Run: 2026-02-24-01KJ8WJCG8TJZ2R5WGSM5CK30P

Run Details

Model:
Aion 2.0
Duration:
1m 26s
Cost:
$0.006260
Provider:
AionLabs

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The green neon sign buzzed like a trapped insect, casting a sickly glow on the damp pavement. Inside The Raven’s Nest, the air was thick with the smell of old wood, spilled ale, and the faint, ever-present hint of Silas’s cigar smoke. Rory Carter sat on her usual stool at the end of the bar, her back to the wall, a half-finished pint of bitter turning warm in front of her. It was a Tuesday, slow and deep, the kind of night where the silence between the songs on the vintage jukebox felt heavier than the music itself. She was tracing the crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist, a childhood relic from a fall off a garden wall in Cardiff, when the door opened. A wedge of light from the street cut across the worn floorboards, and a man stepped in, blinking against the gloom. He was tall, wearing a coat that cost more than her monthly rent, his hair perfectly styled against the London drizzle. For a second, he was just another city ghost, another suit seeking refuge. Then he turned his head, and the light from the green sign caught his profile. Rory’s hand stilled on her wrist. Her breath hitched, a tiny, almost imperceptible catch in her throat. Leo. Leo Bennett. Seven years. He’d filled out, lost the boyish softness around his jaw, replaced it with the clean, deliberate lines of a man who knew his worth. But the way he pushed his glasses up his nose with a knuckle—that was the same. A mannerism so familiar it felt like a punch to the gut. He hadn’t seen her yet. He was surveying the room, his expression one of polite distaste, as if he’d wandered into the wrong chapter of a novel. His gaze swept past the maps of forgotten empires, the black-and-white photos of strangers, and landed on Silas, who was polishing a glass with a slow, methodical rhythm. Silas didn’t look up, but Rory knew he’d registered everything: the expensive coat, the hesitation, the scent of a world that didn’t belong here. “Quiet place,” Leo said, his voice deeper than she remembered, polished with a confidence that hadn’t been there before. He approached the bar, leaving a careful distance between himself and the only other patron, a grizzled old man muttering into his stout. “It suits its purpose,” Silas replied, his tone neutral. He set the glass down. His silver signet ring clicked against the wood. “What can I get you?” “A gin and tonic. Something decent, if you have it.” Silas gave a nearly imperceptible nod and turned to the bottles. It was then that Leo’s gaze, drifting, landed on her. His eyes widened. He stared, his brain visibly working to reconcile the woman on the stool with the memory he held. The Rory he knew had worn cardigans and carried textbooks, her laughter quick and bright. This woman had straight, shoulder-length black hair that fell like a curtain, and eyes of a blue so bright they seemed to catch what little light there was and hold it. She wore a simple black jumper, jeans, and boots scuffed from delivery runs. She looked, she knew, like someone who had been carved down to her essentials. “Rory?” The name was a question, soft with disbelief. “Aurora Carter?” She offered a small, tight smile. “Leo. Fancy meeting you in a place like this.” He moved toward her as if pulled by a string, leaving his ordered drink behind. “My God. I don’t believe it.” He stopped a few feet away, not sure whether to hug her or shake her hand. The hesitation spoke volumes. “What are you doing in London? Last I heard…” He trailed off, the unspoken words hanging between them: *Last I heard, you vanished.* “I live here,” she said simply. She took a sip of her warm beer, needing the bitterness on her tongue. “What brings you to Soho? Slumming it?” He had the decency to look slightly abashed. “Client meeting ran late. I was looking for a cab, saw the sign.” He gestured vaguely toward the door. “I thought it was a coffee shop. The ‘Nest’.” He finally closed the distance and slid onto the stool next to hers, his coat rustling. “You look… well.” “You look successful,” she said, and it wasn’t entirely a compliment. He shrugged, a practiced, modest motion. “Barrister’s chambers. It’s a grind, but it’s what we signed up for, right?” He looked at her, really looked, his eyes searching her face. “You never finished your degree.” It wasn’t a question. She felt a familiar, cold knot form in her stomach. “No. I didn’t.” “Why?” The question was blunt, lawyerly. The Leo she’d known at Cardiff University, the one who’d debated jurisprudence with her over cheap wine, would have hedged, would have approached it sideways. This Leo went straight for the throat. “Things changed,” she said, her voice cool. She was aware of Silas setting the gin and tonic on the bar with a soft thud. Silas moved away, his slight limp more pronounced as he retreated to the other end, giving them the illusion of privacy. The spymaster, granting cover. “Your father,” Leo said, lowering his voice. “He was devastated. He never said it, but everyone knew. His brilliant daughter, top of our class, just… gone. He thought you’d follow in his footsteps.” The weight of it, the expectation she’d shed like a skin, settled back on her shoulders. Brendan Carter’s disappointment was a tangible thing, even across years and miles. “I found other footsteps to follow,” she said, her tone drier than she intended. “Doing what?” Leo’s glance took in the bar again, the worn surroundings, her simple clothes. “Are you… working here?” “I deliver food for a restaurant. Part-time.” She saw the confusion, the pity he tried to mask. It was there, in the slight tightening around his eyes. The Rory he knew was meant for oak-paneled courtrooms, not navigating London traffic with containers of chow mein. “It pays the bills. I live upstairs.” “Upstairs.” He repeated the word as if it were in a foreign language. He took a long drink of his gin. “Jesus, Rory. What happened? Was it… was it Evan?” The name, spoken aloud after so long, was like a key turning in a rusted lock. She felt her jaw tighten. Her cool-headedness, her intelligence—they were tools she’d honed for survival, and they snapped into place. “Evan is part of a story I don’t tell,” she said, her voice even. “Let’s just say Cardiff became… inhospitable.” Leo was quiet for a moment, studying her. “You could have called. Any of us. Me. Eva said she’d heard from you, but she was cagey about details. We were friends, Rory.” “Were,” she echoed. The past tense was a chasm. “People change, Leo. You have. I have.” “Have I?” He sounded almost wounded. “I’m doing exactly what we talked about. What we stayed up all night planning. You’re the one who leapt off the map.” “Maybe the map was wrong.” She turned her pint glass, watching the light catch the dregs. “Maybe I didn’t leap. Maybe I was pushed.” He absorbed that, his lawyer’s mind parsing the subtext. The abusive ex, the frantic flight to London, the complete severing of her old life. He reached out, as if to touch her hand, but stopped short, his fingers hovering over her scarred wrist. “I’m sorry,” he said, and it sounded genuine, heavy with the regret of years of not knowing, of not being asked to help. “I wish you’d felt you could… I don’t know. Reach out.” “It wasn’t about you,” she said, and it was the truth. Her departure had been a solitary, desperate thing. “It was about becoming someone else. Someone he wouldn’t think to look for. Someone my father wouldn’t recognize.” She gave a short, humorless laugh. “Turns out, I’m good at it.” “And are you?” he asked softly. “Someone else?” She met his gaze then, her bright blue eyes steady. “Aurora Carter was a girl with a plan. Rory delivers noodles and lives above a bar owned by a retired spy. She doesn’t have a plan. But she’s not afraid of the dark anymore.” She paused. “The girl you knew was afraid of everything, she just hid it better.” Leo finished his drink, the ice cubes clinking like bones in the glass. “I miss her,” he said, so quietly she almost didn’t hear it over the jukebox switching to a mournful jazz standard. “I don’t,” Rory said, and was surprised to find she meant it. The regret she felt wasn’t for the life she’d left, but for the friendships she’d incinerated in her escape. For the look in Leo’s eyes that said he’d lost something too, and only now understood its value. He looked at his watch, a sleek, expensive thing that glinted in the low light. “I should… my wife is expecting me. We’re in town for the week.” “Wife.” Rory nodded. “Congratulations.” “Thank you.” He stood, pulling his coat back on. He hesitated, digging in his pocket. He pulled out a card, embossed with his name and chambers. “If you ever need anything. A reference. Legal advice. Anything.” She took the card, the thick stock feeling alien in her fingers. “I’ll keep it in mind.” He stood there for another moment, a man straddling two worlds, unsure how to leave. “It was really good to see you, Rory.” “You too, Leo.” He turned and walked out, the door swinging shut behind him, swallowing him back into the London night. The green neon buzz seemed louder in his absence. Silas materialized beside her, picking up Leo’s empty glass. “Old friend?” he asked, his hazel eyes knowing. “A relic,” Rory said, staring at the business card. Then, with a slow, deliberate motion, she tore it in half, and then in half again, letting the pieces fall onto the bar like confetti. “From a previous life.” Silas made a noncommittal sound and resumed his polishing. Rory lifted her wrist, her thumb finding the ridge of the crescent scar. A relic from a previous life, too, but one she carried in her skin. Some changes were permanent. Some regrets were just the weight of time, settling into your bones, making a home there. She finished her beer, the warmth of it a small, defiant comfort in the dim and quiet nest.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
66.67% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags30
adverbTagCount4
adverbTags
0"she said simply [simply]"
1"He gestured vaguely [vaguely]"
2"He sounded almost [almost]"
3"he asked softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences60
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0.133
effectiveRatio0.133
85.63% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1740
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"perfectly"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
2
adverb"really"
count2
3
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"perfectly"
1"slightly"
2"really"
3"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
48.28% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1740
totalAiIsms18
found
0
word"silence"
count1
1
word"tracing"
count1
2
word"gloom"
count1
3
word"familiar"
count2
4
word"methodical"
count1
5
word"unspoken"
count1
6
word"stomach"
count1
7
word"footsteps"
count2
8
word"weight"
count2
9
word"tangible"
count1
10
word"navigating"
count1
11
word"echoed"
count1
12
word"solitary"
count1
13
word"standard"
count1
14
word"warmth"
count1
highlights
0"silence"
1"tracing"
2"gloom"
3"familiar"
4"methodical"
5"unspoken"
6"stomach"
7"footsteps"
8"weight"
9"tangible"
10"navigating"
11"echoed"
12"solitary"
13"standard"
14"warmth"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
1
label"air was thick with"
count1
highlights
0"eyes widened"
1"the air was thick with"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells2
narrationSentences110
matches
0"t with disbelief"
1"was surprised"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences110
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences138
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen36
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords5
totalWords1738
ratio0.003
matches
0"Last I heard, you vanished."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions20
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions43
wordCount1331
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity0.9
worstName"Leo"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Silas9
Carter2
Tuesday1
Cardiff2
London4
Bennett1
Rory9
Leo12
University1
persons
0"Silas"
1"Carter"
2"Bennett"
3"Rory"
4"Leo"
places
0"Raven"
1"Cardiff"
2"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
64.77% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences88
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"felt like a punch to the gut"
1"red, his brain visibly working to reconcil"
2"seemed louder in his absence"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1738
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences138
matches
0"absorbed that, his"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs46
mean37.78
std24.29
cv0.643
sampleLengths
098
196
220
354
479
542
627
710
821
994
1011
1115
1264
1327
1455
1511
1635
1717
1838
1949
2033
2142
2219
2352
2430
2556
2632
2716
2828
2924
3077
3149
328
3359
3434
3549
3628
374
3836
3917
4023
413
4227
4317
4438
4574
92.50% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences110
matches
0"been carved"
1"was meant"
2"being asked"
3"was surprised"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs226
matches
0"was tracing"
1"was surveying"
2"was polishing"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences138
ratio0.014
matches
0"But the way he pushed his glasses up his nose with a knuckle—that was the same."
1"Her cool-headedness, her intelligence—they were tools she’d honed for survival, and they snapped into place."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1341
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount45
adverbRatio0.03355704697986577
lyAdverbCount16
lyAdverbRatio0.011931394481730051
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences138
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences138
mean12.59
std7.45
cv0.592
sampleLengths
017
125
229
327
426
521
621
713
815
96
1011
111
122
132
1424
1516
1612
175
1822
1928
2024
2119
2223
239
245
258
265
2710
2811
2910
303
3118
3215
3331
3413
3514
369
372
386
399
4015
4122
424
4323
446
4514
467
478
4819
4925
52.66% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.35507246376811596
totalSentences138
uniqueOpeners49
64.10% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences104
matches
0"Then he turned his head,"
1"Then, with a slow, deliberate"
ratio0.019
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount60
totalSentences104
matches
0"It was a Tuesday, slow"
1"She was tracing the crescent-shaped"
2"He was tall, wearing a"
3"Her breath hitched, a tiny,"
4"He’d filled out, lost the"
5"He hadn’t seen her yet."
6"He was surveying the room,"
7"His gaze swept past the"
8"He approached the bar, leaving"
9"He set the glass down."
10"His silver signet ring clicked"
11"It was then that Leo’s"
12"His eyes widened."
13"He stared, his brain visibly"
14"She wore a simple black"
15"She looked, she knew, like"
16"She offered a small, tight"
17"He moved toward her as"
18"He stopped a few feet"
19"He trailed off, the unspoken"
ratio0.577
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount98
totalSentences104
matches
0"The green neon sign buzzed"
1"Rory Carter sat on her"
2"It was a Tuesday, slow"
3"She was tracing the crescent-shaped"
4"A wedge of light from"
5"He was tall, wearing a"
6"Rory’s hand stilled on her"
7"Her breath hitched, a tiny,"
8"He’d filled out, lost the"
9"A mannerism so familiar it"
10"He hadn’t seen her yet."
11"He was surveying the room,"
12"His gaze swept past the"
13"Silas didn’t look up, but"
14"Leo said, his voice deeper"
15"He approached the bar, leaving"
16"Silas replied, his tone neutral"
17"He set the glass down."
18"His silver signet ring clicked"
19"Silas gave a nearly imperceptible"
ratio0.942
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences104
matches(empty)
ratio0
19.23% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences52
technicalSentenceCount9
matches
0"He was tall, wearing a coat that cost more than her monthly rent, his hair perfectly styled against the London drizzle."
1"He’d filled out, lost the boyish softness around his jaw, replaced it with the clean, deliberate lines of a man who knew his worth."
2"But the way he pushed his glasses up his nose with a knuckle—that was the same."
3"He was surveying the room, his expression one of polite distaste, as if he’d wandered into the wrong chapter of a novel."
4"His gaze swept past the maps of forgotten empires, the black-and-white photos of strangers, and landed on Silas, who was polishing a glass with a slow, methodic…"
5"Silas didn’t look up, but Rory knew he’d registered everything: the expensive coat, the hesitation, the scent of a world that didn’t belong here."
6"This woman had straight, shoulder-length black hair that fell like a curtain, and eyes of a blue so bright they seemed to catch what little light there was and …"
7"He looked at his watch, a sleek, expensive thing that glinted in the low light."
8"Some regrets were just the weight of time, settling into your bones, making a home there."
75.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags30
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"Silas replied, his tone neutral"
1"He stopped, not sure whether to hug her or shake her hand"
2"she said, her voice cool"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags16
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"He repeated (repeat)"
dialogueSentences60
tagDensity0.267
leniency0.533
rawRatio0.063
effectiveRatio0.033
77.8503%