| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | |
| 76.56% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1493 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 7 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "very" | | 1 | "slightly" | | 2 | "quickly" | | 3 | "slowly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 53.11% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1493 | | totalAiIsms | 14 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "navigated" | | 1 | "weight" | | 2 | "warmth" | | 3 | "pulse" | | 4 | "rhythmic" | | 5 | "resolved" | | 6 | "absolutely" | | 7 | "pulsed" | | 8 | "lurched" | | 9 | "scanning" | | 10 | "measured" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 124 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 124 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 124 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 82 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1509 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 2 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 17 | | wordCount | 1509 | | uniqueNames | 6 | | maxNameDensity | 0.53 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Gone" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 8 | | Park | 1 | | October | 2 | | Hel | 2 | | Cardiff | 1 | | Gone | 3 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Park" | | 1 | "October" | | 2 | "Hel" | | 3 | "Cardiff" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 74 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 67.46% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.325 | | wordCount | 1509 | | matches | | 0 | "not at the thing you were interested in, but at the space around it, the air beside it" | | 1 | "not tucked between the stones but standing in front of them, in front of the grove's threshold" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 124 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 47 | | mean | 32.11 | | std | 29.22 | | cv | 0.91 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 53 | | 1 | 17 | | 2 | 75 | | 3 | 117 | | 4 | 20 | | 5 | 3 | | 6 | 68 | | 7 | 47 | | 8 | 5 | | 9 | 15 | | 10 | 55 | | 11 | 7 | | 12 | 50 | | 13 | 3 | | 14 | 59 | | 15 | 16 | | 16 | 81 | | 17 | 3 | | 18 | 62 | | 19 | 5 | | 20 | 79 | | 21 | 7 | | 22 | 47 | | 23 | 10 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 35 | | 26 | 49 | | 27 | 4 | | 28 | 6 | | 29 | 54 | | 30 | 31 | | 31 | 3 | | 32 | 37 | | 33 | 4 | | 34 | 82 | | 35 | 4 | | 36 | 11 | | 37 | 3 | | 38 | 24 | | 39 | 47 | | 40 | 2 | | 41 | 80 | | 42 | 49 | | 43 | 3 | | 44 | 51 | | 45 | 9 | | 46 | 14 |
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| 88.29% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 6 | | totalSentences | 124 | | matches | | 0 | "was supposed" | | 1 | "been told" | | 2 | "were interested" | | 3 | "was gone" | | 4 | "was gone" | | 5 | "being heard" |
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| 11.83% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 7 | | totalVerbs | 248 | | matches | | 0 | "was glowing" | | 1 | "was standing" | | 2 | "was already watching" | | 3 | "were going" | | 4 | "was climbing" | | 5 | "was bleeding" | | 6 | "was not going" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 16 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 14 | | totalSentences | 124 | | ratio | 0.113 | | matches | | 0 | "It rose to her shoulder, the bark long since petrified into something harder and stranger than wood, and she pressed her palm flat against it as she always did — an old habit now, like knocking before entering." | | 1 | "Even in October, with every other patch of park turned to mulch and dying things, wildflowers held their ground here — pale clusters of something she'd never been able to name, low to the earth, giving off a faint sweetness that sat at the back of the throat." | | 2 | "She was early by fifteen minutes, which meant she had time to stand very still and feel the specific quality of quiet that the grove always carried — thick, attentive, like standing inside a held breath." | | 3 | "Not swinging — there was no wind in the grove, there never was — but she felt it shift against her sternum, a small deliberate weight settling differently against her skin." | | 4 | "Not brightly — she'd seen it brighter — but steadily." | | 5 | "Her eyes moved across the treeline from left to right, the way her father had taught her to watch a courtroom — not at the thing you were interested in, but at the space around it, the air beside it." | | 6 | "It was darker than the trees behind it, which should have made it more visible, but instead what she noticed was the subtraction — the way it occupied space without contributing to it." | | 7 | "It was in her jacket pocket and it would do her absolutely no good, because there was no signal in the grove — she'd tried her first visit and every visit after, just to be sure — and the torch function would ruin whatever night vision she'd built up and she was not, she decided, going to illuminate herself standing alone in a clearing just to see slightly better what was already watching her." | | 8 | "She snapped her head around and caught — a disturbance in the wildflowers, the faintest tremor of white petals, as though something had passed through them very quickly." | | 9 | "The moonlight fell evenly now; her eyes had adjusted as well as they were going to." | | 10 | "Different position — closer to the centre of the gap now, not tucked between the stones but standing in front of them, in front of the grove's threshold." | | 11 | "She measured the distance between herself and the western gap — the direction she'd entered." | | 12 | "The thing in the eastern gap tilted — she had no better word for it, no way to describe a spatial shift in something largely defined by its absence, but there was a definite alteration in how it occupied the air." | | 13 | "Not a voice — nothing so structured as a voice." |
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| 88.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1496 | | adjectiveStacks | 2 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "practical, clear-headed person" | | 1 | "practical clear-headed persons" |
| | adverbCount | 57 | | adverbRatio | 0.038101604278074866 | | lyAdverbCount | 18 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.012032085561497326 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 124 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 124 | | mean | 12.17 | | std | 13.55 | | cv | 1.113 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 28 | | 1 | 21 | | 2 | 4 | | 3 | 10 | | 4 | 3 | | 5 | 4 | | 6 | 24 | | 7 | 38 | | 8 | 4 | | 9 | 3 | | 10 | 6 | | 11 | 24 | | 12 | 48 | | 13 | 6 | | 14 | 3 | | 15 | 36 | | 16 | 20 | | 17 | 3 | | 18 | 31 | | 19 | 17 | | 20 | 8 | | 21 | 1 | | 22 | 11 | | 23 | 8 | | 24 | 25 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 10 | | 27 | 1 | | 28 | 5 | | 29 | 1 | | 30 | 1 | | 31 | 6 | | 32 | 7 | | 33 | 9 | | 34 | 6 | | 35 | 8 | | 36 | 27 | | 37 | 3 | | 38 | 2 | | 39 | 7 | | 40 | 11 | | 41 | 2 | | 42 | 32 | | 43 | 3 | | 44 | 2 | | 45 | 3 | | 46 | 4 | | 47 | 40 | | 48 | 8 | | 49 | 4 |
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| 44.89% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 16 | | diversityRatio | 0.3467741935483871 | | totalSentences | 124 | | uniqueOpeners | 43 | |
| 60.06% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 111 | | matches | | 0 | "Then it stopped." | | 1 | "More like the feeling of" |
| | ratio | 0.018 | |
| 65.05% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 43 | | totalSentences | 111 | | matches | | 0 | "She'd walked this path four" | | 1 | "She knew that." | | 2 | "She'd counted on it." | | 3 | "She pushed through a stand" | | 4 | "It rose to her shoulder," | | 5 | "She told herself that was" | | 6 | "She was early by fifteen" | | 7 | "She straightened and rolled her" | | 8 | "She reached up without thinking" | | 9 | "She pulled it free and" | | 10 | "It was glowing." | | 11 | "She'd been told that clearly" | | 12 | "She closed her fist around" | | 13 | "Her eyes moved across the" | | 14 | "She couldn't have said what" | | 15 | "It was darker than the" | | 16 | "She looked at it directly" | | 17 | "She had to fight to" | | 18 | "It wasn't moving." | | 19 | "She regulated it, slow and" |
| | ratio | 0.387 | |
| 95.14% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 81 | | totalSentences | 111 | | matches | | 0 | "The oak trees swallowed the" | | 1 | "She'd walked this path four" | | 2 | "Tonight she had neither." | | 3 | "Richmond Park at this hour" | | 4 | "She knew that." | | 5 | "She'd counted on it." | | 6 | "She pushed through a stand" | | 7 | "It rose to her shoulder," | | 8 | "The stone was cold." | | 9 | "That was normal." | | 10 | "She told herself that was" | | 11 | "The grove opened ahead of" | | 12 | "Rory crouched and checked her" | | 13 | "Quarter past eleven." | | 14 | "She was early by fifteen" | | 15 | "She straightened and rolled her" | | 16 | "The pendant moved." | | 17 | "She reached up without thinking" | | 18 | "A slow pulse, like pressing" | | 19 | "She pulled it free and" |
| | ratio | 0.73 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 7 | | totalSentences | 111 | | matches | | 0 | "Even in October, with every" | | 1 | "Even through the cotton, the" | | 2 | "As far as she understood" | | 3 | "By the time she'd looked," | | 4 | "As though it had crossed" | | 5 | "As though it had waited" | | 6 | "If she ran." |
| | ratio | 0.063 | |
| 68.45% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 48 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "Even in October, with every other patch of park turned to mulch and dying things, wildflowers held their ground here — pale clusters of something she'd never be…" | | 1 | "She was early by fifteen minutes, which meant she had time to stand very still and feel the specific quality of quiet that the grove always carried — thick, att…" | | 2 | "It was darker than the trees behind it, which should have made it more visible, but instead what she noticed was the subtraction — the way it occupied space wit…" | | 3 | "She snapped her head around and caught — a disturbance in the wildflowers, the faintest tremor of white petals, as though something had passed through them very…" | | 4 | "She hit the bracken at full speed and crashed through it without caring about the noise, the fronds clawing at her jacket and her hair, and she put three standi…" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 0 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |