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Run: 2026-02-25-01KJ94XH98YBWGZA9PEJG0HBBB
Run Details
Model:
Gemini 2.5 Flash Lite (Reasoning)
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Horror: alone in an eerie place at night
Duration:
23.3s
Cost:
$0.002423
Provider:
Google AI Studio
Evaluation summary
Score
Evaluator
Details Link
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
(details)
60.05%
AI-ism adverb frequency
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism character names
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
(details)
0.00%
AI-ism word frequency
(details)
100.00%
Cliché density
(details)
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
(details)
45.45%
Filter word density
(details)
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
(details)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
(details)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
(details)
100.00%
Name drop frequency
(details)
46.91%
Narrator intent-glossing
(details)
0.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
(details)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
(details)
71.35%
Paragraph length variance
(details)
97.29%
Passive voice overuse
(details)
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
(details)
12.99%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
(details)
94.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
(details)
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
(details)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
(details)
29.55%
Sentence opener variety
(details)
81.97%
Adverb-first sentence starts
(details)
39.67%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
(details)
29.67%
Subject-first sentence starts
(details)
81.97%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
(details)
68.65%
Technical jargon density
(details)
100.00%
Useless dialogue additions
(details)
0.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
(details)
71.9837%
Overall
Model input
System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.
Model response
Messages
Meta
AI
The iron gates of Richmond
Park had long since clanged shut for the night, their heavy finality a promise of solitude.
Rory had slipped through a
gap in the perimeter fencing miles back, a
familiar
manoeuvre born of necessity and a certain disdain for rules.
Now, she stood at the
fringe of what felt less like a park and more like a lung inhaling the night.
The air thickened with each
step she took past the ancient oak standing stones, their gnarled forms like arthritic fingers pointing at a starless sky. This was it. The Fae Grove. Isolde’s grove, some called it.
A place whispered about, a
place that never quite belonged to this world.
She pulled her worn jacket
tighter, though the night, for all its
chill
, held no real bite.
The wrongness began subtly, a
prickle along her arms that had nothing to do with temperature.
It was the *quality* of
the
silence
, a void so
profound
it
seemed to
hum.
It swallowed the distant thrum
of London traffic, the whine of sirens, even the sound of her own breathing.
Her flashlight beam, a frail
sword against the encroaching dark, cut a swathe through the
gloom
.
It illuminated a bewildering tapestry
of flora: roses the colour of dried blood unfurling beside moon-white lilies, violets darker than any twilight.
Wildflowers bloomed year-round, a fact
she’d read about, but seeing it in the absolute dark was a violation of natural order.
They weren't just blooming; they
seemed to
*
glow
* with an internal luminescence, subtle yet undeniable, turning the clearing into a
spectral
garden. The scent
was overwhelming
—a heady, cloying sweetness, like jasmine mixed with something richer, almost musky, that clung to the back of her throat.
She touched the Heartstone pendant
nestled beneath her shirt.
Its silver chain was cool
against her skin, but the
familiar
, deep crimson gem
pulsed
with a faint, internal
warmth
, a steady beat against her sternum.
It had been warm since
she’d left her flat above Silas’s bar, growing warmer, more insistent, as she’d driven west, guided by a feeling more than a map.
The pendant reacted to Hel
portals, the notes had explained, or places where the veil between worlds grew thin. This grove, she suspected, was both.
Her boots crunched on a
path that wasn't exactly a path, more a worn track through the dense undergrowth.
She kept close to the
centre, the standing stones forming a rough, embracing circle behind her.
She tried to recall the
instructions, the vague directions given by the hooded man at the market stall. *“Seek the heart of the stillness,”*
he’d rasped, his eyes like
chips of obsidian. *“The bloom in the dark.”*
He’d pressed the pendant, cool
and weightless then, into her palm. Now, with its insistent
warmth
, the
encounter
felt more like a deliberate summoning than a chance meeting. *Snap.* Rory froze. The sound was sharp, impossibly close, like a dry twig broken underfoot. Her flashlight beam whipped around, pinning the dense wall of foliage at the edge of the clearing. Nothing moved. No shadow detached itself. Just the silent, luminous flowers, their scent thick as
velvet
. *An animal,* she told herself, her voice a tight
whisper
lost in the
oppressive
quiet. *A fox. A deer.* She was in a park, even if it
felt like another dimension
. Animals moved in parks. She took another hesitant step. The path
seemed to
curve, to twist where she remembered a straight stretch. The trees, indistinct silhouettes against the bruised sky,
seemed to
lean in, their branches like skeletal arms. A
flicker
. A suggestion of movement at the periphery of her vision.
She jerked her head, catching
it again—a blur of deeper shadow detaching itself from another shadow, then vanishing as if it had never been there. Her heart hammered a quick, uneven rhythm against her ribs. She
wasn't imagining
it. The grove was not just still; it was *
aware
*. The air grew colder, a bone-aching dampness that seeped past her jacket. It wasn’t the external temperature; it was a
chill
that felt as if it originated from within the earth, or from behind her eyes. The flowers’ sweet perfume became almost acrid, a sickly, decaying sweetness that spoke of overripening, of things left too long in the dark.
Then, a sound that was
not a snap, nor a rustle. It was a faint, ethereal music, like wind chimes made of ice, tinkling from an impossible distance, or perhaps from directly within her own skull. She shook her head, trying to dislodge it. It wasn’t wind. There was no wind. The leaves on the unseen branches remained
perfectly
still. The pendant against her skin grew noticeably warmer, its
pulse
more pronounced, pressing a tiny, insistent heat into her flesh. A faint inner
glow
emanated from the crimson gem, a miniature sunset struggling against the night. *Something’s close,* the
warmth
seemed to
say. *Something you’re looking for. Or something that’s looking for you.* Her breath hitched. She spun around,
slowly
this time, sweeping the flashlight beam in a wide arc. The standing stones
seemed to
loom, ancient and impassive, but they felt less like markers of a place and more like jail bars. The wildflowers, in the beam, were too vivid, their colours screaming unnaturally in the dark. The moonlight, filtering through impossibly dense cloud cover, cast long, distorted shadows that writhed like living things. She was not alone. The thought bloomed in her mind, cold and sharp, cutting through her attempts at rationalization. The grove was not empty. It was occupied. And whatever occupied it was subtle. It moved in the spaces between perceptions, a
whisper
of presence in the absolute quiet. She instinctively reached for the small utility knife she kept in her jacket pocket, her fingers fumbling. Her left wrist, the one with the faint, crescent scar,
suddenly
itched, a phantom sensation like static electricity building beneath the skin. She glanced down, half-expecting to see something
etched
there, but only saw the
familiar
pale line, thin and silver in the flashlight’s beam. The scar, from a stupid fall when she was seven, had always
felt like a marker, a small, permanent
imperfection. Tonight, it
felt like a beacon
. The music again, closer. It
resolved
itself, not into chimes, but into a melody, impossibly delicate, sung by a voice like spun glass. It was wordless, ancient, and
utterly
alien. And it
was accompanied
by a new sound, a soft,
rhythmic
*thump... thump... thump...* that
vibrated
through the soles of her boots, through the
very
ground beneath her. Rory swallowed, her mouth dry. She took a step back, her boot landing on something soft. She flared the flashlight beam down. It wasn’t grass. It was a bloom, unnaturally large, its petals the colour of bruised flesh, unfurling
slowly
,
deliberately
. It hadn’t been there a moment ago. The air pressed in, heavy, humid, suffocating. The scent of rot was stronger now, mingling with the sickeningly sweet floral perfume, a metallic tang threading through it. The shadows deepened, coalescing, no longer just the absence of light but entities themselves. They
seemed to
drink the flashlight beam, pulling it in, making the shaft of light thinner, weaker. A breath. She felt it – a rush of air, impossibly cold, disturb the fine hairs on the back of her neck. It carried with it a scent,
not of flowers, not of rot, but of ozone
and something else… something like old, forgotten rain. Her eyes darted around,
scanning
the
gloom
that the failing light could no longer penetrate. She could sense it now, a vast, immeasurable stillness that was
not emptiness, but fullness
. It was the stillness of a
predator
waiting, of a vast intelligence observing. It was all around her, behind the moving shadows, within the pulsing flowers, and in the
echoing
, wordless song. She felt a
profound
sense of
being seen
,
not with eyes, but with something far more ancient
and invasive. Her
carefully
constructed
logic crumbled. This was not an animal. This was not a trick of the light or sound. This was something that had been waiting. And she, drawn by the
warmth
of the pendant, had walked willingly into its parlour. The pendant
pulsed
again, a fierce, desperate heat. It felt less like a guide now and more like a warning, screaming its alarm into her
very
bones. The *thump... thump... thump...* grew louder, closer, resonating
not in her ears, but in her chest cavity, mimicking a frantic heartbeat
that wasn’t entirely her own. A shadow detached itself. Not from the periphery this time.
Directly before her, where the
flashlight beam now barely reached. It was fluid, impossibly tall, a stain of deeper
darkness that seemed to drink the very concept of light
. It did not move with steps, but with a languid unfolding, an uncurling of night itself. Rory couldn't see features, couldn't see form, but she felt the
weight
of its attention, crushing, absolute. It was patient. It was curious. And it was hungry. She wanted to scream, but her throat was a desert. Her legs were lead. The logic that defined her life, the quick-thinking mind that had solved so many puzzles, offered no solutions here. There was no escape from a place that twisted time and space. There was no fighting something that
was made
of shadow and
silence
. There was only the vast, cold, intelligent presence that was now
slowly
,
deliberately
, filling the space where she stood. The music swelled, a lament and a welcome intertwined. The wildflowers
pulsed
like tiny, expectant hearts. And the darkness before her solidified, becoming a void that beckooed her into its
depths
. Her childhood scar tingled, a fragile
reminder
of a life, a world, that
suddenly
felt impossibly distant, perhaps already lost.
created_at
"2026-02-25T00:59:21.775Z"
2/25/2026, 12:59:21 AM
model
"google/gemini-2.5-flash-lite"
app_id
182717
external_user
(null)
streamed
true
cancelled
false
latency
1462
moderation_latency
(null)
generation_time
23280
tokens_prompt
812
tokens_completion
4379
native_tokens_prompt
773
native_tokens_completion
5864
native_tokens_completion_images
0
native_tokens_reasoning
3750
native_tokens_cached
0
num_media_prompt
(null)
num_input_audio_prompt
(null)
num_media_completion
0
num_search_results
(null)
origin
"https://ncbench.com/"
is_byok
false
finish_reason
"stop"
native_finish_reason
"STOP"
usage
0.0024229
router
(null)
provider_responses
0
endpoint_id
"ce839073-aa24-4f29-8358-15b319bd05ec"
is_byok
false
latency
1462
model_permaslug
"google/gemini-2.5-flash-lite"
provider_name
"Google AI Studio"
status
200
api_type
"completions"
id
"gen-1771981161-XXBz4jk6neOFWz31wDZq"
upstream_id
(null)
total_cost
0.0024229
cache_discount
(null)
upstream_inference_cost
0
provider_name
"Google AI Studio"
Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
2
adverbTagCount
0
adverbTags
(empty)
dialogueSentences
2
tagDensity
1
leniency
1
rawRatio
0
effectiveRatio
0
60.05%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount
1627
totalAiIsmAdverbs
13
found
0
adverb
"perfectly"
count
1
1
adverb
"slowly"
count
3
2
adverb
"suddenly"
count
2
3
adverb
"utterly"
count
1
4
adverb
"very"
count
3
5
adverb
"deliberately"
count
2
6
adverb
"carefully"
count
1
highlights
0
"perfectly"
1
"slowly"
2
"suddenly"
3
"utterly"
4
"very"
5
"deliberately"
6
"carefully"
100.00%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
0.00%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount
1627
totalAiIsms
40
found
0
word
"familiar"
count
3
1
word
"chill"
count
2
2
word
"silence"
count
2
3
word
"profound"
count
2
4
word
"gloom"
count
2
5
word
"tapestry"
count
1
6
word
"spectral"
count
1
7
word
"pulsed"
count
3
8
word
"warmth"
count
4
9
word
"encounter"
count
1
10
word
"velvet"
count
1
11
word
"whisper"
count
2
12
word
"oppressive"
count
1
13
word
"flicker"
count
1
14
word
"pulse"
count
1
15
word
"etched"
count
1
16
word
"beacon"
count
1
17
word
"resolved"
count
1
18
word
"rhythmic"
count
1
19
word
"vibrated"
count
1
20
word
"scanning"
count
1
21
word
"predator"
count
1
22
word
"echoing"
count
1
23
word
"sense of"
count
1
24
word
"constructed"
count
1
25
word
"weight"
count
1
26
word
"depths"
count
1
27
word
"reminder"
count
1
highlights
0
"familiar"
1
"chill"
2
"silence"
3
"profound"
4
"gloom"
5
"tapestry"
6
"spectral"
7
"pulsed"
8
"warmth"
9
"encounter"
10
"velvet"
11
"whisper"
12
"oppressive"
13
"flicker"
14
"pulse"
15
"etched"
16
"beacon"
17
"resolved"
18
"rhythmic"
19
"vibrated"
20
"scanning"
21
"predator"
22
"echoing"
23
"sense of"
24
"constructed"
25
"weight"
26
"depths"
27
"reminder"
100.00%
Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
0
maxInWindow
0
found
(empty)
highlights
(empty)
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
132
matches
(empty)
45.45%
Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
0
hedgeCount
9
narrationSentences
132
filterMatches
(empty)
hedgeMatches
0
"seemed to"
1
"tried to"
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences
132
gibberishSentences
0
adjustedGibberishSentences
0
longSentenceCount
0
runOnParagraphCount
0
giantParagraphCount
0
wordSaladCount
0
repetitionLoopCount
0
controlTokenCount
0
maxSentenceWordsSeen
28
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans
12
markdownWords
39
totalWords
1626
ratio
0.024
matches
0
"quality"
1
"glow"
2
"“Seek the heart of the stillness,”"
3
"“The bloom in the dark.”"
4
"Snap."
5
"An animal,"
6
"A fox. A deer."
7
"aware"
8
"Something’s close,"
9
"Something you’re looking for. Or something that’s looking for you."
10
"thump... thump... thump..."
11
"thump... thump... thump..."
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions
4
unquotedAttributions
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions
12
wordCount
1593
uniqueNames
9
maxNameDensity
0.25
worstName
"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity
0.5
worstWindowName
"Rory"
discoveredNames
Richmond
1
Park
1
Fae
1
Grove
1
London
1
Heartstone
1
Silas
1
Hel
1
Rory
4
persons
0
"Silas"
1
"Rory"
places
0
"Richmond"
1
"Park"
2
"Fae"
3
"Grove"
4
"London"
5
"Hel"
globalScore
1
windowScore
1
46.91%
Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences
97
glossingSentenceCount
4
matches
0
"felt like another dimension"
1
"felt like a marker, a small, permanent"
2
"felt like a beacon"
3
"darkness that seemed to drink the very concept of light"
0.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches
6
per1kWords
3.69
wordCount
1626
matches
0
"not into chimes, but into a melody, impossibly delicate, sung by a voice like spu"
1
"not of flowers, not of rot, but of ozone"
2
"not of rot, but of ozone"
3
"not emptiness, but fullness"
4
"not with eyes, but with something far more ancient"
5
"not in her ears, but in her chest cavity, mimicking a frantic heartbeat"
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
0
totalSentences
132
matches
(empty)
71.35%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
25
mean
65.04
std
26
cv
0.4
sampleLengths
0
115
1
67
2
104
3
88
4
100
5
1
6
47
7
35
8
35
9
60
10
59
11
60
12
53
13
72
14
48
15
88
16
58
17
48
18
58
19
45
20
62
21
114
22
82
23
76
24
51
97.29%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount
3
totalSentences
132
matches
0
"was accompanied"
1
"being seen"
2
"was made"
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
3
totalVerbs
241
matches
0
"weren't just blooming"
1
"was overwhelming"
2
"wasn't imagining"
12.99%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount
3
semicolonCount
3
flaggedSentences
6
totalSentences
132
ratio
0.045
matches
0
"They weren't just blooming; they seemed to *glow* with an internal luminescence, subtle yet undeniable, turning the clearing into a spectral garden."
1
"The scent was overwhelming—a heady, cloying sweetness, like jasmine mixed with something richer, almost musky, that clung to the back of her throat."
2
"She jerked her head, catching it again—a blur of deeper shadow detaching itself from another shadow, then vanishing as if it had never been there."
3
"The grove was not just still; it was *aware*."
4
"It wasn’t the external temperature; it was a chill that felt as if it originated from within the earth, or from behind her eyes."
