"One moment she was in the ordinary, if deeply shadowed, parkland; the next, the ancient oaks rose around her like slumbering giants, forming a rough circle."
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"The night sounds of the park—the distant rustle of deer, the sigh of wind—had vanished."
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"The stone directly opposite where she had entered—had it been slightly more to the left before?"
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"She caught a syllable that sounded like her name—not “Rory,” but “Aurora,” drawn out and mangled."
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"When she tapped it, it flashed “12:07” over and over—the time she’d entered the park."
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"For a heart-stopping moment, every detail of Evan—the set of his shoulders, the tilt of his head—flooded her memory."
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"She could see details now in the hellish flower-light: fingers that were too long, twitching at its sides; a head that lolled on a thin neck."
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"The space within the shimmer darkened, not into black, but into a color that hurt her eyes to look at—a bruised, impossible purple-black."
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"It reared back, its long fingers splaying in surprise—she had guessed they were predators, used to prey that fled."
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"The glowing flowers, the whispering, the freezing cold—all of it vanished."
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"It had been pulling her here for days, a persistent, silent tug behind her ribs that had finally overridden her better judgment."
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"But the part that had fled Cardiff in the dead of night, the part that now lived above a bar and delivered Chinese food, knew that some doors, once opened, coul…"
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"Moonlight, which had been weak and diffuse outside, fell here in sharp, silver pools, illuminating the wildflowers that carpeted the clearing."
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"Then a sound that was almost a laugh, dry and rasping like leaves skittering on stone."
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"It didn’t walk so much as *unfold*, its limbs elongating and snapping back into place with a sound like cracking twigs."
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"She could see details now in the hellish flower-light: fingers that were too long, twitching at its sides; a head that lolled on a thin neck."
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"The whispers coalesced into a single, clear sentence that echoed inside her skull, not through her ears."
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"The space within the shimmer darkened, not into black, but into a color that hurt her eyes to look at—a bruised, impossible purple-black."
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"She ducked under its grasping arm, feeling a wave of nauseating cold wash over her, and threw herself into the space between two standing stones that felt, in h…"