Run: 2026-02-20-01KHYB0ZJ9C81C0WWJFQ4NQ8V3

Run Details

Duration:
11.5s
Cost:
$0.000440
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The green neon sign of *The Raven’s Nest* flickered weakly against the London drizzle, its glow bleeding into the pavement like a half-healed wound. Inside, the air smelled of aged whiskey and something older—dust, leather, the faint metallic tang of a hundred unwashed glasses. The walls were lined with yellowed maps, their edges frayed from decades of handling, and black-and-white photographs of men in suits and women in fur coats stared down from their perches like silent witnesses to secrets long buried. Aurora Carter—Rory, if anyone asked—leaned against the bar, nursing a glass of something amber and bitter. She hadn’t been back here in years. The last time she’d stepped through those doors, she’d been twenty-one, still carrying the weight of her father’s disappointment like a second skin, still believing she could outrun the life she’d been handed. Now, at twenty-five, she was a different kind of ghost. The scar on her left wrist, a pale crescent from a childhood accident, was the only physical trace of the girl she’d been. The rest of her had been honed by time, by survival, by the kind of quiet resilience that came from learning how to carry things without ever letting them drop. She wasn’t looking for trouble. She was just passing through, another face in the crowd, another stranger in a city that had long since stopped feeling like home. The delivery for *Golden Empress* had been slow, the streets slick with rain, and she’d taken the detour because the sign had caught her eye. Because she’d recognized the shape of it, the way it hummed with something just beneath the surface. Because, for a moment, she’d wanted to believe she might find something familiar in the noise. Then the door chimed, and the air shifted. A man stepped inside, his presence filling the space before he even took a full breath. He moved with the easy confidence of someone who knew exactly where he belonged, even if the rest of the world had forgotten. His auburn hair was streaked with silver, his beard neatly trimmed, and his limp—just a slight hitch in his left leg—was the only thing that gave away the years he’d spent running from things he couldn’t outrun. He wore a dark coat, the collar turned up against the rain, and when he glanced around, his hazel eyes landed on her like a brand. Rory didn’t look away. Silas Blackwood had always been the kind of man who carried himself like a secret. Even now, years later, she could see the way his gaze flicked over the room before settling on her, assessing, measuring. He didn’t smile. Not yet. That would come later, if it came at all. He ordered a whiskey at the bar, the bartender sliding it toward him without a word. Silas didn’t thank him. He just turned, his coat brushing against the stool beside hers, and said, “You look like hell.” Rory exhaled through her nose, a sound that was almost a laugh. “And you look like you’ve been drinking since before I was born.” His lips twitched. “Flattery won’t get you out of this.” “Neither will it get you in,” she shot back, but her fingers tightened around her glass just a little. The way he smelled—woodsmoke and something earthier, like damp stone—was the same. The way his voice had that low, rough edge, like he’d spent too many years shouting over gunfire. She should have known. She should have *seen* him. Silas raised his glass. “To old friends.” “To people who don’t know how to let things go.” He chuckled, the sound warm and unexpected. “You always were a pessimist.” “And you were always full of shit.” Another laugh, this one deeper. “Still am.” The silence that followed wasn’t uncomfortable. It was familiar. The kind of quiet that had once been comfortable, back when they’d been young and the world had still felt like it was theirs to shape. Now, it felt like the weight of all the years in between had settled between them, pressing down like a physical thing. Silas took a sip of his whiskey, swirling the liquid before setting the glass down. “You look like you’ve been running.” Rory’s fingers drummed against the bar. “I’m good at it.” “Not fast enough.” She turned her head just enough to meet his gaze. “What do you want, Silas?” His eyes darkened, just for a second. “The same thing I always wanted. To know you’re okay.” “And?” “And I don’t.” The words hung between them, sharp and unyielding. Rory’s chest tightened. She hadn’t expected that. She’d expected him to ask about her job, about London, about the life she’d built for herself. Not this. Not the way he looked at her like he could see the cracks in her armor, like he could see the parts of her that had been broken and stitched back together wrong. She took a slow breath. “I’m fine.” “Liar.” The word was soft, but it carried the weight of a truth she hadn’t dared admit to herself. Rory’s throat went dry. “You always were good at reading people.” “And you were always good at hiding.” She wanted to argue. She wanted to tell him she wasn’t hiding anymore. But the words stuck in her throat, tangled in the memory of the last time they’d spoken, the last time she’d seen the way his eyes had gone distant, like he’d been looking at something—or someone—beyond her. Silas studied her for a long moment, his gaze lingering on the scar on her wrist. “You still have that.” “Still have what?” “The habit of biting your lip when you’re thinking.” Rory’s fingers twitched. She hadn’t realized she was doing it. “I don’t bite my lip.” “You do when you’re lying.” She exhaled sharply, rubbing her thumb over the crescent-shaped mark. “I’m not lying.” “Then tell me why you’re here.” The question hung between them, heavy with implication. Rory’s pulse hammered in her ears. She could lie. She could tell him she’d just happened to walk in, that she’d been passing by, that she’d been looking for a place to escape the rain. But she knew better than to lie to Silas Blackwood. He’d see right through it. She took another sip of her drink, the whiskey burning its way down her throat. “I needed to see if you were still here.” His expression didn’t change. “I’m always here.” “For who?” For a moment, she thought he wouldn’t