| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 7 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 7 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 93.49% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1535 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 15.31% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1535 | | totalAiIsms | 26 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "rhythmic" | | 1 | "warmth" | | 2 | "silence" | | 3 | "tracing" | | 4 | "race" | | 5 | "echo" | | 6 | "chill" | | 7 | "perfect" | | 8 | "sentinels" | | 9 | "lurch" | | 10 | "stomach" | | 11 | "weight" | | 12 | "pulse" | | 13 | "scanning" | | 14 | "crystal" | | 15 | "vibrated" | | 16 | "searing" | | 17 | "dancing" | | 18 | "flickered" | | 19 | "roaring" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 118 | | matches | | |
| 58.11% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 6 | | narrationSentences | 118 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 119 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 34 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 1 | | markdownWords | 1 | | totalWords | 1529 | | ratio | 0.001 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 6 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 46 | | wordCount | 1499 | | uniqueNames | 17 | | maxNameDensity | 0.8 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Honda | 2 | | Vision | 2 | | Carter | 1 | | Golden | 2 | | Empress | 2 | | Park | 2 | | London | 4 | | Heartstone | 4 | | Pendant | 3 | | November | 1 | | Grove | 5 | | Hel | 1 | | Rory | 12 | | Cardiff | 1 | | Fae | 1 | | Silence | 1 | | Richmond | 2 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Empress" | | 2 | "Pendant" | | 3 | "Grove" | | 4 | "Rory" | | 5 | "Silence" |
| | places | | 0 | "Golden" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" | | 3 | "Cardiff" | | 4 | "Richmond" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 97 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "looked like wet parchment stretched over" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1529 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 119 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 36 | | mean | 42.47 | | std | 25.75 | | cv | 0.606 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 81 | | 1 | 84 | | 2 | 81 | | 3 | 66 | | 4 | 15 | | 5 | 45 | | 6 | 49 | | 7 | 5 | | 8 | 48 | | 9 | 40 | | 10 | 12 | | 11 | 35 | | 12 | 31 | | 13 | 61 | | 14 | 65 | | 15 | 62 | | 16 | 2 | | 17 | 63 | | 18 | 37 | | 19 | 12 | | 20 | 57 | | 21 | 53 | | 22 | 46 | | 23 | 56 | | 24 | 62 | | 25 | 10 | | 26 | 4 | | 27 | 84 | | 28 | 34 | | 29 | 1 | | 30 | 8 | | 31 | 49 | | 32 | 35 | | 33 | 42 | | 34 | 84 | | 35 | 10 |
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| 99.32% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 118 | | matches | | 0 | "was gone" | | 1 | "was replaced" |
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| 29.79% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 6 | | totalVerbs | 235 | | matches | | 0 | "were wading" | | 1 | "was standing" | | 2 | "was opening" | | 3 | "were closing" | | 4 | "was standing" | | 5 | "was standing" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 8 | | semicolonCount | 3 | | flaggedSentences | 10 | | totalSentences | 119 | | ratio | 0.084 | | matches | | 0 | "She knew this part of the park—or she thought she did." | | 1 | "It wasn't the natural silence of a park at midnight; it was a deliberate erasure of sound." | | 2 | "Despite the darkness, wildflowers bloomed in the grass—feral blues, screaming yellows, and lilies as white as bone." | | 3 | "Her watch, a cheap digital thing she used for timed deliveries, began to freak out—the numbers spinning through hours and minutes in a blur of liquid crystal." | | 4 | "Rory whipped her head around, catching a glimpse of something tall—far too tall—and thin as a needle, retreating behind a tree trunk." | | 5 | "The Hel portal wasn't just nearby; it was opening." | | 6 | "But there were other shadows, too—dozens of them, detached from any physical form, dancing at the edges of the Grove." | | 7 | "She remembered a detail from a book her father had kept in his study back in Cardiff—something about the way Fae spaces folded." | | 8 | "They weren't maps; they were moods." | | 9 | "The drone reached a deafening crescendo, a sound like a thousand angry bees, and then—" |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 148 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 5 | | adverbRatio | 0.033783783783783786 | | lyAdverbCount | 0 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 119 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 119 | | mean | 12.85 | | std | 7.09 | | cv | 0.552 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 21 | | 1 | 30 | | 2 | 8 | | 3 | 22 | | 4 | 14 | | 5 | 12 | | 6 | 14 | | 7 | 24 | | 8 | 20 | | 9 | 10 | | 10 | 21 | | 11 | 15 | | 12 | 11 | | 13 | 24 | | 14 | 13 | | 15 | 17 | | 16 | 5 | | 17 | 15 | | 18 | 16 | | 19 | 5 | | 20 | 4 | | 21 | 6 | | 22 | 16 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 19 | | 25 | 7 | | 26 | 5 | | 27 | 18 | | 28 | 26 | | 29 | 5 | | 30 | 8 | | 31 | 17 | | 32 | 12 | | 33 | 11 | | 34 | 4 | | 35 | 22 | | 36 | 12 | | 37 | 2 | | 38 | 11 | | 39 | 1 | | 40 | 14 | | 41 | 13 | | 42 | 8 | | 43 | 4 | | 44 | 14 | | 45 | 9 | | 46 | 4 | | 47 | 17 | | 48 | 4 | | 49 | 26 |
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| 31.51% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 22 | | diversityRatio | 0.24369747899159663 | | totalSentences | 119 | | uniqueOpeners | 29 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 111 | | matches | | 0 | "Somewhere near the center lay" | | 1 | "Then, she saw them: the" | | 2 | "Slowly, she turned her eyes" | | 3 | "Bitterly, wonderfully cold." |
| | ratio | 0.036 | |
| 21.80% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 55 | | totalSentences | 111 | | matches | | 0 | "She shouldn't have come here" | | 1 | "She reached beneath the collar" | | 2 | "It thrummed with a low," | | 3 | "It had been acting up" | | 4 | "Her boots crunched through the" | | 5 | "She knew this part of" | | 6 | "It wasn't the natural silence" | | 7 | "She reached up instinctively, her" | | 8 | "It was an old habit," | | 9 | "Her voice didn't echo." | | 10 | "It dropped to the ground," | | 11 | "She pushed forward through a" | | 12 | "They weren't stone, not exactly." | | 13 | "They were ancient oaks, silvered" | | 14 | "She was in the Grove." | | 15 | "They shouldn't have been there," | | 16 | "It was hot now, uncomfortably" | | 17 | "It was the distinct crack" | | 18 | "She froze, her blue eyes" | | 19 | "she called out" |
| | ratio | 0.495 | |
| 27.57% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 96 | | totalSentences | 111 | | matches | | 0 | "The Honda Vision scooter sat" | | 1 | "Aurora Carter adjusted the straps" | | 2 | "She shouldn't have come here" | | 3 | "Richmond Park was a void" | | 4 | "She reached beneath the collar" | | 5 | "The silver chain was cold," | | 6 | "It thrummed with a low," | | 7 | "It had been acting up" | | 8 | "The warmth was an itch" | | 9 | "Rory stepped off the path" | | 10 | "Her boots crunched through the" | | 11 | "She knew this part of" | | 12 | "It wasn't the natural silence" | | 13 | "Rory stopped, her breath hitching." | | 14 | "She reached up instinctively, her" | | 15 | "It was an old habit," | | 16 | "Her voice didn't echo." | | 17 | "It dropped to the ground," | | 18 | "She pushed forward through a" | | 19 | "The temperature shifted." |
| | ratio | 0.865 | |
| 45.05% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 111 | | matches | | 0 | "Now, it sat bloated and" |
| | ratio | 0.009 | |
| 40.82% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 70 | | technicalSentenceCount | 10 | | matches | | 0 | "Richmond Park was a void at this hour, a three-square-mile expanse of shadow that swallowed the orange sodium glow of London’s perimeter." | | 1 | "It thrummed with a low, rhythmic heat, a vibration that skipped against her collarbone." | | 2 | "The air was as stagnant as a tomb, yet the wildflowers bent and swayed in a linear path, as if something invisible were wading through them." | | 3 | "Rory turned, her heart hammering a frantic rhythm that matched the pulsing of her pendant." | | 4 | "It moved with a jerky, stop-motion fluidness that made her head ache." | | 5 | "She couldn't see it fully, only the edge of a long, grey hand with fingers that possessed too many knuckles." | | 6 | "They were closing in, a tightening noose of silhouettes that flickered like candlelight in a draft." | | 7 | "It tilted its head, mimicking the way Rory was standing." | | 8 | "She closed her eyes, forcing her breathing to slow despite the terror clawing at her throat." | | 9 | "She touched her left wrist, her fingers finding the crescent scar, making sure she was real, making sure she was back." |
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| 53.57% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 7 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory said, her voice tight but steady" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 4 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "the center lay (the center lay)" | | 1 | "she whispered (whisper)" | | 2 | "Rory hissed (hiss)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 7 | | tagDensity | 0.571 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.75 | | effectiveRatio | 0.75 | |