"Three nights running, the Heartstone had woken her at two in the morning — not with the faint, companionable warmth it gave off when she carried it through Southwark or rode the bus past Battersea, but with a sharp, insistent heat, like a coal pressed flat against her sternum."
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"Someone — something — wanted her attention."
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"She could hear her own breathing and, beneath it, the ambient murmur of the park at night — foxes, wind, distant traffic on the A307."
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"The pendant was almost uncomfortably hot against her chest now, its crimson glow visible through the fabric of her shirt — a dull red pulse, steady as a second heartbeat."
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"One step, and the air was ten degrees colder, and the sounds of the park — the foxes, the wind, the traffic — stopped."
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"Wildflowers carpeted the ground — bluebells and foxglove and something pale and star-shaped she didn't know the name of — all of them in full, impossible bloom despite it being the dead of November."
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"She curled her fingers around it and hissed through her teeth and took three steps into the clearing, because that was what she'd come here to do — to answer whatever was calling, to find out why the Heartstone wouldn't let her sleep."
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"The sound continued — a soft, measured tread through undergrowth, the compression of leaf litter underfoot, pace steady, unhurried."
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"They maintained their patient, circling rhythm, and she tracked them with the light — left to right, past the gap between two oaks, behind a stand of bracken, around the curve of the clearing's edge — and saw nothing."
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"Not trampled — bent, pressed gently sideways, their stems bowed in a pattern she recognized because she'd been looking down at her own feet a moment ago."
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"The crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist ached — an old, childish injury that had no reason to hurt but did, the way old things sometimes wake when new things go wrong."
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"Not visibly — there was nothing to see, no ripple, no outline, no cinematic shimmer."
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"The pendant's glow peaked — a single, brilliant pulse of crimson that lit the entire clearing for half a heartbeat, turning everything the colour of old blood."
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"The pressure inside her skull shifted, and she had the sudden, vertiginous impression of being read — not her thoughts, not her memories, but something more fundamental, something structural, as if whatever stood before her was examining the architecture of what she was."
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"One, then the next, then the next — a trail leading away from her, back toward the tree line, measured and unhurried."
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"The ambient sounds of the park filtered back slowly — first the wind, then a fox's bark somewhere to the north, then the faint, blessed hum of traffic."
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"Her reflection stared at her from the dark window — blue eyes wide, black hair tangled with bits of leaf and bracken, face the color of chalk."
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"But beauty and wrongness are not mutually exclusive, and Rory had learned, over the past several weeks, to trust the difference between something that looked ri…"
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"The crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist ached — an old, childish injury that had no reason to hurt but did, the way old things sometimes wake when new things…"
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"It radiated cold, a focused, directional cold that prickled the skin of her face and throat, and beneath the cold there was something else, something that opera…"
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"The pendant's glow peaked — a single, brilliant pulse of crimson that lit the entire clearing for half a heartbeat, turning everything the colour of old blood."
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"The pressure inside her skull shifted, and she had the sudden, vertiginous impression of being read — not her thoughts, not her memories, but something more fun…"