Run: 2026-02-20-01KHYBA0NVP22DZ7J9FAJS6NRY

Run Details

Model:
Grok 4
Duration:
1m 54s
Cost:
$0.045382
Provider:
xAI

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
Rory pushed open the heavy wooden door of The Raven's Nest, the faint chime of a bell above it cutting through the muffled hum of evening chatter. Rain slicked the streets of Soho outside, and she shook droplets from her jacket, her straight black hair clinging damply to her shoulders. She hadn't meant to come here—her flat was just upstairs, a narrow staircase away from the noise—but the delivery shift at Golden Empress had run long, and the thought of cooking alone felt like surrender. Better a quick pint in a familiar dimness than the echo of her own thoughts. The bar smelled of aged wood and spilled ale, walls lined with yellowed maps of forgotten borders and black-and-white photographs of stern-faced men in trench coats. She scanned the room out of habit, her bright blue eyes flicking over the scattering of patrons: a couple huddled in a booth, a lone drinker nursing a whiskey at the far end. And then, behind the bar, polishing a glass with deliberate care, was Silas Blackwood. She froze. It had been—what, eight years? More? The last time she'd seen him, he'd been striding through a crowded Cardiff pub, his auburn hair untouched by gray, his laugh cutting through the din like a blade. An old family friend, her father's colleague from some long-ago legal tangle that involved whispers of international intrigue. Brendan Carter had always spoken of Silas with a mix of admiration and caution, like handling a loaded gun. Rory had been nineteen then, all sharp edges and unearned confidence, tagging along on one of her father's trips. Silas had bought her a soda, teased her about her pre-law ambitions, and vanished into whatever shadow world he inhabited. Now, he looked up, hazel eyes meeting hers across the scarred oak bar. A flicker of recognition, then something deeper—surprise, perhaps, or the ghost of old warmth. His grey-streaked auburn hair was pulled back neatly, his beard trimmed with the precision of a man who disliked loose ends. He set the glass down, his silver signet ring catching the low light from the pendant lamps. "Rory?" His voice carried that same quiet authority, though softer now, edged with the years. He leaned on the bar, favoring his right leg just a touch—a limp she didn't remember. She forced a smile, sliding onto a stool. "Silas. Bloody hell. You're the last person I expected to see pouring pints in Soho." He chuckled, but it didn't reach his eyes. "Life's full of demotions. What'll it be? On the house, for old times." "Guinness. Dark as my mood." She watched him pull the tap, his movements efficient, almost mechanical. The bar's dim glow highlighted the lines etched around his mouth, the subtle hunch in his shoulders. He wasn't the towering figure from her memories anymore; time had whittled him down, left him with that slight limp as he turned to fetch a fresh pint glass. He slid the foam-capped glass toward her. "Haven't seen you since... Cardiff, was it? That godawful pub your father dragged us to. You were all fire and opinions back then. Pre-law, right? Planning to conquer the world." She traced the small crescent scar on her left wrist with her thumb, a habit when memories pressed too close. "Yeah, well, plans change. Dropped out after a year. Too much like Da, arguing with shadows." She took a sip, the bitter stout grounding her. "What about you? Last I heard, you were... I don't know, jetting off to Prague or somewhere exotic. Spymaster Silas, my father called you." He winced at the alias, leaning against the back counter. His signet ring tapped rhythmically against the wood, a tell she remembered from that long-ago night. "Prague was the end of it. Botched op. Knee's never been the same." He gestured vaguely to his left leg, the limp more pronounced now that she was looking for it. "Retired to this. The Raven's Nest. Keeps me out of trouble, mostly." Rory nodded, but the words felt hollow. She glanced around the bar—the hidden bookshelf in the corner that she knew led to a secret back room, though she'd never asked about it. Rumors swirled in Soho about Silas Blackwood: ex-MI6, running a network from behind the taps. But seeing him now, the quiet authority tempered by weariness, it hit her how much he'd changed. The man who'd once spun tales of espionage over pints now wiped spills with a rag, his hazel eyes distant, like he was eavesdropping on ghosts. "You look good, though," she said, trying for lightness. "The beard suits you. Makes you look... distinguished." He snorted. "Distinguished is code for old. And you—Rory Carter, all grown up. What brings you to London? Last your father mentioned, you were set for the bar exam." She stared into her glass, the foam dissolving slowly. Unspoken regret coiled in her chest, tight as a fist. Evan. The abusive ex who'd left bruises she could hide but scars that lingered. Fleeing Cardiff at Eva's urging, landing in this city of strangers. She'd found work delivering for Yu-Fei Cheung's place, the Golden Empress, pedaling through rain-slicked streets on a battered bike. And somehow, she'd ended up living above this very bar, though she hadn't known it was Silas's until now. Fate's cruel joke. "Life happened," she said finally, her voice steady despite the knot in her throat. "Bad breakup. Needed a fresh start. Eva—remember her? Childhood mate—pushed me here. Said London swallows regrets whole." Silas's gaze softened, and he poured himself a measure of scotch, neat. "Regrets. We've all got a cellar full." He limped around the bar, taking the stool next to her with a barely audible grunt. Up close, she could see the fine lines around his eyes, the way his hands—once so steady—trembled just a fraction as he lifted his glass. "I regret Prague every damn day. Lost a good man there. My fault, pushing too hard. Thought I was invincible." She turned to him, their knees almost brushing. The bar's chatter faded to a distant murmur, the green neon sign outside casting erratic shadows through the window. "You? Invincible? Da always said you were the careful one. The spymaster who never got caught." A bitter laugh escaped him. "Careful gets you killed slower. I walked away with this." He slapped his thigh lightly. "And a lifetime of what-ifs. What if I'd pulled back? What if I'd listened?" He met her eyes, and for a moment, the years peeled away—she saw the Silas from Cardiff, hazel eyes alight with stories. But then it was gone, replaced by this shadowed version, a man who'd traded secrets for solitude. Rory felt the weight of her own unspoken words pressing down. "I regret not leaving sooner," she admitted, voice low. "Evan—he... it got bad. Bruises, the lot. I stayed because I thought I could fix it. Fix him." Her fingers tightened around the glass, the scar on her wrist itching like a reminder. "By the time I ran, I was a ghost of myself. Smart girl, quick thinker— that's what everyone said. But I couldn't think my way out of that." Silas set his glass down with a soft clink. "We all have our blind spots. Mine was ambition. Yours... love, maybe? Or stubbornness, like your father." He smiled faintly, but it held no joy. "Time doesn't heal, Rory. It just layers on the scars." She nodded, the tension between them thickening like fog. Who they'd been—her, the ambitious student; him, the untouchable operative—clashed against the reality: her scraping by on deliveries, him limping through nights in a dimly lit bar. Unspoken regrets hung in the air, heavy as the rain outside. What if she'd finished uni? What if he'd retired earlier? What if they'd crossed paths sooner, before life had carved them into these shapes? "You own this place?" she asked, gesturing to the maps on the walls, the photographs that seemed to watch them. "Aye. Front for... old habits." He glanced at the bookshelf, then back to her. "And you? Delivering takeout? That's not the Rory I remember." She shrugged, but it stung. "Pays the rent. Flat above—wait, this is your building?" His eyebrows rose. "Small world. Been letting it out through an agency. Didn't know it was you." Laughter bubbled up, ragged and real. "Fate's a bastard. Here I am, crashing into your life again after all these years." Silas reached over, his hand covering hers briefly, warm and steady despite the tremor. "Maybe not crashing. Maybe landing." But his eyes held that distance again, the regret pooling like spilled ink. He pulled back, standing with effort, the limp pulling him off-balance for a split second. The bar door opened, letting in a gust of wet air and a new patron, shattering the bubble. Rory finished her pint, the bitterness lingering on her tongue. They exchanged numbers, promises to catch up properly, but as she climbed the stairs to her flat, the weight settled heavier. Time had changed them both—him into a relic of his former self, her into a woman running from shadows. Unspoken, the regrets echoed: missed chances, paths not taken, the slow erosion of who they'd meant to be. Downstairs, Silas wiped the bar clean, his signet ring glinting under the lights. He paused at her empty glass, tracing the rim with a finger. The Nest felt emptier now, the maps on the walls mocking him with borders he'd once crossed without fear. Rory Carter, back in his orbit after all this time. A reminder of what he'd lost, and what he couldn't reclaim. She lay on her narrow bed upstairs, staring at the ceiling cracks that mapped out like old veins. The scar on her wrist throbbed faintly, a crescent moon of memory. Silas below, her past incarnate, stirring regrets she'd buried deep. London had swallowed her, yes, but it hadn't erased the ache of what might have been. Time pressed on, relentless, leaving them both adrift in its wake. The rain drummed steadily against the window, a rhythm of unspoken words. Rory closed her eyes, but sleep came slow, haunted by the man downstairs and the ghosts of their younger selves. Silas, in the dim bar, poured another scotch, toasting the empty stool where she'd sat. Regret wasn't a visitor; it was a permanent resident, woven into the fabric of their changed lives. And in the quiet hours, it whispered loudest.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
0.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags15
adverbTagCount5
adverbTags
0"He gestured vaguely [vaguely]"
1"she said finally [finally]"
2"He limped around [around]"
3"Her fingers tightened around [around]"
4"He smiled faintly [faintly]"
dialogueSentences31
tagDensity0.484
leniency0.968
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.323
91.52% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1768
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count1
2
adverb"lightly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"very"
2"lightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
29.30% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1768
totalAiIsms25
found
0
word"familiar"
count1
1
word"echo"
count1
2
word"scanned"
count1
3
word"intrigue"
count1
4
word"flicker"
count1
5
word"warmth"
count1
6
word"efficient"
count1
7
word"mechanical"
count1
8
word"etched"
count1
9
word"traced"
count1
10
word"unspoken"
count5
11
word"trembled"
count1
12
word"weight"
count2
13
word"reminder"
count2
14
word"tension"
count1
15
word"echoed"
count1
16
word"glinting"
count1
17
word"tracing"
count1
18
word"throbbed"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"echo"
2"scanned"
3"intrigue"
4"flicker"
5"warmth"
6"efficient"
7"mechanical"
8"etched"
9"traced"
10"unspoken"
11"trembled"
12"weight"
13"reminder"
14"tension"
15"echoed"
16"glinting"
17"tracing"
18"throbbed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
1
label"flicker of emotion"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
1"A flicker of recognition"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences96
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences96
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences112
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen38
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1740
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions12
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"And in the quiet hours, it whispered loudest."
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions41
wordCount1346
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity0.89
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest2
Soho2
Golden2
Empress2
Silas12
Blackwood2
Cardiff3
Carter2
Rory7
Eva1
Yu-Fei1
Cheung1
Unspoken3
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Empress"
3"Silas"
4"Blackwood"
5"Carter"
6"Rory"
7"Eva"
places
0"Soho"
1"Golden"
2"Cardiff"
3"Yu-Fei"
4"Cheung"
globalScore1
windowScore1
89.02% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences82
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"felt like surrender"
1"photographs that seemed to watch them"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1740
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences112
matches
0"held that distance"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs32
mean54.38
std27.56
cv0.507
sampleLengths
0100
173
2113
365
431
523
621
762
837
969
1069
1190
1217
1329
1485
1531
1680
1743
1873
1981
2044
2171
2220
2324
2414
2517
2621
2747
2886
2965
3067
3172
94.30% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences96
matches
0"been nineteen"
1"was pulled"
2"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs218
matches
0"was looking"
1"was eavesdropping"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount12
semicolonCount3
flaggedSentences11
totalSentences112
ratio0.098
matches
0"She hadn't meant to come here—her flat was just upstairs, a narrow staircase away from the noise—but the delivery shift at Golden Empress had run long, and the thought of cooking alone felt like surrender."
1"It had been—what, eight years?"
2"A flicker of recognition, then something deeper—surprise, perhaps, or the ghost of old warmth."
3"He leaned on the bar, favoring his right leg just a touch—a limp she didn't remember."
4"He wasn't the towering figure from her memories anymore; time had whittled him down, left him with that slight limp as he turned to fetch a fresh pint glass."
5"She glanced around the bar—the hidden bookshelf in the corner that she knew led to a secret back room, though she'd never asked about it."
6"Up close, she could see the fine lines around his eyes, the way his hands—once so steady—trembled just a fraction as he lifted his glass."
7"\"And a lifetime of what-ifs. What if I'd pulled back? What if I'd listened?\" He met her eyes, and for a moment, the years peeled away—she saw the Silas from Cardiff, hazel eyes alight with stories."
8"Who they'd been—her, the ambitious student; him, the untouchable operative—clashed against the reality: her scraping by on deliveries, him limping through nights in a dimly lit bar."
9"Time had changed them both—him into a relic of his former self, her into a woman running from shadows."
10"Regret wasn't a visitor; it was a permanent resident, woven into the fabric of their changed lives."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1368
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount54
adverbRatio0.039473684210526314
lyAdverbCount15
lyAdverbRatio0.010964912280701754
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences112
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences112
mean15.54
std7.72
cv0.497
sampleLengths
027
123
235
315
426
533
614
72
85
91
1029
1118
1219
1319
1420
1513
1614
1721
1817
1915
2016
218
2215
238
2413
2516
2617
2729
287
2930
3020
3125
3224
3310
3416
3531
3612
377
3825
3915
4017
4126
429
438
442
4527
469
4710
481
4913
68.75% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.42857142857142855
totalSentences112
uniqueOpeners48
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences92
matches(empty)
ratio0
54.78% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount38
totalSentences92
matches
0"She hadn't meant to come"
1"She scanned the room out"
2"It had been—what, eight years?"
3"His grey-streaked auburn hair was"
4"He set the glass down,"
5"His voice carried that same"
6"He leaned on the bar,"
7"She forced a smile, sliding"
8"He chuckled, but it didn't"
9"She watched him pull the"
10"He wasn't the towering figure"
11"He slid the foam-capped glass"
12"She traced the small crescent"
13"She took a sip, the"
14"He winced at the alias,"
15"His signet ring tapped rhythmically"
16"He gestured vaguely to his"
17"She glanced around the bar—the"
18"she said, trying for lightness"
19"She stared into her glass,"
ratio0.413
52.39% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount75
totalSentences92
matches
0"Rory pushed open the heavy"
1"Rain slicked the streets of"
2"She hadn't meant to come"
3"The bar smelled of aged"
4"She scanned the room out"
5"It had been—what, eight years?"
6"The last time she'd seen"
7"An old family friend, her"
8"Brendan Carter had always spoken"
9"Rory had been nineteen then,"
10"Silas had bought her a"
11"A flicker of recognition, then"
12"His grey-streaked auburn hair was"
13"He set the glass down,"
14"His voice carried that same"
15"He leaned on the bar,"
16"She forced a smile, sliding"
17"He chuckled, but it didn't"
18"She watched him pull the"
19"The bar's dim glow highlighted"
ratio0.815
54.35% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences92
matches
0"Now, he looked up, hazel"
ratio0.011
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences60
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"The last time she'd seen him, he'd been striding through a crowded Cardiff pub, his auburn hair untouched by gray, his laugh cutting through the din like a blad…"
1"His grey-streaked auburn hair was pulled back neatly, his beard trimmed with the precision of a man who disliked loose ends."
2"The man who'd once spun tales of espionage over pints now wiped spills with a rag, his hazel eyes distant, like he was eavesdropping on ghosts."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags15
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"She watched, his movements efficient, almost mechanical"
1"she said finally, her voice steady despite the knot in her throat"
2"she admitted, voice low"
3"But his eyes held, the regret pooling like spilled ink"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she admitted (admit)"
dialogueSentences31
tagDensity0.129
leniency0.258
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.065
77.8136%