"The zip of Rory’s Golden Empress delivery bag caught on a thorn as she pushed through the brambles lining Richmond Park’s western edge, and she cursed under her breath—Irish lilt slipping through, a habit she’d inherited from her father when frustrated."
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"The scar throbbed, a faint echo of the childhood fall that had left it there—she’d climbed an oak with Eva, slipped, and gashed her wrist on a broken branch before her friend had hauled her to safety."
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"The deep crimson Heartstone, strung on a silver chain and roughly the size of her thumbnail, had been burning through her shirt for a week—faint at first, a warmth she’d chalked up to the restaurant’s steam tables, but growing sharper every time she’d made a delivery near Richmond’s tree-lined paths."
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"She’d dismissed the fae tales as folklore until last night, when the pendant’s pulse had synchronized with a strange, off-key whisper she’d heard from the park’s trees—one that sounded like her mother’s Welsh lullaby, but twisted, as if sung underwater."
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"Between them, wildflowers bloomed in a riot of color—crimson poppies, snow-white daisies, purple lupines—their petals glowing faintly in the moonlight as if lit from within."
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"It was December; every other flower in London was dead, and the sight sent a cold shiver down her spine that had nothing to do with the night air."
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"She’d left the restaurant at 11:05; the walk should have taken 12 minutes, but the math didn’t add up—especially now that the park’s usual night sounds were gone."
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"The screen flickered, then died—no warning, no low-battery alert."
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"Cool-headed as she was, the time warp was chipping away at her composure; she’d researched the grove’s lore enough to know that an hour inside could be minutes or days outside, and she didn’t want to risk Evan finding her gone for too long."
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"It was her mother’s lullaby, the one Jennifer had sung to her every night until she’d left for Cardiff University—*Ar hyd y nos*, its Welsh lyrics soft and soothing, but now twisted into something guttural, as if spoken through a throat filled with mud."
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"Nothing—only the wildflowers, swaying without a breeze, their glow now so bright it cast long shadows across the clearing."
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"She ran to the nearest stone, running her hands over its rough surface, and realized that the stones were moving—slowly, almost imperceptibly, their positions shifting so that the circle was tightening around her."
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"She flinched, rubbing the scar as if to wipe the memory away, and the pendant’s pulse skipped a beat—warmth flaring so hot she had to let go of the chain."
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"The child’s laugh returned, closer this time, and she caught a glimpse of a shadow at the edge of her vision—taller than a man, its limbs too long, its head too large, swaying in time with the wildflowers."
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"That was new—folklore hadn’t mentioned wildflowers reacting to human food like that."
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"She spun, but there was nothing there—only the oak stones, the wildflowers, the growing shadow."
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"The archives she’d pored over had mentioned Hel portals—gateways to a realm of chaos—and the pendant’s behavior matched the tales: pulsing warmth when near one."
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"Rory’s cool-headedness was fraying; she’d never faced something like this, not even with Evan."
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"She fidgeted with her left wrist’s scar, remembering Eva’s words when she’d fled to London: *Conceal, don’t fight—use what’s around you*."
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"The shadow loomed beneath her, its form shifting so that she could see a flash of a hand—pale, with a scar across the knuckles, the same scar Evan had gotten in a bar fight."
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"She looked down at the wildflowers, her napkin markers still tucked into their petals, and realized that they were now pointing toward the rift—she’d accidentally marked a path straight to it."
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"The time warp was now impossible to ignore; she could feel minutes stretching into hours, the night’s cold seeping through her clothes even as the pendant burned her chest."
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"She thought of her father’s barrister’s voice, sharp and logical, telling her to always gather evidence before acting; she thought of her mother’s teacher’s hands, gentle as she’d bandaged her wrist after the fall."
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"The shadow screamed—a sound like grinding stone—and recoiled, its red eyes dimming."
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"Rory didn’t hesitate; she scrambled down the oak, her sneakers slipping on the bark, and ran toward the oak standing stones, following the napkin markers in reverse."
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"She reached the edge of the circle, and this time, the gap between the stones was there—brambles visible beyond, the hum of London’s traffic faint but audible."
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"She looked up, and the oak standing stones were gone—only a cluster of ordinary oaks stood in their place, no wildflowers, no glow."
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"She had to find Eva, to tell her what had happened, but as she walked toward the park’s exit, she heard a faint whisper behind her—*Laila*—and she knew the grove wasn’t done with her."
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"Her straight, shoulder-length black hair stuck to the sweat on her neck, even though the December night bit at her cheeks, and she brushed it away with a hand t…"
1
"The scar throbbed, a faint echo of the childhood fall that had left it there—she’d climbed an oak with Eva, slipped, and gashed her wrist on a broken branch bef…"
2
"She’d dismissed the fae tales as folklore until last night, when the pendant’s pulse had synchronized with a strange, off-key whisper she’d heard from the park’…"
3
"Between them, wildflowers bloomed in a riot of color—crimson poppies, snow-white daisies, purple lupines—their petals glowing faintly in the moonlight as if lit…"
4
"She paused to catch her breath, thinking she’d been walking for 20 minutes, and checked her phone again."
5
"It was her mother’s lullaby, the one Jennifer had sung to her every night until she’d left for Cardiff University—*Ar hyd y nos*, its Welsh lyrics soft and soot…"
6
"The pendant’s burn intensified, and she tugged it from beneath her shirt, gasping at the sight: the crimson gem was pulsing so rapidly it looked like a tiny, be…"
7
"She ran to the nearest stone, running her hands over its rough surface, and realized that the stones were moving—slowly, almost imperceptibly, their positions s…"
8
"She flinched, rubbing the scar as if to wipe the memory away, and the pendant’s pulse skipped a beat—warmth flaring so hot she had to let go of the chain."
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"The shadow was now at the edge of the circle, moving toward her, its limbs scraping against the oak stones with a sound like broken glass."
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"She climbed, her sneakers scraping against the bark, and tucked herself into a crevice just as the shadow reached the spot where she’d been standing."
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"Rory didn’t hesitate; she scrambled down the oak, her sneakers slipping on the bark, and ran toward the oak standing stones, following the napkin markers in rev…"
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"She sat there, gasping, her left wrist’s scar throbbing, and realized that the shadow’s red eyes were still burned into her memory."