Run: 2026-02-25-01KJ94H0XYVDW9TE4W0Z085N42

Run Details

Duration:
27.1s
Cost:
$0.014195
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The chime above the door sang a brief, tinny tune, ignored by all but the woman who pushed through. Aurora Carter shed the chill of the Soho night like a second skin, pulling her black hair from where it had plastered to her cheek. The air inside The Raven's Nest clung to her, a warm, comforting blanket woven from stale ale, leather, and woodsmoke. It was a familiar scent, almost a second home, and a welcome reprieve after a night spent dodging taxis and disgruntled pigeons. She tossed her delivery bag onto the empty stool by the end of the bar, its worn canvas sighing softly, and slid onto the leather seat herself. Her jeans, streaked with something unidentifiable from a particularly unfortunate pothole incident, felt stiff against her skin. Silas Blackwood, the proprietor and silent keeper of secrets, moved with his usual measured grace behind the burnished oak. His grey-streaked auburn hair and neatly trimmed beard caught the ambient light, making the subtle lines etched around his hazel eyes deepen as he glanced her way. A slight limp in his left leg, a phantom echo of a past only whispered about, was the only imperfection in his otherwise poised demeanor. "Rough night, Rory?" His voice was a low rumble, like distant thunder. He always shortened her name, a familiarity she’d grown to appreciate. Aurora sighed, propping her chin on her fist. "You could say that. Some bloke tried to pay for his pad thai with a tenner that had a bite taken out of it. Literally chewed." Silas chuckled, a quiet, almost soundless expulsion of air. He placed a coaster in front of her, already knowing her order. "The clientele of this city never cease to surprise." He poured a stout, the dark liquid cascading into the glass, forming a creamy head. The ritual was soothing, a small anchor in the chaotic sprawl of her life. She watched his large, capable hands, the fingers long and slender, yet powerful. They paused for a moment, one thumb idly caressed something on his right hand. A silver signet ring, intricately carved, glinted under the bar lights. It was an object she’d seen countless times, a permanent fixture on his hand, as much a part of him as his steady gaze or his quiet authority. But tonight, for the first time, it snagged her attention. The ring. A flash. Not a memory, not yet, but a flicker. A feeling of… recognition, distant and unsettling, like a half-remembered tune. "Thanks, Silas," she murmured, taking the glass. The bitter tang of the stout hit her tongue, familiar, grounding. Yet the flicker persisted, scratching at the edges of her mind. She watched him as he wiped down the counter with a practiced ease, his movements economic, honed. His profile was strong, almost sculptural in the dim light. Fifty-eight years old, the codex said, a former spy, now a barkeeper. A mentor of sorts, though she wasn't sure what he was mentoring her for. Just... existing, perhaps. Getting by. It had been enough for her, the quiet stability of the Nest, the safety of the flat upstairs, the distance from Evan and the life she'd fled in Cardiff. The ring again. It wasn't just the fact of it, but the way it sat on his finger, the slight turn of the hand, the way the light caught the crest. And then, a tiny fragment, a splinter of memory, sharp and sudden. A sprawling garden in late summer. Cardiff. The drone of adult voices, hushed and polite, punctuated by the tinkling of ice in glasses. Herself, a child, maybe seven or eight, hiding behind a rose bush, peeking out at the grown-ups. A man, tall and broad, laughing easily, his grey-streaked hair just starting to show, not fully silver yet. And on his hand, catching the sun, that almost identical flash of silver. No. It couldn't be. Aurora’s breath hitched. She tightened her grip on the stout glass, her knuckles white. She swallowed, the liquid suddenly tasting like ash. Her heart hammered against her ribs, a frantic bird trapped in a cage. She looked at Silas, truly looked at him, not just her landlord, not just the bar owner, but searching for the ghost of that memory in the man before her. The hazel eyes. The subtle warmth in their depths. The quiet authority. The way he carried himself. It was him. It had to be. "Silas," she said, her voice surprisingly steady, despite the tremor running through her. "Did you... did you ever live in Cardiff?" He paused, a glass in one hand, a polishing cloth in the other. His gaze, usually so unreadable, held a flicker of something she couldn't quite decipher. Recognition? Surprise? Resignation? "Long time ago, Rory," he answered, his voice a little softer than before. He didn't elaborate, just waited, his silent query hanging in the air. "My parents were Jennifer and Brendan Carter," she pushed, the names tasting strange on her tongue, ghosts of a past she rarely spoke of, especially since Evan. "My father was a barrister." His silence stretched, heavy