answer. Then, quietly, he said, “For people who need me.” “And do I need you?” Silas didn’t flinch. “You used to.” The words were simple, but they carried the weight of a lifetime of unspoken things. Rory’s fingers tightened around her glass. “What happened to you, Silas?” His gaze flickered to the signet ring on his right hand, the silver band catching the dim light. “I got old.” “Bullshit.” He finally looked at her, his hazel eyes sharp with something she couldn’t name. “I got out of the game. Retired. Opened a bar.” “And?” “And I miss it.” “You miss the danger?” “No.” His voice was quiet. “I miss the purpose.” Rory’s breath caught. She knew that look. She’d seen it in the mirror every morning for the past three years. The way she woke up and wondered if she was doing enough, if she was *anything* anymore. The way she looked at her life and saw only the things she’d left behind. Silas must have seen the shift in her expression. “You don’t have to be here, Rory.” “I know.” “Then why are you?” She swallowed hard. “Because I thought…” She trailed off, her fingers tracing the condensation on her glass. “Because I thought maybe you’d have answers.” “For what?” “For everything.” Silas studied her for a long moment, his gaze searching. Then, slowly, he reached into his coat and pulled out a small, leather-bound notebook. He slid it across the bar toward her, the pages yellowed with age. Rory hesitated, then took it. The cover was worn, the leather cracked in places. She flipped it open, and inside, she found a list of names, dates, and places—codes and coordinates, the kind of things that had once meant everything to her. But now, looking at them, she felt nothing. Silas watched her, his expression unreadable. “You used to be good at this.” “I’m not anymore.” “No,” he agreed. “You’re not.” The silence stretched between them, thick with the weight of what they’d been and what they’d become. Rory closed the notebook, her fingers brushing against the pages like she was trying to memorize the shape of them. “What now?” Silas took a slow sip of his whiskey, his gaze never leaving hers. “Now? Now we drink. Now we talk. Now we remember.” Rory looked down at her glass, at the amber liquid swirling inside. She thought about the life she’d built, the one she’d carved out of necessity and survival. She thought about the things she’d left behind, the things she’d buried because they were too heavy to carry. She thought about the girl she’d been, the one who’d believed in second chances and happy endings. And then she looked at Silas, at the man who had once been her anchor, her guide through the dark. At the man who had always known her better than she knew herself. She took a deep breath. “What do you remember?” His eyes crinkled at the corners, just slightly. “Everything.” And for the first time in years, Rory believed him.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags5
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences57
tagDensity0.088
leniency0.175
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
90.65% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1605
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"sharply"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
2
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"sharply"
1"slowly"
2"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
43.93% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1605
totalAiIsms18
found
0
word"flickered"
count2
1
word"weight"
count3
2
word"familiar"
count2
3
word"flicked"
count1
4
word"silence"
count2
5
word"comfortable"
count1
6
word"carried the weight"
count2
7
word"implication"
count1
8
word"pulse"
count1
9
word"unspoken"
count1
10
word"tracing"
count1
11
word"unreadable"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"weight"
2"familiar"
3"flicked"
4"silence"
5"comfortable"
6"carried the weight"
7"implication"
8"pulse"
9"unspoken"
10"tracing"
11"unreadable"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"weight of words/silence"
count1
highlights
0"the weight of a truth"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences107
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences107
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"happened to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences158
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen40
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans4
markdownWords7
totalWords1588
ratio0.004
matches
0"The Raven’s Nest"
1"Golden Empress"
2"seen"
3"anything"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions12
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
97.41% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions32
wordCount1331
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity1.05
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Raven1
London2
Carter1
Rory14
Blackwood2
Silas12
persons
0"Raven"
1"Carter"
2"Rory"
3"Blackwood"
4"Silas"
places
0"London"
globalScore0.974
windowScore1
85.06% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences77
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"felt like it was theirs to shape"
1"felt like the weight of all the years i"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1588
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences158
matches
0"in, that she’d"
1"knew that look"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs72
mean22.06
std24.98
cv1.133
sampleLengths
082
1119
286
38
4102
54
650
737
824
910
1058
117
1210
1312
147
157
1657
1721
1810
193
2015
2117
221
233
2467
257
261
2729
287
2950
3020
313
329
3315
345
3513
366
3758
3824
397
402
4117
425
436
4426
4521
461
4724
481
494
88.87% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount5
totalSentences107
matches
0"were lined"
1"been handed"
2"been honed"
3"was streaked"
4"been broken"
60.53% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount5
totalVerbs239
matches
0"wasn’t looking"
1"wasn’t hiding"
2"was doing"
3"was doing"
4"was trying"
34.36% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount10
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences158
ratio0.038
matches
0"Inside, the air smelled of aged whiskey and something older—dust, leather, the faint metallic tang of a hundred unwashed glasses."
