| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | |
| 79.06% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1194 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 5 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | adverb | "deliberately" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "precisely" | | 1 | "very" | | 2 | "slightly" | | 3 | "deliberately" | | 4 | "suddenly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 49.75% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1194 | | totalAiIsms | 12 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulsed" | | 1 | "throb" | | 2 | "silence" | | 3 | "resolved" | | 4 | "measured" | | 5 | "weight" | | 6 | "warmth" | | 7 | "could feel" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "clenched jaw/fists" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 88 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 88 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 88 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 69 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1206 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 3 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 11 | | wordCount | 1206 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 0.17 | | worstName | "Heartstone" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 0.5 | | worstWindowName | "Heartstone" | | discoveredNames | | Kew | 1 | | Road | 1 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Tuesday | 1 | | November | 1 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Cardiff | 1 | | Evan | 1 | | Hel | 1 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Kew" | | 1 | "Road" | | 2 | "Richmond" | | 3 | "Park" | | 4 | "Cardiff" | | 5 | "Hel" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 50 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 34.16% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.658 | | wordCount | 1206 | | matches | | 0 | "not warmer exactly, but less cold" | | 1 | "not looking for the threat directly, but holding her attention wide, catching movement in the periphe" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 88 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 30 | | mean | 40.2 | | std | 33.09 | | cv | 0.823 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 5 | | 1 | 105 | | 2 | 11 | | 3 | 82 | | 4 | 36 | | 5 | 91 | | 6 | 5 | | 7 | 99 | | 8 | 8 | | 9 | 10 | | 10 | 89 | | 11 | 3 | | 12 | 26 | | 13 | 37 | | 14 | 90 | | 15 | 9 | | 16 | 19 | | 17 | 14 | | 18 | 86 | | 19 | 14 | | 20 | 61 | | 21 | 52 | | 22 | 26 | | 23 | 55 | | 24 | 14 | | 25 | 71 | | 26 | 15 | | 27 | 14 | | 28 | 34 | | 29 | 25 |
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| 97.29% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 88 | | matches | | 0 | "being surprised" | | 1 | "were gone" |
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| 0.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 9 | | totalVerbs | 195 | | matches | | 0 | "were still adjusting" | | 1 | "were blooming" | | 2 | "was turning" | | 3 | "was breathing" | | 4 | "was producing" | | 5 | "was doing" | | 6 | "was listening" | | 7 | "was letting" | | 8 | "were shaking" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 12 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 10 | | totalSentences | 88 | | ratio | 0.114 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory noticed it the moment she ducked beneath the low-hanging branch that marked the informal threshold to the grove — the way her eyes slid off the nearest oak as if the bark itself refused to be looked at directly." | | 1 | "The grove received her the way it always did — a faint pressure change, like descent in an aeroplane, her ears popping once and then settling." | | 2 | "She picked her way to the centre of the clearing and crouched to check the ground, looking for the marker she'd left at her last visit — a small flat stone with a scratch across it, her own crude notation system, nothing magic about it, just a way to track where exactly she'd stood when the pendant had last reacted." | | 3 | "Four days ago the pendant had pulsed warm the moment she'd stepped inside the grove boundary — a steady, faint throb she'd come to recognise, not unpleasant, like holding a hand to a radiator in another room." | | 4 | "She became aware of the silence only as she was turning to go — becoming aware the way you become aware of a noise that has stopped, that retroactive recognition of an absence." | | 5 | "She counted eight visible gaps around the clearing's edge, the interstices where the boundary had its weak points, and she watched each of them in turn the way she'd learned to read a room when she'd lived with Evan — not looking for the threat directly, but holding her attention wide, catching movement in the periphery before it resolved into anything she had to name." | | 6 | "It wasn't nearby — or rather, she couldn't tell how near it was, because the grove did things to sound, bent it around the canopy and redirected it at angles that made distance impossible to estimate." | | 7 | "Three steps from the north gap between two of the standing oaks, she glanced back once — a quick check, nothing more — and in the centre of the clearing, exactly where she'd been crouching to look at her marked stone, there was a shape." | | 8 | "The Heartstone pressed against her fingers, still cold, still silent — and in its silence she understood something that hadn't occurred to her before: warmth near a Hel portal." | | 9 | "She stepped back through the standing stones, met the cold air of the park on the other side, and walked — still not running, still measured, though her hands were shaking now and she could feel her heart in her throat — walked until the stones were behind her, until the pressure in her ears popped again and the sound of the A316 came back and gravel crunched under her trainers." |
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| 97.72% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1197 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 51 | | adverbRatio | 0.042606516290726815 | | lyAdverbCount | 15 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.012531328320802004 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 88 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 88 | | mean | 13.7 | | std | 15.47 | | cv | 1.129 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 5 | | 1 | 40 | | 2 | 2 | | 3 | 2 | | 4 | 15 | | 5 | 4 | | 6 | 4 | | 7 | 38 | | 8 | 11 | | 9 | 26 | | 10 | 9 | | 11 | 2 | | 12 | 4 | | 13 | 41 | | 14 | 4 | | 15 | 4 | | 16 | 20 | | 17 | 8 | | 18 | 60 | | 19 | 10 | | 20 | 13 | | 21 | 8 | | 22 | 5 | | 23 | 6 | | 24 | 37 | | 25 | 6 | | 26 | 5 | | 27 | 45 | | 28 | 4 | | 29 | 4 | | 30 | 4 | | 31 | 1 | | 32 | 5 | | 33 | 33 | | 34 | 31 | | 35 | 25 | | 36 | 3 | | 37 | 9 | | 38 | 13 | | 39 | 4 | | 40 | 4 | | 41 | 33 | | 42 | 14 | | 43 | 5 | | 44 | 6 | | 45 | 65 | | 46 | 3 | | 47 | 6 | | 48 | 15 | | 49 | 2 |
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| 32.95% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 21 | | diversityRatio | 0.3409090909090909 | | totalSentences | 88 | | uniqueOpeners | 30 | |
| 90.09% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 74 | | matches | | 0 | "Of course they were." | | 1 | "Then she allowed herself to" |
| | ratio | 0.027 | |
| 30.81% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 35 | | totalSentences | 74 | | matches | | 0 | "She was just tired." | | 1 | "She'd cycled from the Kew" | | 2 | "She breathed out through her" | | 3 | "It was November, and they" | | 4 | "She'd stopped being surprised by" | | 5 | "She picked her way to" | | 6 | "She found the stone, confirmed" | | 7 | "She pressed two fingers to" | | 8 | "It sat cool and inert" | | 9 | "She'd come because it had" | | 10 | "She'd needed to know whether" | | 11 | "She counted to thirty." | | 12 | "She unclenched her jaw." | | 13 | "She'd note this and leave." | | 14 | "She became aware of the" | | 15 | "She hadn't been conscious of" | | 16 | "She stood still." | | 17 | "She'd learned, somewhere between Cardiff" | | 18 | "She turned a slow full" | | 19 | "She counted eight visible gaps" |
| | ratio | 0.473 | |
| 68.11% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 58 | | totalSentences | 74 | | matches | | 0 | "The standing stones were wrong." | | 1 | "Rory noticed it the moment" | | 2 | "The stone was there, solid" | | 3 | "Nothing wrong with it." | | 4 | "She was just tired." | | 5 | "She'd cycled from the Kew" | | 6 | "She breathed out through her" | | 7 | "The grove received her the" | | 8 | "The temperature shifted, not warmer" | | 9 | "The air tasted green." | | 10 | "The wildflowers were blooming." | | 11 | "It was November, and they" | | 12 | "She'd stopped being surprised by" | | 13 | "She picked her way to" | | 14 | "She found the stone, confirmed" | | 15 | "She pressed two fingers to" | | 16 | "It sat cool and inert" | | 17 | "She'd come because it had" | | 18 | "She'd needed to know whether" | | 19 | "She counted to thirty." |
| | ratio | 0.784 | |
| 67.57% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 74 | | matches | | | ratio | 0.014 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 34 | | technicalSentenceCount | 9 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory noticed it the moment she ducked beneath the low-hanging branch that marked the informal threshold to the grove — the way her eyes slid off the nearest oak…" | | 1 | "The grove received her the way it always did — a faint pressure change, like descent in an aeroplane, her ears popping once and then settling." | | 2 | "Overhead, the canopy closed over the clearing in a rough circle, and through it she could see a scatter of stars that had not been visible from the park path, w…" | | 3 | "She became aware of the silence only as she was turning to go — becoming aware the way you become aware of a noise that has stopped, that retroactive recognitio…" | | 4 | "She'd learned, somewhere between Cardiff and here, between one version of herself and this one, that running was the thing that made situations worse, that cool…" | | 5 | "It wasn't nearby — or rather, she couldn't tell how near it was, because the grove did things to sound, bent it around the canopy and redirected it at angles th…" | | 6 | "An in-breath that lasted slightly too long and an out-breath that released with something almost like consideration, as if whatever was producing it was doing s…" | | 7 | "It was quite still, in the manner of things that do not need to move because they are not afraid of you, and the difference between that kind of stillness and a…" | | 8 | "The Heartstone pressed against her fingers, still cold, still silent — and in its silence she understood something that hadn't occurred to her before: warmth ne…" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 0 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |