Run: 2026-02-20-01KHYB22VM5XDF5F89PECEDB1A

Run Details

Duration:
33.8s
Cost:
$0.000675
Provider:
Nebius

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The chipped Formica of the bar felt cool beneath Rory’s elbow. She traced the seam with a fingertip, watching the slow swirl of amber liquid in her glass. A quiet Tuesday night at The Raven’s Nest. Silas, leaning against the far end of the bar, polished glasses with a meticulousness that bordered on obsessive. The air smelled of stale beer, something vaguely floral from the cleaning solution, and the ghost of old cigarette smoke. It was a comforting smell, familiar as her own skin. A figure paused in the doorway, silhouetted against the neon green of the sign. Tall, broad shoulders, but something was…off. The way he hesitated, as if unsure whether to come in at all. Rory glanced up, and her breath hitched. Evan. He hadn’t changed in the broad strokes – still that same imposing build, the dark hair she used to run her fingers through, the curve of his jaw. But the softness had gone. The easy smile, the light in his eyes… replaced by something hard. His face was gaunt, shadowed, and a network of fine lines etched themselves around his mouth. He wore a tailored suit, expensive and dark, that seemed to swallow him whole. He looked like a man who hadn’t slept in weeks. He scanned the room, his gaze sweeping past her without recognition, then finally landing on Silas. A flicker of something – respect, perhaps? – crossed his features. He moved towards the bar, his stride purposeful. Rory lowered her eyes to her drink. She hadn't realized how much her hands were shaking. It had been four years. Four years since she’d severed every thread connecting her to him, moved to London, reinvented herself as Aurora, shed the careless, bright-eyed Laila he'd known. Four years of carefully constructed distance. “Silas,” Evan said, his voice a low rumble, rougher than she remembered. “Evan,” Silas replied, his tone neutral. He didn’t offer a hand. “Unexpected. Thought you were enjoying the Parisian nightlife.” Evan’s lips twisted in a humorless smile. “Paris lost its charm. A man needs solid ground now and then.” He didn’t sit at the bar, just leaned against it, facing Silas. Rory felt a prickle of awareness. Silas was a good sentinel, reading the man in front of him with a practiced eye. She knew he wouldn’t acknowledge her if Evan didn’t. “Business or pleasure?” Silas asked, his hand still moving in small, efficient circles as he polished a glass. “A bit of both. Some old debts needing settling. Thought you might be… informed.” Silas finally met Evan's gaze. “I hear things. It’s the nature of the trade. But information comes at a price.” “Naturally.” Evan’s eyes drifted, finally settling on Rory. Recognition flared, slow and unwelcome. “Laila?” Her name tasted alien on his tongue. She forced herself to look up, to meet his gaze. The shock in his eyes was… satisfying. Not enough to erase the years of fear, but enough. “Aurora,” she corrected, her voice steady despite the frantic beat of her heart. “It’s Aurora now.” His jaw tightened. “Aurora. Right.” He turned back to Silas. "Didn't realize you were harboring old flames, Si.” "She works for Yu-Fei. Delivers for the Golden Empress. Keeps herself busy," Silas said mildly. He slid a glass of something amber across the bar towards Evan. “On the house. Might loosen the tongue.” Evan didn’t touch the drink. He just kept looking at Rory, his gaze dissecting, measuring. “So. London. A far cry from the Cotswolds.” “I prefer it,” she said, taking a deliberate sip of her drink. It tasted like ash. “Do you?” He leaned closer, invading her space. "Running seems to be a hobby of yours." “I wouldn’t call it running. More… relocation.” “Relocation fueled by fear?” She clenched her fist around her glass. The crescent-shaped scar on her wrist throbbed, a phantom ache. “I made a choice.” “A choice I encouraged,” he said softly. “To protect you.” “Protect me?” A harsh laugh escaped her lips. “You almost destroyed me, Evan. Don’t rewrite history.” The air in the bar seemed to thicken. Silas hadn’t moved, hadn’t interfered, but Rory felt his presence like a weight. He was letting them have this, letting them untangle whatever mess they'd made. “I was trying to shield you from things you didn’t understand. From a world that would have swallowed you whole.” “And controlling me was the solution? Isolating me? Telling me who I could see, what I could think?” She could feel the old anger rising, hot and familiar. “I thought I knew what was best.” “You always did, didn’t you? That was the problem.” She remembered the suffocating feeling of being molded to fit his expectations, of losing herself in the shadow of his ambition. He reached out, his hand hovering near her arm, then dropped it before making contact. “I… I didn’t handle things well. I admit that.” “Didn’t handle things well?” Her voice rose, trembling with suppressed emotion. “You were obsessive, Evan. Possessive. And when I tried to leave, you… you made my life hell.” He flinched, just slightly, but she saw it. A crack in his carefully constructed facade. "That wasn't me. That was...the pressure." "Pressure? What kind of pressure justifies manipulation and control?" "The kind that comes with responsibility. The kind you wouldn't understand." “Don’t patronize me.” Rory turned fully towards him, her bright blue eyes locked on his. “I understand perfectly. I understand that you were using me, that my feelings didn’t matter. That I was just a pawn in your little game.” “That’s not true!” He took a step closer, his voice low and urgent. “I cared about you, Laila. I still…” "Don’t," Silas cut in, his voice a quiet command. He set down the glass he was polishing with a soft thud. The sound echoed in the sudden silence. "Let’s not mistake regret for genuine affection, shall we?" Evan’s gaze shifted to Silas, and for a moment, Rory thought he might explode. But he visibly forced himself to calm down, taking a deep, shuddering breath. “What do you want, Evan?” Rory asked, her voice stripped bare. “Why are you here?” He finally picked up the glass Silas had offered, swirled the liquid, and took a long swallow. “I need a favor. A discreet contact. Someone who can move things. Unseen.” He met her gaze again, his eyes calculating. “I remember you were always good at getting things done.” Rory felt a wave of nausea. He hadn’t come for an apology. He hadn’t come to see if she was okay. He’d come to exploit her again. “I don’t do favors for people who ruin lives,” she said, her voice cold. He smiled, a tight, humorless expression. “Everyone ruins someone’s life at some point, Aurora. It’s a matter of perspective.” He finished his drink and set the glass down with a sharp click. “Pity. I thought perhaps… perhaps we could put the past behind us.” “The past doesn’t just disappear, Evan. It follows you.” She gestured towards his haunted eyes, the lines etched on his face. “It’s right there, staring back at you.” He nodded slowly, his eyes losing some of their hardness. He looked…tired. Defeated. "You're right." He turned to Silas. "No information then?" Silas simply raised an eyebrow. Evan sighed. “Very well.” He turned to leave, pausing at the doorway. He glanced back at Rory one last time, his expression unreadable. “Aurora,” he said, his voice barely a whisper. “Be careful.” Then he was gone, swallowed by the London night. Rory didn’t move. She sat there, staring at the empty doorway, her hand still clenched around her glass. The amber liquid seemed to mock her, a bitter reminder of everything she’d left behind. Silas cleared his throat. “He’s a dangerous man, Rory. Always has been.” She nodded, unable to speak. “You did well to hold your ground.” Silas leaned closer, his hazel eyes knowing. “It takes courage to face a ghost.” Rory took another sip of her drink, the ash now a familiar taste. She wasn't sure it was courage, she thought. Perhaps it was just exhaustion. Exhaustion from always looking over her shoulder, always bracing for the past to come calling. And the chilling realization that some ghosts, no matter how hard you run, never truly let you go.
created_at"2026-02-20T20:15:03.549Z" 2/20/2026, 8:15:03 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
30.51% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags26
adverbTagCount5
adverbTags
0"Evan’s eyes drifted finally [finally]"
1"He turned back [back]"
2"Silas said mildly [mildly]"
3"he said softly [softly]"
4"Rory turned fully [fully]"
dialogueSentences59
tagDensity0.441
leniency0.881
rawRatio0.192
effectiveRatio0.169
71.06% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1382
totalAiIsmAdverbs8
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count2
1
adverb"softly"
count1
2
adverb"slightly"
count1
3
adverb"perfectly"
count1
4
adverb"slowly"
count1
5
adverb"very"
count1
6
adverb"truly"
count1
highlights
0"carefully"
1"softly"
2"slightly"
3"perfectly"
4"slowly"
5"very"
6"truly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1382
totalAiIsms29
found
0
word"traced"
count1
1
word"comforting"
count1
2
word"familiar"
count3
3
word"imposing"
count1
4
word"etched"
count2
5
word"scanned"
count1
6
word"flicker"
count1
7
word"constructed"
count2
8
word"charm"
count1
9
word"sentinel"
count1
10
word"efficient"
count1
11
word"throbbed"
count1
12
word"weight"
count1
13
word"could feel"
count1
14
word"facade"
count1
15
word"pawn"
count1
16
word"echoed"
count1
17
word"silence"
count1
18
word"affection"
count1
19
word"calculating"
count1
20
word"eyebrow"
count1
21
word"unreadable"
count1
22
word"whisper"
count1
23
word"reminder"
count1
24
word"chilling"
count1
highlights
0"traced"
1"comforting"
2"familiar"
3"imposing"
4"etched"
5"scanned"
6"flicker"
7"constructed"
8"charm"
9"sentinel"
10"efficient"
11"throbbed"
12"weight"
13"could feel"
14"facade"
15"pawn"
16"echoed"
17"silence"
18"affection"
19"calculating"
20"eyebrow"
21"unreadable"
22"whisper"
23"reminder"
24"chilling"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"clenched jaw/fists"
count1
1
label"wave of emotion"
count1
highlights
0"clenched her fist"
1"a wave of nausea"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences106
matches
0"felt a prickle"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences106
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences138
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen30
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1382
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions12
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions50
wordCount968
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity1.76
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Formica1
Rory14
Tuesday1
Raven1
Nest1
Silas17
London2
Aurora1
Laila1
Evan10
Recognition1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Silas"
2"Aurora"
3"Laila"
4"Evan"
5"Recognition"
places
0"Raven"
1"London"
globalScore0.622
windowScore0.5
87.50% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences80
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"looked like a man who hadn’t slept in wee"
1"But he visibly forced himself to c"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.724
wordCount1382
matches
0"Not enough to erase the years of fear, but enough"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences138
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs56
mean24.68
std16.91
cv0.685
sampleLengths
084
140
21
385
435
552
612
719
831
931
1018
1114
1220
1314
1434
1516
1618
1734
1823
1916
2016
217
224
2321
2410
2516
2634
2720
2828
297
3030
3124
3228
3321
349
3511
3640
3720
3837
3927
4015
4148
4227
4314
4444
4528
4622
475
4823
4910
98.64% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences106
matches
0"being molded"
1"was gone"
89.50% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs181
matches
0"were shaking"
1"was letting"
2"was polishing"
80.75% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences138
ratio0.022
matches
0"He hadn’t changed in the broad strokes – still that same imposing build, the dark hair she used to run her fingers through, the curve of his jaw."
1"A flicker of something – respect, perhaps?"
2"– crossed his features."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount967
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"careless, bright-eyed Laila"
adverbCount37
adverbRatio0.038262668045501554
lyAdverbCount16
lyAdverbRatio0.016546018614270942
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences138
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences138
mean10.01
std5.91
cv0.591
sampleLengths
011
117
28
318
420
510
614
76
813
97
101
1128
125
138
144
1516
1614
1710
1816
197
204
218
227
239
245
2525
266
2712
286
295
308
317
3224
336
3416
359
3618
3714
385
3915
408
415
421
437
4410
456
461
4710
4813
493
55.31% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.36231884057971014
totalSentences138
uniqueOpeners50
66.01% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences101
matches
0"Then he was gone, swallowed"
1"Perhaps it was just exhaustion."
ratio0.02
21.98% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount50
totalSentences101
matches
0"She traced the seam with"
1"It was a comforting smell,"
2"He hadn’t changed in the"
3"His face was gaunt, shadowed,"
4"He wore a tailored suit,"
5"He looked like a man"
6"He scanned the room, his"
7"He moved towards the bar,"
8"She hadn't realized how much"
9"It had been four years."
10"He didn’t offer a hand."
11"He didn’t sit at the"
12"She knew he wouldn’t acknowledge"
13"Her name tasted alien on"
14"She forced herself to look"
15"she corrected, her voice steady"
16"His jaw tightened."
17"He turned back to Silas"
18"He slid a glass of"
19"He just kept looking at"
ratio0.495
14.46% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount90
totalSentences101
matches
0"The chipped Formica of the"
1"She traced the seam with"
2"A quiet Tuesday night at"
3"Silas, leaning against the far"
4"The air smelled of stale"
5"It was a comforting smell,"
6"A figure paused in the"
7"The way he hesitated, as"
8"Rory glanced up, and her"
9"He hadn’t changed in the"
10"The easy smile, the light"
11"His face was gaunt, shadowed,"
12"He wore a tailored suit,"
13"He looked like a man"
14"He scanned the room, his"
15"A flicker of something –"
16"He moved towards the bar,"
17"Rory lowered her eyes to"
18"She hadn't realized how much"
19"It had been four years."
ratio0.891
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences101
matches(empty)
ratio0
79.83% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences34
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Silas, leaning against the far end of the bar, polished glasses with a meticulousness that bordered on obsessive."
1"He just kept looking at Rory, his gaze dissecting, measuring."
2"He reached out, his hand hovering near her arm, then dropped it before making contact."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags26
uselessAdditionCount8
matches
0"Evan said, his voice a low rumble, rougher than she remembered"
1"Silas replied, his tone neutral"
2"she corrected, her voice steady despite the frantic beat of her heart"
3"He took, his voice low and urgent"
4"He met, his eyes calculating"
5"she said, her voice cold"
6"She gestured, the lines etched on his face"
7"he said, his voice barely a whisper"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she corrected (correct)"
dialogueSentences59
tagDensity0.169
leniency0.339
rawRatio0.1
effectiveRatio0.034
73.5404%