Run: 2026-02-24-01KJ8WMMYVTYNHGQ0B8ZA1RCSX

Run Details

Model:
Aion 2.0
Duration:
1m 53s
Cost:
$0.005813
Provider:
AionLabs

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The iron gate to Richmond Park was locked, but Rory knew the gap in the fence near the Pembroke Lodge car park. She slipped through, the ragged edge of metal catching on her jacket with a sound like a nail on slate. The night was clear and cold, the moon a bone-white sliver offering little light. She clicked on her torch, the beam cutting a shaky path through the inky black. The pendant, tucked beneath her sweater, was already warm against her skin. It had been pulsing for three days now, a slow, insistent throb of heat that had started as a faint warmth and grown into something that felt like a second heartbeat. The unknown benefactor—a figure who had slipped the silver chain into her coat pocket outside Silas’ bar a month ago with only a note reading *‘For when the walls grow thin’*—had not provided an instruction manual. After a week of fruitless research in the British Library, chasing down obscure folklore texts and feeling like a character in one of Eva’s fantasy novels, the only lead she had was this place. The Fae Grove. Isolde’s Grove. A place mentioned in whispers in a crumbling Victorian journal, a clearing marked by stones where time bled. She found the first standing stone just as the journal described: an ancient oak, but petrified, its bark turned to grey stone veined with silver. It stood sentinel at the head of a narrow path not on any map. The air changed as she stepped past it, the chill lifting, replaced by a damp, earthy warmth that smelled of loam and night-blooming jasmine. Her torch beam faltered, the light dimming and swelling as if breathing. She smacked it against her palm, and when that did nothing, she switched it off. To her surprise, she could see. The Grove was bathed in a soft, sourceless luminescence. Wildflowers carpeted the ground, violets and foxgloves and primroses, all in full, impossible bloom. Their colours were too vivid, the blues too deep, the reds too bloody. *Time moves differently here*, she remembered. An hour inside could be minutes or days outside. She checked her phone. The screen was black, unresponsive. A cold trickle, separate from the pendant’s warmth, traced down her spine. Rory was not prone to panic. Cool-headed, Eva called her. A problem-solver. She took a steadying breath, the air tasting faintly of ozone and honey, and focused on the facts. She was in the Grove. The pendant was warm, meaning it was near… something. A Hel portal, according to the scant notes she’d found. She didn’t know what ‘Hel’ was, but the word carried a weight that settled in her stomach like a stone. She needed to observe, to understand, and then get out. The clearing was circular, about thirty yards across, ringed by a dozen of the petrified oak stones. At its centre stood a single, larger stone, dark and slick as obsidian. The wrongness began as a subtle pressure, a feeling that the geometry of the place was just slightly off. The stones seemed to lean in when she wasn’t looking directly at them. The flower stems trembled, though there was no wind. A sound, then. Not from the park beyond, but from within the Grove itself. A whisper, so faint it could have been the rustle of leaves, except the leaves here were stone. It came from her left. She turned, her straight black hair brushing her cheek. Nothing but flowers and shadow. “Hello?” Her voice was swallowed by the dense air, leaving no echo. The whisper came again, this time from her right. A sibilant thread of sound, words just below comprehension. She clenched her left hand, her thumb finding the small, crescent-shaped scar on her wrist—a relic of a fall from a tree in her grandmother’s garden in Cardiff, a lifetime ago. The familiar ridge of tissue was a anchor. *Think, Rory. You’re just spooking yourself.* She took a step towards the central stone. The pendant’s warmth intensified, pulsing in a slow, rhythmic beat. *Thump-thump. Thump-thump.* It matched her own heart, then slowly diverged, beating a half-second behind, creating a disorienting syncopation in her chest. She pulled the chain from under her sweater. The deep crimson gemstone, the size of her thumbnail, glowed with a faint inner light. It cast a bloody tint on her fingers. A shadow detached itself from the base of a standing stone and flitted across the edge of her vision. Tall, impossibly slender, a suggestion of elongated limbs. She snapped her head towards it. Empty space. Her breath hitched. “I know you’re there,” she said, forcing authority into her tone, the way her barrister father had taught her to address a hostile witness. It sounded hollow here. Laughter answered her. High, clear, and utterly without warmth. It was the laugh of a child, but it echoed with a timbre that was ancient and cruel. It seemed to come from everywhere and nowhere, bouncing off the stones in a way that defied physics. The wildflowers at her feet suddenly wilted, their vibrant colours leaching to grey in a wave that spread out from her boots. Then, as quickly, they bloomed again, more fiercely than before. The temperature dropped sharply. The pendant flared, so hot it seared her skin through her sweater. She gasped, fumbling to lift it away from her chest. In its crimson glow, she saw them. Not with her direct gaze, but in the periphery. Figures moving between the stones. Tall, wraith-like, their forms shifting and unstable. They had the general shape of people, but the proportions were wrong—too many joints, heads that tilted at severe angles. They made no sound as they moved, but the air around them hummed with a low, dissonant frequency that vibrated in her teeth. *They’re herding you*, a calm, detached part of her mind observed. *Towards the centre stone.* She turned, trying to keep all the stones in view, but there were too many. Every time she focused on one area, movement flickered in another. A shape would solidify for a second—a crown of antlers etched against the gloom, a pair of eyes like smouldering embers—then dissolve into the dark. “What do you want?” Her voice was a whisper now. The child’s laugh came again, closer. Then a new voice, a man’s voice, smooth and familiar in the worst way. “Rory. Stay.” It was Evan’s voice. The cadence, the slight nasal tone he got when he was pretending to be reasonable. Her ex’s voice, here, in this impossible place. A bolt of pure, animal fear shot through her. It wasn’t him, it couldn’t be. This was a trick. A mimicry. But her body didn’t care. Her palms slicked with sweat. “You don’t belong here, Aurora.” The voice came from right behind her ear. She spun, swinging her torch like a club. It passed through empty, cold air. The central stone was now only ten feet away. It was no longer slick and black. In the light of her throbbing pendant, she could see it was translucent, a window into a deeper darkness. Shapes moved within it, slow and massive. The stone itself seemed to be a portal, a threshold. And the pendant was the key, burning hotter with every step she was forced to take towards it. She tried to run, to break for the gap between two stones that she thought was her entrance point. The flowers there erupted into thick, thorny brambles, weaving themselves into an impenetrable wall in seconds. She tried another path. Same result. The circle was closing. The whispering was a constant susurrus now, a chorus of unintelligible voices. The peripheral figures were closer, their humming vibration making the air thick as syrup. She was five feet from the central stone. The heat from the pendant was unbearable. She wanted to tear it off, but some instinct deeper than fear warned her not to. To lose it might be worse. The gem’s inner glow was a beacon, painting the clearing in pulses of lurid red. From the corner of her left eye, she saw one of the figures step fully into view. It did not walk; it unfolded. Seven feet tall, skin the colour of weathered ash, crowned with a rack of thorny antlers. It turned its head towards her. Its eyes were not embers; they were voids, pits that swallowed the faint light. It smiled, and its mouth had too many teeth. It was not looking at her face. It was looking at the pendant. The Evan-voice whispered again, this time from the thing’s general direction. “Give it to us. It’s why you were brought here. You’re just the delivery person.” The insult, the horrible echo of her mundane life delivering for Yu-Fei, cut through the terror with a spike of anger. She was not just a delivery person. She was Aurora Carter, who had left a monster in Cardiff and built a life in London. Who solved problems. But the problem here was insurmountable. The thing took a step towards her. The others, their forms still shifting at the edges, closed in. The central stone yawned before her, the darkness within it stirring, reaching. Rory’s mind raced, out-of-box, desperate. The pendant was hot near a Hel portal. This stone was a portal. The thing wanted it. What if… what if it wasn’t a key, but a seal? What if her unknown benefactor hadn’t given her a tool, but a responsibility? *‘For when the walls grow thin.’* The walls were very thin here. As the antlered creature reached for her with long, twig-like fingers, Rory did the only thing she could think of. She didn’t throw the pendant. She didn’t scream. She closed her fist around the burning gem, feeling the silver chain bite into her neck, and she took one deliberate, final step forward. Not away. Into the black surface of the waiting stone.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags4
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences6
tagDensity0.667
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
78.89% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1658
totalAiIsmAdverbs7
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
2
adverb"utterly"
count1
3
adverb"suddenly"
count1
4
adverb"quickly"
count1
5
adverb"sharply"
count1
6
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"slowly"
2"utterly"
3"suddenly"
4"quickly"
5"sharply"
6"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
15.56% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1658
totalAiIsms28
found
0
word"throb"
count1
1
word"warmth"
count5
2
word"sentinel"
count1
3
word"chill"
count1
4
word"traced"
count1
5
word"down her spine"
count1
6
word"weight"
count1
7
word"stomach"
count1
8
word"trembled"
count1
9
word"whisper"
count3
10
word"echo"
count2
11
word"familiar"
count2
12
word"rhythmic"
count1
13
word"echoed"
count1
14
word"vibrated"
count1
15
word"flickered"
count1
16
word"etched"
count1
17
word"gloom"
count1
18
word"beacon"
count1
19
word"raced"
count1
highlights
0"throb"
1"warmth"
2"sentinel"
3"chill"
4"traced"
5"down her spine"
6"weight"
7"stomach"
8"trembled"
9"whisper"
10"echo"
11"familiar"
12"rhythmic"
13"echoed"
14"vibrated"
15"flickered"
16"etched"
17"gloom"
18"beacon"
19"raced"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences151
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences151
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences154
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen37
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans7
markdownWords31
totalWords1653
ratio0.019
matches
0"‘For when the walls grow thin’"
1"Time moves differently here"
2"Think, Rory. You’re just spooking yourself."
3"Thump-thump. Thump-thump."
4"They’re herding you"
5"Towards the centre stone."
6"‘For when the walls grow thin.’"
75.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"Cool-headed, Eva called her."
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions31
wordCount1579
uniqueNames19
maxNameDensity0.32
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Grove"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
Rory5
Pembroke1
Lodge1
British1
Library1
Eva2
Fae1
Grove5
Victorian1
Hel2
Cardiff2
Evan2
Evan-voice1
Yu-Fei1
Aurora1
Carter1
London1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Eva"
2"Evan"
3"Evan-voice"
4"Yu-Fei"
5"Aurora"
6"Carter"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Pembroke"
3"British"
4"Library"
5"Fae"
6"Grove"
7"Hel"
8"Cardiff"
9"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences113
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"felt like a second heartbeat"
1"as if breathing"
79.01% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.21
wordCount1653
matches
0"Not from the park beyond, but from within the Grove itself"
1"Not with her direct gaze, but in the periphery"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences154
matches
0"feeling that the"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs35
mean47.23
std31.17
cv0.66
sampleLengths
083
1124
2132
336
484
571
651
712
857
96
1070
1138
1228
1377
1433
1564
1615
1751
1810
1922
2058
2127
2270
2371
2452
2568
2613
2726
2848
2936
3052
316
3252
332
348
98.29% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences151
matches
0"was bathed"
1"was swallowed"
2"was forced"
93.76% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs251
matches
0"wasn’t looking"
1"was pretending"
2"was not looking"
3"was looking"
31.54% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences154
ratio0.039
matches
0"The unknown benefactor—a figure who had slipped the silver chain into her coat pocket outside Silas’ bar a month ago with only a note reading *‘For when the walls grow thin’*—had not provided an instruction manual."
1"She clenched her left hand, her thumb finding the small, crescent-shaped scar on her wrist—a relic of a fall from a tree in her grandmother’s garden in Cardiff, a lifetime ago."
2"They had the general shape of people, but the proportions were wrong—too many joints, heads that tilted at severe angles."
3"A shape would solidify for a second—a crown of antlers etched against the gloom, a pair of eyes like smouldering embers—then dissolve into the dark."
4"It did not walk; it unfolded."
5"Its eyes were not embers; they were voids, pits that swallowed the faint light."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount151
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount3
adverbRatio0.019867549668874173
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences154
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences154
mean10.73
std6.99
cv0.651
sampleLengths
022
120
214
315
412
531
636
734
83
92
1018
1125
1214
1324
1412
1515
166
179
1814
1913
206
219
224
235
2412
256
264
272
2818
295
308
311
3210
3320
3410
3517
3613
3719
3813
399
403
4111
4218
435
449
455
4612
479
489
4931
37.88% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats20
diversityRatio0.3051948051948052
totalSentences154
uniqueOpeners47
47.28% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences141
matches
0"Then, as quickly, they bloomed"
1"Then a new voice, a"
ratio0.014
63.97% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount55
totalSentences141
matches
0"She slipped through, the ragged"
1"She clicked on her torch,"
2"It had been pulsing for"
3"She found the first standing"
4"It stood sentinel at the"
5"Her torch beam faltered, the"
6"She smacked it against her"
7"Their colours were too vivid,"
8"She checked her phone."
9"She took a steadying breath,"
10"She was in the Grove."
11"She didn’t know what"
12"She needed to observe, to"
13"It came from her left."
14"She turned, her straight black"
15"Her voice was swallowed by"
16"She clenched her left hand,"
17"You’re just spooking yourself.*"
18"She took a step towards"
19"She pulled the chain from"
ratio0.39
52.20% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount115
totalSentences141
matches
0"The iron gate to Richmond"
1"She slipped through, the ragged"
2"The night was clear and"
3"She clicked on her torch,"
4"The pendant, tucked beneath her"
5"It had been pulsing for"
6"The unknown benefactor—a figure who"
7"The Fae Grove."
8"A place mentioned in whispers"
9"She found the first standing"
10"It stood sentinel at the"
11"The air changed as she"
12"Her torch beam faltered, the"
13"She smacked it against her"
14"The Grove was bathed in"
15"Wildflowers carpeted the ground, violets"
16"Their colours were too vivid,"
17"An hour inside could be"
18"She checked her phone."
19"The screen was black, unresponsive."
ratio0.816
70.92% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences141
matches
0"To her surprise, she could"
1"To lose it might be"
ratio0.014
87.05% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences64
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"It had been pulsing for three days now, a slow, insistent throb of heat that had started as a faint warmth and grown into something that felt like a second hear…"
1"The air changed as she stepped past it, the chill lifting, replaced by a damp, earthy warmth that smelled of loam and night-blooming jasmine."
2"Her torch beam faltered, the light dimming and swelling as if breathing."
3"They had the general shape of people, but the proportions were wrong—too many joints, heads that tilted at severe angles."
4"Its eyes were not embers; they were voids, pits that swallowed the faint light."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags4
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"She didn’t, but the word carried a weight that settled in her stomach like a stone"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences6
tagDensity0.167
leniency0.333
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
81.0452%