| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | |
| 93.34% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1502 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 3.46% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1502 | | totalAiIsms | 29 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "chill" | | 1 | "warmth" | | 2 | "pulse" | | 3 | "throb" | | 4 | "loomed" | | 5 | "pulsed" | | 6 | "silence" | | 7 | "scanning" | | 8 | "whisper" | | 9 | "glistening" | | 10 | "sense of" | | 11 | "could feel" | | 12 | "beacon" | | 13 | "raced" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 191 | | matches | | |
| 68.06% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 2 | | hedgeCount | 8 | | narrationSentences | 191 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 191 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 44 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 28 | | markdownWords | 69 | | totalWords | 1489 | | ratio | 0.046 | | matches | | 0 | "knew" | | 1 | "They’re coming. The Fae are wrong. You have to stop them before they open the door." | | 2 | "Fine. One look. Then I’m gone." | | 3 | "thick" | | 4 | "watch" | | 5 | "click" | | 6 | "You shouldn’t be here," | | 7 | "moved" | | 8 | "rippled" | | 9 | "shifted" | | 10 | "should" | | 11 | "smell" | | 12 | "You have to leave," | | 13 | "Just walk away. Now." | | 14 | "whisper" | | 15 | "something" | | 16 | "person" | | 17 | "glow" | | 18 | "smiling" | | 19 | "Please let this be a nightmare," | | 20 | "Please let me wake up." | | 21 | "hungry" | | 22 | "behind" | | 23 | "screamed" | | 24 | "wrong" | | 25 | "her" | | 26 | "You have to leave," | | 27 | "Now." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 3 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 92.91% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 41 | | wordCount | 1489 | | uniqueNames | 13 | | maxNameDensity | 1.14 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 2 | | Carter | 1 | | Rory | 17 | | Grove | 4 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Pendant | 1 | | Hel | 1 | | London | 1 | | Fae | 1 | | Like | 4 | | Couldn | 3 | | Had | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Pendant" | | 3 | "Hel" | | 4 | "Like" | | 5 | "Had" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 0.929 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 98.45% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 97 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "as if sensing her hesitation" | | 1 | "bones that seemed to glow* from within" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1489 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 191 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 97 | | mean | 15.35 | | std | 18.19 | | cv | 1.185 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 92 | | 1 | 92 | | 2 | 53 | | 3 | 4 | | 4 | 31 | | 5 | 40 | | 6 | 6 | | 7 | 67 | | 8 | 23 | | 9 | 6 | | 10 | 52 | | 11 | 2 | | 12 | 7 | | 13 | 2 | | 14 | 24 | | 15 | 4 | | 16 | 6 | | 17 | 37 | | 18 | 30 | | 19 | 4 | | 20 | 9 | | 21 | 53 | | 22 | 29 | | 23 | 5 | | 24 | 26 | | 25 | 20 | | 26 | 11 | | 27 | 5 | | 28 | 5 | | 29 | 5 | | 30 | 2 | | 31 | 33 | | 32 | 7 | | 33 | 2 | | 34 | 3 | | 35 | 8 | | 36 | 6 | | 37 | 49 | | 38 | 5 | | 39 | 5 | | 40 | 23 | | 41 | 6 | | 42 | 2 | | 43 | 6 | | 44 | 4 | | 45 | 7 | | 46 | 39 | | 47 | 4 | | 48 | 38 | | 49 | 13 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 191 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 256 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 22 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 16 | | totalSentences | 191 | | ratio | 0.084 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora Carter—Rory, to those who knew her—had told herself it was just the autumn chill, the kind that seeped into bones when you stood too long in the wrong place." | | 1 | "The clearing beyond them was too still, the wildflowers—always blooming here, always too bright—dulling to a sickly yellow under the sickly moonlight." | | 2 | "Rory had packed a bag—just in case—and now stood at the edge of the Grove, her boots sinking slightly into the damp earth." | | 3 | "The standing stones—ancient, she’d read, older than the park itself—seemed to *watch* her." | | 4 | "Her fingers brushed against the rough bark of a tree—" | | 5 | "—and the bark *moved*." | | 6 | "It was too soft to make out the words, but the tone was unmistakable—wet, slithering, like something speaking through water." | | 7 | "And then—" | | 8 | "And then—" | | 9 | "Their mouth was a lipless slit, their teeth—if they had any—hidden beneath the flesh." | | 10 | "It reached out, its fingers—long, too long—hovering just above her face." | | 11 | "And then—" | | 12 | "Had to—" | | 13 | "And then—" | | 14 | "And then—" | | 15 | "And only then did she realize—" |
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| 95.39% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1502 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 68 | | adverbRatio | 0.045272969374167776 | | lyAdverbCount | 14 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.009320905459387484 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 191 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 191 | | mean | 7.8 | | std | 6.54 | | cv | 0.838 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 44 | | 1 | 30 | | 2 | 4 | | 3 | 14 | | 4 | 23 | | 5 | 23 | | 6 | 31 | | 7 | 15 | | 8 | 19 | | 9 | 22 | | 10 | 3 | | 11 | 4 | | 12 | 5 | | 13 | 4 | | 14 | 17 | | 15 | 4 | | 16 | 10 | | 17 | 23 | | 18 | 9 | | 19 | 2 | | 20 | 1 | | 21 | 2 | | 22 | 3 | | 23 | 6 | | 24 | 5 | | 25 | 21 | | 26 | 8 | | 27 | 19 | | 28 | 14 | | 29 | 6 | | 30 | 12 | | 31 | 2 | | 32 | 3 | | 33 | 6 | | 34 | 8 | | 35 | 16 | | 36 | 13 | | 37 | 15 | | 38 | 2 | | 39 | 3 | | 40 | 4 | | 41 | 2 | | 42 | 13 | | 43 | 6 | | 44 | 3 | | 45 | 2 | | 46 | 4 | | 47 | 2 | | 48 | 4 | | 49 | 6 |
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| 37.43% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 24 | | diversityRatio | 0.18324607329842932 | | totalSentences | 191 | | uniqueOpeners | 35 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 7 | | totalSentences | 157 | | matches | | 0 | "Then I’m gone.*" | | 1 | "*Just walk away." | | 2 | "Just the trees." | | 3 | "Just the standing stones." | | 4 | "Just the sickly yellow flowers." | | 5 | "Only then did she stop." | | 6 | "Only then did she let" |
| | ratio | 0.045 | |
| 84.97% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 53 | | totalSentences | 157 | | matches | | 0 | "She adjusted the silver chain" | | 1 | "It had saved her once," | | 2 | "She shouldn’t have come." | | 3 | "She *knew* she shouldn’t have." | | 4 | "You have to stop them" | | 5 | "She stepped forward, her boots" | | 6 | "She turned her head slowly," | | 7 | "Their bark was smooth, almost" | | 8 | "It came from the left," | | 9 | "She didn’t move." | | 10 | "Her fingers tightened around the" | | 11 | "*You shouldn’t be here,* it" | | 12 | "She took a step back," | | 13 | "She stumbled, her hand flying" | | 14 | "Her fingers brushed against the" | | 15 | "It vanished before her eyes" | | 16 | "She turned in a slow" | | 17 | "She could *smell* it now," | | 18 | "She clutched it tighter, her" | | 19 | "*You have to leave,* she" |
| | ratio | 0.338 | |
| 100.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 110 | | totalSentences | 157 | | matches | | 0 | "The air in Richmond Park" | | 1 | "Aurora Carter—Rory, to those who" | | 2 | "The Grove didn’t care for" | | 3 | "She adjusted the silver chain" | | 4 | "The pendant had been a" | | 5 | "It had saved her once," | | 6 | "The standing stones loomed ahead," | | 7 | "The clearing beyond them was" | | 8 | "Rory’s breath hitched." | | 9 | "She shouldn’t have come." | | 10 | "She *knew* she shouldn’t have." | | 11 | "Eva had sent the message" | | 12 | "The Fae are wrong." | | 13 | "You have to stop them" | | 14 | "Rory had packed a bag—just" | | 15 | "The pendant pulsed harder, as" | | 16 | "The first wrongness was the" | | 17 | "Richmond Park was never silent." | | 18 | "The air was too still," | | 19 | "Rory’s pulse hammered in her" |
| | ratio | 0.701 | |
| 63.69% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 157 | | matches | | 0 | "Now, it hummed against her" | | 1 | "—and the bark *moved*." |
| | ratio | 0.013 | |
| 80.20% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 57 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "The air in Richmond Park was thick with the kind of damp that clung to skin like a second layer of clothing, the kind that made the back of your neck prickle ev…" | | 1 | "Now, it hummed against her skin, a low, insistent throb that made her fingers twitch." | | 2 | "It moved between the trees, its form shifting, blending into the darkness." | | 3 | "Their skin was too smooth, too pale, stretched taut over bones that seemed to *glow* from within." | | 4 | "She fell to her knees, her hands flying to her face as she tried to make sense of what she was seeing." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 0 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |