched, since leaving Evan. A twig snapped nearby. She froze, pencil hovering over the page. Just a deer, she told herself. Or a fox. Richmond Park was full of wildlife. But the snap had been too close, too deliberate. She lifted her head, scanning the treeline. Shadows danced in her peripheral vision, shifting and reforming. But when she focused on them, they resolved into nothing. Just branches swaying in a breeze she couldn’t feel. She tried to resume sketching, but her concentration fractured. The silence had become oppressive, punctuated by small, unsettling sounds. A rustling in the undergrowth. The faint whisper of voices, too distant to decipher. A high-pitched whine, like insects buzzing, but without the rhythmic drone. Rory glanced at her watch. She’d been inside the Grove for maybe twenty minutes. It felt like hours. She should be getting a strong reading from the pendant by now. Instead, its frantic pulsing had slowed, becoming a dull, aching throb. She stood, her legs stiff. “Hello?” she called out, the sound swallowed by the stillness. No answer. Just the unsettling sensation of being observed. She began to walk, moving slowly around the perimeter of the clearing. The wildflowers brushed against her jeans, releasing a cloying sweetness that made her stomach churn. She noticed then that the colors seemed to be…deepening. The crimson was becoming almost black, the lavender shifting towards a bruised purple. And the flowers weren’t just blooming. They were *growing*. She watched, mesmerized and horrified, as a single bluebell unfurled, its petals stretching and widening with impossible speed. Within seconds, it was the size of her hand, its velvety bloom almost… pulsating. Rory backed away, bumping into something solid. She whirled around. It was the hawthorn tree. But it wasn’t the same tree she’d been sketching. This one was taller, its branches thicker, its bark slick and black. And hanging from the branches, swaying gently in the non-existent breeze, were…things. They weren’t quite shapes. More like impressions, vaguely humanoid, formed from shadow and woven with vines and blossoms. They didn’t move, not exactly. They *shifted*, their outlines blurring and reforming. The pendant flared, its crimson glow suddenly intense. The temperature plummeted. Rory could see her breath misting in the air. The sweet scent of the flowers turned acrid, like rotting fruit. A wave of dizziness washed over her. From the shadows beneath the hawthorn, a voice. Soft, melodic, and terrifyingly close. “Lost, little Laila?” Rory’s blood ran cold. No one had called her Laila in years. Only Eva did, a childhood nickname resurrected to remind Rory of their shared history. A history no one else could possibly know. She stumbled back, her hand flying to her left wrist, instinctively tracing the small, crescent-shaped scar. A relic of a fall from a tree as a child, a mark of vulnerability. “Who’s there?” she managed to choke out, her voice barely a whisper. The shadowy figures swayed. The voice chuckled, a sound like dry leaves skittering across stone. “You’ve been gone a long time, Aurora Carter. We’ve been waiting.” The pendant burned against her skin, its warmth turning to searing heat. The distortions in the clearing intensified. The flowers continued to grow, their colours becoming sickly and unnatural. Rory realized, with growing dread, that she wasn't looking at shadows anymore. She was looking *through* them. Into something far, far worse.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags2
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences4
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
76.59% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1068
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"truly"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
2
adverb"slowly"
count1
3
adverb"gently"
count1
4
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"truly"
1"slightly"
2"slowly"
3"gently"
4"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1068
totalAiIsms30
found
0
word"echoing"
count1
1
word"silence"
count3
2
word"weight"
count1
3
word"familiar"
count1
4
word"potential"
count1
5
word"warmth"
count2
6
word"comfortable"
count1
7
word"loomed"
count1
8
word"sense of"
count1
9
word"down her spine"
count1
10
word"scanned"
count1
11
word"sentinel"
count1
12
word"pulsed"
count1
13
word"throbbed"
count1
14
word"trembled"
count1
15
word"scanning"
count1
16
word"resolved"
count1
17
word"fractured"
count1
18
word"oppressive"
count1
19
word"whisper"
count2
20
word"rhythmic"
count1
21
word"throb"
count1
22
word"stomach"
count1
23
word"churn"
count1
24
word"tracing"
count1
25
word"searing"
count1
highlights
0"echoing"
1"silence"
2"weight"
3"familiar"
4"potential"
5"warmth"
6"comfortable"
7"loomed"
8"sense of"
9"down her spine"
10"scanned"
11"sentinel"
12"pulsed"
13"throbbed"
14"trembled"
15"scanning"
16"resolved"
17"fractured"
18"oppressive"
19"whisper"
20"rhythmic"
21"throb"
22"stomach"
23"churn"
24"tracing"
25"searing"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"blood ran cold"
count1
highlights
0"blood ran cold"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences112
matches(empty)
53.57% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount6
narrationSentences112
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
2"tried to"
3"managed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences114
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen25
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans4
markdownWords14
totalWords1066
ratio0.013
matches
0"Hel portals don’t politely wait for you to be ready, Rory."
1"growing"
2"shifted"
3"through"
25.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions2
matches
0"They marked the boundary, Eva said, the veil between worlds thinning within the circle."
1"Just a deer, she told herself."
97.57% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions34
wordCount1049
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity1.05
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Fae2
Grove3
Eva6
Park2
Yu-Fei1
November1
Hel2
Epping1
Forest1
Heartstone1
Pendant1
Evan1
Laila1
Rory11
persons
0"Eva"
1"November"
2"Pendant"
3"Evan"
4"Laila"
5"Rory"
places
0"Fae"
1"Grove"
2"Park"
3"Epping"
4"Forest"
globalScore0.976
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences83
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"as if recoiling"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1066
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences114
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs35
mean30.46
std22.57
cv0.741
sampleLengths
055
153
278
374
45
552
670
749
837
938
104
1166
1244
1341
1415
152
167
1749
189
1932
207
213
2238
2330
248
2530
2613
273
2834
2931
3012
3115
3211
3346
345
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences112
matches
0"were connected"
87.64% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs178
matches
0"was sketching"
1"wasn't looking"
2"was looking"
92.73% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences114
ratio0.018
matches
0"She’d told Yu-Fei she was sketching potential landscapes for menu art – a harmless enough lie."
1"She’d been chasing whispers of increased activity, strange disappearances reported in the local news – hikers lost in Epping Forest, cyclists vanishing on quiet country roads."
89.04% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1051
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small, crescent-shaped scar."
adverbCount48
adverbRatio0.04567078972407231
lyAdverbCount21
lyAdverbRatio0.019980970504281638
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences114
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences114
mean9.35
std4.71
cv0.504
sampleLengths
015
17
222
311
49
59
68
713
85
95
104
1119
1216
139
1416
157
1611
1714
1814
1910
2017
2110
229
235
2414
256
263
2710
289
2910
3024
3126
3220
334
345
3516
3611
3713
389
3911
409
418
425
4316
445
453
469
474
487
496
42.11% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.2894736842105263
totalSentences114
uniqueOpeners33
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount9
totalSentences110
matches
0"Instead, a prickle of unease"
1"Just a subtle…softening."
2"Just a deer, she told"
3"Just branches swaying in a"
4"Instead, its frantic pulsing had"
5"Just the unsettling sensation of"
6"More like impressions, vaguely humanoid,"
7"Soft, melodic, and terrifyingly close."
8"Only Eva did, a childhood"
ratio0.082
89.09% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount36
totalSentences110
matches
0"She’d visited the Fae Grove"
1"She hesitated, one hand resting"
2"She’d told Yu-Fei she was"
3"It had been pulsing with"
4"They marked the boundary, Eva"
5"She should have felt a"
6"She stepped between the stones."
7"It wasn’t a dramatic shift,"
8"She walked further in, the"
9"She’d come hoping for a"
10"She’d been chasing whispers of"
11"She pulled the Heartstone Pendant"
12"It throbbed, erratic and frantic,"
13"She began to sketch the"
14"Her hand trembled."
15"She hadn’t felt this exposed,"
16"She froze, pencil hovering over"
17"She lifted her head, scanning"
18"She tried to resume sketching,"
19"She’d been inside the Grove"
ratio0.327
64.55% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount87
totalSentences110
matches
0"The wrought iron gate groaned"
1"Rory hadn’t expected it to"
2"She’d visited the Fae Grove"
3"She hesitated, one hand resting"
4"Richmond Park was never truly"
5"The distant hum of traffic,"
6"A shift in the air."
7"Tonight, there was only silence."
8"A holding of breath."
9"Rory adjusted the strap of"
10"She’d told Yu-Fei she was"
11"The truth was she needed"
12"It had been pulsing with"
13"Eva had warned her about"
14"*Hel portals don’t politely wait"
15"The standing stones loomed ahead,"
16"They marked the boundary, Eva"
17"The wildflowers, even in late"
18"Lavender, crimson, gold, a defiant"
19"She should have felt a"
ratio0.791
90.91% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences110
matches
0"Now, it swung inward with"
1"Now, it seemed to lean"
ratio0.018
63.49% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences45
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"It had been pulsing with a nervous energy all day, a warmth that wasn't quite comfortable."
1"Things Eva, with her deeply rooted knowledge of the Fae and the things that lurked beyond, had speculated were connected."
2"The wildflowers brushed against her jeans, releasing a cloying sweetness that made her stomach churn."
3"She stumbled back, her hand flying to her left wrist, instinctively tracing the small, crescent-shaped scar."
4"The pendant burned against her skin, its warmth turning to searing heat."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags2
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"she managed, her voice barely a whisper"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she called out (call out)"
dialogueSentences4
tagDensity0.25
leniency0.5
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.5
79.0762%