| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | |
| 78.35% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1386 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 6 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slowly" | | 1 | "quickly" | | 2 | "carefully" | | 3 | "precisely" | | 4 | "slightly" | | 5 | "sharply" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 42.28% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1386 | | totalAiIsms | 16 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "sense of" | | 1 | "familiar" | | 2 | "unsettled" | | 3 | "rhythmic" | | 4 | "silence" | | 5 | "measured" | | 6 | "pulse" | | 7 | "scanning" | | 8 | "calibrated" | | 9 | "warmth" | | 10 | "desire" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 115 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 115 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 116 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 48 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1400 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 6 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 13 | | wordCount | 1399 | | uniqueNames | 7 | | maxNameDensity | 0.43 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Park | 1 | | Isolde | 2 | | February | 1 | | Tuesday | 1 | | Hel | 1 | | English | 1 | | Rory | 6 |
| | persons | | | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 84.21% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 76 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like a mistake" | | 1 | "Something between a footstep and a sigh, high a" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.714 | | wordCount | 1400 | | matches | | 0 | "Not wildly, overwhelmingly warm, but warm in a way it hadn't been thirty seconds ago" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 116 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 40 | | mean | 35 | | std | 34.79 | | cv | 0.994 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 7 | | 1 | 62 | | 2 | 12 | | 3 | 77 | | 4 | 5 | | 5 | 86 | | 6 | 14 | | 7 | 93 | | 8 | 3 | | 9 | 62 | | 10 | 6 | | 11 | 1 | | 12 | 52 | | 13 | 7 | | 14 | 32 | | 15 | 4 | | 16 | 37 | | 17 | 42 | | 18 | 6 | | 19 | 3 | | 20 | 89 | | 21 | 10 | | 22 | 8 | | 23 | 125 | | 24 | 5 | | 25 | 60 | | 26 | 68 | | 27 | 9 | | 28 | 6 | | 29 | 95 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 85 | | 32 | 15 | | 33 | 7 | | 34 | 57 | | 35 | 7 | | 36 | 85 | | 37 | 30 | | 38 | 10 | | 39 | 13 |
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| 96.11% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 115 | | matches | | 0 | "was supposed" | | 1 | "been told" | | 2 | "been shut" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 220 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 14 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 11 | | totalSentences | 116 | | ratio | 0.095 | | matches | | 0 | "She'd thought she understood its dimensions — the rough diameter of the clearing, the way the ancient oaks crowded close at the boundary, their roots surfacing from the earth like arthritic knuckles." | | 1 | "She passed between two of the marker stones and felt the familiar shimmer — that thin, membrane-like resistance that distinguished the grove from the ordinary parkland surrounding it." | | 2 | "A specific, sensible, time-limited reason: Isolde had left a message through the usual channel — a folded note slipped under the door of the flat, written in that cramped, archaic hand — asking her to retrieve something from the base of the large stone on the grove's eastern edge." | | 3 | "They bloomed year-round in the grove — she'd known that, had seen it before, white wood anemones and purple clover persisting through February frost — but now, at half-past eleven on a Tuesday night in mid-October, they were open." | | 4 | "Her fingers found the parcel quickly — a dense little bundle wrapped in dark fabric, tied with twine, about the size of her fist." | | 5 | "Hers was controlled, deliberate — she was conscious of it." | | 6 | "Not wildly, overwhelmingly warm, but warm in a way it hadn't been thirty seconds ago — a faint, deep pulse of heat through the fabric of her shirt, as though the stone inside it had woken." | | 7 | "Her mind kept sliding off it, the way a tongue slides off the gap left by a missing tooth — it registered an absence where her perception should have landed cleanly on a shape." | | 8 | "Getting nothing closer, because the sound didn't travel the way sounds should — it arrived fully formed in her ears, already close, skipping whatever middle distance ought to have existed between origin and arrival." | | 9 | "The sound cut off as though a door had been shut, and the ordinary night rushed back in — distant traffic, the cold smell of autumn leaves, a dog barking from somewhere across the park." | | 10 | "She was certain — with a certainty she couldn't entirely justify and had no desire to examine more closely — that the thing at the edge of the tree line would not cross through the standing stones." |
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| 91.39% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1396 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "specific, sensible, time-limited reason:" |
| | adverbCount | 60 | | adverbRatio | 0.04297994269340974 | | lyAdverbCount | 27 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.019340974212034383 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 116 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 116 | | mean | 12.07 | | std | 10.46 | | cv | 0.867 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 7 | | 1 | 21 | | 2 | 32 | | 3 | 9 | | 4 | 3 | | 5 | 9 | | 6 | 28 | | 7 | 21 | | 8 | 23 | | 9 | 2 | | 10 | 3 | | 11 | 5 | | 12 | 7 | | 13 | 11 | | 14 | 49 | | 15 | 6 | | 16 | 3 | | 17 | 10 | | 18 | 14 | | 19 | 9 | | 20 | 39 | | 21 | 11 | | 22 | 15 | | 23 | 2 | | 24 | 5 | | 25 | 4 | | 26 | 5 | | 27 | 3 | | 28 | 3 | | 29 | 8 | | 30 | 19 | | 31 | 24 | | 32 | 11 | | 33 | 6 | | 34 | 1 | | 35 | 3 | | 36 | 10 | | 37 | 18 | | 38 | 4 | | 39 | 17 | | 40 | 7 | | 41 | 1 | | 42 | 17 | | 43 | 2 | | 44 | 1 | | 45 | 11 | | 46 | 3 | | 47 | 1 | | 48 | 9 | | 49 | 24 |
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| 49.43% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 16 | | diversityRatio | 0.3793103448275862 | | totalSentences | 116 | | uniqueOpeners | 44 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 7 | | totalSentences | 103 | | matches | | 0 | "Fully, absurdly open, as though" | | 1 | "Of course they were still." | | 2 | "Twice she caught what might" | | 3 | "Then the second." | | 4 | "Then a third." | | 5 | "Then a hundred." | | 6 | "Then she stopped in the" |
| | ratio | 0.068 | |
| 64.66% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 40 | | totalSentences | 103 | | matches | | 0 | "She'd thought she understood its" | | 1 | "She'd thought she had a" | | 2 | "She'd been wrong." | | 3 | "She passed between two of" | | 4 | "She had a reason to" | | 5 | "She hadn't lingered on the" | | 6 | "They bloomed year-round in the" | | 7 | "She swept the torchlight across" | | 8 | "They were flowers." | | 9 | "She kept moving." | | 10 | "She picked her way across" | | 11 | "Her fingers found the parcel" | | 12 | "She tucked it into her" | | 13 | "Hers was controlled, deliberate —" | | 14 | "She turned the torch." | | 15 | "She held her own breath" | | 16 | "Her voice didn't carry the" | | 17 | "It fell flat a foot" | | 18 | "She didn't try again." | | 19 | "She started back toward the" |
| | ratio | 0.388 | |
| 100.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 74 | | totalSentences | 103 | | matches | | 0 | "The standing stones looked smaller" | | 1 | "Rory had been to the" | | 2 | "She'd thought she understood its" | | 3 | "She'd thought she had a" | | 4 | "She'd been wrong." | | 5 | "The grove at night was" | | 6 | "She passed between two of" | | 7 | "Richmond Park lay a quarter-mile" | | 8 | "Here the only light came" | | 9 | "Rory switched on her torch." | | 10 | "She had a reason to" | | 11 | "That was what she told" | | 12 | "A specific, sensible, time-limited reason:" | | 13 | "A small parcel, the note" | | 14 | "Rory was to take it" | | 15 | "She hadn't lingered on the" | | 16 | "The wildflowers were the first" | | 17 | "They bloomed year-round in the" | | 18 | "She swept the torchlight across" | | 19 | "The flowers were still." |
| | ratio | 0.718 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 103 | | matches | | 0 | "As though everything in the" | | 1 | "Because she always did." | | 2 | "Because the grove had a" |
| | ratio | 0.029 | |
| 30.81% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 51 | | technicalSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "She passed between two of the marker stones and felt the familiar shimmer — that thin, membrane-like resistance that distinguished the grove from the ordinary p…" | | 1 | "Here the only light came from the moon, which was three-quarters full and doing what it could through a gauze of high cloud." | | 2 | "Not wildly, overwhelmingly warm, but warm in a way it hadn't been thirty seconds ago — a faint, deep pulse of heat through the fabric of her shirt, as though th…" | | 3 | "Something between a footstep and a sigh, high and soft, as though someone had exhaled through a sustained note." | | 4 | "The sound cut off as though a door had been shut, and the ordinary night rushed back in — distant traffic, the cold smell of autumn leaves, a dog barking from s…" | | 5 | "Then she stopped in the shadow of an oak that didn't belong to any standing ring, just an ordinary English oak with ordinary dark bark, and she pressed her back…" | | 6 | "In all the weeks she'd worn it, across all the strange rooms and stranger conversations it had accompanied her through, it had always maintained some faint inte…" | | 7 | "She understood now, with the cold clarity that arrived when fear finished and the body began its accounting, that the instruction had not been a suggestion abou…" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 0 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |