Run: 2026-02-24-01KJ8VR4794KF5VDER15N1486Z

Run Details

Model:
Aion 2.0
Duration:
1m 38s
Cost:
$0.006793
Provider:
AionLabs

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The rain had softened to a fine mist by the time Rory pushed open the heavy door of The Raven's Nest. The green neon sign above her head buzzed like a trapped insect, staining the wet pavement an eerie emerald. Inside, the air was a warm blanket of old wood, spilled ale, and the faint, permanent scent of lemon polish. She shrugged off her damp delivery jacket, the one with the Golden Empress logo embroidered on the breast, and hung it on a peg by the door. Silas looked up from polishing a glass, his hazel eyes catching the low light. “Late one,” he observed, his voice a low rumble that fit the room. “Mr. Cheung had a last-minute banquet order. Forty-eight spring rolls to Chelsea.” She slid onto her usual stool at the end of the bar, the wood smooth and familiar under her palms. Her left wrist, with its small crescent-shaped scar, rested on the polished surface. “The usual?” he asked, already reaching for the single malt she preferred. She nodded, watching his hands, the silver signet ring on his right hand flashing as he poured. He moved with the deliberate care of a man mindful of an old injury, the slight hitch in his step as he came around the bar to place the glass before her barely noticeable unless you knew to look. She did. She’d been living in the flat above for eighteen months, long enough to learn the rhythms of his pain and his silence. The drink was a warm shock in her chest. She let her gaze wander the room, over the old maps pinned to the walls, the black-and-white photographs of a London that no longer existed. It was a Tuesday, quiet. A couple murmured in a corner booth. An old man nursed a pint near the fireplace. The peace was a tangible thing, something she could cup in her hands. The door opened again, letting in a swirl of damp, chill air and the sound of distant traffic. A man entered, shaking water from a dark overcoat. He was tall, broad-shouldered, with a face that was at once familiar and utterly foreign. Rory’s mind, always cataloging, ticked through possibilities. Client of Silas’s? Unlikely; they usually came after midnight, through the back. Tourist? He didn’t have the lost look. Then he turned, brushing a hand through his damp, sandy hair, and his eyes met hers. For a second, there was nothing. Then a crack in the universe. The past rushed in, not as a memory but as a physical presence, filling her mouth with the taste of cheap library coffee and the smell of rain on the Cardiff University quad. “Laila?” The name, her middle name, the one only her oldest friends from home used, hit her like a slap. No one in London called her that. She was Rory here. Aurora to the DSS. Carter on her delivery invoices. Laila was buried in Wales, under a mountain of bad decisions. “Liam,” she said. The word came out flat, a statement of fact. A wide, incredulous smile broke across his face. He’d always smiled like that, with his whole being, but it was different now. More polished, more assured. The boy she’d known, the lanky pre-law student with perpetually ink-stained fingers and a nervous laugh, was gone. In his place stood a man in a beautifully cut charcoal suit, the kind her father wore. He carried an expensive leather briefcase. Success clung to him like a cologne. He closed the distance between them, his hand outstretched before he seemed to think better of it and leaned in for an awkward, one-armed hug. She stiffened, then forced herself to relax, patting his back. He smelled of rain and sandalwood soap. “My God, Laila. I don’t believe it. What are you doing in London?” He slid onto the stool next to her, his eyes drinking her in. She saw the moment his assessment registered: the practical jeans, the worn trainers, the faint smell of sesame oil that still clung to her from the kitchen. “I live here,” she said, taking another sip of her whisky. “Since when?” “A while.” She didn’t offer more. Silas had moved down the bar, giving them a semblance of privacy, but she felt his presence like a anchor. “I’m here for a conference. Tax law, thrilling stuff.” Liam laughed, a sound that was both familiar and strained. He signaled to Silas. “Gin and tonic, please. Hendrick’s if you have it.” He turned back to her. “You look… well. Different.” “So do you.” “The suit’s a costume. Helps the clients think I know what I’m doing.” He tried for self-deprecation, but it fell flat. He did know what he was doing. It was evident in the set of his shoulders, the directness of his gaze. “I heard you’d left Cardiff. No one really knew where you’d gone. Eva was tight-lipped about it.” Eva. Her lifeline. Rory felt a pang of gratitude for her friend’s discretion. “I needed a change.” “After Evan.” It wasn’t a question. Liam’s eyes dropped to her left wrist, where the crescent scar peeked out from under her sleeve. He’d been there the night she got it, at a stupid party, falling through a glass coffee table. He’d driven her to A&E. He’d also been there, later, when the scars were less visible. He’d said, once, drunk on cider in his dorm room, “He’s no good for you, Laila.” She hadn’t listened. “After everything,” she said, her voice carefully neutral. His drink arrived. He took a long swallow. “I’m at Harrington & Pierce now. In the London office.” “Your father’s firm.” She remembered the ambition, the late nights in the library, Liam determined to step into the dynasty. “It’s… it’s good. Hard. But good.” He swirled the ice in his glass. “And you? What are you up to? Please don’t tell me you’re a lawyer. I couldn’t bear the competition.” The joke hung in the air, a lead balloon. She saw him realize his error as soon as the words were out. Her father was a barrister. Pre-law had been the expected path. The abandoned path. “I’m not,” she said simply. “I work in logistics. Deliveries.” “Logistics.” He repeated the word as if trying it on. “Right. For a company?” “For a restaurant. A Chinese place in Soho. The Golden Empress.” Silence stretched between them, filled only by the hum of the cooler and the soft clink of Silas’s glassware. Liam’s face was a study in controlled reaction. She watched him wrestle with surprise, with pity, with a kind of bewildered disappointment. She knew that look. She’d seen it in her father’s eyes the one time he’d visited, before he’d stopped calling. “That’s… honest work,” he said finally, the words landing with a thud. “It pays the rent.” She didn’t tell him her rent was paid in part by helping Silas keep his books, by being a quiet, observant presence in the bar. That her ‘logistics’ job sometimes involved more than spring rolls. That she had found a different kind of law, unwritten, in the shadows of Soho. “Do you like it?” The question seemed genuine, and that was worse. “It’s fine. It’s simple.” She met his gaze, her bright blue eyes steady. “I get to be outside. I know the city now, every alley. There’s a satisfaction in that.” He nodded, though he didn’t understand. How could he? His world was one of precedent and procedure, of offices with views. Hers was of rain-slicked streets and the hidden geometry of a neighborhood, of Silas’s quiet lessons and the solid weight of a motorcycle helmet under her arm. “Evan’s married,” Liam said suddenly, as if pushing the information across a chessboard. “To a solicitor. They have a baby. A girl.” The news was a stone dropped into a deep, still pond. She felt the ripples somewhere far away, in a numb part of her chest. She pictured it: Evan, charming, vicious Evan, holding a child. The thought was so absurd she almost laughed. Instead, she took another sip of whisky, letting the heat burn away the image. “Good for him,” she said, and was surprised by how little bitterness was in her voice. It was true. She felt nothing. The fear, the desperate love, the crushing humiliation—they were artifacts, locked in a museum of her former self. Liam was watching her, looking for cracks. “He asked about you, once. A few years back. Wanted to know if anyone had heard from you.” “And you said?” “I said I hadn’t.” He finished his drink. “It was the truth.” The weight of the years settled between them, heavy as a wool blanket. They had sat like this a hundred times, in student unions and cheap pubs, dissecting cases, dreaming futures. He had wanted to change the world through tax law. She had wanted to escape the world her father had built. Now, here they were, in a dim bar in Soho, strangers wearing the faces of people they used to know. “I should go,” Liam said, checking a sleek watch on his wrist. “Early start tomorrow. Negotiations.” “Of course.” He stood, hesitated. “It was really good to see you, Laila. Truly.” “You too, Liam.” He pulled a card from his wallet, embossed with glossy black lettering. “If you ever… if you need anything. Or just fancy a coffee.” She took the card, the paper thick and expensive between her fingers. “Thanks.” He gave her one last, searching look, then turned and walked out into the misty night. The door sighed shut behind him, sealing the bar back into its comfortable gloom. Rory placed the business card on the bar. Liam Harrington, Esq., Harrington & Pierce. She traced the raised lettering with a fingertip. Then she picked up her glass, drained the last of the amber liquid, and slid the card across the polished wood towards Silas. He looked at it, then at her, a question in his hazel eyes. “Kindling,” she said. A faint smile touched his lips. He took the card and tossed it into the small fireplace near the end of the bar. The edges curled, blackened, and caught flame. They watched it burn together, the brief, bright heat a punctuation mark in the quiet room. The past turned to ash and smoke. Rory flexed her left hand, the crescent scar a pale ghost on her skin, and ordered another drink.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
40.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags25
adverbTagCount4
adverbTags
0"He turned back [back]"
1"she said simply [simply]"
2"he said finally [finally]"
3"Liam said suddenly [suddenly]"
dialogueSentences48
tagDensity0.521
leniency1
rawRatio0.16
effectiveRatio0.16
82.81% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1745
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"utterly"
count1
1
adverb"really"
count2
2
adverb"carefully"
count1
3
adverb"suddenly"
count1
4
adverb"truly"
count1
highlights
0"utterly"
1"really"
2"carefully"
3"suddenly"
4"truly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
59.89% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1745
totalAiIsms14
found
0
word"familiar"
count3
1
word"silence"
count2
2
word"tangible"
count1
3
word"chill"
count1
4
word"pang"
count1
5
word"determined"
count1
6
word"weight"
count2
7
word"comfortable"
count1
8
word"gloom"
count1
9
word"traced"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"silence"
2"tangible"
3"chill"
4"pang"
5"determined"
6"weight"
7"comfortable"
8"gloom"
9"traced"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells2
narrationSentences131
matches
0"e with surprise"
1"was surprised"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences131
filterMatches
0"realize"
1"look"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences153
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen39
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1744
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions19
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions41
wordCount1458
uniqueNames18
maxNameDensity0.55
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Rory6
Raven1
Nest1
Golden1
Empress1
London2
Tuesday1
Silas8
Cardiff1
University1
Wales1
Liam8
Silence1
Soho2
Evan2
Harrington2
Esq1
Pierce1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Raven"
2"Silas"
3"Liam"
4"Silence"
5"Evan"
6"Harrington"
7"Esq"
places
0"London"
1"Cardiff"
2"Wales"
3"Soho"
globalScore1
windowScore1
76.47% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences102
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"as if trying it on"
1"seemed genuine and that was worse"
2"as if pushing the information across a chessboard"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.573
wordCount1744
matches
0"not as a memory but as a physical presence, filling her mouth with the taste of"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences153
matches
0"knew that look"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs55
mean31.71
std24.15
cv0.762
sampleLengths
087
127
245
312
480
568
668
716
845
91
1050
1112
1274
1342
1453
1511
162
1726
1841
193
2059
2117
2276
238
2418
2520
2632
2736
2810
2914
3011
3161
3212
3354
3412
3530
3648
3722
3857
3940
4025
413
4212
4372
4416
452
4612
473
4824
4913
94.55% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences131
matches
0"was buried"
1"was gone"
2"was paid"
3"was surprised"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs234
matches
0"was doing"
1"was watching"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences153
ratio0.013
matches
0"Unlikely; they usually came after midnight, through the back."
1"The fear, the desperate love, the crushing humiliation—they were artifacts, locked in a museum of her former self."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1070
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar,"
adverbCount36
adverbRatio0.03364485981308411
lyAdverbCount12
lyAdverbRatio0.011214953271028037
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences153
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences153
mean11.4
std7.29
cv0.639
sampleLengths
021
119
220
327
414
513
632
713
812
917
1039
112
1222
139
1425
155
167
179
1813
1918
209
2115
227
233
249
251
266
2716
286
296
3033
311
3219
337
344
354
365
3711
383
399
408
4114
424
4318
4417
456
467
4725
4810
497
52.72% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.35947712418300654
totalSentences153
uniqueOpeners55
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount5
totalSentences124
matches
0"Then he turned, brushing a"
1"Then a crack in the"
2"More polished, more assured."
3"Instead, she took another sip"
4"Then she picked up her"
ratio0.04
3.87% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount67
totalSentences124
matches
0"She shrugged off her damp"
1"he observed, his voice a"
2"She slid onto her usual"
3"Her left wrist, with its"
4"he asked, already reaching for"
5"She nodded, watching his hands,"
6"He moved with the deliberate"
7"She’d been living in the"
8"She let her gaze wander"
9"It was a Tuesday, quiet."
10"He was tall, broad-shouldered, with"
11"He didn’t have the lost"
12"She was Rory here."
13"He’d always smiled like that,"
14"He carried an expensive leather"
15"He closed the distance between"
16"She stiffened, then forced herself"
17"He smelled of rain and"
18"He slid onto the stool"
19"She saw the moment his"
ratio0.54
8.39% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount112
totalSentences124
matches
0"The rain had softened to"
1"The green neon sign above"
2"She shrugged off her damp"
3"Silas looked up from polishing"
4"he observed, his voice a"
5"She slid onto her usual"
6"Her left wrist, with its"
7"he asked, already reaching for"
8"She nodded, watching his hands,"
9"He moved with the deliberate"
10"She’d been living in the"
11"The drink was a warm"
12"She let her gaze wander"
13"It was a Tuesday, quiet."
14"A couple murmured in a"
15"An old man nursed a"
16"The peace was a tangible"
17"The door opened again, letting"
18"A man entered, shaking water"
19"He was tall, broad-shouldered, with"
ratio0.903
40.32% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences124
matches
0"Now, here they were, in"
ratio0.008
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences55
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"He was tall, broad-shouldered, with a face that was at once familiar and utterly foreign."
45.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags25
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"he observed, his voice a low rumble that fit the room"
1"He slid, his eyes drinking her in"
2"she said, her voice carefully neutral"
3"Liam said suddenly, as if pushing the information across a chessboard"
45.83% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags15
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"he observed (observe)"
1"Liam laughed (laugh)"
2"He’d (would)"
3"He repeated (repeat)"
4"She didn’t (do)"
dialogueSentences48
tagDensity0.313
leniency0.625
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.208
81.4617%