Run: 2026-02-25-01KJ94RPXNNWNB0DJRV35BY1G7

Run Details

Duration:
21.7s
Cost:
$0.010765
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The chime above the door announced Rory’s arrival, a familiar sound swallowed almost immediately by the low thrum of conversation and the clink of ice. She shrugged off the chill of the Soho night, the faint scent of rain and exhaust clinging to her worn delivery jacket. Her shoulder-length black hair had escaped its tie, tendrils brushing her jawline as she scanned the dimly lit interior of The Raven’s Nest. Old maps lined the walls, curling at the edges, and black-and-white photographs of forgotten faces stared out from behind dusty glass. It was a haven, a soft landing after a day of navigating London traffic and terse customer interactions. Silas Blackwood, as ever, stood behind the polished mahogany bar, a study in quiet authority. His grey-streaked auburn hair and neatly trimmed beard caught the light as he meticulously wiped down a pint glass. The silver signet ring on his right hand gleamed. He looked up, his hazel eyes crinkling at the corners. "Rory. Rough one?" His voice was low, a rumble that suited the bar's atmosphere. His slight limp was more pronounced today, a faint shift in weight as he moved. "Just long," Rory admitted, tossing her keys onto the counter. She pulled up a stool at the far end, away from the scattered patrons. "A record number of forgotten sauces tonight." Silas chuckled, placing a fresh pint of cider in front of her without her asking. Rory traced the condensation on the glass. The air in here was thick with the smell of hops and old wood, a comforting antidote to the frantic energy of the city. She felt the day’s tension begin to bleed away, her shoulders easing from their high, defensive posture. She watched Silas work, his movements precise, almost ritualistic, observing the world around him with a quiet intensity. He was a good listener, and sometimes, that was all she needed. Her gaze drifted idly across the room, past a huddled trio discussing football, past a couple lost in their own shared silence, past a lone woman engrossed in a book. And then, her breath hitched. The woman at the small, round table near the back was looking up, not at Rory, but at something unseen beyond her. Her face, framed by a cascade of perfectly styled blonde hair, was instantly familiar, yet profoundly changed. Elara. Her heart gave a sudden, painful lurch, a phantom echo of a life left behind. Elara’s hair, once a wild, sun-streaked mess Rory had spent hours trying to tame with a brush and sheer force, now fell in a sleek, expensive-looking bob, perfectly coiffed, shimmering under the bar’s subdued lighting. The comfortable, oversized jumpers she’d favored in university were replaced by a tailored silk blouse that gleamed a cool silver. Her hands, once prone to nervous fidgeting, rested calmly on the table, a cluster of delicate gold rings catching the light. She looked… polished. Hardened, somehow. Like a statue carved from the softer girl Rory had known. Rory felt a cold knot tighten in her stomach. Cardiff. The word tasted like ash in her mouth. She hadn't seen Elara since the chaotic aftermath of leaving Evan, since the hasty goodbyes that hadn’t really been goodbyes at all. Five years. A lifetime. Elara’s eyes, a striking emerald green Rory remembered so well, finally met hers. For a moment, a flicker of something unreadable passed between them: surprise, recognition, perhaps a shared ghost. The faint murmur of the bar seemed to fade into the background. Elara smiled then, a slow, tentative stretch of her lips that didn't quite reach her eyes. She pushed her chair back, the scrape a sudden, jarring noise in the quiet space. "Rory?" she questioned, the name a soft echo from a distant past. Her voice, refined and slightly deeper, was a far cry from the lilting Welsh accent Rory remembered. Rory forced a smile, pushing herself off the stool. Her legs felt strangely heavy. "Elara. What are you doing here?" The question was blunt, born of genuine disbelief. Elara wasn’t a Soho bar regular. Elara was… Cardiff. Coffee shops with mismatched furniture and endless debates about post-structuralism. Elara paused, an almost imperceptible hesitation. She glanced around the bar, as if assessing its suitability. "Business, actually. Just finished a meeting nearby. Needed a quiet drink before the train." She gestured vaguely towards the empty chair opposite her. "Join me?" Rory walked towards the table, feeling every inch of the distance, acutely aware of the dust on her trainers and the faint grease stains on her jacket. She slid into the seat, the worn leather cushion a stark contrast to Elara’s crisp elegance. "Train back to where?" Rory asked, trying to sound casual, but her voice felt rough, unused to navigating these old channels. "Cardiff, mostly," Elara said, her eyes meeting Rory's again. There was something in their depth that remained familiar, a spark of the old mischief, though it was carefully guarded now. "Though I'm up in London quite a bit these days. New firm." "New firm," Rory repeated, a dull ache starting behind her eyes. "You're still… law?" Elara nodded, a small, proud lift of her chin. "Corporate, now. Mergers and acquisitions. It’s… demanding. Rewarding." She took a delicate sip of her gin and tonic, ice chiming softly against the glass. "And you? Still doing… whatever you were doing?" The unspoken judgment hung in the air, light but undeniable. Rory felt a familiar prickle of defensiveness. "I mean, I'm still in London," she said, choosing her words carefully. "Working for a Chinese place, Golden Empress. Delivery. Part-time." She almost added 'and living above this bar,' but held back. Some details were too intimate for this version of Elara. Elara’s perfect eyebrows lifted a fraction. "Delivery, really? I always thought you'd be thriving, Rory. You always had that sharp wit, that drive. What happened to Pre-Law?" The question, so innocent on the surface, felt like a barbed hook. Rory’s scarred left wrist, a faint crescent moon from a forgotten childhood accident, suddenly tingled. "Life happened, Elara," she said, her voice flat. "Things change." She thought of Evan, of the suffocating grip of his manipulative anger, of the desperate flight to London. Elara had known about Evan. They had all known, in a way, or suspected. But no one had truly understood, no one had really intervened. And Elara, Rory had always thought, would have been the one. The regret was a bitter taste. Elara stared into her glass. "Yes, of course." Her tone was softer now, tinged with something that sounded like pity, or perhaps genuine sadness. "We all change, don't we? It's been… a long time. I missed you, you know." Rory’s laugh was brittle. "Did you? Hard to tell." She regretted it instantly. The old resentments, packed away in the darkest corners of her mind, threatened to spill out. This wasn't the place. Not here, not now. Elara flinched, her composure cracking just for a moment. "It was complicated, Rory. After you left… everything was a mess. Evan was… difficult. Everyone walked on eggshells. He had this way of making everything your fault, didn't he?" Her green eyes, for the first time, held a flicker of a shared memory, a painful recognition. Rory clenched her jaw. "He did." The truth was, Elara had been one of the friends who had quietly pulled away, caught in Evan's subtle web of manipulation and isolation. Rory had understood, at the time, but the understanding hadn't erased the hurt of abandonment. "I still feel bad about it, you know," Elara continued, her voice barely a whisper, eyes fixed on some point beyond Rory’s shoulder. "I should have… I don't know what I should have done. But you just vanished. No note, no call. Just gone. Everyone thought you'd just… run away." The unspoken accusation, that Rory had abandoned them, stung. "I *did* run away, Elara. I had to. And I called Eva. She was the one who helped me get out." Rory remembered the frantic calls, the whispered plans, the crushing fear. Evan had tapped her phone, tracked her movements. She’d left a life, not just a city. Elara finally looked at Rory, her gaze intense. "Eva. Yes, she always was fiercely loyal. Still is, I imagine. She's doing well too, back home, teaching history now. Married a lovely chap, a doctor." Rory felt a strange twist of relief mixed with bitterness. Eva deserved happiness. But the thought that Elara was still privy to Eva’s life, still part of that Cardiff circle, while Rory had become an outsider, was a stark reminder of what she’d lost. "That's good," Rory said, managing a genuine note. "I'm glad for her." A silence settled between them, heavy with unspoken words, with questions that would never be answered, with apologies that would never be fully voiced. Rory looked at Elara, truly looked. The expensive clothes, the perfect hair, the guarded poise—it was a shield. Elara wasn't just older; she was fundamentally different, polished by a different grindstone than Rory's own. She had moved past the shadows of their shared youth by constructing a meticulously ordered life, perhaps one that left little room for the messy realities of the past. “You look well, Elara,” Rory offered, meaning it in a detached way. She looked successful, unburdened by the same shadows that still sometimes clung to Rory. Elara smiled, a genuine, if fleeting, expression this time. "And you're still… you, Rory. Still that fierce look in your eyes." Her gaze lingered on Rory’s bright blue eyes, then dropped to her left wrist, as if searching for something. Rory instinctively covered the crescent scar with her right hand. "Some things don't change," Rory finally said, the words ringing with more conviction than she felt. She thought of her cool-headed intelligence, her quick out-of-the-box thinking, the parts of her Evan hadn't been able to crush. Those were still there, honed sharper by necessity. Elara checked her watch, a sleek, minimalist design that must have cost a fortune. "My train, I should go." She placed a few crisp notes on the table for her drink, far more than required. "It was… good to see you, Rory. Unexpected." "You too, Elara." The words felt hollow, a formal closing to an encounter that had pried open old wounds without truly healing them. Elara stood, gathering her small, designer handbag. She hesitated, as if contemplating something, then simply nodded and turned, walking purposefully towards the door. The green neon sign of The Raven’s Nest glowed above her as she pushed it open, stepping back into the London night, leaving a faint scent of expensive perfume in her wake. Rory watched her go, a strange mix of relief and melancholy washing over her. The bar’s murmur returned, suddenly louder, filling the void Elara had left. She picked up her pint of cider, now warm and neglected. The weight of time, of divergent paths, settled heavily on her shoulders. Elara had changed, yes, but so had everything around them, swirling onward, leaving Rory to sift through the echoes of who they once were, and the regret of what they had become.
created_at"2026-02-25T00:56:43.708Z" 2/25/2026, 12:56:43 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags21
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"She gestured vaguely [vaguely]"
1"Rory finally said [finally]"
dialogueSentences36
tagDensity0.583
leniency1
rawRatio0.095
effectiveRatio0.095
62.33% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1858
totalAiIsmAdverbs14
found
0
adverb"perfectly"
count2
1
adverb"really"
count3
2
adverb"slightly"
count1
3
adverb"carefully"
count2
4
adverb"softly"
count1
5
adverb"suddenly"
count2
6
adverb"truly"
count3
highlights
0"perfectly"
1"really"
2"slightly"
3"carefully"
4"softly"
5"suddenly"
6"truly"
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found
0"Elara"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1858
totalAiIsms40
found
0
word"familiar"
count4
1
word"chill"
count1
2
word"scanned"
count1
3
word"navigating"
count2
4
word"weight"
count2
5
word"traced"
count1
6
word"comforting"
count1
7
word"tension"
count1
8
word"intensity"
count1
9
word"silence"
count2
10
word"lurch"
count1
11
word"echo"
count2
12
word"comfortable"
count1
13
word"silk"
count1
14
word"stomach"
count1
15
word"chaotic"
count1
16
word"aftermath"
count1
17
word"flicker"
count2
18
word"unreadable"
count1
19
word"stark"
count2
20
word"unspoken"
count3
21
word"perfect"
count2
22
word"tinged"
count1
23
word"whisper"
count1
24
word"reminder"
count1
25
word"fleeting"
count1
26
word"encounter"
count1
27
word"echoes"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"chill"
2"scanned"
3"navigating"
4"weight"
5"traced"
6"comforting"
7"tension"
8"intensity"
9"silence"
10"lurch"
11"echo"
12"comfortable"
13"silk"
14"stomach"
15"chaotic"
16"aftermath"
17"flicker"
18"unreadable"
19"stark"
20"unspoken"
21"perfect"
22"tinged"
23"whisper"
24"reminder"
25"fleeting"
26"encounter"
27"echoes"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"clenched jaw/fists"
count1
1
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"clenched her jaw"
1"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences124
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences124
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"begin to"
1"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences135
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen46
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords1
totalWords1857
ratio0.001
matches
0"did"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions12
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions89
wordCount1556
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity2.31
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory36
Soho2
Raven2
Nest2
London3
Blackwood1
Silas3
Elara28
Evan6
Welsh1
Cardiff3
Eva2
persons
0"Rory"
1"Raven"
2"Nest"
3"Blackwood"
4"Silas"
5"Elara"
6"Evan"
7"Eva"
places
0"Soho"
1"London"
2"Cardiff"
globalScore0.343
windowScore0
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences103
glossingSentenceCount7
matches
0"tasted like ash in her mouth"
1"quite reach her eyes"
2"as if assessing its suitability"
3"felt like a barbed hook"
4"sounded like pity, or perhaps genuine sadn"
5"as if searching for something"
6"as if contemplating something, then simply nodded and turned, walking purposefully towards the door"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.539
wordCount1857
matches
0"not at Rory, but at something unseen beyond her"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences135
matches(empty)
93.57% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs38
mean48.87
std23.34
cv0.478
sampleLengths
0109
182
231
393
435
555
692
744
842
931
1029
1147
1241
1343
1421
1542
1614
1741
1859
1927
2097
2139
2237
2355
2445
2550
2657
2734
2844
2912
3087
3126
3250
3344
3443
3523
3655
3781
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences124
matches
0"were replaced"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs248
matches
0"was looking"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences135
ratio0.015
matches
0"The expensive clothes, the perfect hair, the guarded poise—it was a shield."
1"Elara wasn't just older; she was fundamentally different, polished by a different grindstone than Rory's own."
82.84% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1016
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"wild, sun-streaked mess"
adverbCount52
adverbRatio0.051181102362204724
lyAdverbCount22
lyAdverbRatio0.021653543307086614
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences135
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences135
mean13.76
std8.41
cv0.611
sampleLengths
025
122
223
321
418
515
619
79
810
914
1015
1110
1214
137
1415
157
1624
1717
1818
1912
2030
215
2222
2317
241
2515
2635
2720
2821
292
301
312
3211
339
341
358
3622
372
382
3913
4017
4112
4216
4315
4412
4517
469
475
4814
496
53.83% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.34074074074074073
totalSentences135
uniqueOpeners46
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences115
matches(empty)
ratio0
80.87% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount40
totalSentences115
matches
0"She shrugged off the chill"
1"Her shoulder-length black hair had"
2"It was a haven, a"
3"His grey-streaked auburn hair and"
4"He looked up, his hazel"
5"His voice was low, a"
6"His slight limp was more"
7"She pulled up a stool"
8"She felt the day’s tension"
9"She watched Silas work, his"
10"He was a good listener,"
11"Her gaze drifted idly across"
12"Her face, framed by a"
13"Her heart gave a sudden,"
14"Her hands, once prone to"
15"She hadn't seen Elara since"
16"She pushed her chair back,"
17"she questioned, the name a"
18"Her voice, refined and slightly"
19"Her legs felt strangely heavy."
ratio0.348
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount106
totalSentences115
matches
0"The chime above the door"
1"She shrugged off the chill"
2"Her shoulder-length black hair had"
3"It was a haven, a"
4"Silas Blackwood, as ever, stood"
5"His grey-streaked auburn hair and"
6"The silver signet ring on"
7"He looked up, his hazel"
8"His voice was low, a"
9"His slight limp was more"
10"Rory admitted, tossing her keys"
11"She pulled up a stool"
12"Silas chuckled, placing a fresh"
13"Rory traced the condensation on"
14"The air in here was"
15"She felt the day’s tension"
16"She watched Silas work, his"
17"He was a good listener,"
18"Her gaze drifted idly across"
19"The woman at the small,"
ratio0.922
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences115
matches(empty)
ratio0
71.43% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences60
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"The comfortable, oversized jumpers she’d favored in university were replaced by a tailored silk blouse that gleamed a cool silver."
1"She hadn't seen Elara since the chaotic aftermath of leaving Evan, since the hasty goodbyes that hadn’t really been goodbyes at all."
2"There was something in their depth that remained familiar, a spark of the old mischief, though it was carefully guarded now."
3"A silence settled between them, heavy with unspoken words, with questions that would never be answered, with apologies that would never be fully voiced."
4"Elara checked her watch, a sleek, minimalist design that must have cost a fortune."
5"She hesitated, as if contemplating something, then simply nodded and turned, walking purposefully towards the door."
29.76% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags21
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"Rory repeated, a dull ache starting behind her eyes"
1"She took, ice chiming softly against the glass"
2"she said, her voice flat"
3"Rory finally said, the words ringing with more conviction than she felt"
38.89% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"Rory admitted (admit)"
1"she questioned (question)"
2"Rory repeated (repeat)"
3"Elara continued (continue)"
dialogueSentences36
tagDensity0.278
leniency0.556
rawRatio0.4
effectiveRatio0.222
68.6727%