5
"She felt it – a rush of air, impossibly cold, disturb the fine hairs on the back of her neck."
94.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
683
adjectiveStacks
1
stackExamples
0
"beside moon-white lilies,"
adverbCount
22
adverbRatio
0.032210834553440704
lyAdverbCount
3
lyAdverbRatio
0.004392386530014641
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
132
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
132
mean
12.32
std
7.14
cv
0.58
sampleLengths
0
21
1
24
2
21
3
25
4
3
5
3
6
5
7
13
8
17
9
16
10
15
11
19
12
16
13
22
14
21
15
22
16
23
17
9
18
26
19
28
20
19
21
6
22
19
23
16
24
18
25
14
26
16
27
17
28
1
29
2
30
12
31
17
32
2
33
4
34
10
35
15
36
2
37
14
38
4
39
5
40
13
41
17
42
2
43
10
44
25
45
10
46
4
47
9
48
12
49
24
29.55%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
27
diversityRatio
0.21212121212121213
totalSentences
132
uniqueOpeners
28
81.97%
Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount
3
totalSentences
122
matches
0
"Just the silent, luminous flowers,"
1
"Then, a sound that was"
2
"Directly before her, where the"
ratio
0.025
39.67%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount
55
totalSentences
122
matches
0
"She pulled her worn jacket"
1
"It was the *quality* of"
2
"It swallowed the distant thrum"
3
"Her flashlight beam, a frail"
4
"It illuminated a bewildering tapestry"
5
"They weren't just blooming; they"
6
"She touched the Heartstone pendant"
7
"Its silver chain was cool"
8
"It had been warm since"
9
"Her boots crunched on a"
10
"She kept close to the"
11
"She tried to recall the"
12
"he’d rasped, his eyes like"
13
"He’d pressed the pendant, cool"
14
"Her flashlight beam whipped around,"
15
"She took another hesitant step."
16
"She jerked her head, catching"
17
"Her heart hammered a quick,"
18
"She wasn't imagining it."
19
"It wasn’t the external temperature;"
ratio
0.451
29.67%
Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount
105
totalSentences
122
matches
0
"The iron gates of Richmond"
1
"Rory had slipped through a"
2
"The air thickened with each"
3
"This was it."
4
"The Fae Grove."
5
"Isolde’s grove, some called it."
6
"A place whispered about, a"
7
"She pulled her worn jacket"
8
"The wrongness began subtly, a"
9
"It was the *quality* of"
10
"It swallowed the distant thrum"
11
"Her flashlight beam, a frail"
12
"It illuminated a bewildering tapestry"
13
"Wildflowers bloomed year-round, a fact"
14
"They weren't just blooming; they"
15
"The scent was overwhelming—a heady,"
16
"She touched the Heartstone pendant"
17
"Its silver chain was cool"
18
"It had been warm since"
19
"The pendant reacted to Hel"
ratio
0.861
81.97%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount
2
totalSentences
122
matches
0
"Now, she stood at the"
1
"Now, with its insistent warmth,"
ratio
0.016
68.65%
Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences
77
technicalSentenceCount
8
matches
0
"She jerked her head, catching it again—a blur of deeper shadow detaching itself from another shadow, then vanishing as if it had never been there."
1
"The air grew colder, a bone-aching dampness that seeped past her jacket."
2
"It wasn’t the external temperature; it was a chill that felt as if it originated from within the earth, or from behind her eyes."
3
"She could sense it now, a vast, immeasurable stillness that was not emptiness, but fullness."
4
"thump...* grew louder, closer, resonating not in her ears, but in her chest cavity, mimicking a frantic heartbeat that wasn’t entirely her own."
5
"It was fluid, impossibly tall, a stain of deeper darkness that seemed to drink the very concept of light."
6
"The logic that defined her life, the quick-thinking mind that had solved so many puzzles, offered no solutions here."
7
"There was only the vast, cold, intelligent presence that was now slowly, deliberately, filling the space where she stood."
100.00%
Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags
2
uselessAdditionCount
0
matches
(empty)
0.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
1
fancyCount
1
fancyTags
0
"He’d (would)"
dialogueSentences
2
tagDensity
0.5
leniency
1
rawRatio
1
effectiveRatio
1
71.9837%