1"Aurora Carter—Rory, if anyone asked—leaned against the bar, nursing a glass of something amber and bitter."
2"His auburn hair was streaked with silver, his beard neatly trimmed, and his limp—just a slight hitch in his left leg—was the only thing that gave away the years he’d spent running from things he couldn’t outrun."
3"The way he smelled—woodsmoke and something earthier, like damp stone—was the same."
4"But the words stuck in her throat, tangled in the memory of the last time they’d spoken, the last time she’d seen the way his eyes had gone distant, like he’d been looking at something—or someone—beyond her."
5"She flipped it open, and inside, she found a list of names, dates, and places—codes and coordinates, the kind of things that had once meant everything to her."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1348
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small, leather-bound notebook."
adverbCount50
adverbRatio0.037091988130563795
lyAdverbCount11
lyAdverbRatio0.008160237388724036
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences158
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences158
mean10.05
std8.16
cv0.812
sampleLengths
024
120
238
316
47
533
610
723
830
95
1023
1125
1217
1316
148
1516
1623
1737
1826
194
2015
2121
223
232
249
2516
264
2717
2812
2912
303
317
3219
3312
3418
354
365
374
383
3910
407
415
427
435
442
456
463
4726
4822
4915
37.97% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats19
diversityRatio0.20253164556962025
totalSentences158
uniqueOpeners32
96.15% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences104
matches
0"Then the door chimed, and"
1"Then, quietly, he said,"
2"Then, slowly, he reached into"
ratio0.029
54.62% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount43
totalSentences104
matches
0"She hadn’t been back here"
1"She wasn’t looking for trouble."
2"She was just passing through,"
3"He moved with the easy"
4"His auburn hair was streaked"
5"He wore a dark coat,"
6"He didn’t smile."
7"He ordered a whiskey at"
8"He just turned, his coat"
9"His lips twitched."
10"she shot back, but her"
11"She should have known."
12"She should have *seen* him."
13"He chuckled, the sound warm"
14"It was familiar."
15"She turned her head just"
16"His eyes darkened, just for"
17"She hadn’t expected that."
18"She’d expected him to ask"
19"She took a slow breath."
ratio0.413
41.73% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount87
totalSentences104
matches
0"The green neon sign of"
1"The walls were lined with"
2"Aurora Carter—Rory, if anyone asked—leaned"
3"She hadn’t been back here"
4"The last time she’d stepped"
5"The scar on her left"
6"The rest of her had"
7"She wasn’t looking for trouble."
8"She was just passing through,"
9"The delivery for *Golden Empress*"
10"A man stepped inside, his"
11"He moved with the easy"
12"His auburn hair was streaked"
13"He wore a dark coat,"
14"Rory didn’t look away."
15"Silas Blackwood had always been"
16"He didn’t smile."
17"That would come later, if"
18"He ordered a whiskey at"
19"Silas didn’t thank him."
ratio0.837
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount5
totalSentences104
matches
0"Now, at twenty-five, she was"
1"Because she’d recognized the shape"
2"Because, for a moment, she’d"
3"Even now, years later, she"
4"Now, it felt like the"
ratio0.048
90.91% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences55
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"The rest of her had been honed by time, by survival, by the kind of quiet resilience that came from learning how to carry things without ever letting them drop."
1"Silas took a sip of his whiskey, swirling the liquid before setting the glass down."
2"She flipped it open, and inside, she found a list of names, dates, and places—codes and coordinates, the kind of things that had once meant everything to her."
3"Rory closed the notebook, her fingers brushing against the pages like she was trying to memorize the shape of them."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags5
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"she shot back, but her fingers tightened around her glass just a little"
1"She trailed, her fingers tracing the condensation on her glass"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"he agreed (agree)"
dialogueSentences57
tagDensity0.035
leniency0.07
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.035
83.8730%