and thick. She watched his face, searching for a giveaway, a tic, anything. Slowly, almost imperceptibly, his expression softened, and a profound weariness seemed to settle over him, deepening the lines around his eyes. He set the glass down, a little more deliberately than necessary, then leaned against the bar, facing her fully. "Jennifer and Brendan," he repeated, the names spoken with a reverence that stole her breath. "Of course. Brendan. He was a good man. Sharp, fair. And Jennifer... always so kind." A faint smile, tinged with melancholy, touched his lips. "I knew them well. From before. A lifetime ago, it feels like." The pieces slammed into place, shattering her carefully constructed present. Silas. The tall man. The family friend, whom her parents used to call 'Si', before he disappeared from their lives, vanishing into the nebulous world of her childhood memories. She remembered snippets: garden parties, a barbecue at their house, his deep laugh after her father told a particularly dry legal joke. She remembered him teaching her to skip stones across the pond in their local park, his patience endless. The shock of it left her reeling. All these months, living above his pub, in his orbit, seeking his quiet counsel, and never knowing. How could she not have known? "You… you were ‘Uncle Si’," she whispered, the words catching in her throat. "The one with the stories." Her eyes welled, blurring his familiar form. "You never said." He looked away for a moment, staring at the rows of bottles, then back at her. His gaze was filled with an unreadable mix of regret and something akin to sorrow. "You were just a little thing, Rory. Seven, eight years old. Bright as a button, always asking questions. Then... things changed for me. I had to leave Cardiff. And for you, too, I imagine. It's been a long time." His words hung heavy in the air, weighted with unspoken truths. "I recognized you, of course. The moment you first walked in here, looking for a room. The bright blue eyes. The way you bit your lip when you were thinking. And the scar," he gestured subtly to her left wrist, almost invisible beneath her sleeve, "a crescent moon from that fall on your bike. Couldn’t forget that." A wave of humiliation washed over her. He had known, all this time. Watched her, this broken version of the girl he remembered, flounder and rebuild. The cool-headed mask she wore, the quick wit she used to deflect, it all felt transparent under his knowing gaze. "Why didn't you say anything?" she demanded, her voice rising slightly. A fresh bitterness joined the ash in her mouth. He pushed off the bar, his limp more pronounced as he crossed to a quieter section, stopping by a glass-fronted cabinet filled with maps. He traced a finger along the aged parchment. "Because you were running. You needed a fresh start, not old ghosts. I thought... I thought it was best to let you find your own way, in your own time." He turned to face her, his hazel eyes piercing. "The girl I knew, Rory, she was fearless. Full of life. And when you walked in here, you were a shadow of that. Hurt, guarded. I didn't want to add to that burden. Sometimes, the past is best left buried, until you're ready to dig it up yourself." Her own past, the one she'd fled, flashed behind her eyes: the tight grip on her arm, the quiet control that turned to shouting, the constant erosion of her self-worth. Evan. He had taken so much, leaving her a hollowed-out version of the girl Silas remembered. She *was* fearless then. Fearless and naive. The weight of time, stretching between that summer garden and this Soho bar, felt immense, crushing. The unspoken regret was palpable, a third presence in the quiet space. Hers, for the person she’d become. His, perhaps, for the life she’d been forced into. "I… I can't believe it," she finally managed, her voice barely a whisper. "All this time. You've been here for me, this whole time. And you were… you were *him*." The irony of finding refuge with a figure from her untainted childhood, a man who represented a time before the fall, choked her. He walked back to the bar, retrieved a small snifter, and poured a measure of amber liquid, pushing it across to her. Brandy. "Drink that. It'll help settle your nerves." He leaned on the bar, looking at her with a quiet intensity. "I saw your parents sometimes, before I left. They were proud of you, Rory. So very proud. You were going to do great things, they said." His words, simple and heartfelt, triggered a fresh wave of emotion. The memory of her parents, gone now these past few years, overlaid with his familiar voice, hit her harder than anything. He'd known them. He remembered her, as a child, before the world had tried to break her. "I didn't become that person, Silas," she confessed, the raw truth tearing through her usual reserve. "I went to Cardiff Uni, like they wanted. Pre-law. But then... then things happened. I walked away from it all. I walked away from myself." The confession tasted sour, bitter. "I'm not fearless anymore. I deliver takeaways, and I hide." She gestured vaguely at the bar, the flat above. "This is hiding." Silas didn’t contradict her, didn't offer platitudes. He simply watched, his gaze steady, understanding. "Life has a way of twisting paths, Rory. Sometimes, hiding is what you need to do to heal. To remember who you are. And sometimes," he paused, his gaze drifting to the maps on the wall, "sometimes, you find your way back to places, and people, you never expected to see again. And you realize, deep down, some things haven't changed at all." He tapped his silver signet ring with his thumb, a small, rhythmic motion. The familiar gesture, once a trigger of forgotten memory, now shifted. It no longer sparked discomfort but a profound, almost aching, sense of connection. The past wasn't buried here tonight; it was simply rediscovered, a new layer added to the complex history between them. And in the face of this unexpected reunion, the weight of everything unsaid, everything lost, settled between them, heavy and undeniable, yet somehow, also quietly, terribly, right.
created_at"2026-02-25T00:52:31.812Z" 2/25/2026, 12:52:31 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags20
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"he gestured subtly [subtly]"
1"She gestured vaguely [vaguely]"
dialogueSentences29
tagDensity0.69
leniency1
rawRatio0.1
effectiveRatio0.1
79.06% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1910
totalAiIsmAdverbs8
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
1
adverb"suddenly"
count1
2
adverb"truly"
count1
3
adverb"slowly"
count1
4
adverb"deliberately"
count1
5
adverb"carefully"
count1
6
adverb"slightly"
count1
7
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
1"suddenly"
2"truly"
3"slowly"
4"deliberately"
5"carefully"
6"slightly"
7"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
5.76% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1910
totalAiIsms36
found
0
word"chill"
count1
1
word"comforting"
count1
2
word"familiar"
count5
3
word"measured"
count1
4
word"etched"
count1
5
word"echo"
count1
6
word"cascading"
count1
7
word"chaotic"
count1
8
word"flicker"
count3
9
word"practiced ease"
count1
10
word"warmth"
count1
11
word"depths"
count1
12
word"unreadable"
count2
13
word"silence"
count1
14
word"profound"
count2
15
word"tinged"
count1
16
word"constructed"
count1
17
word"unspoken"
count2
18
word"traced"
count1
19
word"weight"
count2
20
word"palpable"
count1
21
word"whisper"
count1
22
word"intensity"
count1
23
word"rhythmic"
count1
24
word"sense of"
count1
25
word"complex"
count1
highlights
0"chill"
1"comforting"
2"familiar"
3"measured"
4"etched"
5"echo"
6"cascading"
7"chaotic"
8"flicker"
9"practiced ease"
10"warmth"
11"depths"
12"unreadable"
13"silence"
14"profound"
15"tinged"
16"constructed"
17"unspoken"
18"traced"
19"weight"
20"palpable"
21"whisper"
22"intensity"
23"rhythmic"
24"sense of"
25"complex"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung heavy in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences127
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences127
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences136
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen63
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords2
totalWords1910
ratio0.001
matches
0"was"
1"him"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions18
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions21
wordCount1468
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity0.41
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Cardiff"
discoveredNames
Carter1
Soho2
Raven1
Nest2
Blackwood1
Evan3
Cardiff2
Silas6
Aurora3
persons
0"Carter"
1"Nest"
2"Blackwood"
3"Evan"
4"Silas"
5"Aurora"
places
0"Soho"
1"Raven"
2"Cardiff"
globalScore1
windowScore1
99.49% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences99
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"quite decipher"
1"something akin to sorrow"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches5
per1kWords2.618
wordCount1910
matches
0"Not a memory, not yet, but a flicker"
1"not yet, but a flicker"
2"not just her landlord, not just the bar owner, but searching for the ghost of"
3"not just the bar owner, but searching for the ghost of"
4"no longer sparked discomfort but"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences136
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs37
mean51.62
std29.87
cv0.579
sampleLengths
086
144
271
323
434
530
695
710
823
929
1087
1131
1283
134
1435
1554
1621
1730
1825
1932
2057
2151
2279
2330
2428
25138
2646
2720
28119
2953
3043
3153
3268
3349
3468
3577
3684
99.74% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences127
matches
0"was filled"
1"been forced"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs215
matches
0"was soothing"
1"was mentoring"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences136
ratio0.007
matches
0"The past wasn't buried here tonight; it was simply rediscovered, a new layer added to the complex history between them."
88.62% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1409
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount72
adverbRatio0.0511000709723208
lyAdverbCount31
lyAdverbRatio0.0220014194464159
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences136
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences136
mean14.04
std11.03
cv0.786
sampleLengths
019
125
220
322
427
517
619
727
825
912
1011
118
1226
139
1412
159
1615
1714
1813
1914
2011
2128
2210
232
242
258
263
278
287
2911
3011
3117
3210
3312
3414
351
362
372
3829
393
4028
4112
426
431
4416
4517
4618
4713
481
493
46.81% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats13
diversityRatio0.3382352941176471
totalSentences136
uniqueOpeners46
29.24% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences114
matches
0"Slowly, almost imperceptibly, his expression"
ratio0.009
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount64
totalSentences114
matches
0"It was a familiar scent,"
1"She tossed her delivery bag"
2"Her jeans, streaked with something"
3"His grey-streaked auburn hair and"
4"His voice was a low"
5"He always shortened her name,"
6"He placed a coaster in"
7"He poured a stout, the"
8"She watched his large, capable"
9"They paused for a moment,"
10"It was an object she’d"
11"she murmured, taking the glass"
12"She watched him as he"
13"His profile was strong, almost"
14"It had been enough for"
15"It wasn't just the fact"
16"Herself, a child, maybe seven"
17"It couldn't be."
18"She tightened her grip on"
19"She swallowed, the liquid suddenly"
ratio0.561
8.25% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount103
totalSentences114
matches
0"The chime above the door"
1"Aurora Carter shed the chill"
2"The air inside The Raven's"
3"It was a familiar scent,"
4"She tossed her delivery bag"
5"Her jeans, streaked with something"
6"Silas Blackwood, the proprietor and"
7"His grey-streaked auburn hair and"
8"A slight limp in his"
9"His voice was a low"
10"He always shortened her name,"
11"Aurora sighed, propping her chin"
12"Silas chuckled, a quiet, almost"
13"He placed a coaster in"
14"He poured a stout, the"
15"The ritual was soothing, a"
16"She watched his large, capable"
17"They paused for a moment,"
18"A silver signet ring, intricately"
19"It was an object she’d"
ratio0.904
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences114
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences62
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"All these months, living above his pub, in his orbit, seeking his quiet counsel, and never knowing."
1"Her own past, the one she'd fled, flashed behind her eyes: the tight grip on her arm, the quiet control that turned to shouting, the constant erosion of her sel…"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags20
uselessAdditionCount8
matches
0"she said, her voice surprisingly steady, despite the tremor running through her"
1"he answered, his voice a little softer than before"
2"he repeated, the names spoken with a reverence that stole her breath"
3"she whispered, the words catching in her throat"
4"she demanded, her voice rising slightly"
5"she confessed, the raw truth tearing through her usual reserve"
6"The confession tasted, bitter"
7"he paused, his gaze drifting to the maps on the wall,"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount6
fancyTags
0"she murmured (murmur)"
1"he repeated (repeat)"
2"she whispered (whisper)"
3"she demanded (demand)"
4"the fall choked (the fall choked)"
5"she confessed (confess)"
dialogueSentences29
tagDensity0.276
leniency0.552
rawRatio0.75
effectiveRatio0.414
71.8989%